内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(冀教版选择性必修1)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题5:写日记记录长途旅行的经历与感受
适用年级:
选择性必修1
对应版本:
冀教版
常考题日:
Write a diary about your long-distance travel experience l
Record your feelings during a long journey in a diary
一、
话题解读
本话题是冀教版高中英语选择性必修1的写作内容。常以“Write a diary about your long-
distance travel experience”“Record your feelings during a long journey in a diary”等为
题,核心考察学生对旅行经历的叙述能力与情感表达能力。该话题在高中英语写作中较为常
见,多以日记形式出现,是选择性必修阶段的重要写作训练内容。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心词汇(18个)
1.itinerary /aI'tInereri/n.行程;旅行计划
2.scenery/'si:nari/n.风景;景色
3.memorable/'memerebl/adj.难忘的;值得纪念的
4.journey/d33:niln.旅行;旅程
5.destination/,destr'nern/n.目的地
6.experience/ik'spIeriens/n.经历;体验
7.culture/'kte(r)Mn.文化;文明
8.local /'leuk/adj.当地的;本地的
9.delicious/dr'les/adj.美味的;可口的
10.impression/im'prefn/n.印象;感想
11.transportation/traensp:'tern/n.交通;运输
12.accommodation/e kpme'deI[n/n.住宿;住处
13.friendship/frendfIp/n.友谊;友情
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14.adventure /ed'vene(r/n.冒险:奇遇
15.relax/rr'leks/V.放松;休息
16.explore/k'splb:(r)/v.探索;探究
17.discover/dr'skva(r)/v.发现;发觉
18.enjoy /In'd3I/v.亨受;喜爱
2.核心短语(12个)
1.long-distance travel长途旅行
2.beautiful scenery美丽的风景
3.local culture当地文化
4.delicious food美味的食物
5.unforgettable experience难忘的经历
6.tourist attractions旅游景点
7.public transportation公共交通
8.comfortable accommodation舒适的住宿
9.make friends交朋友
10.have a good time玩得开心
11.explore new places探索新地方
12.discover new things发现新事物
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:“only+状语”倒装结构
Only by following the itinerary strictly can we make sure we don't miss
any tourist attractions during the long-distance travel.
2.结构:非限制性定语从句
We visited many ancient temples and traditional markets in the old town,
which enables us to have a deep understanding of the local culture.
3.结构:形式主语t句型
It is essential that we should book comfortable accommodation in advance
before starting the long-distance travel.
4.结构:让步状语从句
Although the public transportation was a bit crowded during the journey
we still enjoyed the beautiful scenery outside the window.
5.结构:现在分词作状语
Exploring new places in the destination city,we can discover many inter-
esting local customs and traditions.
6.结构:动名词作主语句型
Trying local delicious food is an effective way to experience the unique
charm of the place during the long-distance travel.
7.结构:not only.but also..并列结构
Not only can long-distance travel broaden our horizons,but also it can
help us make friends with people from different places.
8.结构:“the+比较级.,the+比较级..”句型
The more we relax ourselves during the journey,the better we will enjoy
the unforgettable experience of the long-distance travel.
四、满分范文示范
Saturday,July 15th,2023
Sunny
Today marks the end of my 5-day long-distance travel to Lijiang,and I can't wait to record
this memorable journey in my diary.
Our destination,an ancient town surrounded by snow-capped mountains,greeted us with
fresh air and blue skies.Following the well-planned itinerary,we first visited the Old Town
Square,where locals were dancing to traditional music.We joined them spontaneously,
laughing and clapping to the rhythm,which enabled us to experience the warmth of the
local culture firsthand.
Trying local delicious food at a small restaurant near the square was another highlight.The
spicy fish hotpot and crispy walnut cakes tasted so unique that I couldn't help but ask the
chef for the recipe.It is crucial that travelers should taste local specialties,as they are
like "edible stories"telling the history of a place.
Although the public transportation was a bit bumpy when we traveled to Jade Dragon
Snow Mountain,we still enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the way-green valleys,
clear streams,and flocks of sheep grazing peacefully.Exploring new places there,we
discovered a hidden waterfall behind the woods,which felt like a wonderful adventure.
Not only did this journey let me relax from daily stress,but it also helped me make
friends with a group of backpackers from different cities.We shared stories by the
campfire at night and promised to meet again next year.The more we talked about our
dreams and experiences,the deeper our friendship grew.
As I pack my luggage now,I realize that long-distance travel is more than just visiting tourist
attractions.It's about exploring the world,discovering new things,and creating unforgettable
memories.Only by stepping out of our comfort zones can we truly understand the
beauty of life.
Tomorrow I'll be heading home,but the impressions of Lijiang will stay in my heart forever.
What a fantastic trip!