Unit 1 Animal Friends 动物（单元写作精练）英语新教材人教版七年级下册

Unit 1 Animal Friends 动物朋友 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题： 动物朋友 　　本单元的话题是“动物朋友”。与此相关的写作任务是介绍自己最喜欢的一种动物。写此类作文时，可以从这种动物的名称、外貌特征以及自己喜欢的原因等方面介绍。写作时常用一般现在时。 　　常用句型： 　　My favourite animal is......is my favourite animal. 　　I like/love...because... 　　It can... 　　It looks... 素材积累： 一、核心单词 1. 常见动物类 dog 狗；cat 猫；rabbit 兔子；bird 鸟；fish 鱼；hamster 仓鼠；goldfish 金鱼；parrot 鹦鹉；turtle 乌龟；puppy 小狗；kitten 小猫 2. 外形特征类 cute 可爱的；lovely 讨人喜欢的；small 小的；big 大的；fluffy 毛茸茸的；feathery 有羽毛的；smooth 光滑的；soft 柔软的；colorful 色彩鲜艳的；strong 强壮的 3. 性格行为类 friendly 友好的；lazy 懒惰的；active 活泼的；smart 聪明的；funny 有趣的；play 玩耍；run 跑；jump 跳；sing 鸣叫；eat 吃；sleep 睡觉；climb 爬；swim 游泳；bite 咬；wag (tail) 摇（尾巴） 二、高频短语 1. a cute little rabbit 一只可爱的小兔子 2. fluffy fur 毛茸茸的毛 3. wag its tail 摇它的尾巴 4. play with me 跟我一起玩 5. run around the garden 在花园里跑来跑去 6. eat carrots 吃胡萝卜 7. sleep all day 整天睡觉 8. a good friend of mine 我的一个好朋友 9. bring me happiness 给我带来快乐 10. take good care of 好好照顾 11. make my life interesting 让我的生活变得有趣 12. fly in the sky 在空中飞 13. swim in the water 在水里游 14. be loyal to sb. 对某人忠诚 15. a lovely pet 一只可爱的宠物 三、高频句型 1. 开篇引入句型 I have a lovely pet. It is a/an ______. My favorite animal friend is a ______ named ______. Last year, my parents gave me a ______ as a birthday gift, and it has become my closest friend since then. 2. 外形描写句型 It has ______ (fluffy fur/big round eyes/a short tail) and looks very cute. Its fur is ______ (white and soft/colorful/shiny), which makes it stand out among other animals. With its ______ (small body/long ears), it always attracts people's attention. 3. 性格行为句型 It is very ______ (friendly/lazy/active) and likes to ______ (play with me/sleep on the sofa). Every morning, it will ______ (wag its tail and greet me/sing loudly to wake me up). When I feel sad, it often ______ (lies beside me/licks my hand) to cheer me up. 4. 日常互动句型 I usually ______ (feed it carrots/take it for a walk) after school. We often play games together in the garden, and that is the happiest time of my day. Taking good care of it has taught me how to be responsible. 5. 结尾升华句型 This lovely ______ is not only my pet, but also my best friend. It brings so much happiness to my life, and I will love it forever. I think animals are our friends, and we should always be kind to them. 真题示例： （2024·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题）最近，我国第一只预备役柯基警犬福仔在网络上爆火出圈，虽然他腿短，但却因为其独特的优势使他在众多警犬中脱颖而出。请根据下列信息，以“福仔”的口吻向大家介绍一下自己。 要求： 1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥； 2.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.至少含有两个复合句。 Fu Zai’s Personal File (个人档案) Age: 8 months old Color: brown and white Weight: about 7 kilos Experiences: ·be a pet dog; in the past ·start training; 2 months old Abilities: ·nose; smell ... ·short legs; not run fast; search small spaces The happiest thing: be carried on the trainer’s back Hope: official (正式的)… Hi, I’m Fu Zai, China’s first reserve police dog (预备役警犬). ___________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Hi, I’m Fu Zai, China’s first reserve police dog. Let me introduce myself to you. I’m eight months old. I’m brown and white. I weigh about seven kilos. I was a pet dog in the past. And I started training when I was 2 months old. I can use my nose to smell dangerous things. I have short legs so I can’t run fast. But I can search small spaces because of my short legs. I am often carried on the trainer’s back when we go outside to work. That is my happiest thing. I hope I can be an official police dog soon. I’m happy to serve the people. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，以“福仔”的口吻介绍自己的基本信息、经历、能力； 第二步，介绍最开心的事以及期望。 [亮点词汇] ①dangerous things危险物品 ②because of由于 [高分句型] ①And I started training when I was 2 months old.（时间状语从句） ②I hope I can be an official police dog soon.（宾语从句） 题型通关 练 1．（24-25七年级下·广西防城港·期中）假如你是广州动物园的志愿讲解员, 请根据以下信息提示, 写一篇英文讲解词来介绍（introduce）明星动物“斑斑”。 名字: 斑斑 年龄: 8岁 物种: 长颈鹿 家乡: 非洲肯尼亚（Kenya, Africa） 喜欢的活动: 奔跑、用长脖子吃树叶 技能（skill）: 会用舌头（tongue）摘取高处树叶 喜欢的食物: 树叶、胡萝卜、苹果 观赏注意事项: 禁止喂食; 请保持安静 要求: 1. 讲解词须包含所有信息提示, 可适当发挥; 2. 语言表达要准确, 语句通顺, 意思连贯; 3. 词数不少于60, 讲解词的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 Welcome to Guangzhou Zoo._______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（24-25七年级下·河北唐山·期中）英语课上你们要围绕“My Favourite Animal”话题进行讨论和分享，请你依照下面的思维导图写一篇短文，介绍一个你最喜欢的动物。 注意： (1)短文须包括导图中所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3)词数60个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My Favourite Animal My favourite animal is ____________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（24-25七年级下·四川绵阳·期中）假设你有一只宠物小狗，它非常讨人喜欢。你的朋友们很想了解它的一些情况。请根据下面提供的信息以“My little dog”为题，用英语描述你的宠物，可适当拓展。50词左右。 1. 外部特征：黑白相间 (black and white)，有两只大耳朵。 2. 这只小狗很可爱，能看家，因为它的嗅觉 (sense of smell) 很灵敏。 3. 它喜欢的食物是肉。爱好是玩球。 4. 它对人很友好，但有些害羞 (shy)。 5. 狗是人类的好朋友，我们应该 (should) 爱护 (take care of) 它们。 My little dog _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（24-25七年级下·安徽蚌埠·期中）动物是人类的好朋友，能给我们带来很多欢乐，现在越来越多的人饲养宠物。假如你有一只宠物免，请根据下面提示写一篇英语作文。 Your pet a rabbit What does it look like? white and black, long ears, lovely What does it eat? grass and vegetables What does it do? run after me, make me relax What’s special about it? always by my side 要求： (1)包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥。 (2)不少于70 词。 My Pet Rabbit ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（24-25七年级下·重庆江津·期中）根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文内容写在下面的答题位置上。 假设你是成都大熊猫研究基地的管理员林伟，请你给参观的游客介绍一下大熊猫以及参观的注意事项。 提示： 1. 大熊猫，生活在四川，喜欢吃竹子(bamboo)； 2. 皮毛(fur) 黑白相间，非常可爱； 3. 不能给熊猫喂食，这对它们的健康没有好处； 4. 参观时不能乱扔垃圾，要保持熊猫栖息地 (habitat) 的干净整洁。 5. 作为管理员，你希望大家能遵守规则，一起保护大熊猫。 要求： 1.词数70左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.所写内容必须包括要点中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Hello, everyone! I’m the panda keeper (饲养员) , Lin Wei. Let me tell you something about pandas and some rules for visiting the Chengdu Research Base (研究基地). ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（24-25七年级下·陕西汉中·期中）假设你是李梅，你的英国朋友Jennie发邮件邀请你保护濒危野生动物。请阅读以下邮件并回复。 To: LiMei@mail.com Subject: Let’s protect wild animals in danger! Dear Li Mei, How is everything going? I’m working on a project called “Let’s protect wild animals in danger!” these days. Are you interested in protecting wild animals? I know your favourite wild animal is the panda. Why do you like it? Is it in danger? Do you know why it is in danger and what we can do to help it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Jennie 参考词汇：lovely，friendly，lose their home，natural parks 要求：1. 邮件必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear Jennie, I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am interested in protecting wild animals. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Mei 7．（24-25七年级下·甘肃兰州·期中）同学们，动物是人类的好朋友，很多人都希望拥有自己的宠物。请以“I want to keep a ________ as my pet”为题写一篇作文。阐述你养这种动物作为你的宠物的原因以及你会如何对待它。开头已经给出，请在答题卡上完整作答。 写作要求：1. 内容要围绕导图展开陈述，也可以适度发挥。 2. 字数控制在80字左右。 3. 不得出现真实姓名和班级。 I want to keep a … as my pet As we all know, animals are our friends. Among them, my favorite animal is_________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（24-25七年级下·四川眉山·期中）假如你是Alice，上周六你去动物园观看了你最喜欢的熊猫花花，请你根据以下导图信息，写一篇英文短文介绍一下花花和在动物园必须遵守的规则并发出倡议。字数80个单词 最爱的动物 熊猫 姓名 花花 Be from 四川 looks 有黑白的毛发，圆圆的大脸和黑色的小耳朵 Abilities 擅长爬树和游泳，是很棒的游泳员，听觉很灵敏 Zoo’s rules 1.禁止投喂 2.保持安静 3.保持清洁 4. …… Call (倡议) ⋯⋯ (至少两点) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Animal Friends 动物朋友 单元写作精练 写作主题 识 写作主题： 动物朋友 　　本单元的话题是“动物朋友”。与此相关的写作任务是介绍自己最喜欢的一种动物。写此类作文时，可以从这种动物的名称、外貌特征以及自己喜欢的原因等方面介绍。写作时常用一般现在时。 　　常用句型： 　　My favourite animal is......is my favourite animal. 　　I like/love...because... 　　It can... 　　It looks... 素材积累： 一、核心单词 1. 常见动物类 dog 狗；cat 猫；rabbit 兔子；bird 鸟；fish 鱼；hamster 仓鼠；goldfish 金鱼；parrot 鹦鹉；turtle 乌龟；puppy 小狗；kitten 小猫 2. 外形特征类 cute 可爱的；lovely 讨人喜欢的；small 小的；big 大的；fluffy 毛茸茸的；feathery 有羽毛的；smooth 光滑的；soft 柔软的；colorful 色彩鲜艳的；strong 强壮的 3. 性格行为类 friendly 友好的；lazy 懒惰的；active 活泼的；smart 聪明的；funny 有趣的；play 玩耍；run 跑；jump 跳；sing 鸣叫；eat 吃；sleep 睡觉；climb 爬；swim 游泳；bite 咬；wag (tail) 摇（尾巴） 二、高频短语 1. a cute little rabbit 一只可爱的小兔子 2. fluffy fur 毛茸茸的毛 3. wag its tail 摇它的尾巴 4. play with me 跟我一起玩 5. run around the garden 在花园里跑来跑去 6. eat carrots 吃胡萝卜 7. sleep all day 整天睡觉 8. a good friend of mine 我的一个好朋友 9. bring me happiness 给我带来快乐 10. take good care of 好好照顾 11. make my life interesting 让我的生活变得有趣 12. fly in the sky 在空中飞 13. swim in the water 在水里游 14. be loyal to sb. 对某人忠诚 15. a lovely pet 一只可爱的宠物 三、高频句型 1. 开篇引入句型 I have a lovely pet. It is a/an ______. My favorite animal friend is a ______ named ______. Last year, my parents gave me a ______ as a birthday gift, and it has become my closest friend since then. 2. 外形描写句型 It has ______ (fluffy fur/big round eyes/a short tail) and looks very cute. Its fur is ______ (white and soft/colorful/shiny), which makes it stand out among other animals. With its ______ (small body/long ears), it always attracts people's attention. 3. 性格行为句型 It is very ______ (friendly/lazy/active) and likes to ______ (play with me/sleep on the sofa). Every morning, it will ______ (wag its tail and greet me/sing loudly to wake me up). When I feel sad, it often ______ (lies beside me/licks my hand) to cheer me up. 4. 日常互动句型 I usually ______ (feed it carrots/take it for a walk) after school. We often play games together in the garden, and that is the happiest time of my day. Taking good care of it has taught me how to be responsible. 5. 结尾升华句型 This lovely ______ is not only my pet, but also my best friend. It brings so much happiness to my life, and I will love it forever. I think animals are our friends, and we should always be kind to them. 真题示例： （2024·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题）最近，我国第一只预备役柯基警犬福仔在网络上爆火出圈，虽然他腿短，但却因为其独特的优势使他在众多警犬中脱颖而出。请根据下列信息，以“福仔”的口吻向大家介绍一下自己。 要求： 1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥； 2.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3.至少含有两个复合句。 Fu Zai’s Personal File (个人档案) Age: 8 months old Color: brown and white Weight: about 7 kilos Experiences: ·be a pet dog; in the past ·start training; 2 months old Abilities: ·nose; smell ... ·short legs; not run fast; search small spaces The happiest thing: be carried on the trainer’s back Hope: official (正式的)… Hi, I’m Fu Zai, China’s first reserve police dog (预备役警犬). ___________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Hi, I’m Fu Zai, China’s first reserve police dog. Let me introduce myself to you. I’m eight months old. I’m brown and white. I weigh about seven kilos. I was a pet dog in the past. And I started training when I was 2 months old. I can use my nose to smell dangerous things. I have short legs so I can’t run fast. But I can search small spaces because of my short legs. I am often carried on the trainer’s back when we go outside to work. That is my happiest thing. I hope I can be an official police dog soon. I’m happy to serve the people. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，以“福仔”的口吻介绍自己的基本信息、经历、能力； 第二步，介绍最开心的事以及期望。 [亮点词汇] ①dangerous things危险物品 ②because of由于 [高分句型] ①And I started training when I was 2 months old.（时间状语从句） ②I hope I can be an official police dog soon.（宾语从句） 题型通关 练 1．（24-25七年级下·广西防城港·期中）假如你是广州动物园的志愿讲解员, 请根据以下信息提示, 写一篇英文讲解词来介绍（introduce）明星动物“斑斑”。 名字: 斑斑 年龄: 8岁 物种: 长颈鹿 家乡: 非洲肯尼亚（Kenya, Africa） 喜欢的活动: 奔跑、用长脖子吃树叶 技能（skill）: 会用舌头（tongue）摘取高处树叶 喜欢的食物: 树叶、胡萝卜、苹果 观赏注意事项: 禁止喂食; 请保持安静 要求: 1. 讲解词须包含所有信息提示, 可适当发挥; 2. 语言表达要准确, 语句通顺, 意思连贯; 3. 词数不少于60, 讲解词的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。 Welcome to Guangzhou Zoo._______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Welcome to Guangzhou Zoo. Today, I’d like to introduce our star animal, Banban, to you. Banban is an 8-year-old giraffe. He comes from Kenya, Africa. He has a very long neck, which is his most distinctive feature. Banban likes running and using his long neck to eat leaves. He’s really good at using his tongue to pick leaves from high places. His favorite foods are leaves, carrots and apples. When you come to visit Banban, please note that feeding is not allowed. We should keep the environment quiet so that Banban can live comfortably. Let’s respect and protect these lovely animals. I hope you’ll have a great time watching Banban! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求介绍长颈鹿的名字，年龄，家乡，喜欢的活动，食物和技能； 第二步，根据提示叙述观赏注意事项。 [亮点词汇] ①come from来自 ②be good at擅长 ③have a great time玩得开心 [高分句型] ①He has a very long neck, which is his most distinctive feature.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②We should keep the environment quiet so that Banban can live comfortably.（so that引导的目的状语从句） 2．（24-25七年级下·河北唐山·期中）英语课上你们要围绕“My Favourite Animal”话题进行讨论和分享，请你依照下面的思维导图写一篇短文，介绍一个你最喜欢的动物。 注意： (1)短文须包括导图中所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； (3)词数60个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 My Favourite Animal My favourite animal is ____________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Favourite Animal My favourite animal is my dog, Lele. It is part of my family. He is quite a big dog, but he is not scary at all! He has beautiful fur. He is really friendly and loves to play with everyone. He is also very clever. You know, my parents are busy so he often helps us do some shopping. I love her very much. We are close friends. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先根据提示内容描述最喜欢的动物是狗 Lele，介绍它是家庭的一员、体型、毛发、性格。 第二步，再写它帮助购物和与 “我” 的亲密关系等。 [亮点词汇] ①part of ……的一部分 ②quite a 相当一个 ③be friendly 友好的 ④help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事 [高分句型] ①He is quite a big dog, but he is not scary at all!（but 连接两个句子，表示转折关系） ②my parents are busy so he often helps us do some shopping.（so 连接两个句子，表示因果关系） 3．（24-25七年级下·四川绵阳·期中）假设你有一只宠物小狗，它非常讨人喜欢。你的朋友们很想了解它的一些情况。请根据下面提供的信息以“My little dog”为题，用英语描述你的宠物，可适当拓展。50词左右。 1. 外部特征：黑白相间 (black and white)，有两只大耳朵。 2. 这只小狗很可爱，能看家，因为它的嗅觉 (sense of smell) 很灵敏。 3. 它喜欢的食物是肉。爱好是玩球。 4. 它对人很友好，但有些害羞 (shy)。 5. 狗是人类的好朋友，我们应该 (should) 爱护 (take care of) 它们。 My little dog _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My little dog My favorite animal is the dog. I have a little dog. It has two big ears and a black and white body. The dog is very cute. It can look after the house. This is because it has a very good sense of smell. My little dog likes eating meat very much. It enjoys playing with a ball. It’s very friendly to people, but it’s kind of shy. Dogs are people’s real friends, so we should take care of them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头引入话题，表达自己最喜欢的动物是狗，并引出自己的小狗； 第二步，详细描述小狗的外貌特征、性格特点和行为习惯； 第三步，总结升华，阐述狗与人类的关系，呼吁人们照顾它们。 [亮点词汇] ①favorite最喜欢的 ②look after照顾 ③a sense of smell嗅觉 ④kind of有点，有几分 ⑤take care of照顾 [高分句型] ① This is because it has a very good sense of smell. (运用了because引导的表语从句) ② Dogs are people’s real friends, so we should take care of them. (运用了so连接的并列句) 4．（24-25七年级下·安徽蚌埠·期中）动物是人类的好朋友，能给我们带来很多欢乐，现在越来越多的人饲养宠物。假如你有一只宠物免，请根据下面提示写一篇英语作文。 Your pet a rabbit What does it look like? white and black, long ears, lovely What does it eat? grass and vegetables What does it do? run after me, make me relax What’s special about it? always by my side 要求： (1)包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥。 (2)不少于70 词。 My Pet Rabbit ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                               My Pet Rabbit I have a lovely pet rabbit, and it has become an important part of my life. My rabbit is white and black. Its long ears stand up straight, and its small red eyes shine brightly, making it look extremely cute. When it hops around, its fluffy tail wiggles, which always makes me laugh. It mainly eats grass and fresh vegetables. Every day after school, I’m responsible for feeding it. Watching it munch on the food happily is really interesting. My rabbit loves running after me when I get home. It follows me everywhere, as if it’s my little bodyguard. When I feel tired or stressed, it stays by my side quietly, which helps me relax. What makes it special is that it’s always there for me, whether I’m happy or sad.      I love my pet rabbit very much. It’s not just a pet but also my best friend. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：以一般现在时为主，描述兔子的外貌、饮食习惯、日常行为等客观事实； ③提示：文章严格按照题目要求，从兔子的外貌、饮食、日常行为以及特别之处四个方面展开，包含所有要点提示，适当发挥，内容完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，文章开头点明主题，说明自己有一只宠物兔子且它对自己很重要； 第二步，分别从四个要点进行介绍。先描述兔子的外貌；接着说明它的饮食主要是草和蔬菜，以及自己喂食的日常；然后讲述兔子喜欢跟着自己，能给自己带来放松；最后强调兔子总是陪伴自己这一特别之处； 第三步，结尾表达对宠物兔子的喜爱，升华主题，指出它不仅是宠物更是最好的朋友。 [亮点词汇] ①fluffy毛茸茸的 ②munch用力咀嚼 ③bodyguard保镖 ④responsible负责的 [高分句型] ①When I feel tired or stressed, it stays by my side quietly, which helps me relax.（when引导时间状语从句） ③What makes it special is that it’s always there for me, whether I’m happy or sad.（what引导主语从句，that引导表语从句，whether... or...引导让步状语从句） 5．（24-25七年级下·重庆江津·期中）根据要求完成短文写作，并将作文内容写在下面的答题位置上。 假设你是成都大熊猫研究基地的管理员林伟，请你给参观的游客介绍一下大熊猫以及参观的注意事项。 提示： 1. 大熊猫，生活在四川，喜欢吃竹子(bamboo)； 2. 皮毛(fur) 黑白相间，非常可爱； 3. 不能给熊猫喂食，这对它们的健康没有好处； 4. 参观时不能乱扔垃圾，要保持熊猫栖息地 (habitat) 的干净整洁。 5. 作为管理员，你希望大家能遵守规则，一起保护大熊猫。 要求： 1.词数70左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 2.所写内容必须包括要点中所提供的信息，并可作适当的发挥。 3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。 Hello, everyone! I’m the panda keeper (饲养员) , Lin Wei. Let me tell you something about pandas and some rules for visiting the Chengdu Research Base (研究基地). ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Hello, everyone! I’m the panda keeper, Lin Wei. Let me tell you something about pandas and some rules for visiting the Chengdu Research Base.       Pandas, which live in Sichuan, love eating bamboo. Their fur is black and white, making them extremely cute. When visiting, there are important rules. Don’t feed the pandas, as it’s harmful to their health. Also, don’t litter. We must keep their habitat clean, for a good environment helps pandas live well.     As a keeper, I hope you’ll follow these rules and join hands to protect pandas, whose existence makes our world more wonderful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本题是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文用一般现在时； ③提示：给参观的游客介绍一下大熊猫以及参观的注意事项，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明身份，以及要为大家介绍的事项，引出下文； 第二步，介绍大熊猫以及参观时的注意事项，注意用词准确，行文流畅； 第三步，提出号召，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①don’t do sth. 不要做某事 ②be harmful to 对……有害 ③join hands to do sth. 携手做某事 [高分句型] ①Pandas, which live in Sichuan, love eating bamboo.（定语从句） ②As a keeper, I hope you’ll follow these rules and join hands to protect pandas, whose existence makes our world more wonderful.（宾语从句和定语从句） 6．（24-25七年级下·陕西汉中·期中）假设你是李梅，你的英国朋友Jennie发邮件邀请你保护濒危野生动物。请阅读以下邮件并回复。 To: LiMei@mail.com Subject: Let’s protect wild animals in danger! Dear Li Mei, How is everything going? I’m working on a project called “Let’s protect wild animals in danger!” these days. Are you interested in protecting wild animals? I know your favourite wild animal is the panda. Why do you like it? Is it in danger? Do you know why it is in danger and what we can do to help it? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Jennie 参考词汇：lovely，friendly，lose their home，natural parks 要求：1. 邮件必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数） Dear Jennie, I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am interested in protecting wild animals. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Mei 【答案】 Dear Jennie, I’m glad to receive your e-mail and I want to tell you I am interested in protecting wild animals. My favourite wild animal is pandas because they are quite lovely. They are also friendly to people. Their eyes are interesting. The black circles around their eyes make them look like they are wearing glasses. As far as I know, pandas are in danger. For one thing, they lost their home because people use more land to plant crops. For another, they don’t have enough food to eat. We must think of ways to help them. I think we should build more natural parks and plant more bamboo for them. Yours, Li Mei 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、介绍自己喜欢大熊猫的原因，濒危的原因； 第三步、介绍帮助大熊猫的方法并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be interested in…对……感兴趣 ②as far as I know据我所知 ③For one thing…For another一方面……另一方面 [高分句型] ①My favourite wild animal is pandas because they are quite lovely.(because引导原因状语从句) 7．（24-25七年级下·甘肃兰州·期中）同学们，动物是人类的好朋友，很多人都希望拥有自己的宠物。请以“I want to keep a ________ as my pet”为题写一篇作文。阐述你养这种动物作为你的宠物的原因以及你会如何对待它。开头已经给出，请在答题卡上完整作答。 写作要求：1. 内容要围绕导图展开陈述，也可以适度发挥。 2. 字数控制在80字左右。 3. 不得出现真实姓名和班级。 I want to keep a … as my pet As we all know, animals are our friends. Among them, my favorite animal is_________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 I want to keep a cat as my pet As we all know, animals are our friends. Among them, my favorite animal is the cat. I’d like to keep a cat, because it makes me feel happy. It can help me relax and teach me responsibility. If I have a cat, I will feed it well and walk it every day. I won’t make it a stray. I hope to play with it daily. Of course, I will keep it clean and make it healthy. My parents also love small animals. I am sure the cat will be happy with us in my family. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”； ③提示：根据导图展开陈述，注意要点齐全，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目，表达想要养一只宠物； 第二步，介绍想要养的宠物，包括喜欢的原因及打算如何照顾它； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to do sth.想做某事 ②of course当然 [高分句型] ①I’d like to keep a cat, because it makes me feel happy. (because引导原因状语从句) ②If I have a cat, I will feed her well every day. (if引导条件状语从句) ③I am sure the cat will be happy with us in my family.（宾语从句） 8．（24-25七年级下·四川眉山·期中）假如你是Alice，上周六你去动物园观看了你最喜欢的熊猫花花，请你根据以下导图信息，写一篇英文短文介绍一下花花和在动物园必须遵守的规则并发出倡议。字数80个单词 最爱的动物 熊猫 姓名 花花 Be from 四川 looks 有黑白的毛发，圆圆的大脸和黑色的小耳朵 Abilities 擅长爬树和游泳，是很棒的游泳员，听觉很灵敏 Zoo’s rules 1.禁止投喂 2.保持安静 3.保持清洁 4. …… Call (倡议) ⋯⋯ (至少两点) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     My name is Alice. Last Saturday, I visited the zoo and saw my favourite animal Hua Hua. She is a lovely panda from Sichuan. She has black and white fur, a round face and small black ears. Hua Hua is good at climbing trees and swimming. She is also an excellent swimmer with sharp hearing.         In zoos, we must follow rules: 1. Don’t feed animals. 2. Keep quiet. 3. Keep the zoo clean. 4. Don’t touch animals.         Let’s protect animals by following rules and respecting their homes! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍身份与事件； 第二步，介绍最喜欢的动物花花，包括出处、外貌和能力等； 第三步，介绍动物园规则并提出倡议。 [亮点词汇] ①black and white黑白相间的 ②be good at擅长 ③follow rules遵守规则 [高分句型] Let’s protect animals by following rules and respecting their homes! (祈使句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 6 / 11 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $