2025新高考英语读后续写通关讲练 6. 语言描写 导学案-2026届高考英语一轮复习专项

该高中英语导学案聚焦新高考读后续写语言描写核心考点，以6种句式（含基础结构、情绪表达、非谓语及独立主格等）为框架，结合"说"的多样化替换词汇，构建从简单到复杂、从单一到综合的语言知识网络。通过例句示范与翻译练习，引导学生自主分析句式功能，逐步掌握生动表达技巧，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于"学练评"一体化的自主备考设计，每种句式配套翻译练习及参考答案，助力学生即时自测诊断。通过仿写任务培养语言能力（精准表达）和思维品质（灵活运用），学生可对比答案反思不足，教师能依据练习反馈实施分层指导，有效提升读后续写语言生动性，支持个性化复习与因材施教。

2025新高考英语读后续写通关 第六讲 语言描写 语言描写在读后续写中非常重要，因为它可以帮助读者更好地理解情节和人物。通过与情绪描写、动作描写相结合，可以使语言更加生动，画面感更强，读者可以更加清晰地想象出人物形象，从而更加深入地理解故事情节和人物性格。此外，语言描写还可以增强读者的情感体验，让他们更加投入到故事中，产生情感共鸣。 句式1. “...”sb.+说话的动作+adv. 某人...说道 1. “I will never do that again,” I answered firmly. “我再也不那么做了，”我坚定地回答道。 2. Mary stood up, her palms sweating but voice steady, asking softly, “I’ve learned a lot these days. May I try?” 玛丽站了起来，手心冒汗，但声音很平稳，她轻声问道：“这些天我学到了 很多东西。我可以试试吗?” 翻译练习 1. “我一定会赢得这场比赛的。” 他自信地说道。 2. “请再给我一次机会吧。” 那个小男孩低声恳求道。 3. “快点！暴风雨马上就要来了！” 爷爷急切地大喊道。 句式2. “...”sb.+说话的动作+in a/an...voice/tone. 某人以...的声音/语气说道 1. “I hate them,” Linda screamed angrily in a trembling voice, clenching her fist. “我恨他们，”琳达紧握拳头用颤抖的声音愤怒地尖叫。 2. After school. I told my mum my plan."Tonight, we're going to create a new recipe together,"I said in a determined voice/tone.放学后，我把我的计划告诉了妈妈。“今晚，我们要一起创造 一个新的食谱。”我坚定地说。 翻译练习 1. “我什么都没看见。” 她用平静的语气小声说道。 2. “这道题的解法其实很简单。” 老师用温和的声音解释道。 3. “我再也不想和你说话了。” 女孩用冰冷的声音吼道。 句式3. “...”sb.+说话的动作+in/with+情绪名词. 某人以...的心情说到 1. “This is truly remarkable!”Judy exclaimed with excitement.“这真是太了不起了!”Judy 兴奋 地笑了。 2. “What brings you up here, Bill?”asked my friend John in surprise.“Bill,什么风把你吹来了?”我的朋友John惊讶地问。 翻译练习 1. “我终于拿到冠军了！” 他满怀喜悦地欢呼道。 2. “我的钱包不见了！” 那位女士带着焦虑大喊道。 3. “这次考试又失利了。” 他带着失望喃喃自语道。 句式4. “...”sb.+说话的动作, doing sth st/with符合结构或独立主格结构 1. “Help, help!”I shouted, swimming towards the boat in desperation.“救命，救命!”我绝望地向船游去，喊道。 2. “Thank you for reminding me it didn't have to be perfect, ” Ethan murmured, (with)his lips curling into a small, relieved smile.“谢谢你提醒我，它不一定要完美。”伊桑低声说道，他的嘴唇微微上扬，露出了一丝宽慰的微笑。 翻译练习 1. “跟我来，我知道一条近路。” 他说着，手里拿着地图在前面带路。 2. “这是我亲手做的礼物。” 她微笑着说，眼睛里闪烁着期待的光芒。 3. “我们终于到家了！” 爸爸松了口气说道，肩上的背包重重地落在地上。 句式5. “...”sb.+说话的动作，believing that.../wanting.../hoping/determined... 某人说到，相信/想/希望/决心... 1.“You can do it!”he shouted, believing that his encouragement would boost her confidence.“你能行!”他大喊道，相信他的鼓励会增强她的信心。 2. “Let's take a short break.” Tom suggested, wanting everyone to recharge their energies.“我们短暂休息一下吧。”汤姆建议道。想让大家恢复一下精力。 3. “The answer must be here somewhere.” he mumbled, hoping to find it by searching through the textbook.“答案一定在这儿某个地方。”他嘟囔着，希望能通过查阅课本找到答案。 4. “We need to stick together.”the leader declared, determined to see their plan through.“我们需要团结在一起。”这位领导宣布，决心完成他们的计划。 翻译练习 1. “坚持住，救援马上就到。” 他大喊道，坚信自己的呼喊能给被困的人带去希望。 2. “我们一起去参加志愿者活动吧。” 她提议道，希望能为社区做一些贡献。 3. “我一定要攻克这个难题。” 他盯着题目说道，决心不弄明白绝不罢休。 句式6. 内心独白句式：“...”sb. thought to oneself/said to oneself/ said in an inner voice. “...”某人对自己说 1. “Don’t be afraid. Tom must be searching for me. And the helicopter will come back tomorrow,” she thought to herself. “不要害怕。汤姆一定是在找我了。直升机明天就会回来，”她心里想。 2. I said firmly in an inner voice, “No matter how hard it is, I will keep going.”我在心里坚定地默念：“无论多难，我都会坚持下去。” 翻译练习 1. “没关系，失败是成功之母。” 他心里暗自安慰自己。 2. “千万不能紧张，正常发挥就好。” 她站在舞台前默念道。 3. “爸爸妈妈肯定已经做好饭等我了。” 他走在回家的路上，在心里轻声说道。 各种替换“说 say”的表达 tell 告诉 ask 问 answer 回答 add 补充 shout /yell喊 reply 回答 state 陈述 declare 宣称 claim 声称 announce 宣布 argue 争论 repeat 重复 whisper 轻声说 murmur 低语 explain 解释 interrupt 打断 exclaim 呼喊 scream 尖叫 complain 抱怨 order命令 beg 请求 demand 强烈要求 suggest 建议 recommend 推荐 apologize 道歉 insist 坚持 request 请求 sigh 叹息 mock 嘲讽 mumble 嘟哝 stammer 结巴地说 comfort 安慰 blurt out 脱口而出 参考答案 句式 1 1. “I will definitely win this competition.” he said confidently. 2. “Please give me one more chance.” the little boy begged softly. 3. “Hurry up! The storm is coming soon!” Grandpa shouted eagerly. 句式 2 1. “I didn’t see anything.” she whispered in a calm tone. 2. “Actually, the solution to this problem is very simple.” the teacher explained in a gentle voice. 3. “I never want to talk to you again.” the girl shouted in a cold voice. 句式 3 1. “I finally won the championship!” he cheered with joy. 2. “My wallet is gone!” the lady shouted in anxiety. 3. “I failed the exam again.” he muttered with disappointment. 句式 4 1. “Follow me. I know a shortcut.” he said, holding a map in his hand and leading the way ahead. 2. “This is a gift I made by myself.” she said with a smile, with expectation shining in her eyes. 3. “We’re finally home!” Dad said in relief, the backpack on his shoulders falling heavily to the ground. 句式 5 1. “Hold on! Help is coming soon.” he shouted, believing that his cries would bring hope to the trapped people. 2. “Let’s take part in the volunteer activity together.” she suggested, hoping to make some contributions to the community. 3. “I must work out this difficult problem.” he stared at the question and said, determined not to give up until he figured it out. 句式 6 1. “It doesn’t matter. Failure is the mother of success.” he thought to himself. 2. “Don’t be nervous. Just do your normal performance.” she said to herself before stepping onto the stage. 3. “Mom and Dad must have cooked dinner and are waiting for me.” he said in an inner voice while walking home. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $