Unit 1 Past and present 单元话题（时代变迁）写作满分范文15篇-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（新教材译林版）

2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 1 Past and present 单元话题（时代变迁）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．我们的生活中有很多美好的回忆。本学期你们班召开了一次题为“一个美好回忆”的主题班会。在班会上，你回想起与家人共度的美好时光，回忆起学习中老师的关心以及同学间的友爱，这些美好的回忆让你思绪万千……假设你是李华，请以A Sweet Memory为题目，把你的经历和感受写成一篇短文。 提示词语：picnic, birthday party, remember, friends, happy 提示问题： 1. What was your sweet memory? 2. How do you feel? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．近年来，人们的生活发生了许多变化。假如你是李华，请根据下表中的提示信息，以“Great Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇英语短文，叙述人们生活中的变化以及人们对未来生活的憧憬。 Communication (通讯) Living condition (居住) Transportation (交通) In the past write letters; use public phones small houses; houses made of wood on foot; by bicycle At present use mobile phones; write e-mails big houses; tall buildings by bus / subway; by car Hopes ... 要求： 1. 词数80—120； 2. 文中须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺、逻辑清晰、书写工整； 4. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息； 5. 不能抄袭试卷原文。 Great Changes in Our Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示，用英语介绍一下你周围环境的变化。 提示： 1.过去和现在你周围的环境分别是怎样的（可以从建筑、交通、空气等方面来写）； 2.你的感受。 要求： 1.文中应包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.不少于70词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 要求： 1.内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯； 2.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．中国的交通近年来发展迅速，给人们的生活带来很多便利。假如你是李华，请根据以下三幅图片，给你的加拿大笔友Tina发一封电子邮件，向她介绍中国交通的新发展，并分享你的感触。      要求： 1. 内容须包括以上三幅图中的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数80左右，电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：distance 距离 electric car 电动汽车 Dear Tina, I’m writing to share with you some exciting developments in China’s transport over the past few years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．祖国在腾飞，家乡在改变，百年风雨，百年辉煌。近来《学习强国》栏目正在举办主题为“家乡巨变”的征文比赛。请以“The changes in my hometown”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文投稿。 要点： (1) 你的家乡过去是什么样的； (2) 你的家乡有了哪些变化； (3) 你对家乡的变化有什么感受。 要求： (1) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (2)词数100左右。 The changes in my hometown _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是大明，你的朋友Tony给你发了一封邮件想了解你的家乡，请你以Changes in My Hometown为题，从环境，人口等方面向他介绍你家乡的变化。 注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数。） 参考词汇： environment (环境), population (人口) Changes in My Hometown Dear Tony, Thank you for your last letter. You asked me about the changes in my hometown and now let me tell you something about them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Daming 8．最近两年我们周围人和事发生了巨大变化，请你以Great changes in my eyes为题，根据以下表格要点和要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你眼中的变化，并谈谈改变的益处。 人/物 过去 现在 益处 同桌 sing, dance reading, cultural activities get more knowledge, learn about Chinese culture 你 computer games running, football relax; healthy; friends 校园 dirty clean, tree, flower beautiful; be happy to study 生活感悟：better; meaningful 要求： (1) 短文必须包含表格所有信息，可适当增加细节； (2) 文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息； (3) 词数100左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 During the past two years, great changes took place around me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．我们国家在过去的40年间发生了很大的变化。请你根据下面的表格提示，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1、词数在60—80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2、用上所给的信息，适当发挥。 3、文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校。 40 years ago Now 生活方面 1、大部分人住在小的平房里。 2、饮食简单，基本吃家里做的食物。 3、出行：步行、骑自行车、乘公交车、乘坐慢的火车。 4、有很少商店。 5、付款方式：人民币。 1、大部分人住在宽敞明亮的高楼里。 2、饮食多样化，人们可以在家吃，餐馆里吃，还可以点外卖食物。 3、出行：乘坐地铁、高铁、飞机。 4、有很多大商场，大超市。 5、付款方式：微信，银行卡等。 环境方面 1、街道拥挤，很脏乱。 2、晚上街道很黑。 1、街道宽敞、干净。 2、晚上街道明亮，路灯多。 科技方面 1、人们通过书信，打电话交流。 2、人们很少有电脑、手机。 3、人们靠双手来做家务。 4、中国发射过卫星。 1、人们通过微信、QQ来交流。 2、很多人有手机、电脑。 3、人们用扫地机器人。 4、中国发射11次载人火箭。 参考词：发射卫星: launch a satellite  发射载人火箭: launch a manned rocket 微信: WeChat  路灯: street lamp  外卖: take-away food China Has Changed a Lot In the past 40 years, our country has changed a lot. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示，从以下四个角度对比过去和现在的变化，并谈一谈自己对这些变化的看法。 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3. 词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Changes Around Us In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．一本旧书、一件生日礼物、一个玩具等都承载着美好的回忆。你拥有的承载着你最美好的记忆的物品是什么？请你结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文，分享你的故事。 内容包括： 1. What is the object with sweet memories? 2. Who gave it to you? 3. What are your sweet memories about it? 4. How long have you had it? 要求： 1. 词数不少于 100； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 The Object With Sweet Memories ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．如今，我们生活在一个飞速发展的时代。科技的进步、生活方式的改变随处可见。请以“Changes in Our Times”为题，用英语写一篇短文。你可以描述身边发生的显著变化，比如交通出行、通讯方式、娱乐活动等方面，也可以谈谈这些变化给你带来的感受与思考。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 Changes in Our Times ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．为了丰富学生生活，学校校刊英语专栏以“The Changes in My Hometown”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据表格内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。 过去 生活条件差、房屋既小又破旧，道路狭窄。 现在 1.住房舒适，道路宽敞，人们拥有了自己的汽车。 2.环境变得优美，每年有许多游客来参观。 未来 请你展望家乡的未来。 写作要求： 1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.可适当发挥。 The Changes in My Hometown In the past, my hometown was very small. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．曾几何时，我们没有完成作业，却用谎言骗得了老师的谅解； 曾几何时，我们与父母、朋友争吵后，执拗地将“冷战” 进行到底； 曾几何时，我们没做到诚实守信，却表现得理直气壮……这些都是我们所做过的错事。但你是否反省过这些过错？做人应学会反省。反省才能发现不足，发现不足才能改正错误，改正错误才能进步，只有不断进步我们才能变得更好，更强大。请结合自身经历写一篇英语短文，分享你对自我反省的认识。 内容包括：◎The importance of introspection ◎Your experience ◎What can you learn from it? 要   求：1. 字数不少于80词； 2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Word Bank 欺骗cheat      与某人吵架argue with      诚实的honest      遵守诺言keep one’s promise 改正错误correct the mistake      自我反省introspect oneself Nobody is perfect. It is true that we always make mistakes in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．习近平主席向全世界庄严昭告了中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”。作为一名即将毕业的初中生，你对“中国梦”有何感想？请你按照所提示的要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。 要点：作为中国人而自豪 1.过去，“四大发明”等优秀的传统文化影响世界 2.如今，……（列举两个中国成就，例如高铁) 为实现中国梦而奋斗 1.刻苦学习，勇于实践   2.……《补充至少一点) 要求: 1.词数80左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）﹔ 2．要点齐全，可适当发挥： 3．条理清晰，语句通颍，意思连贯，书写规范； 4．文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。 Dear friends, President Xi Jinping describes the Chinese Dream as a big dream for the Chinese nation. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 6 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 11 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 2025-2026学年一线教师制作新教材英语同步精品系列资料，名师遴选！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit 1 Past and present 单元话题（时代变迁）写作满分范文15篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．我们的生活中有很多美好的回忆。本学期你们班召开了一次题为“一个美好回忆”的主题班会。在班会上，你回想起与家人共度的美好时光，回忆起学习中老师的关心以及同学间的友爱，这些美好的回忆让你思绪万千……假设你是李华，请以A Sweet Memory为题目，把你的经历和感受写成一篇短文。 提示词语：picnic, birthday party, remember, friends, happy 提示问题： 1. What was your sweet memory? 2. How do you feel? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Sweet Memory One of my sweetest memories is my last birthday party. It was a sunny Sunday. My parents prepared a big cake and delicious food. Many of my friends came to my home. We sang the birthday song together. I made a wish and blew out the candles. Everyone was happy. We ate the cake, shared gifts, and played fun games. We laughed a lot. My parents took many photos for us. I will always remember that special day. Thinking of it now still makes me happy and warm inside. It reminds me how much my family and friends care about me. That feeling is truly sweet. Good friendships are precious. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，使行文连贯 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，最甜蜜的回忆是一次生日聚会； 第二步，具体阐述生日聚会都做了哪些事情； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①blow out 吹灭 ②think of 想起，想到 ③take photos 照相 [高分句型] ①It reminds me how much my family and friends care about me. (how much引导宾语从句) 2．近年来，人们的生活发生了许多变化。假如你是李华，请根据下表中的提示信息，以“Great Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇英语短文，叙述人们生活中的变化以及人们对未来生活的憧憬。 Communication (通讯) Living condition (居住) Transportation (交通) In the past write letters; use public phones small houses; houses made of wood on foot; by bicycle At present use mobile phones; write e-mails big houses; tall buildings by bus / subway; by car Hopes ... 要求： 1. 词数80—120； 2. 文中须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺、逻辑清晰、书写工整； 4. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息； 5. 不能抄袭试卷原文。 Great Changes in Our Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Great Changes in Our Life In the past, people communicated by writing letters and using public phones. They lived in small houses made of wood and traveled on foot or by bicycle. Nowadays, with the development of technology, people use mobile phones and write e-mails for communication. They live in big houses or tall buildings. Transportation has also improved, with buses, subways and cars being commonly used. People hope for even better living conditions, more advanced communication methods and faster transportation in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”穿插。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，前后文逻辑关系严谨。 [写作步骤] 第一步，阐述过去。用一般过去时从“通讯”、“居住”、“交通”三个方面描述过去。 第二步，阐述现在。用一般现在时从“通讯”、“居住”、“交通”三个方面描述现在。 第三步，书写结语。表达人们对未来的期望，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of technology 随着科技的发展 ②commonly used普遍使用 3．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示，用英语介绍一下你周围环境的变化。 提示： 1.过去和现在你周围的环境分别是怎样的（可以从建筑、交通、空气等方面来写）； 2.你的感受。 要求： 1.文中应包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.不少于70词。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. In the past, the roads were narrow and the houses were old. The air was not very clean, and the river was dirty. There were few trees and flowers in the city. Now, everything is different. The roads are clean and wide. It is very convenient to travel. There are many tall buildings everywhere. The sky is blue, and the city is full of green trees and beautiful flowers. Birds sing in the trees. People are happier and healthier. I feel very happy to see these changes. Our city is becoming more and more beautiful. I hope it will get even better in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：题目给出了具体的写作提示，包括过去和现在周围环境的状况、个人感受等，写作时需涵盖所有要点并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题，直接表明在过去的几年里周围发生了巨大变化。 第二步：详细描述过去周围的环境，从道路、房屋、空气、河流以及城市绿化等方面入手，展现过去环境的状况。 第三步：描述现在周围环境的变化，同样从道路、交通、建筑、天空、绿化等方面进行阐述，与过去形成鲜明对比。 第四步：表达个人感受，说明看到这些变化后的心情，以及对家乡未来发展的期望。 [亮点词汇] ①take place发生 ②be full of充满 ③in the future将来 [高分句型] ①Our city is becoming more and more beautiful. (比较级+and+比较级) ②I hope it will get even better in the future. (宾语从句) 4．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 要求： 1.内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯； 2.词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. In terms of travel, we can now go abroad more easily to explore different cultures. Also, travel online has become popular, allowing us to visit famous places virtually. For study, we're encouraged to do more reading to broaden our horizons and engage in group work to improve teamwork skills. When it comes to daily life, driving cars is common, and high-speed railways make long-distance travel faster and more convenient. These changes have made our life richer and more efficient, showing the rapid progress of our society. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，围绕“我们周围的变化”展开； ②时态：时态为“现在完成时”，用以描述过去几年发生的变化； ③提示：写作要点已通过图表给出，考生应涵盖“旅行、学习、生活等方面的变化”，并适当添加细节，使内容连贯完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“过去几年我们周围发生了巨大变化”来引出下文具体变化的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“旅行方式（出国游、在线旅游）、学习方式（多读书、小组合作学习）、交通方式（自驾、高铁）”几个方面介绍周围发生的变化； 第三步，书写结语。总结这些变化带来的积极影响，如生活更便捷多彩，表达对未来变化的期待。 [亮点词汇] ①take place发生 ②in terms of在……方面 ③allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事 ④when it comes to当提到…… ⑤make our life richer and more efficient使我们的生活更丰富、更高效 [高分句型] ①travel online has become popular, allowing us to visit famous places virtually.（现在分词短语作结果状语） 5．中国的交通近年来发展迅速，给人们的生活带来很多便利。假如你是李华，请根据以下三幅图片，给你的加拿大笔友Tina发一封电子邮件，向她介绍中国交通的新发展，并分享你的感触。      要求： 1. 内容须包括以上三幅图中的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺； 3. 词数80左右，电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 参考词汇：distance 距离 electric car 电动汽车 Dear Tina, I’m writing to share with you some exciting developments in China’s transport over the past few years. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Tina, I’m writing to share with you some exciting developments in China’s transport over the past few years. First, bicycles have become very popular again. Many people now choose to ride bikes for short distances because it’s eco-friendly and keeps them healthy. The government has built many bike lanes to make cycling safer and more convenient. Next, high-speed trains, or HSRs, have revolutionized travel in China. They can take you across the country at incredible speeds, making long distances feel much shorter. It’s amazing how quickly you can get from one city to another! Lastly, electric cars are increasingly common on our roads. They produce no harmful emissions, which is great for the environment. More and more people are switching to electric cars to reduce their carbon footprint. I’m really proud of these changes in China. They make our lives easier and help protect the planet. I hope you can visit and experience them soon! Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”，用于描述当前的交通状况； ③提示：写作要点已明确，包括自行车、高铁、电动汽车三种交通工具的介绍，并需要分享个人的感触。考生需确保邮件内容覆盖这些要点，同时可适当添加细节以增强连贯性和丰富性。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。明确邮件的目的是分享中国交通的新发展。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先，介绍自行车的新趋势；接着，详细阐述高铁的发展；最后，介绍电动汽车的普及； 第三步，书写结语。可以表达自己对交通发展的自豪感和对未来交通的期待，同时邀请Tina有机会来中国亲身体验这些变化。 [亮点词汇] ①eco-friendly环保的 ②revolutionize彻底改变 ③incredible难以置信的 ④carbon footprint碳足迹 [高分句型] ①Many people now choose to ride bikes for short distances because it’s eco-friendly and keeps them healthy. (原因状语从句) ②They produce no harmful emissions, which is great for the environment. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．祖国在腾飞，家乡在改变，百年风雨，百年辉煌。近来《学习强国》栏目正在举办主题为“家乡巨变”的征文比赛。请以“The changes in my hometown”为题，根据以下要点和要求，写一篇英语短文投稿。 要点： (1) 你的家乡过去是什么样的； (2) 你的家乡有了哪些变化； (3) 你对家乡的变化有什么感受。 要求： (1) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (2)词数100左右。 The changes in my hometown _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： The changes in my hometown My hometown used to be an old and poor city, where there were dirty rivers with rubbish everywhere. It had no large hospitals and the roads were so narrow. People lived a poor life. With the development of society, great changes have taken place in my hometown. Green hills and the flowers can be seen everywhere, which makes it look like a beautiful garden. Also, large hospitals and new roads have appeared. The people are enjoying a more comfortable life now. I’m proud of the changes in my hometown. I hope it will become more and more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中家乡过去和现在的对比，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开头介绍家乡过去的情况，为下文描述变化作铺垫； 第二步：具体描述家乡现在发生的变化，包括环境、设施和人们生活等方面； 第三步：总结全文，表达对家乡变化的自豪和希望。 [亮点词汇] ①an old and poor city一个古老贫穷的城市 ②had no large hospitals没有大型医院 ③lived a poor life过着贫穷的生活 ④great changes have taken place发生了巨大变化 ⑤enjoying a more comfortable life享受更舒适的生活 [高分句型] ①Green hills and the flowers can be seen everywhere, which makes it look like a beautiful garden. (which引导非限制性定语从句，对前面整个句子进行补充说明，使句子结构更加丰富。) ②I’m proud of the changes in my hometown. (be proud of 固定搭配，表示“为……感到自豪”。) 7．假如你是大明，你的朋友Tony给你发了一封邮件想了解你的家乡，请你以Changes in My Hometown为题，从环境，人口等方面向他介绍你家乡的变化。 注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数。） 参考词汇： environment (环境), population (人口) Changes in My Hometown Dear Tony, Thank you for your last letter. You asked me about the changes in my hometown and now let me tell you something about them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Daming 【答案】范文： Changes in My Hometown Dear Tony, Thank you for your last letter. You asked me about the changes in my hometown and now let me tell you something about them. In the past, the environment here was poor. The air was often polluted and there was rubbish on the streets. The population was also much smaller and people lived in old houses. Now, things are totally different. The government has planted many trees and built parks. The air is clean and the streets are tidy. More and more people have moved here, and new buildings and roads have appeared. I love my hometown more than before because it is becoming more beautiful and modern. Daming 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：一般过去时与一般现在时； ③提示：需从环境和人口两方面对比家乡变化，并表达感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，感谢来信并引出话题； 第二步，描述家乡过去的环境与人口状况； 第三步，说明现在环境与人口的变化； 第四步，表达对家乡变化的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①polluted受污染的 ②government政府 ③modern现代的 [高分句型] ①The government has planted many trees and built parks. (现在完成时表示已完成并对现在有影响的动作) ②I love my hometown more than before because it is becoming more beautiful and modern. (比较级与原因状语从句结合，表达情感) 8．最近两年我们周围人和事发生了巨大变化，请你以Great changes in my eyes为题，根据以下表格要点和要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你眼中的变化，并谈谈改变的益处。 人/物 过去 现在 益处 同桌 sing, dance reading, cultural activities get more knowledge, learn about Chinese culture 你 computer games running, football relax; healthy; friends 校园 dirty clean, tree, flower beautiful; be happy to study 生活感悟：better; meaningful 要求： (1) 短文必须包含表格所有信息，可适当增加细节； (2) 文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息； (3) 词数100左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 During the past two years, great changes took place around me. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great changes in my eyes During the past two years, great changes took place around me. Let me tell you about them. My deskmate used to like singing and dancing, but now she likes reading and taking part in cultural activities because she wants to get more knowledge and learn about Chinese culture. I used to be crazy about computer games, but now I like running and playing football. They not only help me relax but also keep me healthy and make friends. Our school was dirty before, but now it is clean with many trees and flowers. It becomes beautiful and we are happy to study here. These changes make our life better and more meaningful. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文 ②时态：一般过去时（描述过去） + 一般现在时（描述现在及益处） ③提示：需覆盖表格中“同桌、自己和校园”的过去、现在对比及益处，结尾补充生活感悟。 【写作步骤】第一步：用开头句承接题干，总述变化。 第二步：分三段描述表格内容 (每段聚焦一个主体：同桌→自己→校园)。 第三步：用结尾句总结生活感悟 (呼应表格最后一行)。 【亮点词汇】①cultural activities文化活动 ②meaningful有意义的 【高分句型】①My deskmate used to like singing and dancing, but now she likes reading and taking part in cultural activities because she wants to get more knowledge and learn about Chinese culture. (并列句；原因状语从句) 9．我们国家在过去的40年间发生了很大的变化。请你根据下面的表格提示，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1、词数在60—80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2、用上所给的信息，适当发挥。 3、文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校。 40 years ago Now 生活方面 1、大部分人住在小的平房里。 2、饮食简单，基本吃家里做的食物。 3、出行：步行、骑自行车、乘公交车、乘坐慢的火车。 4、有很少商店。 5、付款方式：人民币。 1、大部分人住在宽敞明亮的高楼里。 2、饮食多样化，人们可以在家吃，餐馆里吃，还可以点外卖食物。 3、出行：乘坐地铁、高铁、飞机。 4、有很多大商场，大超市。 5、付款方式：微信，银行卡等。 环境方面 1、街道拥挤，很脏乱。 2、晚上街道很黑。 1、街道宽敞、干净。 2、晚上街道明亮，路灯多。 科技方面 1、人们通过书信，打电话交流。 2、人们很少有电脑、手机。 3、人们靠双手来做家务。 4、中国发射过卫星。 1、人们通过微信、QQ来交流。 2、很多人有手机、电脑。 3、人们用扫地机器人。 4、中国发射11次载人火箭。 参考词：发射卫星: launch a satellite  发射载人火箭: launch a manned rocket 微信: WeChat  路灯: street lamp  外卖: take-away food China Has Changed a Lot In the past 40 years, our country has changed a lot. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 China Has Changed a Lot In the past 40 years, our country has changed a lot. Forty years ago, most people lived in small houses and ate simple homemade food. Streets were dirty and crowded with few street lamps at night. People communicated by letters and phones, and few had computers. Now, we live in spacious flats, enjoy various foods like take-away, and travel by high-speed trains. Clean streets have bright lamps. We use WeChat to talk, and robots help with housework. China has even launched 11 manned rockets! How amazing the changes are! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：一般过去时（描述40年前）+一般现在时（描述现状）+现在完成时（总结变化）； ③ 提示：需覆盖生活、环境、科技三方面，用表格信息对比变化，结尾抒发感叹。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用首句承接开头，总述变化；用2句描述40年前生活与环境（住房/饮食/街道）。 第二步，用3句写现在变化（住房/饮食/交通/街道/科技），涵盖微信、机器人、航天。 第三步，用感叹句总结变化，表达情感（How amazing!）。 [亮点词汇] ① spacious宽敞的 ② various多样的 ③ launched发射 [高分句型] ① Streets were dirty and crowded with few street lamps at night. (运用介词with表伴随) ② We use WeChat to talk, and robots help with housework. (运用并列连词and连接科技变化) ③ How amazing the changes are! (运用How引导的感叹句) 10．随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示，从以下四个角度对比过去和现在的变化，并谈一谈自己对这些变化的看法。 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3. 词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Changes Around Us In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Changes Around Us In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. In terms of traffic, we used to mainly travel by bike or bus. Nowadays more people drive cars for daily trips, and high-speed railways make long-distance travel much faster. As for study, students had few books to read and mostly studied alone in the past. However, now we can do more reading and take part in various group work, which improves our cooperation ability. When it comes to travel, not only can we go to more places abroad, but also online travel offers new experiences. In terms of the environment, we’ve realized its importance. We are planting more trees and working to reduce pollution. These changes have brought us a more convenient and colorful life. They show the progress of society and make our future more promising. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括思维导所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，直接表明发生了巨大变化，引出文章的核心话题，为后文具体阐述变化做铺垫。 第二步，从交通、学习、旅行和环境四个角度，具体对比过去和现在的不同； 第三步，总结升华，强调变化的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①in terms of 就……而言 ②take place 发生 [高分句型] ①However, now we can do more reading and take part in various group work, which improves our cooperation ability.   (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②When it comes to travel, not only can we go to more places abroad, but also online travel offers new experiences. (when引导时间状语从句、not only… but also…引导并列复合句) 能力综合实践5篇 11．一本旧书、一件生日礼物、一个玩具等都承载着美好的回忆。你拥有的承载着你最美好的记忆的物品是什么？请你结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文，分享你的故事。 内容包括： 1. What is the object with sweet memories? 2. Who gave it to you? 3. What are your sweet memories about it? 4. How long have you had it? 要求： 1. 词数不少于 100； 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。 The Object With Sweet Memories ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                     The Object With Sweet Memories My most precious object is a wooden toy train, handmade by my grandpa for my tenth birthday. Its polished wheels and carved windows show his care. It reminds me of our happy times by the fireplace, where he told stories and named the train “The Explorer.” Every weekend, we created imaginary journeys on the floor, building landscapes with pillows and books. Those moments made me feel deeply loved. I have kept it for five years. Now, though old, it sits on my desk and always warms my heart. This little train carries my grandpa’s affection and remains a silent companion connecting me to pure joy. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：综合使用一般过去时（描述往事）、现在完成时（表达持有状态）和一般现在时（说明现状及永恒情感）； ③提示：严格围绕题目四个要点展开——物品（木制玩具火车）、赠送人（爷爷）、甜蜜回忆（讲故事、命名火车、共同游戏）、持有时间（五年），结尾升华情感。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明物品及其来源，直接回答前两个问题； 第二步，通过具体场景描述回忆，如壁炉前讲故事、命名火车、用枕头和书搭建想象世界，生动回答第三个问题； 第三步，说明持有时长并描述现状，最后以物品承载的情感价值作结，完成第四个问题。 [亮点词汇] ①handmade手工制作的 ②polished wheels and carved windows打磨过的轮子与雕刻的窗户 ③imaginary journeys想象的旅程 ④silent companion沉默的伴侣 [高分句型] It reminds me of our happy times by the fireplace, where he told stories and named the train “The Explorer.”（运用了where引导的定语从句） 12．如今，我们生活在一个飞速发展的时代。科技的进步、生活方式的改变随处可见。请以“Changes in Our Times”为题，用英语写一篇短文。你可以描述身边发生的显著变化，比如交通出行、通讯方式、娱乐活动等方面，也可以谈谈这些变化给你带来的感受与思考。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实的姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 Changes in Our Times ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】[例文] Changes in Our Times Our lives have changed greatly in this fast-developing era. Firstly, transportation is more convenient now. High-speed trains and shared bikes have made our trips faster and greener. Secondly, communication has improved. Thanks to technology, we can see loved ones anytime through video calls. Thirdly, entertainment is diverse. Many people enjoy online games or short videos for fun. Although life is more convenient now, I sometimes miss the old days when people talked face to face. We should use technology wisely to keep our lives balanced and meaningful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时（描述现状）+现在完成时（强调已发生的变化）； ③提示：围绕交通、通讯、娱乐三方面对比过去与现在的变化，结尾提出理性思考。 [写作步骤] 第一步：总述时代巨变，分三点举例说明变化。 第二步：表达对过去的怀念，点明变化带来的矛盾感受。 第三步：提出倡议（善用科技，保持生活平衡），升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①convenient (adj.)便利的 ②video calls (n.)视频通话 ③diverse (adj.)多样化的 [高分句型] ①High-speed trains and shared bikes have made our trips faster and greener.（运用现在完成时强调变化结果+比较级并列结构描述双重好处） ②Although life is more convenient now, I sometimes miss the old days when people talked face to face.（运用Although引导让步状语从句对比情感矛盾） ③We should use technology wisely to keep our lives balanced and meaningful.（运用“should + 动词原形”提建议+不定式表目的） 13．为了丰富学生生活，学校校刊英语专栏以“The Changes in My Hometown”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据表格内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。 过去 生活条件差、房屋既小又破旧，道路狭窄。 现在 1.住房舒适，道路宽敞，人们拥有了自己的汽车。 2.环境变得优美，每年有许多游客来参观。 未来 请你展望家乡的未来。 写作要求： 1.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.可适当发挥。 The Changes in My Hometown In the past, my hometown was very small. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Changes in My Hometown In the past, my hometown was very small. People live in poor conditions, narrow roads and dilapidated houses. The pollution is so serious that it is full of rubbish. Now, great changes have taken place in my hometown. People have spacious and bright houses; many people have their own cars. The new airport were opened. The environment has become more beautiful; people live comfortably. Every year, thousands of tourists from all over the world come to visit our city. I hope we can how wider roads and more sports courts. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先对过去的情况进行描述； 第二步，接着再写家乡现在的变化； 第三步，适当展望下未来。 [亮点词汇] ①in the past在过去 ②live in住在 ③be full of充满…… ④take place发生 ⑤all over the world全世界 [高分句型] ①The pollution is so serious that it is full of rubbish.（so…that…句型）   ②I hope we can how wider roads and more sports courts.（宾语从句） ③I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.（better and better比较级的连用） 14．曾几何时，我们没有完成作业，却用谎言骗得了老师的谅解； 曾几何时，我们与父母、朋友争吵后，执拗地将“冷战” 进行到底； 曾几何时，我们没做到诚实守信，却表现得理直气壮……这些都是我们所做过的错事。但你是否反省过这些过错？做人应学会反省。反省才能发现不足，发现不足才能改正错误，改正错误才能进步，只有不断进步我们才能变得更好，更强大。请结合自身经历写一篇英语短文，分享你对自我反省的认识。 内容包括：◎The importance of introspection ◎Your experience ◎What can you learn from it? 要   求：1. 字数不少于80词； 2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Word Bank 欺骗cheat      与某人吵架argue with      诚实的honest      遵守诺言keep one’s promise 改正错误correct the mistake      自我反省introspect oneself Nobody is perfect. It is true that we always make mistakes in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Nobody is perfect. It is true that we always make mistakes in our life. But we should learn to reflect. Only through self-examination can we discover our shortcomings, correct our mistakes, and make progress. Only through continuous progress can we become better and stronger. I remember when I was in seventh grade, I went out to play with my classmates on weekends. My mother didn’t let me go out, so I had to finish my homework first. I quarreled with my mother, and finally I didn’t finish my homework. I have to hand in my homework on Monday, so I’m going to find a reason to cheat the teacher. On Monday, the teacher asked me to hand in my homework. I told the teacher that I was sick and didn’t finish my homework in time. The teacher is very kind. He believes me. Later, I often find various reasons to cheat my teachers, and finally my grades regressed quickly. Finally, I realized my problem. I should keep my promise and be an honest child. Later, I took the initiative to admit my mistake. We must correct our mistakes. From then on, I finished my homework on time and finally got good results. Self reflection is very important. Let me realize my mistake. We have learned a profound lesson. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，结合自己的自身经历，分享你对自我反省的认识，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。 2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，人称用第一人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。 15．习近平主席向全世界庄严昭告了中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”。作为一名即将毕业的初中生，你对“中国梦”有何感想？请你按照所提示的要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。 要点：作为中国人而自豪 1.过去，“四大发明”等优秀的传统文化影响世界 2.如今，……（列举两个中国成就，例如高铁) 为实现中国梦而奋斗 1.刻苦学习，勇于实践   2.……《补充至少一点) 要求: 1.词数80左右(短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）﹔ 2．要点齐全，可适当发挥： 3．条理清晰，语句通颍，意思连贯，书写规范； 4．文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。 Dear friends, President Xi Jinping describes the Chinese Dream as a big dream for the Chinese nation. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 【答案】One possible version Dear friends, President Xi Jinping describes the Chinese Dream as a big dream for the Chinese nation. Now I’d like to share my opinions with you. Firstly, I am proud to see the prosperity of our motherland. Our excellent traditional culture, such as the four great inventions, had a great impact on the world. Today, China has grown into a powerful country with various kinds of achievements. For instance, the high-speed rail has greatly reduced travelling time around the country. Besides, from AI to 5G robots, Chinese technology companies are in the world’s leading position. In order to fulfill the Chinese Dream, we are supposed to work hard and take action to realize our own values. More importantly, it is significant for us to seize every possible opportunity to make our country more competitive. With dreams, hard work and opportunities, beautiful things can be created. That’s all. Thank you. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。就“中国梦”这个题材来发表自己的感想。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主。分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据提示材料描述让自己引以为傲的事情；第三段描述如何为了中国梦而奋斗；最后一段表示感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $