Unit 5 介绍一项中国传统民间艺术及传承现状-2025-2026学年九年级全一册英语写作范文集合(北师大版)
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九年级全一册北师大版
【传统文化专版】
B版写作范文集合
传统文化
【B版范文集合】介绍一项中国传统民间艺
术及传承现状
写作范文集合+逐段解析·北师大版九年级全一册
范文赏析
【范文一】Chinese Paper Cutting:A Traditional Folk Art
Hello everyone!Today I want to introduce Chinese paper cutting,a famous traditional folk art with a history
of over 1,500 years.
Paper cutting is usually made with red paper,which symbolizes good luck in Chinese culture.Artists use
scissors or knivesto cut paper into various patterns,such as flowers,animals and Chinese characters.During
festivals like the Spring Festival,people often put paper cuttings on windows and doors to decorate their
homes.
However,this traditional art is facing challenges now.Young people are less interested in learning it,and
there are fewer professional artists.Luckily,the government has taken actions to protect it.Some schools
have added paper cutting courses,and exhibitions are held regularly to show this art to more people.
I hope more people will love and learn paper cutting.Let's work together to pass down this wonderful
traditional art!
【范文一逐段解析】
开头段(艺术概述):
用Hello everyone!Today I want to introduce..开篇,直接点题;核心句型.a famous traditional
folk art with a history of..准确描述艺术地位和历史。
中间段(艺术特点):
用which symbolizes.解释文化象征;通过use..to cut...into various patterns描述制作工艺;
During festivals..展示应用场景,细节丰富。
现状段(传承挑战):
用However,..facing challenges转折;Young people are less interested.f和fewer professional
artists点明问题;Luckily,.taken actions引出保护措施,逻辑清晰。
九年级全一册北师大版
【传统文化专版】
B版写作范文集合
结尾段(呼吁行动):
用I hope..表达愿望,Let's work together to pass down..…发出行动号召,积极有力。
【范文二】Beijing Opera:The Treasure of Chinese Culture
Good morning,everyone!Today I'd like to talk about Beijing Opera,one of the most famous traditional
Chinese performing arts.
Beijing Opera has a history of more than 200 years.It combines singing,dancing,music and acrobatics.The
performers wear colorful costumes and beautiful makeup.Each color of the makeup has a special meaning.
For example,red means loyalty and black represents honesty.The stories in Beijing Opera are mostly from
Chinese history and literature.
In recent years,Beijing Opera has been facing some difficulties.Young audiences prefer modern entertain-
ment like movies and pop music.But many people are trying to save it.They have created new plays that
are more attractive to young people,and Beijing Opera has also been introduced to many countries around
the world.
Beijing Opera is a valuable part of Chinese culture.We should learn more about it and help it develop with
the times.
Thank you!
【范文二逐段解析】
开头段(艺术定位):
用Good morning,.everyone!Today I'd like to talk about..礼s貌开场;one of the most famous..
强调艺术地位,开篇有力。
艺术特征段:
用combines..概括艺术形式:colorful costumes and beautiful makeup描述视觉特点;Each
color.has a special meaning解释文化符号,举例说明(red/black)具体生动。
传承现状段:
用in recent years,.facing some difficulties引出挑战;Young audiences prefer.对比现代娱乐;
But...trying to save it转折,列举创新措施(new plays,introduced to...countries)体现解决方案。
结尾段(文化价值):
用valuable part of Chinese culture升华价值,help it develop with the times提出与时俱进的发
展观,结尾深刻。
高分亮点句型(可直接套用)
九年级全一册北师大版
【传统文化专版】
B版写作范文集合
开篇介绍类:
Today I want to introduce...Today I'd like to talk about.../...one of the most famous tradi-
tional...
历史描述类:
...with a history of over...years/...has a history of more than...
文化象征类:
...symbolizes...in Chinese culture /Each...has a special meaning
现状描述类:
...is facing challenges/difficulties/Young people are less interested in...
保护措施类:
...has taken actions to protect it/...are trying to save it
结尾呼吁类:
Let's work together to pass down.../We should learn more about...and help it develop...
仿写练习(结合亮点句型)
请根据以下提示,仿写一篇关于中国书法的短文(100词左右):
提示:书法(calligraphy)是中国传统艺术,有3000多年历史:使用毛笔和墨水;字体有楷书、行书
等:现代人较少练习:学校开设书法课:应传承此艺术。
仿写框架参考:
Good afternoon!Today I'll introduce Chinese
a traditional art with
years of
history.
Artists use
and ink to write.There are different styles like
and
It
beauty and culture
Nowadays,
people practice it.But schools
to teach it.We should
this valuable art form.
常见错误修正(避坑指南)
时态错误:
错误:Paper cutting is have1500 years history.→正确:has
错误:Beijing Opera combine singing and dancing.一正确:combines
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九年级全一册北师大版
【传统文化专版】
B版写作范文集合
冠词错误:
错误:.a history of more than200yea.→正确:200 years
错误:with scissor or knife.→正确:scissors/knives
搭配错误:
错误:People put paper cuttings in windows.→正确:on
错误:.attractive for young people.→正确:to
核心写作要点
四段式结构:开篇(艺术介绍)→特征(材料/形式/象征)→现状(挑战/保护)→结尾(呼
吁传承)
必备要素:历史年限、艺术特点、文化意义、当前挑战、保护措施
亮点技巧:使用symbolize/represent解释文化符号,用However/Luckily过渡转折,用数据
(1500 years)增强说服力
语言规范:注意第三人称单数(combines/means),不可数名词(paper cutting),固定搭配
(interested in)
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