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主题14假期与旅行
®主题探究
a.放松自己的方式:野餐、看电影、与家人朋友
玩游戏或闲聊、遛宠物等
①假期活动b.提升自己的方式:阅读、学习做饭、运动等
、c.有意义的事情:参与志愿活动、做公益等
假期
②对假期的看法、收获及感悟
假期与旅行
①计划/策划/规划一次旅行(内容包括:目的地、时长、预算、
交通、住宿、餐食、行李物品等)
②讲述一次旅行经历
旅行
③对旅行的看法、收获及感悟
⊙主题短语积累
角度1假期
l3.join a volunteer program参加一
4.leave for前往
l.prepare for为…做准备
个志愿者项目
5.be attracted by被…吸引
2.make a plan制定一个计划
14.donate to charity向慈善机构6.tourist attraction旅游景,点
3.around the corner即将来临
捐款
7.natural scenery自然景观
4.pay a visit to拜访;参观
l5.a great time to relax一段放松身
8.historical buildings历史建筑
5.plan to do sth.计划做某事
心的美好时光
9.be known/famous for因…而
6.spare some time to do sth.留出时
16.more than just having fun不仅著名
间做某事
仅是玩乐
10.taste the local food品尝当地
7.have a picnic in the park在公园
17.get closer to my family和家人变
食物
里野餐
得更亲密
11.meet friendly locals遇到友好的
8.play board games with family
18.learn new things about myself
当地人
家人玩桌游
了解自己
12.lose oneself in沉醉其中
9.listen to my favorite music听我最
19.balance between work and rest
13.leave sweet memories留下甜蜜
爱的音乐
平衡工作与休息
的回忆
l0.learn to cook a new dish学做一
角度2旅行
14.feel at home感到舒适自在的
道新菜
1.choose a destination选择一个目
l5.have a wonderful time度过了
l1.do some exercise regularly定期
的地
段美好时光
做运动
2.book tickets and a hotel预订车票
16.learn about new cultures了解新
12.start a new hobby开始一项新
和酒店
的文化
爱好
3.set off动身;启程
主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
巴角度1
假期
1.I'm glad to hear from you and I would like to introduce my summer
1)没有什么比和朋友一起徒步
holiday plans.
更能让我享受运动了。[用句
2.In order to have a colorful and meaningful experience,I have made a
Nothing helps sb....more than
detailed plan for the coming journey.(高级词汇detailed adj.详细的)
.仿写]
3.Nothing helps me relax more than losing myself in a wonderful movie.
(①Nothing helps sb..more than...没有什么比…更能帮助某人;
②lose myself in沉浸于)
2)我们都期待着在度假期间能
4.I find that learning something new,like a simple recipe,makes me feel
享用一顿丰盛的家庭聚餐。
proud.
[用结构look forward to doing sth.
5.I will go to the community to help cheer up the old people.
仿写]
6.All in all,I'm looking forward to spending a pleasant vacation.(look
forward to doing sth.期待做某事)
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安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
@角度2旅行
1.Now more and more people are interested in traveling,and considering3)旅行被认为是探索世界和体
it to be an opportunity to experience life and increase knowledge.(con-
验不同文化的好方法。[用结
sider sth.tobe..认为某事/物…)
构consider sth.tobe仿写]
2.The scenery along the way was so breathtaking that I couldn't take my
eyes off it..(so..that..引导结果状语从句)
3.I captured many beautiful moments with my camera,hoping to keep the
memories alive forever..(①高级词汇capture v.捕捉,拍摄;②hoping.
4)从山顶看到的风景太棒了,以
为现在分词短语作伴随状语,补充说明了拍摄的目的)
至于我们都忘了看时间。[用
4.Traveling can not only help us see the best sights but also open our eyes
so..that.引导结果状语从句仿
to the outside world.(用not only.but also..并列连接旅行的两个作用)
写]
5.However,the most important part of a holiday is to rest your mind
and body.Then you can go back to your regular life,and be ready to
see what comes next.
⊙真题剖析
[2025合肥市包河区二模]假定你是李华,上周你们学校就同学们的课
【审题】
余休闲方式做了一项调查。请结合以下调查结果和要点,以“All work and no。
主题:学校课余休闲方式调
play makes Jack a dull boy'”为题,写一篇英语短文,给校英文报投稿。
查及休闲意义探讨
Ways to Have Fun
文体:
文
35%
30%
人称:主要为第
25%
人称
20%
15%
时态:用
时和
10%
时
5%
0%
要点:
reading doing taking playing others
books
sports trips computer
文章需包含左侧三个要点,
games
其中要点3中可写的休闲方
要点:
式见“写作框架”
1.活动目的;
2.调查结果;
写作前,应仔细读图,明确
3.你的休闲方式和建议。
横纵坐标所代表的内容,
备注:dull(not interesting)
准确地提取五种休闲活动:
要求:
所占比例,并校照人数由
1.80~100词;
多到少的顺序进行描述
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
增强文章逻辑性。
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy
【写作框架】
开头:点明活动
的目的引出主题
Word bank:the purpose was to,stay healthy outside of class
All work and no
中间:具体分析
先写调查结果:According to the survey,reading books(30%)
play makes Jack
调查结果并介绍
自己的休闲方式:read books,do sports,,go to a concert,spend time
a dull boy
自己的休闲方式
with family,learn to cook,join a club,have a picnic,help the elderly,
clean up a park,donate old books and clothes
结尾:提出个人
结尾句示例:I suggest that everyone find time to relax and do
something they love.
建议
Word bank:relax in proper ways,balance study and play
安徽英语(WY)
主题写作进阶
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
DLast week,our school did a survey to learn about students'
①用短语“carry out'”升格句子:
after-school activities.The purpose was to understand how students
relax and stay healthy outside of class.(要,点1:活动目的)
According to the survey,30%of the students spend their free
time reading,while another 30%enjoy doing sports.Meanwhile,
②用短语“be beneficial for”升格句子:
traveling is chosen by 20%of the students,and 10%play video
games.The remaining 10%take part in other activities.Relaxing
activities are important because they help us stay healthy and happy.
As for me,I enjoy reading books,which enriches my knowledge,
and playing basketball,which keeps me fit.(要,点2:调查结果;要
③用s0hat引导的目的状语从句升格
点3:你的休闲方式)
句子:
I suggest that everyone find time to relax and do something they
love.After all,without fun and rest,life can become dull and bor-
ing.③Let's balance study and play to stay sharp and happy!(要,点
3:你的个人建议)
马实战演练
[2025金华义鸟市二模]假设你是李华,你的加拿大好友Robert计划暑
Ilove nature.Iam
假来中国体验city-walk(城市漫步)。请根据以下信息,写一封邮件,向他推
、。0○
also interested in
Chinese culture.
荐一处适合city-walk的地点。
Robert
人入
old street
注意:
.ancient
local food
1.邮件需包含所选地点的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
traditional arts,like paper cutting
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
city park
3.词数80左右,邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计人总词数。
peaceful
beautiful views
Dear Robert,
fun activities,like playing Tai Chi
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this summer holiday.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶attracted me greatly,because it carried deep meanings and
the artist's feelings.
I hope more people around the world can get to know
paper-cutting and appreciate its beauty.Also,I expect that
this art can be passed down and developed in new forms in
the modern world.
主题12网络安全与科技
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)As is known to all,many students are interested in going
online.
2)If you often visit unsafe websites,your personal informa-
tion will be at risk/in danger.
3)It's unbelievable that Al's learning ability is stronger than
we imagined.
4)The progress of science and technology makes great contri-
butions to making our life more convenient.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明:一:三一殷现在:一般将来
【润色与升格】
1This pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation
function,which allows students to look up words and
translate sentences instantly.
2it will have a voice recording feature so that students can
record lectures and listen to them later.
3I believe this pen will not only greatly enhance students'
learning experiences but also make studying more enjoy-
able and effective.
实战演练
【高分范文一】
Should students use AI in their studies?
Does Al help students learn,or does it bring new chal-
lenges?Different people hold different opinions.In my opin-
ion,students should use Al in their studies.It is a useful
helper for students.
First of all,AI can be a good teacher when we are at
home.It offers help like a real teacher,which helps to solve
problems in time.Besides,AI helps to open our minds.
主
When we meet a hard math problem,Al can provide us with
more than one method to solve it.We can leam more ways of
题
solving problems with the help of AI.What's more,AI helps
to find information more quickly.
写
In a word,I think students should use Al in their stud-
作
ies.It not only helps them open their minds but also makes
learning more efficient.
进
【高分范文二】
阶
Should students use AI in their studies?
Does AI help students learn,or does it bring new chal-
lenges?Different people hold different opinions.From my
point of view,students shouldn't use AI in their studies.It is
not good for students'growth.
First,Al will offer direct answers to students.It will
stop students from thinking by themselves.Gradually,they
will be poor at thinking.In addition,if they always turn to
AI for help,they may lose the ability to solve problems on
their own.It can do much harm to students'further develop-
ment.Last but not least,using AI means that they will spend
much time in front of screens.It is bad for their eyes
In conclusion,I believe that it is wiser for students to
avoid using AI in their studies.They should think independ-
ently and solve problems with their own efforts.
主题13自然生态与环境保护
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I'm sure it'll be relaxing to walk in the fresh air.
2)The countless stars in the night sky took our breath away.
3)They are trying their best to tell people the importance of
saving water
4)We must reduce plastic waste so that fewer animals will be
harmed.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用:一;一般过去:一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIt is my great pleasure to win a prize in the photography
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安徽英语(啊
competition.
2This photo was taken in Shenzhen Bay Park on a sunny
morning.
3There were clean and soft clouds in the sky that/which
were like white sheep.
4In my opinion,this photography competition tells us that
the beauty of nature is close to us in our daily lives.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Experience in Green Week
Last week,I took part in the Green Week activities
organized by our school.The goal was to teach us how to
protect the environment and sort waste correctly.
First,we listened to a talk about recycling.The speaker
told us how plastic waste hurts animals in the sea.Then,we
practiced sorting trash into three bins:paper,food waste,
and harmful things.We worked in teams to finish quickly.
After that,there was a fun quiz about saving the Earth.I
won a reusable bottle as a prize!
This Green Week made me realize everyone can help.I
will use less plastic,sort waste every day,and tell my
friends to do the same.
Let's make our world cleaner together!
主题14假期与旅行
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)Nothing helps me enjoy exercising more than going hiking
with my friends.
2)We all look forward to having a big family dinner on
vacation.
3)Traveling is considered to be a good way to explore the
world and experience different cultures.
4)The view from the top of the mountain was so wonderful
that we all forgot to check the time.
真题剖析
【审题
议论;二
一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DLast week,our school carried out a survey to learn about
students'after-school activities.
Relaxing activities are important because they are beneficial
for our health and happiness.
3Let's balance study and play so that we can stay sharp and
happy!
实战演练
【高分范文一:推荐old street】
Dear Robert
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China
this summer holiday.
I am sure you will fall in love with the old street here!
It's lined with ancient buildings that have a long history.It's
a good place to try different kinds of tasty local food like rice
cakes and dumplings.You can also enjoy traditional arts like
paper cutting here.People sell colorful hand-made things
too.Though the street isn't wide,it's quite busy.Walking
along the street makes you have a better understanding of
Chinese culture.Don't forget to take photos to record them!
I'm sure you'll have a great time there.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【高分范文二:推荐city park】
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China
this summer holiday.
If you're a fan of nature,the city park is a better
choice!It is so peaceful that you can even hear birds sing-
ing.The tower in the centre of the park is the best place to
enjoy the beautiful views.Every morning,people play Tai
Chi there,which is a good way to exercise.They might invite
you to join them.In the afternoon,you can drink tea or play
chess under the old tall trees.It's a perfect place where you
can relax and get a taste of local life.
Hope you like it!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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