Unit 3 The world online 上网的利弊（单元应用文写作精练）英语译林版必修第三册

Unit 3 The world online 上网的利弊 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：本单元的写作项目属于新课标中的正反观点类议论文 写作框架： 1.开头部分：引出文章话题； 2.主体部分：分别说明正、反方观点及论据； 3.结尾部分：总结并表明个人观点。 写作词汇短语： 1.with the popularity of the Internet随着网络的普及 2.be addicted to 沉迷于…… 3.catch on 了解；理解；流行 4.have access to/be accessible to 能使用 5.have an effect on/upon 对……有影响 6.keep in touch with 与……保持联系 7.keep pace with 跟上 8.log in/on 登录；进入 9.surf the Internet 上网浏览信息 10.with the development of 随着……的发展 写作句型： 开头:点明论题 ①Yesterday we had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of...during our class meeting. 昨天在班会上,我们就……的利弊展开了激烈的讨论。 ②...have become a popular tool for learning, yet they come with both advantages and disadvantages. ……已经成为一种流行的学习工具,然而它们既有优点也有缺点。 ③Recently, our school students have had a lively discussion about whether...最近,我们学校的学生就是否……展开了热烈的讨论。 主体:陈述正反方的观点及理由 ①Students' opinions vary on this topic.学生们对这个话题的看法各不相同。 ②Students in favour of it claimed that...赞成它的学生声称 ③Besides, it enables us to have access to...……此外,它使我们能够获得…… ④However, opponents of...hold the belief that...然而……的反对者认为…… ⑤The benefits of...include...It allows people to enjoy...……的好处包括……它让人们享受…… ⑥However, there are risks such as...然而,也有诸如……的风险。 结尾:表明自己的观点 ①In conclusion, whether to...depends on our personal goals, financial situation and ability to adapt. It's important to weigh up the pros and cons carefully before making a decision.总之,是否……取决于我们的个人目标、经济状况和适应能力。在做决定之前仔细权衡利弊很重要。 ②To balance...schools should encourage students to...while emphasizing the importance of... This approach will help students gain a deep understanding of...为了平衡……学校在强调……的重要性的同时应该鼓励学生……这种方法将帮助学生深入了解…… ③From my perspective, the advantages of...do outweigh its disadvantages.在我看来……的优点的确超过它的缺点。 ④In my opinion...has both positive and negative aspects.在我看来……既有积极的方面,也有消极的方面。 写作模板： 　　假如你是班级的宣传委员,最近你们班举行了一次主题为“中学生是否应该在课余时间上网”的辩论会,同学们持不同意见。请你根据下列信息写一篇短文,介绍此次辩论的情况,并发表自己的看法。 正方观点 反方观点 1.网络使我们更容易获得国内外的最新信息; 2.我们可以从网络上下载学习资源。 1.多数人上网是为了玩游戏、聊天,而不是学习或查找信息; 2.个别学生甚至沉迷于网络。 注意: 　　1.写作词数应为80个左右; 　　2.开头已给出,不计入总词数; 　　3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 　　A lively debate has been held in our class about whether it is good for students to go online in their spare time. Opinions vary on this topic. 思路点拨 A lively debate has been held in our class about whether it is good for students to go online in their spare time. Opinions vary on this topic.Some think that students should have access to the Internet. The Internet is a world without frontiers, making it easier for them to get the latest information both at home and abroad. Furthermore,they can download a wide range of learning resources from the Internet. However, others comment that the majority of students prefer to play games and chat online rather than study and look up information. What's worse, a few students even become Internet addicts, which will have a bad effect on their life and study. As far as I'm concerned, I approve of surfing the Internet in our spare time. Above all else, as long as we use the Internet properly,it will bring us more benefits. （2023·重庆·二模）假定你是李华，你们班将要举行题为“Internet celebrity — To be or not to be?”的英文辩论赛，请你写信邀请交换生Mike担任辩论赛评委，并在赛后分享自己的观点。 要点： 1.表达邀请； 2.活动介绍； 3.表达希望。 注意： 1.字数不少于80字； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, Yours sincerely, Li Hua (2023山东济宁阶段练习) 网上聊天是很多青少年喜欢的交流方式。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文发表在你校的英文论坛上。 1.网上聊天兴起的原因; 2.网上聊天的利与弊; 3.你的建议。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 1．（25-26高一上·广西钦州·月考）假定你是李华，最近你校英文报正在举办题为“Online Friendship: Advantages and Risks”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，给校报编辑写一封信，分享你对网络交友的看法。内容包括： 1.阐述网络交友的主要优势 (advantage) ，结合自身或身边人的简单经历说明； 2.指出网络交友存在的潜在风险 (risk) ，并给出实用的安全建议； 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student.________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 2．（25-26高二上·重庆·月考）假定你是李华，校英语报正在开展主题为“Should We Fight Online Shopping?”的讨论，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：（1）你的观点；（2）你的理由。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80词左右： （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Should We Fight Online Shopping? 3．（24-25高一下·全国·期末）某英文报要举办以“The Internet Has Changed My Life”为题目的征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.因特网对学习的影响； 2.因特网对生活的影响。 注意：词数80左右。 4．（24-25高二下·山东淄博·月考）假设你是高中生李华。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议，探讨如何利用网络学习外语，请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿： (1)介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点) (2)简单谈谈你对利用网络学习外语的看法 注意：(1)词数80字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Good morning, dear friends. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet. Thank you. 5．（24-25高一上·全国·课后作业）假设你是李华，对中学生课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。写一篇博文介绍学生们对上网的看法，并呼吁正确使用互联网。 使用互联网的益处 使用互联网的弊端 1.可以使用大量的数据库，得到很多最新的信息 2.很多学习软件不仅有助于学生的学习，还激发了他们的兴趣 3.方便交流和沟通 1.沉迷于网络会影响学习 2.有时，会泄露个人隐私信息 3.甚至会遇到一些网络挑事者或网霸 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 Today I want to blog about the advantages and disadvantages of surfing the Internet for students. 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 3 The world online 上网的利弊 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题：本单元的写作项目属于新课标中的正反观点类议论文 写作框架： 1.开头部分：引出文章话题； 2.主体部分：分别说明正、反方观点及论据； 3.结尾部分：总结并表明个人观点。 写作词汇短语： 1.with the popularity of the Internet随着网络的普及 2.be addicted to 沉迷于…… 3.catch on 了解；理解；流行 4.have access to/be accessible to 能使用 5.have an effect on/upon 对……有影响 6.keep in touch with 与……保持联系 7.keep pace with 跟上 8.log in/on 登录；进入 9.surf the Internet 上网浏览信息 10.with the development of 随着……的发展 写作句型： 开头:点明论题 ①Yesterday we had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of...during our class meeting. 昨天在班会上,我们就……的利弊展开了激烈的讨论。 ②...have become a popular tool for learning, yet they come with both advantages and disadvantages. ……已经成为一种流行的学习工具,然而它们既有优点也有缺点。 ③Recently, our school students have had a lively discussion about whether...最近,我们学校的学生就是否……展开了热烈的讨论。 主体:陈述正反方的观点及理由 ①Students' opinions vary on this topic.学生们对这个话题的看法各不相同。 ②Students in favour of it claimed that...赞成它的学生声称 ③Besides, it enables us to have access to...……此外,它使我们能够获得…… ④However, opponents of...hold the belief that...然而……的反对者认为…… ⑤The benefits of...include...It allows people to enjoy...……的好处包括……它让人们享受…… ⑥However, there are risks such as...然而,也有诸如……的风险。 结尾:表明自己的观点 ①In conclusion, whether to...depends on our personal goals, financial situation and ability to adapt. It's important to weigh up the pros and cons carefully before making a decision.总之,是否……取决于我们的个人目标、经济状况和适应能力。在做决定之前仔细权衡利弊很重要。 ②To balance...schools should encourage students to...while emphasizing the importance of... This approach will help students gain a deep understanding of...为了平衡……学校在强调……的重要性的同时应该鼓励学生……这种方法将帮助学生深入了解…… ③From my perspective, the advantages of...do outweigh its disadvantages.在我看来……的优点的确超过它的缺点。 ④In my opinion...has both positive and negative aspects.在我看来……既有积极的方面,也有消极的方面。 写作模板： 　　假如你是班级的宣传委员,最近你们班举行了一次主题为“中学生是否应该在课余时间上网”的辩论会,同学们持不同意见。请你根据下列信息写一篇短文,介绍此次辩论的情况,并发表自己的看法。 正方观点 反方观点 1.网络使我们更容易获得国内外的最新信息; 2.我们可以从网络上下载学习资源。 1.多数人上网是为了玩游戏、聊天,而不是学习或查找信息; 2.个别学生甚至沉迷于网络。 注意: 　　1.写作词数应为80个左右; 　　2.开头已给出,不计入总词数; 　　3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 　　A lively debate has been held in our class about whether it is good for students to go online in their spare time. Opinions vary on this topic. 思路点拨 A lively debate has been held in our class about whether it is good for students to go online in their spare time. Opinions vary on this topic.Some think that students should have access to the Internet. The Internet is a world without frontiers, making it easier for them to get the latest information both at home and abroad. Furthermore,they can download a wide range of learning resources from the Internet. However, others comment that the majority of students prefer to play games and chat online rather than study and look up information. What's worse, a few students even become Internet addicts, which will have a bad effect on their life and study. As far as I'm concerned, I approve of surfing the Internet in our spare time. Above all else, as long as we use the Internet properly,it will bring us more benefits. （2023·重庆·二模）假定你是李华，你们班将要举行题为“Internet celebrity — To be or not to be?”的英文辩论赛，请你写信邀请交换生Mike担任辩论赛评委，并在赛后分享自己的观点。 要点： 1.表达邀请； 2.活动介绍； 3.表达希望。 注意： 1.字数不少于80字； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mike, Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, I am writing this letter to sincerely invite you to join us as a judge in the coming English debate contest. The debate contest, with the topic “Internet celebrity —To be or not to be?”, is scheduled to take place next Friday in the school hall. The well-chosen debaters will enthusiastically express their opinions about whether it is sensible to choose a career as an Internet celebrity after graduation. During the contest, you will grade the debaters based on their performance. What’s highly expected, apart from that, is that you could share your valuable opinion about this topic, which I believe will help broaden our understanding, seeing a different opinion from a different culture. I genuinely expect your participation. Your earliest reply will be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文，要求学生写一封邀请信，邀请交换生Mike担任以题为“Internet celebrity — To be or not to be?”的英文辩论赛评委。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 真诚地：sincerely→genuinely 表达：express→voice 观点：opinion→view/point of view 除了：apart from→in addition to 2.句式拓展： 简单句变复合句 原句：During the contest, you will grade the debaters based on their performance. 拓展句：During the contest, you will grade the debaters based on how they performed. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 The well-chosen debaters will enthusiastically express their opinions about whether it is sensible to choose a career as an Internet celebrity after graduation. (运用了whether引导宾语从句) 【高分句型2】 What’s highly expected, apart from that, is that you could share your valuable opinion about this topic, which I believe will help broaden our understanding, seeing a different opinion from a different culture. (运用了what引导主语从句、that引导表语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句和现在分词作状语) (2023山东济宁阶段练习) 网上聊天是很多青少年喜欢的交流方式。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文发表在你校的英文论坛上。 1.网上聊天兴起的原因; 2.网上聊天的利与弊; 3.你的建议。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 【答案】 Many teenagers like to chat on the Internet. Technology makes it possible for teenagers to communicate with each other without knowing whom they are talking to. Some teenagers chat online for making new friends or gaining knowledge and information. Others like to share their feelings with their Internet friends to relax themselves. However, this way of communication also has disadvantages. Some teenagers spend too much time chatting on the Internet, which can make it difficult to complete their tasks. Sometimes it is dangerous to talk to total strangers. 　　In my opinion, we should set up a time limit for chatting and try to avoid getting hurt by it. 1．（25-26高一上·广西钦州·月考）假定你是李华，最近你校英文报正在举办题为“Online Friendship: Advantages and Risks”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，给校报编辑写一封信，分享你对网络交友的看法。内容包括： 1.阐述网络交友的主要优势 (advantage) ，结合自身或身边人的简单经历说明； 2.指出网络交友存在的潜在风险 (risk) ，并给出实用的安全建议； 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student.________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Editor, I’m Li Hua, a Senior One student. I’m writing to share my opinions on online friendship. On the one hand, online friendship has obvious advantages. Firstly, it breaks the limit of distance, allowing us to make friends with people from different countries and learn about diverse cultures. Secondly, shy people can express themselves more freely online than in face-to-face conversations. On the other hand, online friendship is accompanied by risks. Some people may hide their true identities, which may bring us trouble. To stay safe, we should never share personal information like our address or phone number online, and we’d better meet online friends in public places if necessary. In short, online friendship is a double-edged sword. We should treat it wisely. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高一学生李华的身份，给校报编辑写信，分享对“网络友谊：优势与风险”的看法，涵盖其优势、风险及建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 限制：limit → barrier 不同的：diverse → varied/ a variety of 隐藏：hide → conceal 个人信息：personal information → personal details 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Firstly, it breaks the limit of distance, allowing us to make friends with people from different countries and learn about diverse cultures. 拓展句：Firstly, online friendship breaks the distance barrier so that we can connect with friends worldwide and gain insights into varied cultures. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Some people may hide their true identities, which may bring us trouble. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】To stay safe, we should never share personal information like our address or phone number online, and we’d better meet online friends in public places if necessary. (运用了动词不定式短语作目的状语和状语从句的省略) 2．（25-26高二上·重庆·月考）假定你是李华，校英语报正在开展主题为“Should We Fight Online Shopping?”的讨论，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：（1）你的观点；（2）你的理由。 注意：（1）写作词数应为80词左右： （2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Should We Fight Online Shopping? 【答案】       Should We Fight Online Shopping?       The rapid development of online shopping has sparked a debate on whether we should fight against it. In my opinion, instead of opposing it completely, we should address its issues while embracing its benefits.         Online shopping offers unparalleled convenience, allowing us to purchase goods from home, which saves time and money. Moreover, it boosts economic growth and creates job opportunities. However, problems like fake products and data privacy cannot be ignored. Therefore, it is proper regulation and consumer education that we need to ensure a safe and fair online marketplace.         By doing so, we can enjoy the advantages of online shopping while minimizing its drawbacks. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“是否应该反对网购”这一话题向校英语报投稿，阐述个人观点及理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 引发：spark → trigger/ignite     完全地：completely → outright/totally     促进：boost → promote/stimulate     忽视：ignore → overlook/disregard 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换     原句：Therefore, it is proper regulation and consumer education that we need to ensure a safe and fair online marketplace. 拓展句：Therefore, to ensure a safe and fair online marketplace, what we need is proper regulation and consumer education. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Online shopping offers unparalleled convenience, allowing us to purchase goods from home, which saves time and money.(运用了现在分词短语“allowing us to purchase goods from home”作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句)   【高分句型2】Therefore, it is proper regulation and consumer education that we need to ensure a safe and fair online marketplace.(运用了强调句型“it is...that...”) 3．（24-25高一下·全国·期末）某英文报要举办以“The Internet Has Changed My Life”为题目的征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1.因特网对学习的影响； 2.因特网对生活的影响。 注意：词数80左右。 【答案】 The Internet Has Changed My Life There is no doubt that the Internet has greatly changed the world. As to me, the network benefits me in many ways. Not only can I surf the Internet for information I need but it provides an effective way to have classes online. Besides, it’s so convenient that I can do almost anything I want. I can chat with friends through WeChat, shop online, and watch movies. In brief, the Internet is so important that I can’t imagine life without it. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就某英文报要举办以“The Internet Has Changed My Life”为题目的征文比赛写一篇短文投稿。其内容包括：因特网对学习和生活的影响。 【详解】1.词汇积累 很多：many→plenty of 提供：provide→offer 而且：besides→moreover 重要的： important→significant 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：As to me, the network benefits me in many ways. 拓展句：As to me, it is obvious that the network benefits me in many ways. 【点睛】【高分句型1】There is no doubt that the Internet has greatly changed the world.（运用了that引导的同位语从句） 【高分句型2】In brief, the Internet is so important that I can’t imagine life without it.（运用了so...that引导的结果状语从句） 4．（24-25高二下·山东淄博·月考）假设你是高中生李华。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议，探讨如何利用网络学习外语，请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿： (1)介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点) (2)简单谈谈你对利用网络学习外语的看法 注意：(1)词数80字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。 Good morning, dear friends. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet. Thank you. 【答案】       Good morning, dear friends. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet. First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. Besides, the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English. Based on my own experience, learning English online is really a great way for English learners. But I have to remind that not everything on the Internet is right and we should learn to identify the wrong information. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的发言稿。要求考生撰写一篇发言稿，谈谈自己如何利用网络学习英语以及自己对利用网络学习外语的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 首先：first→ first of all 此外：besides→ what’s more 机会：chance→ opportunity 提升：improve→ enhance 2. 句式转换 原句：First, there are a lot of free resources related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. 拓展句：First, there are a lot of free resources that are related to English on the Internet, so I learn English by reading books or news, listening to postcodes and by watching streaming videos of TV and film. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.（运用了how引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Besides, the Internet gives me the chance to communicate in real-time with native speakers using instant messaging, video calling and online forums, which improves my spoken and written English.（运用了which引导的定语从句） 5．（24-25高一上·全国·课后作业）假设你是李华，对中学生课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。写一篇博文介绍学生们对上网的看法，并呼吁正确使用互联网。 使用互联网的益处 使用互联网的弊端 1.可以使用大量的数据库，得到很多最新的信息 2.很多学习软件不仅有助于学生的学习，还激发了他们的兴趣 3.方便交流和沟通 1.沉迷于网络会影响学习 2.有时，会泄露个人隐私信息 3.甚至会遇到一些网络挑事者或网霸 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 Today I want to blog about the advantages and disadvantages of surfing the Internet for students. 【答案】 Today I want to blog about the advantages and disadvantages of surfing the Internet for students. Some students regard it as a great helper. Students can have access to large database to get the most updated information. Besides, not only is plenty of study software beneficial to students’ study but also can arouse their interest of study. In addition, it is also very convenient to communicate with others by surfing the Internet. However, other students think that many students are addicted to the Internet, which will have a bad influence on their study. Sometimes, students’ privacy information may be let out. Worse still, students may come across some trolls and cyberbullies. Therefore, keep it in mind that we should make proper use of the Internet. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇博文介绍学生们对上网的看法，说明中学生课外上网的利弊，并呼吁正确使用互联网。 【详解】1.词汇积累 认为：regard → consider 此外：besides → additionally 影响：influence → impact 遇见：come across → encounter 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Students can have access to large database to get the most updated information. 拓展句：Students can have access to large database in order that they can get the most updated information. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, not only is plenty of study software beneficial to students’ study but also can arouse their interest of study.(运用了not only置于句首，句子使用了部分倒装结构) 【高分句型2】However, other students think that many students are addicted to the Internet, which will have a bad influence on their study.(运用了that引导的宾语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $