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九年级全一册北师大版
【写作专版】A版写作全流程精讲
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写作全流程精讲·北师大版九年级全一册
话题解读
本话题是北师大版九年级全一册写作的重点。常以“An Unforgettable Experience”“A Special Day”
等为题,考察学生运用5W1H要素(Who,What,When,Where,Why,How)完整叙述小故事的能力,
在单元测试、期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。
核心词汇和短语
一、核心难点词汇(12个)
mysterious
/mI strarias/
含义:adj.神秘的
搭配:
adventure
lad ventfa(r)/
含义:n.冒险
搭配:
discover
/dI'skava(r)/
含义:V.发现
搭配:
ancient
/'emfant/
含义:adj古代的
搭配:
curious
/'kjuarias/
含义:adj.好奇的
九年级全一册北师大版
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搭配:
solve
/splv/
含义:V解决
搭配:
journey
/'d3s:ni/
含义:n.旅程
搭配:
mysteriously
/mr strariasli/
含义:adv.神秘地
搭配:
unexpected
nIk'spektrd/
含义:adj.意外的
搭配:
treasure
I'tre32(r)/
含义:n.宝藏
搭配:
clue /u:/
含义:n.线索
搭配:
explore
/ik'spl:(r)/
含义:V.探索
搭配:
二、常用短语(12个)
set out∥
含义:出发
搭配:
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in search of∥
含义:寻找
搭配:
by accident
含义:偶然
搭配:
figure out∥
含义:弄明白
搭配:
as a result∥
含义:结果
搭配:
on the way
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含义:在途中
搭配:
due to
∥
含义:由于
搭配:
come across∥
含义:偶然遇见
搭配:
make a decision
含义:做决定
搭配:
in the end∥
含义:最后
搭配:
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lead to∥
含义:导致
搭配:
with the help of∥
含义:在…的帮助下
搭配:
高级句型
It wasnot until Lucy found the ancient map that sherealized the mysterious journey would begin
中文意思:直到露西发现那张古老的地图,她才意识到神秘的旅程即将开始。
模板亮点:It was not until...that..直到…才…
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Not only did Tom set out in search of the treasure,but he also prepared a detailed exploration
plan
中文意思:汤姆不仅出发寻找宝藏,而且还准备了一份详细的探索计划。
模板亮点:Not only did..but she also.不仅…而且…(倒装句)
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The more clues they discovered,the more curious they became about the ancient secret.
中文意思:他们发现的线索越多,对古老秘密的好奇心就越强。
模板亮点:The more..the more..越…就越…
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What surprised them most was that the"treasure"turned out to be a collection of ancient letters.
中文意思:最让他们惊讶的是,”宝藏”原来是一批古代信件。
模板亮点:What surprised them most was that.最让他们惊讶的是…
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Due to the unexpected rain,they had to camp in the cave and continue the adventure the next
day.
中文意思:由于意外的降雨,他们不得不在洞穴里扎营,第二天继续冒险。
模板亮点:Due to.,they decided to.由于…,他们决定…
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It took them three days to figure out the meaning of the mysterious symbols on the stone.
中文意思:他们花了三天时间才弄明白石头上神秘符号的含义。
模板亮点:It took them...to..他们花费…做…
Although the journey was tiring,they still felt excited about every new discovery.
中文意思:尽管旅程很累,他们仍然对每一个新发现感到兴奋。
模板亮点:Although,hey still..尽管…,他们仍然…
The Mysterious Cave Adventure
Last summer vacation,Lucy,a curious 15-year-old girl,discovered an ancient map hidden in her grand-
mother's old book by accident.It showed a mysterious cave in the nearby Green Mountain,marked with
a red cross labeled"treasure".
It was not until Lucy found the map that she realized an exciting adventure was waiting for her.She
quickly called her best friend Tom,and they decided to set out in search of the treasure the next morning.
Not only did they pack flashlights and water,but they also brought a compass and a notebook to record
clues.
The journey to Green Mountain took two hours by bike.On the way,they came across an old villager
who warned them about unexpected storms in the area."Be careful,kids.Many have tried to explore
that cave but returned with nothing,"he said.However,their curiosity was too strong to give up.
Due to the villager's warning,they prepared extra raincoats.When they finally reached the cave en-
trance,they were surprised by its size-it was as tall as a two-story building!Inside,the walls were
covered with ancient symbols.It took them nearly an hour to figure out that the symbols told a story
about a wise king who hid his"treasure"to protect it from enemies.
The deeper they went,the darker it got.Suddenly,Tom shouted,"Look!There's a stone box under that
torch!"They rushed over and opened it carefully.What surprised them most was that the"treasure"
wasn't gold or jewels,but a collection of old letters written by the king to his daughter.The letters talked
about courage,kindness,and the true meaning of wealth.
Although they didn't find valuable treasure,they still felt excited.In the end,they realized that the real
adventure was not about finding gold,but about solving mysteries and learning important lessons.With
the help of the letters,they understood that wisdom and love are the greatest treasures in life.
On their wayhome,Lucy wrote in her notebook:"The more we explore the world,the more we discover
about ourselves."This experience taught them that every journey,whether easy or difficult,leads to
something precious.
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