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Unit 8
第6课时
单元写作专题
[答案P23]
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话题概述
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本单元以“有所作为(志愿服务和社会公益)”
主题范畴:人与社会
为话题,围绕这一话题,要求同学们写一封以申请
主题群:生活服务
志愿者为主题的邮件。谈论志愿活动、介绍志愿者
子主题:提倡做志愿活动,助人为乐,倡导人文关
经历以及呼吁人们参加志愿活动等,写作时要注意
怀,提升自我价值
熟练运用现在完成时、动词短语和动词不定式。
句型荟萃
[开头句]
[结尾句]
1.帮助有需要的人是有必要的。(It's necessary to
1.如果人们互相帮助,世界将会成为一个充满爱的
do sth)
大家庭。(if;full of)
2.我想我是足够热心肠的并且乐于助人的,可以担
2.如果我成为这里的志愿者,我将会更加细心地带
任志愿者。(ad.+enough to do sth)
着爱心去照顾孩子们。(if;be careful to do sth)
[中间句]
3.做志愿工作是人生中相当有意义的事情。(doing
l.在这里做志愿工作是我的梦想。(be a dream for
volunteer work)
me)
[佳句积累]
2.我擅长绘画,所以我可以教孩子们画图画。(be
1.The essence of life is to serve others and to do good
good at;teach...to do sth)
生命的本质是服务他人和行善。
2.Helping others is helping yourself.助人即助已。
3.我有如此丰富的做志愿工作的经验以至于我可以比
3.Roses given,fragrance in hand.赠人玫瑰,手留
别人更加熟练地做志愿工作。(so much..that)
余香。
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例题展示
假设你是李华。你在某英文网站上看到一则审题立意
招募中国志愿者的广告。请结合自己的实际情况,
提取要点
〔时态:一般现在时、现在完
根据招募广告的内容给项目负责人写一封电子邮
写一封电子邮件,
成时和一般将来时
件,表达你希望参加这个项目的愿望,并阐述
表达你希望参加{人称:第一人称
理由。
这个项目的愿望,要点:想参加该项目的愿望
Project
并阐述理由。
和理由
Place:A small village in the west of China
谋篇布局
Activities:teach children English
开篇点题
visit the old people's home
I want to be a volunteer here
表明愿望
·work on the farm
4=+44
写作要求:
I have worked for two years...
(1)层次清晰,语言流畅;
阐述参加
I would like to volunteer in a small village
in the west of China.
(2)词数在90~100之间;
志愿活动
I am good at English...
(3)书写规范,卷面整洁;
的理由
I can visit the old people's home to help..
(4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
I hope to work on the farm
In my opinion,it's meaningful to help
感想
people in need.
If people help each other,the world will
be a big family full of love.
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同步练测·英语RJ八年级下册2⑦
口范文欣赏
Dear Sir/Madam,
名师点评
I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from China.
主题评价]文章结构清晰,开篇点题,表明想要
I want to be a volunteer here.I have worked for two
成为志愿者的愿望。主体用现在完成时介绍自己
years as a volunteer in my hometown.I have
的经验,用一般现在时阐述自己的能力和理由,
confidence in volunteering here well.I would like to
结尾用一般现在时和将来时表达感想。要点全面,
volunteer in a small village in the west of China.
时态运用正确,符合写作要求。
I am good at English,so I am able to teach
①开篇导入话题,自然流畅。
children English.Besides,I can visit the old
:②现在完成时(have worked for two years)和条件状:
people's home to help the elderly do some cleaning.I
语从句(If people help each other)的恰当运用体
can also join in some activities to cheer them up.
现了作者扎实的写作功底。
What's more③,I am familiar with④working on the
③连接词(组)的巧妙连接,使文章句意连贯,层
farm.I can help the farmers do some farm work.
次清晰。
Most of all④,it's meaningful to help people in
④“the elderly”“be familiar with”“most of all”都
need.If people help each other,the world will be a big
family full of love
是本单元新学的短语和语法知识,达到了学以
致用的目的。
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练
校园生活从来就不只有课上的风景,还有课后
(3)书写规范,卷面整洁;
的精彩。在校园丰富多彩的活动中,有一类充满着
(4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
爱和情谊,那就是志愿者活动。学校志愿者工作中
Dear Sir/Madam,
心正帮社区的图书馆、博物馆、敬老院、医院、托管
中心(after-school care centre)招募志愿者。假如你
是八年级三班的李华,请选择其中一个,并向它提
交一份志愿者申请。
内容包括:
(1)简短的自我介绍;
(2)做志愿者工作的原因;
(3)在志愿者工作中你会如何发挥自己的特长来帮
助他人。
写作要求:
(1)层次清晰,语言流畅;
(2)词数在90~100之间,开头和结尾已给出,不计
Yours,
入总词数;
Li Hua
Reflecting
大单元整体训练八
[答案23]
《基础针对练
文考点强化练
2.She is
than her sister.
考点)old、older、elder与elderly用法辨析
3.My grandfather is very
4.The
need more care in winter.
1.My
brother is a doctor
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见此图标目园微信扫码难题轻松解练出好成绩【知识综合运用】
六、[语篇导读]本对话谈论的是捐献自行车给儿
童之家的事情。
26.Is it yours/Is this your bike
27.Yes(,that's true/you're right)
28.Good idea/Sounds like a good idea
29.How long have you had them
30.How did you get them/Who bought them for you
七、
A
[语篇导读]本文介绍了办公室职员Jack Brown虽
然继承了百万美元但是仍然过着简单的生活,并用
部分资金帮助贫困儿童的故事。
31-35 CDBBA
B
[语篇导读]本文介绍的是现阶段流行的做志愿
活动方式一义工旅行。
36.To a village in Yunnan Province.
37.Free services.
38.Three.
39.In foreign countries
40.Yes,I do.Because it's a good experience which can
help others and save some money./No,I don't.
Because the volunteer travel may lack proper safety
measures.
第6课时单元写作专题
【向型荟萃】
【开头句】
1.It's necessary to help those in need.
2.I think I am warm-hearted and helpful enough to work
as a volunteer.
【中间句】
1.Volunteering here is a dream for me.
2.I'm good at drawing,so I'll teach children to draw
pictures
3.I have so much volunteer experience that I can do
volunteer work more skillfully than others.
【结尾句】
1.If people help each other,the world will be a big
family full of love.
参考答案及解析
2.If I become a volunteer here,I'll be more careful to
take care of the children with love.
3.Doing volunteer work is really meaningful in life.
【实战演练】
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.I am a student from Class
Three,Grade Eight.I want to help out as a volunteer in
the after-school care centre.
I like to volunteer because I am good with children
and I enjoy being with them.I am a book lover and I
am good at telling stories.I can read for children in the
centre.I am also good at English.I think I can help
them with their English homework.I think I will be
good at this work and I would like to be helpful for the
children.
Volunteering here helps me do what I love to do
and gives me a chance to help others at the same time.
Yours,
Li Hua
Reflecting
大单元整体训练八
【基础针对练】
考点强化练
考点11.elder2.older3.old4.elderly
考点21.provides;for2.provide;with
考点3l.has had;ever since2.ever since
考点41.be worth2.worth repairing3.worth
考点51.sign up for2.signed up with
词汇语境练
1.for 2.Since 3.For 4.since 5.for 6.since
【阅读限时练】
一、[语篇导读]本文是一篇记叙文,主要讲述的
是志愿者老师韩梅在山村学校支教的经历。
1.A[解析]考查形容词辨析。根据上文的“she
couldn't believe her eyes'”可知,她看到面前的情景
很惊讶:破烂的窗户、破旧的小桌椅。故用形容词
surprised,其意为“惊讶的”。故选A。
2.C[解析]考查形容词的比较级辨析。根据上文
提到的“broken windows,small old desks and
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