Unit 4 介绍一项手工制作或实验过程-2025-2026学年八年级上册英语写作范文集合（沪外版）

八年级上册沪外版 【过程写作】 B版写作范文集合 过程写作 【B版范文集合】介绍一项手工制作或实验 过程 写作范文集合+逐段解析·沪外版八年级上册 范文赏析 【范文一】手工制作 How to Make a Paper Lantern Making a paper lantern is an interesting craft.Here are the steps.First,prepare a red square paper,a pair of scissors,a ruler,a pencil and some string.Second,fold the paper in half to make a rectangle.Then,use the ruler and pencil to draw parallel lines on the folded side,leaving about 2 centimeters at the top and bottom. Next,cut along the lines with scissors.After that,unfold the paper and roll it into a cylinder,gluing the two ends together.Finally,attach a string to the top and put a candle inside.Now you have a beautiful paper lantern! 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（引入主题)： 用Making a paper lantern is an interesting craft..点明主题，Here are the steps..自然过渡到步 骤说明。 过程描述（步骤清晰）： 使用First,Second,.Then,Next,After that,.Finally等序列词，逻辑清晰；通过leaving about2 centimeters等细节确保操作准确：动词fold,draw,cut,unfold,IolL,attach精准描述动作。 【范文二】实验过程 A Simple Water Purification Experiment Do you want to know how to purify water?Let's try this easy experiment.First,take a plastic bottle,some gravel,sand,activated carbon,cotton and dirty water.Second,cut the bottom of the bottle and turn it upside down.Then,put cotton in the neck of the bottle.Next,add a layer of activated carbon,followed by a layer of sand and a layer of gravel.After that,slowly pour the dirty water into the bottle.Finally,wait for the 1 八年级上册沪外版 【过程写作】 B版写作范文集合 water to flow out from the neck.You will see the clean water!This experiment shows how filtration works 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（激发兴趣）： 用疑问句Do you want to know..？开头，Let'stry.邀请读者参与。 过程描述（分层说明）： add a layer of.followed by..准确描述分层操作；slowly pour强调操作要点；结尾This exper. iment shows.点明科学原理。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用) 开头引入： Making..is an interesting craft./Do you want to know how to...? 步骤连接： First,Second,Then,Next,After that,Finally 材料准备： prepare.../take.../You will need... 动作描述： fold...in half /cut along the lines/roll...into.../pour...slowly 结果展示： Now you have.../You will see.../This shows how...works 仿写练习（结合亮点句型) 请根据以下提示，仿写制作过程(80词左右)： 提示：制作三明治(bread,ham,vegetables,mayonnaise):步骤：准备材料→铺面包→涂抹酱料→ 放火腿蔬菜→盖上另一片面包→切成三角形 仿写框架参考： Making a sandwich is easy and fun.First,prepare Second, Then,spread mayonnaise .Next. After that. Finally, Now enjoy your delicious sandwich! 2 八年级上册沪外版 【过程写作】 B版写作范文集合 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 步骤混乱： 错误：Finally,prepare materials.First,cut the paper..→正确：First,prepare materials..Then cut the paper. 动词形式错误： 错误：putted cotton→正确：put cotton 错误：drawed lines→正确：drew lines 量词缺失： 错误：add layer of sand→正确：add a layer of sand 核心写作要点 结构清晰：开头（主题引入）→材料清单→步骤说明（按时间顺序）→结果展示 步骤连贯：必须使用序列词(First//Second/Next等)确保逻辑流畅 细节准确：包含尺寸(about2cn)、方向(upside down)、速度(slowly)等关键细节 动词精准：使用具体动作动词(fold/cut/pour/attach)避免通用词(do/mke) 时态统一：全程使用一般现在时和祈使句(Put./Cut.)