内容正文:
旅游经历、景点介绍
书面表达
选必二 Unit4 Journey Across a Vast Land
旅游经历: 游记
景点介绍:介绍或推荐一个城市、地方、景点
内容:可描写突出的景色、当地的习俗、人物
难点:景色的描述
积累关于描写地方的表达、景色的描写所用的形容词、动词等
课文句子: 旅行经历描述 (活动)
see the sights看风景
visit the island参观岛屿
3.take a pleasant hike in the forest 愉悦地在森林远足
4.anticipate seeing such an open country期待看到这样一个开阔的国家
5.see spectacular mountain peaks 看到壮观的山峰
6.see a bunch of farms 看到一堆农场
7.see the wide stretch of Lake Huron 看到宽阔的休伦湖
8.proceed to the next leg of the trip继续下一段旅程
9.This/It was the most awesome journey that I had ever taken.这是我人生中最好的一次旅程。
10.The blue water literally took thier breath away with its exceptional beauty.这片蔚蓝的海水以其无与伦比的美丽,简直让人窒息。
11. In addition to seeing spectacular mountain peaks and forests, one highlight of thier trip was being able to see many different creatures, including dear, mountain goats, and even a griaaly bear and an eagle.除了观赏壮观的山峰和森林外,他们此行的一大亮点是能够看到许多不同的生物,包括鹿、山羊,甚至还有一只灰熊和一只鹰。
介绍某地基本信息:
地理位置:某地 + is located in..../某地 + is situated in the north of/to the east of...
Located/Situdated in....., 某地 is.....
面积:某地 +covers an area of about.....square kilometers.
Covering an area of .....square kilometers, 某地 is...
人口:某地 + has a population of...
Its population is...
with a population of...
气温:The average temperature is...
以...闻名:be famous for...因...而出名, be well-known as....作为...而闻名
景色与特点
The highlight is...(最精彩的部分是...)
Offering a panoramic view of...(提供...的全景)
It features...(其特色是...)
Visitors can enjoy...(游客可以欣赏/体验...)
历史与文化背景
Dating back to...(追溯到...)
It has witnessed...(它见证了...)
The site reflects...(该遗址反映了...)
活动与体验建议
It’s ideal for...(这里是...的理想选择)
Don’t miss the chance to...(不要错过...的机会)
If you’re interested in..., you’ll find...(如果你对...感兴趣,你会发现...)
总结推荐
Whether you’re..., this place has something for everyone.(无论你是...,这里总有一款适合你)
A visit here promises an unforgettable experience.(来到这里,必将收获难忘的体验)
自然景观
Scenic area 风景区
National park 国家公园
Mountain range 山脉
Lake / River / Waterfall 湖泊 / 河流 / 瀑布
Beach / Coastline 海滩 / 海岸线
Forest / Jungle 森林 / 丛林
Valley / Canyon 山谷 / 峡谷
Hot spring 温泉
人文历史景点
Historical site / Heritage site 历史遗址
Ancient ruins 古代遗迹
Temple / Church / Mosque 寺庙 / 教堂 / 清真寺
Palace / Castle 宫殿 / 城堡
Museum / Art gallery 博物馆 / 美术馆
Monument / Memorial 纪念碑 / 纪念馆
Traditional village 传统村落
城市与现代景点
Landmark 地标
Skyscraper 摩天大楼
Square / Plaza 广场
Pedestrian street 步行街
Shopping district 购物区
Entertainment complex 娱乐综合体
Observation deck 观景台
Theme park 主题公园
休闲类景点
Botanical garden 植物园
Zoo / Safari park 动物园 / 野生动物园
Park / Garden 公园 / 花园
Marina / Harbor 码头 / 港口
Resort 度假村
描述性形容词与短语
形容景色优美
Picturesque / Scenic 如画的
Breathtaking / Stunning 令人惊叹的
Magnificent / Majestic 宏伟的
Serene / Peaceful 宁静的
Idyllic 田园诗般的
Panoramic 全景的
Unspoiled / Pristine 未受破坏的
形容历史悠久
Ancient / Time-honored 古老的
Well-preserved 保存完好的
Cultural / Historic 具有文化/历史意义的
Legendary 传奇的
形容热闹与氛围
Vibrant / Lively 充满活力的
Bustling 熙熙攘攘的
Cosmopolitan 国际化的
Traditional / Authentic 传统的 / 地道的
形容规模与大小
Vast / Expansive 广阔的
Compact / Intimate 紧凑的 / 小巧的
The views(风景)
The mountains and forests looked massive.山和森林看起来很大
spectacular mountain peaks 壮观的山峰
the beautiful scenery美丽的风景
the rolling hills连绵起伏的山丘
the bushes and maple tress灌木丛和枫树
the beautiful coastline and breathtaking landscape
美丽的海岸线和令人惊叹的风景
7. a city with wonderful sights and sounds一个拥有美妙风景和声音的城市
8.beautiful cobblestone street美丽的鹅卵石街道
9.old brick buildings 古老的砖房
10.the red maple leaves红红的枫叶
amazing令人震惊的/ superb极好的/awesome/fascinating
a feast for the eye视觉盛宴
enjoy/admire/appreciate breathtaking/spectacular scenery 欣赏壮观的景色
be struck/fascinated/impressed/attracted by... 被.迷住
have a good view of...一览无余
take a vacation in .../ spend one's holidays in ... 在...度假
be home to many shopping malls 是许多购物中心的所在地
the highlight of the trip is..... 旅行的亮点之一是...
The scenery is so beautiful that it takes the tourists’ breath away.
风景太美了, 游客都都屏住了呼吸。
The scenery of Jiuzhaigou Valley appeals to visitors from all over the world.
九寨沟的风景吸引了全世界的游客。
Wherever you go, there are plenty of activities to choose from.
无论你去哪里, 都有很多活动可供选择。
The experience of hiking around the world broadened my horizon and enriched my life.周游世界的经历开阔了我的视野,丰富了我的生活。
All in all, the trip was so meaningful and educational that we all enjoyed it.
总而言之,这次旅行既有意义又有教育意义,我们都玩得很开心。
fantastic极好的/ unforgettable难忘的/ rewarding值得的/
Feelings(感受)
pleased /pleasant开心的
take their breath away摄人心魄的
awesome 太棒的
amazed惊讶的
impressive 令人印象深刻的
fascinated 着迷的 astonished 吃惊的
as beautiful as expected和预期的一样美
be in a good mood心情好
make sb. feel cheerful让某人心情愉悦
be radiant with joy 喜形于色
be pleasant with description 喜不胜言
(2025·黑龙江大庆·模拟预测)假定你是李华,你的英国好友Eric打算制作一段题为“Travel in China”的网络短视频,现给你发来邮件征询拍摄景点。请你给他回复邮件,推荐一处标志性景点。
内容包括:
1.景点介绍:
2.推荐理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
____________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Eric,
How thrilled I am to hear about your project titled“Travel in China” ! I highly recommend the Great Wall in Beijing as your filming site.
Stretching over 13,000 miles, the Great Wall is a UNESCO World Heritage site and a symbol of China’s ancient engineering brilliance. Built over centuries, it shows the breathtaking views and the intelligence of Chinese people to the world.
This landmark is perfect for your video due to its visual grandeur and cultural significance. Not only does it highlight China’s long history but also attracts global audiences with its timeless beauty. Plus, filming during sunrise or sunset would add magical depth to your footage.
Wishing you an amazing shoot! Yours,
Li Hua
(2025·东莞)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom 打算在寒假期间来中国旅游,来信让你推荐旅游地点。请你用英文写一封邮件向他推荐一座城市,内容包括:
1. 推荐的城市;
2. 推荐理由。
Dear Tom,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(24-25高二下·黑龙江牡丹江·期末)假定你是李华,你的新西兰笔友Emma计划来中国旅游,希望你推荐一个值得一游的城市。请根据以下要求写一封邮件:
1. 推荐的城市名称;
2. 推荐的理由。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Emma,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Emma,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’re planning a trip to China. I’d like to recommend Beijing, the capital city.
Beijing is not only rich in historical and cultural heritages but also a vibrant metropolis full of modern charm. You can visit the Forbidden City, which was the imperial palace of the Ming and Qing dynasties, and the Great Wall, one of the seven wonders of the world. Moreover, there are many delicious local foods like Peking Duck.
I believe you’ll have a great time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
作文存在问题:
1. 尽量推荐熟悉的著名的地方或景点,比如:北京、杭州、上海,长城、故宫等,本地的不出名的、不突出的尽量不写。
2.句子表达单一: You can.... You can....(开头只会用You)
书面表达句子开头变式
1.名词/名词短语开头 -----主语从“人”(施动者)变为“物/地点”(被描述主体)
The ancient town is nestled among green hills, with cobblestone streets winding between traditional wooden houses.
这座古镇依偎在青山之中,鹅卵石街道在传统的木屋间蜿蜒。
This coastal city attracts millions with its golden beaches, vibrant nightlife and fresh seafood.
这座海滨城市以其金色的沙滩、充满活力的夜生活和新鲜的海鲜吸引着数百万人。
The local market, bustling with energy and color, is the best place to experience the city’s true spirit.
这个充满活力和色彩的当地市场,是体验这座城市真正精神的最佳去处。
2. 动名词/动词不定式短语开头 ----(强调活动或目的)
Walking along the forest path, you can hear birds singing and smell the scent of pine.
沿着森林小径行走,你能听到鸟鸣,闻到松树的清香。
Looking down from the mountaintop, you'll see a breathtaking panorama of valleys and rivers.
从山顶向下看,你会看到山谷与河流构成的令人惊叹的全景。
Exploring the narrow alleyways reveals hidden courtyards and tiny, family-run shops.
探索狭窄的小巷,会发现隐藏的庭院和家庭经营的小店铺。
Listening to the waves crash against the shore has a calming effect that washes all your worries away.
聆听海浪拍岸的声音,有一种能冲走所有烦恼的 calming 效果。
3. “It” 形式主语开头---(强调评价或感受)
It is truly relaxing to sit by the lakeside and watch the sunset paint the sky in orange and purple.
坐在湖边,看着日落将天空染成橙紫色,真是令人放松。
It is hard to imagine a more peaceful place than this hidden village, far from the noise of modern life.
很难想象还有比这个远离现代生活喧嚣的隐秘村庄更宁静的地方了。
It is amazing how the landscape changes completely with the seasons.
令人惊奇的是,这里的景观如何随着季节完全改变。
It is a common sight to see fishermen heading out to sea in their colorful boats at dawn.
黎明时分,看到渔民们乘着色彩鲜艳的渔船出海,是一道常见的风景。
4. 主语变为“从句”(使信息更复杂,逻辑更紧密)
What attracts tourists most is the peaceful scenery by the lake.
最吸引游客的是湖边宁静的风景。
That the lakeside scenery is so peaceful makes it a popular tourist destination.
湖畔景色如此宁静,使其成为了一个热门的旅游目的地。
5. 形容词开头
Famous for its cherry blossoms, the park becomes a sea of soft pink every spring, drawing crowds of visitors.
这个公园以樱花闻名,每年春天都会变成一片柔和的粉色海洋,吸引着成群结队的游客。
Rich in history and culture, the old quarter is filled with museums, art galleries, and quaint cafes.
这个老城区历史文化遗产丰富,到处都是博物馆、美术馆和雅致的咖啡馆。
6. 介词短语开头
At the heart of the city lies a large, tranquil lake surrounded by skyscrapers and parks.
在城市中心,有一片被摩天大楼和公园环绕的宁静大湖。
Beyond the sandy beach, the clear turquoise water is perfect for swimming and snorkeling.
在沙滩之外,清澈的蓝绿色海水非常适合游泳和浮潜。
At the top of the hill stands an old castle, overlooking the entire town.
在山顶上矗立着一座古老的城堡,俯瞰着整个小镇。
Beyond the bustling city center lies a network of peaceful canals, lined with willow trees.
在繁华的市中心之外,是一片宁静的运河网络,两岸垂柳依依。
7. 主语变为“抽象名词或概念”
The peace of the lakeside scenery provides a mental escape for tourists.
湖畔风景的宁静为游客提供了一个心灵避风港。
A sense of tranquility envelops every tourist who visits the lake.
每一位来到湖边的游客都会感受到一种宁静的氛围。
7. 使用“There be”或“介词短语前置”的结构(存在或场景设定)
There is a peaceful scenery by the lake for tourists to enjoy.
湖边有一处宁静的风景,供游客欣赏。
综合应用示例:描述“一座古桥”
基础视角(物作主语):
The ancient stone bridge arches gracefully over the sparkling river.
活动视角(动名词作主语):
Crossing this ancient bridge feels like stepping back in time.
感受视角(It作主语):
It is fascinating to observe the intricate carvings on the bridge’s rails.
存在视角(There be / 倒装):
There stands an ancient bridge that has witnessed centuries of history.
抽象视角(概念作主语):
A sense of history permeates the very stones of this bridge.
从句视角(主语从句):
How this bridge has survived through the ages remains a marvel.
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