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潍坊文华学校(高中部)2024级高二英语课时学案
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Write a letter to the editor about your lifestyle
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目标
1. To read two letters and complete a table
2. To analyse the organization of the letters
3. To learn to write a letter about one aspect of your own lifestyle that you would like to change
学 案 内 容
LEAD-IN
1. What bad habits do you have in your lifestyle? And what bad effect on your life?
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.Facing the terrible lifestyle, what should we do?
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Brainstorm
If you were the teenagers who last year attended the summer camp organized by the magazine Healthy Life to change your bad habits, you are going to write a letter to extend thanks and offer your change to the editor. What would you like to write?
①_______________________ ②_______________________ ③_______________________
④_______________________ ⑤_______________________ ⑥_______________________
READ FOR GENERAL IDEA
1. Who write these two letters?
_________________________________________________________________________________________
2. What are the purposes of writing these letters?
To tell the editor of their________________and___________________ they take to solve these problems.
READ FOR DETAILS
Read these two passage carefully and finish the tables
TIP:write the letter in_______________ ______________ _____________ ______________order.
READING FOR LETTER FORMAT
What is the basic structure of a letter?
_________________________________________________________________________________________
READ FOR SENTENCES
Problem
原句赏析背诵:1.在我参加了你们关于健康和生活方式选择的夏令营之后,我意识到我几乎从来没有感觉好过,无论是身体上还是精神上。我经常感到困倦和头晕,缺乏激情。然而,最令人担忧的是,我很容易得流感,也经常牙痛。
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I realised I hardly ever felt well, either physically or mentally. I often felt sleepy and dizzy,and lacked passion. Most worrying,though,I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches,too.
仿写翻译1:参加了你们举办的有关健康和生活方式选择的夏令营之后,我意识到我对数码产品上瘾。
_________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
原句赏析背诵:2.然而,最令人担忧的是,我很容易得流感,也经常牙痛。
Most worrying,though,I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches,too.
仿写翻译2:最令我担心的是,我睡眠不好。它已经影响到我的学业。
_________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
句式升级
Problem:参加了你们举办的有关健康和生活方式选择的夏令营之后,我意识到我对数码产品上瘾,这尽管让我在玩的时候很开心,但是它的确已经影响到了我的睡眠甚至学习和人际交往。
_________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Decision
原句赏析背诵:3.在夏令营结束时,我听到了“通过改变自己来改变世界。”这激发了我的动力。
At the end of the camp I heard,"Change the world by changing yourself."This stimulated my motivation.
4.一位牙医曾经给我做过检查,并告诉我,我的饮食中太多的糖已经损害了我的牙齿和健康。我下定决心要改变我生活中的两件事:不吃含糖的东西和经常锻炼。
A dentist once examined me and told me that too much sugar in my meals had damaged my teeth and health. I made up my mind to change two things in my life:to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly.
仿写翻译3:我下定决心要放下手机,掌控自己的生活。
________________________________________________________________________________________
仿写翻译4:我下定决心要戒掉这个不健康的习惯,来掌控自己的生活。
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Action
原句赏析背诵:5.每次和朋友们出门,我都会从家里带些零食,都是不含添加糖的种类,比如水果、坚果、肉干之类的。Whenever I went out with friends,I brought snacks from home,things that didn't have any added sugar.fruit,nuts,dried meat,etc.
仿写翻译5:我做的第一件事情就是删除手机上那些浪费我大量时间的应用软件。(主从)
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
其次,每次我想玩电脑游戏的时候,我就会把我的注意力从游戏上转移到慢跑等其他体育锻炼上。这不仅减少了我游戏上瘾的可能性,也改善了我的身体状况。(定从)
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Result
原句赏析背诵:6.结果非常好。我觉得自己比以往任何时候都更有活力,更强壮,无论是身体还是心灵。我现在晚上睡得很香。我也不再受流感病毒和牙痛的困扰了。The results have been fantastic.I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind.I sleep soundly at night now.I no longer suffer from a flu virus or toothaches either.
仿写翻译5:结果棒极了。我现在充满活力,无论是心理还是身体健康方面,这促成了我在学习方面取得的进步。
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
感谢信的首段第一句
怀着最诚挚的谢意,我写这封信向你表达感谢,感谢夏令营给予我的巨大帮助。
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
感谢信的尾段
正是因为来自夏令营的帮助,我才会戒掉手机上瘾养成好的习惯,这一定会让我终生受益。(或:给我终生最有益的影响)
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
USEFUL EXPRESSIONS
Problem After I attended your ..., I realised...
I felt ... and lacked ...
As I took part in ..., I started to analyse...
Decision ....stimulated my decision.
I made up my mind to ...
I decided to ...
Action Some times I... Other times I...
I get refreshed through doing A, B and C
Result The results have been fantastic.
I no longer suffer from ...
I feel like I'm in control of own life.
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$Write a letter to the editor about your lifestyle
选择性必修三unit2 READING FOR WRITING
ROMAN FOR CLASS 3&4
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.To read two letters and complete a table
2.To analyse the organization of the letters
3.To learn to write a letter about one aspect of your own lifestyle that you would like to change
KEY WORDS &EXPRESSIONS
PART.01
PARA1
1. attend a summer camp 参加夏令营
2. lifestyle choices 生活方式的选择
3. physically and mentally 身体上和精神上
4. feel sleepy and dizzy 感到困倦和头晕
5. lack passion 缺乏热情
6. get the flu easily 容易得流感
7. experience toothaches 经历牙痛
PARA21. stimulate one’s motivation 激发某人的动力
2. a dentist 牙医
3. examine sb 给某人检查
4. too much sugar 过多的糖分
5. damage one’s teeth and health 损害某人的牙齿和健康
6. make up one’s mind to do sth 下定决心做某事
7. exercise regularly 规律锻炼
PARA3:1. sugary drinks 含糖饮料
2. bring snacks from home 从家里带零食
3. added sugar 添加糖
4. dried meat 肉干
PARA41. do something active 做一些活动
2. play table tennis or badminton 打乒乓球或羽毛球
3. jump on a skateboard 踩上滑板
4. ride around the neighbourhood 在小区里骑车
5. take a long walk 散步很久
PARA51. feel more dynamic and stronger 感到更精力充沛且强壮
2. sleep soundly 睡得香
3. suffer from 遭受;患上
4. be in control of 掌控
5. within one’s power 在某人的能力范围内
PARA1.1. take part in 参加
2. analyse one’s choices 分析某人的选择
3. affect one’s whole life 影响某人的一生
发现孩子的心理问题
PARA2.1. start high school 开始上高中
2. feel stressed out 感到压力大
3. get absorbed in 沉迷于
4. day and night 日日夜夜
5. feel worn out 感到疲惫不堪
6. adjust one’s lifestyle 调整某人的生活方式
7. take control of 控制;掌握
8. find other ways to relax 寻找其他放松的方式
PARA3.1. a big struggle 一件难事
2. join sb in doing sth 和某人一起做某事
3. be mad for sth 对某事狂热
4. succeed in quitting 成功戒掉
5. replace…with… 用……替代……
6. rock climbing 攀岩
7. watch comedies 看喜剧
PARA41. go rock climbing together 一起去攀岩
2. enhance the quality of life 提高生活质量
3. improve one’s health 改善某人的健康
4. increase one’s happiness 增加某人的幸福感
5. get refreshed 恢复精力
6. spend more time with sb 花更多时间和某人在一起
7. meet new friends 结识新朋友
PARA5.1. try out new ways 尝试新方法
2. feel much more energetic 感到更有活力
3. change oneself for the better 让自己变得更好
4. change the world for the better 让世界变得更好
KEY SENTENCES RECITATION
PART.02
1.在我参加了你们关于健康和生活方式选择的夏令营之后,我意识到我几乎从来没有感觉好过,无论是身体上还是精神上。我经常感到困倦和头晕,缺乏激情。然而,最令人担忧的是,我很容易得流感,也经常牙痛。
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices,I realised I hardly ever felt well,either physically or mentally.I often felt sleepy and dizzy,and lacked passion. Most worrying,though,I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches,too.
2.在夏令营结束时,我听到了“通过改变自己来改变世界。”这激发了我的动力。
At the end of the camp I heard,"Change the world by changing yourself."This stimulated my motivation
A dentist once examined me and told me that too much sugar in my meals had damaged my teeth and health.I made up my mind to change two things in my life:to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly.
3.一位牙医曾经给我做过检查,并告诉我,我的饮食中太多的糖已经损害了我的牙齿和健康。我下定决心要改变我生活中的两件事:不吃含糖的东西和经常锻炼。
4.其他时候,我跳上滑板,在我的社区里骑着,或者只是走很长的路。
Other times I jumped on my skateboard and rode around my neighbourhood,or just took a long walk.
5.结果非常好。我觉得自己比以往任何时候都更有活力,更强壮,无论是身体还是心灵。我现在晚上睡得很香。我也不再受流感病毒和牙痛的困扰了。
The results have been fantastic.I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind.I sleep soundly at night now.I no longer suffer from a flu virus or toothaches either.
6.在我看来,最重要的是我对自己的感觉。我觉得我能掌控自己的生活。对自己做出选择是在我自己的能力范围内。
Best of all,in my opinion,is how I feel about myself.I feel like I'm in control of my own life.To make choices about myself is within my own power.
7.进入高中后,我感到压力很大,总是通过玩电脑游戏来放松。我是如此的专注,以至于我日夜都在玩游戏。玩得很有趣,但玩完之后我觉得更累了!
After starting high school,I felt stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games.I got so absorbed that I played the games day and night.Playing was fun,but I felt even more worn out afterwards!
8.不加入我的朋友们玩网络游戏是一个很大的挣扎,因为我为他们疯狂。然而,我意识到,要想成功戒烟,我必须用别的东西来代替它。
It was a big struggle not to join my friends in playing online games as I'm mad for them. However,I realised that to succeed in quitting, I had to replace it with something else.
Now my dad and I go rock climbing together monthly!It has enhanced the quality of my life,improving my health and increasing my happiness.
9.现在我和爸爸每月一起去攀岩!它提高了我的生活质量,改善了我的健康,增加了我的快乐。
After six months of trying out new ways of relaxing,I feel much more energetic.
10.尝试了六个月的新型放松方式后,我感觉精力充沛多了。
PART.03
READING
Digital addiction
1.What bad habits do you have in your lifestyle? And what bad effect on your life?
LEAD-IN
Be stressed out
Over eating
Stay up late
sleepy or dizzy,even physical problems
Mental problems
overweight
obesity even other phycological or physical problems
sleepy and fall ill easily
2.Facing the terrible lifestyle, what should we do?
change or get rid of bad habits(bad lifestyles),and form good ones.
If you were the teenagers who last year attended the summer camp organized by the magazine Healthy Life to change your bad habits, you are going to write a letter to extend thanks and offer your change to the editor. What would you like to write?
Brainstorm
①_______________________ ②_______________________ ③_______________________
④_______________________ ⑤_______________________ ⑥_______________________
show gratitude
restate your thanks
let’s read the passages to find the answer!!
1.Who did write these two letters?
READ FOR GENERAL IDEA
Wang Lu
George Fielding
&
Healthy life
Summer Camp
To tell the editor their________________and________________they take to solve these problems.
2. What were the purposes of writing these letters?
problems
action
READ FOR DETAILS
Read these two passage carefully and finish the tables
Wang Lu
Problem • did not feel_________________
• felt ________________,lacked________________
• got ________________,experienced __________
Decision • to______________________
• to______________________
Action • stopped_________________________
• exercises every day for______________________
Result • more_______________
• sleeps __________________________, no longer_________
________________________
• feels like_________________________________
well, either physically or mentally
sleepy and dizzy
passion
flu easily
many toothaches
eat nothing with sugar
exercise regularly
buying all the sweets, biscuits, and sugary drinks that I used to have every day
at least 30 minutes
dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind
soundly at night
suffer from flu virus or toothaches
I'm in control of my own life
READ FOR DETAILS
George Fielding
Problem • felt
• felt even more
Decision • to
• to
Action • goes
• also
Result •feels much more
• feels he can
stressed out and always relaxed by playing computer games day and night
tired after playing games
take control of my life and find other ways to relax
replace playing online games with healthier activities
rock climbing together monthly
does park climbing, watching concerts, playing basketball
energetic
change my world for the better, and maybe even change the world for the better
write the letter in_______________ ______________ _____________ ______________order.
TIP
problems
decisions
action
results
What is the basic structure of a letter?
READING FOR LETTER FORMAT
Salutation(称呼)
Body(正文)
Closing(结束语)
Signature(签名)
Dear Editor, / Dear Mr. Smith,
Yours truly, / Sincerely,
PART.04
READ FOR SENTENCES
imitation writing
原句赏析背诵:1.在我参加了你们关于健康和生活方式选择的夏令营之后,我意识到我几乎从来没有感觉好过,无论是身体上还是精神上。我经常感到困倦和头晕,缺乏激情。然而,最令人担忧的是,我很容易得流感,也经常牙痛。
Problem
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I realised I hardly ever felt well, either physically or mentally. I often felt sleepy and dizzy,and lacked passion. Most worrying,though,I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches,too.
仿写翻译1:参加了你们举办的有关健康和生活方式选择的夏令营之后,我意识到我对数码产品上瘾。
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I realised that I was addicted to digital devices severely.
(I had severe digital addiction)
原句赏析背诵:2.然而,最令人担忧的是,我很容易得流感,也经常牙痛。
Problem
Most worrying,though,I got the flu easily and experienced many toothaches,too.
仿写翻译2:最令我担心的是,我睡眠不好。它已经影响到我的学业。
Most worrying, I couldn’t sleep well, which had affected my academic performance
句式升级
Problem:参加了你们举办的有关健康和生活方式选择的夏令营之后,我意识到我对数码产品上瘾,这尽管让我在玩的时候很开心,但是它的确已经影响到了我的睡眠甚至学习和人际交往。
After I attended your summer camp about health and lifestyle choices, I realised that I was addicted to digital devices severely. ______________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
Although this made me excited during the game , it affected my sleep even study and interpersonal relationship.
原句赏析背诵:3.夏令营结束时,我听到“通过改变自己来改变世界。”这激发了我的动力。
Decision
At the end of the camp I heard,"Change the world by changing yourself."This stimulated my motivation.
仿写翻译3:我下定决心要放下手机,掌控自己的生活。
4.一位牙医曾经给我做过检查,并告诉我,我的饮食中太多的糖已经损害了我的牙齿和健康。我下定决心要改变我生活中的两件事:不吃含糖的东西和经常锻炼。
A dentist once examined me and told me that too much sugar in my meals had damaged my teeth and health. I made up my mind to change two things in my life:to eat nothing with sugar and to exercise regularly.
仿写翻译4:我下定决心要戒掉这个不健康的习惯,来掌控自己的生活。
I made up my mind to put down my phone to take control of my life.
I made up my mind to get rid of the bad habits to take control of my life.
原句赏析背诵:5.每次和朋友们出门,我都会从家里带些零食,都是不含添加糖的种类,比如水果、坚果、肉干之类的。
Action
Whenever I went out with friends,I brought snacks from home,things that didn't have any added sugar.fruit,nuts,dried meat,etc.
仿写翻译5:我做的第一件事情就是删除手机上那些浪费我大量时间的应用软件。(主从,定从)
其次,每次我想玩电脑游戏的时候,我就会把我的注意力从游戏上转移到慢跑等其他体育锻炼上。这不仅减少了我游戏上瘾的可能性,也改善了我的身体状况。(定从)
What I did first was to delete the applications that wasted me plenty of time
What’s more, whenever I feel like playing games, I would like to shift my attention to physical exercises,like jogging, which not only reduce my addiction to games,but also improved my physical condition.
原句赏析背诵:6.结果非常好。我觉得自己比以往任何时候都更有活力,更强壮,无论是身体还是心灵。我现在晚上睡得很香。我也不再受流感病毒和牙痛的困扰了。
Result
The results have been fantastic.I feel more dynamic and stronger than ever, in both body and mind.I sleep soundly at night now.I no longer suffer from a flu virus or toothaches either.
仿写翻译5:结果棒极了。我现在充满活力,无论是心理还是身体健康方面,这促成了我在学习方面取得的进步。
The result was fantastic. I’m full of energy now, both mentally and physically,which has contributed to my academic progress.
感谢信的首段第一句
Thanks
怀着最诚挚的谢意,我写这封信向你表达感谢,感谢夏令营给予我的巨大帮助。(with的复合结构)
感谢信的尾段
正是因为来自夏令营的帮助,我才会戒掉手机上瘾养成好的习惯,这一定会让我终生受益。(或:给我终生最有益的影响)
With my sincerest gratitude, I am writing to convey my thanks to you for significant help your summer camp offered
It was because of the help from your summer camp that I could get rid of addiction to samrtphone, which would have a life-long beneficial effect on me.
THANKS
UNIT2 Write a letter to the editor about your lifestyle
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