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经历与情感 写作素材包 v v v 素材① 词块积累 1.involve 使陷于;牵涉 2.confront 面对 3.cherish 珍惜 4.escape 逃避 5.struggle 挣扎 6.perseverance 毅力 7.everlasting 永恒的 8.precious 宝贵的 v v v v v v v 9.when it comes to… 一涉及…… 10.… occur to sb. 某人想起…… 11.be involved in 参与 12.to one’s amazement 让某人惊奇的是 13.attempt to do sth. 试图做某事 14.a sense of achievement 成就感 15.without any hesitation 毫不犹豫地 16.be determined to do sth. 决心做某事 v v 素材② 课本佳句仿写 1.The only problem was that there was nothing much to do in the evening but read.(八上P3) 仿写:主要问题是,放学后除了在操场踢足球之外,没有什么 有趣的事情可做。 The main problem is that there is nothing fun to do after school but play soccer on the playground. v v 2.His love for mountain climbing is so great that he kept on climbing mountains even after this experience. (八下P6) 仿写:她对音乐的热爱如此强烈,以至于她即使累了也不 停地唱歌。 Her love for music is so strong that she keeps singing songs even when she is tired. v v 3.She came to realize how much she actually missed all of them.(八下P62) 仿写:杰克终于意识到为考试努力学习是多么重要。 Jack finally came to realize how important it was to study hard for his exams. 4.I was about to go up when I decided to get a coffee first. (九全P91) 仿写:李明正要跑步,突然下起了倾盆大雨。 Li Ming was about to run when the rain began to pour. v v 素材③ 高级句型及谚语积累 1.Peter kept his eyes on the ground. (扩写原因,并使用so… that… 句型) Peter was so upset that he kept his eyes on the ground. 2.Thanks to Mr.Wang and the passengers, the man was saved by the doctors in time.(用强调句型升阶句子) It was because of Mr.Wang and the passengers that the man was saved by the doctors in time. v v 3.He was really worried that his coach might kick him off the team.(用what made him… was that… 句型升阶句子) What made him really worried was that his coach might kick him off the team. 4.(谚语)Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者,事竟成。 5.(谚语)The longest journey begins with the first step. 千里之行,始于足下。 v v 素材④ 不同版本背诵素材 (一)译林版八年级上 Saturday, 30 October Mum’s birthday is coming,so I decided to make her a birthday card by myself.I went to Sandy’s home to make the card because I wanted to keep it secret. I planned to make the card with some roses on it. Sandy helped me with the drawing.We had fun working together.It took me two hours to finish.Lots of things went wrong during that time.I made some mistakes when I v v wrote the sentence “Happy Birthday, Mum”. I kept spelling the words wrong.I was too excited! Finally, I coloured the roses red, blue and pink. I also cut out a picture of colourful balloons and stuck it on the cover. When I completed the card, there was paint on everything: the table,Sandy’s books, my clothes, my hands and face! This is the first card I made for Mum. I hope she will like it. v v [翻译] 10月30日,星期六 妈妈的生日快到了,所以我决定自己给她做一张生日贺卡。 我去桑迪家做的卡片,因为我想保密。 我打算做一张有玫瑰花的卡片。桑迪帮我画画。我们在一起合作很开心。我花了两个小时才完成。在此期间,出了很多问题。我在写“妈妈,生日快乐”这句话时出了一些错。我一直在拼错这些单词。我太兴奋了! 最后,我把玫瑰涂成了红色、蓝色和粉色。我还剪下了一张彩色气球的图片,并把它贴在了封面上。当我完成这张卡 v v 片时,所有的东西上都有颜料:桌子,桑迪的书,我的衣服,我的手和脸! 这是我给妈妈做的第一张卡片。我希望她会喜欢。 v v (二)科普版八年级下 Dealing with Sadness No one can be happy all the time.You may become unhappy sometimes,for example,when you fail an exam or when you lose one of your friends.It’s normal to have these feelings.If you don’t know how to deal with these problems, you may learn something from Jeff. v v Jeff almost went mad when his elder brother was killed in a car accident.He refused to play soccer or go to the movies with his friends.Instead, he just sat in his bedroom and didn’t talk to anyone, even his parents.Jeff felt that the world was unfair. He was quite angry with the driver because his car hit his brother, even though it was an accident. After a few months, Jeff began to understand it was useless to be angry. Now he still misses his brother, but he doesn’t hate the driver any longer. He is beginning to talk to his parents and that makes them happy again. He v v no longer stays in his room by himself. Instead, he goes to the movies or plays sports with his friends. He is feeling better now. v v [翻译] 应对悲伤 没有人能一直保持快乐。有时你可能会变得不开心,比如当你考试不及格或者失去了一个朋友的时候。有这些感受是正常的。如果你不知道如何处理这些问题,你可以从杰夫身上学到一些东西。 当杰夫的哥哥在一场车祸中丧生时,他几乎要疯了。他拒绝和朋友们一起踢足球或去看电影。相反,他只是坐在自己的卧室里,不和任何人说话,甚至不和他的父母说话。 杰夫觉得这个世界不公平。他对司机非常生气,因为他的车 v v 撞了他的哥哥,尽管这是一场意外。几个月后,杰夫开始明白生气是没有用的。现在他仍然想念他的哥哥,但他不再恨那个司机了。他开始和他的父母交谈,这让他们又高兴起来。他不再一个人待在房间里。相反,他和朋友们一起去看电影或做运动。他现在感觉好多了。 真题范写 v (2025山西改编)生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,父母的付出,老师的鼓励,朋友的支持,陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。 要求: 1.80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: v v your opinions about love(respect, understanding, care, help, support… tell a story(take care of, value one’s voice, stay with sb.) share your feelings(touched, surprised, excited, upset…) share the influence(realize that, have a better understanding of…) v v 审题 定主题:经历与情感。 定时态:故事用一般过去时,感悟用一般现在时。 定人称:第一人称。 定要点:先定义自己眼中的爱,然后讲述一个被爱的故事,最后说明这个故事如何让自己学会去爱。 v v 提纲要点 第一段:点题,介绍你眼中的爱是什么 opinion Love is understanding and respect 第二段:举例,讲述一个你被爱的故事 activity My family talked about where to go for… disagreement They preferred educational ones, but I wanted… feeling To my surprise, they smiled and… understanding I realized my parents valued my… 第三段:总结升华,分享你的感悟 conclusion Love is about… v v 连句成篇 Love means different things to different people. It can be support, encouragement or trust. In my opinion, love is understanding and respect(表明自己对爱的看法). Last summer vacation(事件的时间), my family talked about where to go for our trip(起因). I knew they preferred educational ones, but I really wanted something relaxing. Thinking twice, I shared my wish softly. I told them that I hoped to go to the beach. To my surprise(描述心情), they smiled and said, “Your choice matters too! Let’s go to the v v beach this time!” At that moment, I realized my parents valued my voice more than their own plans(体会与感动). Love is about caring about others’feelings(总结感悟). Just as my parents understand me and respect my choice, I have also learned to treat others in the same way(事件的影响). v v v v v 实战演练 “艰难困苦,玉汝于成”。每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程,从幼稚走向成熟,从逆境走向成功。初中三年你有过逆势前行克服困难的经历吗? 请以“The harder, the better”为题写一篇英语短文,讲述你的一次经历和感悟。 要求: 1.80-120词; 2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 参考信息: v v difficulties or problems(fail in exams, argue with friends, be under pressure…) ways to get over it(ask for help, stay positive, make plans…) lessons you have learned(learn from challenges, grow stronger, understand the importance of…) v v The harder, the better As an old saying goes, “Adversity makes you stronger.” I learned this lesson during my junior high school years. Last term, I had a hard time with physics. It was so difficult for me that my grades kept dropping. I almost wanted to give up, but I told myself to keep going. I made a study plan and spent more time practicing every day. I also asked my teacher and classmates for help. Joining a study group was a great idea, too. We worked together and shared good ways to learn. Slowly, I got better and better at physics. v v This experience taught me that problems are chances to grow. The harder things I meet, the more I can learn from them. $