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高中英语选择性必修1冀教版
【寒假专版】A版写作全流程精讲
寒假专版
【A版写作全流程】写日记记录长途旅行的
经历与感受
写作全流程精讲·冀教版高中英语选择性必修1
话题解读
本话题是冀教版高中英语选择性必修1的写作内容。常考题目有Write a diary about your long-
distance travel experienceRecord your feelings during a long joumey in a diary”等,核心考察学生
对旅行经历的叙述能力与情感表达能力。该话题在高中英语写作中较为常见,多以日记形式出现,
是选择性必修阶段的重要写作训练内容。
核心词汇和短语
一、核心难点词汇(12个)
journey /'d3s:ni/
含义:n.旅行
搭配:
destination
destr 'nerfn/
含义:n.目的地
搭配:
scenery
Isi:nari/
含义:n.风景
搭配:
memorable
/'memarabl/
含义:adj.难忘的
搭配:
高中英语选择性必修1冀教版
【寒假专版】A版写作全流程精讲
explore hik'spl:(r)/
含义:v探索
搭配:
experience
ik'sprarians/
含义:V经历
搭配:
culture /'kuifa(r)/
含义:n.文化
搭配:
local
/laukl
含义:adj.当地的
搭配:
transportation
/trcenspo:terfn/
含义:n.交通
搭配:
accommodation
la kuma'deifn/
含义:n.住宿
搭配:
delight /dr lart/
含义:n.高兴
搭配:
impress
/rm pres/
含义:V.给…留下深刻印象
搭配:
二、常用短语(12个)
set off∥
含义:出发
搭配:
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高中英语选择性必修1冀教版
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along the way
含义:沿途
搭配:
take photos
∥
含义:拍照
搭配:
try local food∥
含义:品尝当地美食
搭配:
learn about
含义:了解
搭配:
make friends∥
含义:交朋友
搭配:
in my opinion∥
含义:在我看来
搭配:
look forward to
含义:期待
搭配:
at first∥
含义:起初
搭配:
as soon as∥
含义:
一…就…
搭配:
高中英语选择性必修1冀教版
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in the end∥
含义:最后
搭配:
be interested in
含义:对…感兴趣
搭配:
高级句型
I prefer to walk along the quiet country roads rather than take crowded transportation during the
joumney.
中文意思:我宁愿在旅途中沿着安静的乡村道路步行,也不愿乘坐拥挤的交通工具。
模板亮点:Prefer to do sth.rather than do sth.结构表达偏好选择
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Not only did we enjoy the beautiful scenery along the way,but also we learned about the local
culture from the friendly villagers.
中文意思:我们不仅欣赏了沿途美丽的风景,还从友好的村民那里了解了当地文化。
模板亮点:Not only..…but also.结构强调双重体验
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It is memorable for me to experience the traditional festivals with local people during the trip.
中文意思:对我来说,在旅行中与当地人一起体验传统节日是难忘的。
模板亮点:Itis+adj.+for sb.+to do sth.结构评价经历
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The reason why I was deeply impressed by this journey is that I made many new friends who
shared interesting stories with me.
中文意思:我对这次旅行印象深刻的原因是我结交了许多分享有趣故事的新朋友。
模板亮点:The reason why..is that..结构解释原因
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Compared with the busy city life,the peaceful atmosphere in the mountain village made me feel
relaxed.
中文意思:与繁忙的城市生活相比,山村的宁静氛围让我感到放松。
模板亮点:Compared with..结构进行对比
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What I like most is the moment when we set off at dawn,with the sun rising slowly over the
horizon.
中文意思:我最喜欢的是我们在黎明时分出发的时刻,太阳缓缓从地平线升起。
模板亮点:What I like most is.结构表达最高偏好
Although the accommodation was simple,the warm service from the host family brought us
great delight.
中文意思:尽管住宿条件简单,但主人家的热情服务给我们带来了极大的快乐。
模板亮点:Although/Though..结构表达让步关系
A Memorable Journey Diary
July 15th,2024 Sunny
Today marks the end of my five-day journey to Lijiang,and I can't wait to record this unforgettable
experience.When we set off early last Monday,I never expected this trip would leave such a deep
impression on me.
The destination was a small mountain village surrounded by lush forests.Compared with the busy city
life,the peaceful atmosphere there made me feel instantly relaxed.Along the way,we passed crystal-
clear streams and green meadows,so we stopped many times to take photos of the breathtaking scenery.
What I like most is the moment when we watched the sunrise over the mountain top on Wednesday-it
felt like we were standing in a painting.
Not only did we enjoy thenatural beauty,but also welearned about the local Naxi culture.The villagers
taught us how to make traditional paper and dance their folk dances.I was especially interested in their
music played on ancient instruments.Trying local food was another highlight;the spicy tofu and bamboo
rice were so delicious that I kept asking for more!
Although the accommodation was simple-a wooden house with basic furniture-the host family's warm
hospitality brought us great delight.They prepared hot milk for us every night and shared stories about
their ancestors.The reason why I was deeply impressed by this joumney is that I made friends with a
local girl named Amei,who showed me around her family's tea plantation.
It is memorable for me to experience such a different lifestyle.I prefer to travel to these quiet places
rather than crowded tourist spots because they allow me to truly explore the culture and connect with
nature.As I pack my suitcase now,I'm already looking forward to my next journey!
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