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attracted me greatly,because it carried deep meanings and
the artist's feelings.
I hope more people around the world can get to know
paper-cutting and appreciate its beauty.Also,I expect that
this art can be passed down and developed in new forms in
the modern world.
主题12网络安全与科技
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)As is known to all,many students are interested in going
online.
2)If you often visit unsafe websites,your personal informa-
tion will be at risk/in danger.
3)It's unbelievable that Al's learning ability is stronger than
we imagined.
4)The progress of science and technology makes great contri-
butions to making our life more convenient.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明:一:三一殷现在:一般将来
【润色与升格】
1This pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation
function,which allows students to look up words and
translate sentences instantly.
2it will have a voice recording feature so that students can
record lectures and listen to them later.
3I believe this pen will not only greatly enhance students'
learning experiences but also make studying more enjoy-
able and effective.
实战演练
【高分范文一】
Should students use AI in their studies?
Does Al help students learn,or does it bring new chal-
lenges?Different people hold different opinions.In my opin-
ion,students should use Al in their studies.It is a useful
helper for students.
First of all,AI can be a good teacher when we are at
home.It offers help like a real teacher,which helps to solve
problems in time.Besides,AI helps to open our minds.
主
When we meet a hard math problem,Al can provide us with
more than one method to solve it.We can leam more ways of
题
solving problems with the help of AI.What's more,AI helps
to find information more quickly.
写
In a word,I think students should use Al in their stud-
作
ies.It not only helps them open their minds but also makes
learning more efficient.
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【高分范文二】
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Should students use AI in their studies?
Does AI help students learn,or does it bring new chal-
lenges?Different people hold different opinions.From my
point of view,students shouldn't use AI in their studies.It is
not good for students'growth.
First,Al will offer direct answers to students.It will
stop students from thinking by themselves.Gradually,they
will be poor at thinking.In addition,if they always turn to
AI for help,they may lose the ability to solve problems on
their own.It can do much harm to students'further develop-
ment.Last but not least,using AI means that they will spend
much time in front of screens.It is bad for their eyes
In conclusion,I believe that it is wiser for students to
avoid using AI in their studies.They should think independ-
ently and solve problems with their own efforts.
主题13自然生态与环境保护
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I'm sure it'll be relaxing to walk in the fresh air.
2)The countless stars in the night sky took our breath away.
3)They are trying their best to tell people the importance of
saving water
4)We must reduce plastic waste so that fewer animals will be
harmed.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用:一;一般过去:一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIt is my great pleasure to win a prize in the photography
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competition.
2This photo was taken in Shenzhen Bay Park on a sunny
morning.
3There were clean and soft clouds in the sky that/which
were like white sheep.
4In my opinion,this photography competition tells us that
the beauty of nature is close to us in our daily lives.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Experience in Green Week
Last week,I took part in the Green Week activities
organized by our school.The goal was to teach us how to
protect the environment and sort waste correctly.
First,we listened to a talk about recycling.The speaker
told us how plastic waste hurts animals in the sea.Then,we
practiced sorting trash into three bins:paper,food waste,
and harmful things.We worked in teams to finish quickly.
After that,there was a fun quiz about saving the Earth.I
won a reusable bottle as a prize!
This Green Week made me realize everyone can help.I
will use less plastic,sort waste every day,and tell my
friends to do the same.
Let's make our world cleaner together!
主题14假期与旅行
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)Nothing helps me enjoy exercising more than going hiking
with my friends.
2)We all look forward to having a big family dinner on
vacation.
3)Traveling is considered to be a good way to explore the
world and experience different cultures.
4)The view from the top of the mountain was so wonderful
that we all forgot to check the time.
真题剖析
【审题
议论;二
一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DLast week,our school carried out a survey to learn about
students'after-school activities.
Relaxing activities are important because they are beneficial
for our health and happiness.
3Let's balance study and play so that we can stay sharp and
happy!
实战演练
【高分范文一:推荐old street】
Dear Robert
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China
this summer holiday.
I am sure you will fall in love with the old street here!
It's lined with ancient buildings that have a long history.It's
a good place to try different kinds of tasty local food like rice
cakes and dumplings.You can also enjoy traditional arts like
paper cutting here.People sell colorful hand-made things
too.Though the street isn't wide,it's quite busy.Walking
along the street makes you have a better understanding of
Chinese culture.Don't forget to take photos to record them!
I'm sure you'll have a great time there.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【高分范文二:推荐city park】
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China
this summer holiday.
If you're a fan of nature,the city park is a better
choice!It is so peaceful that you can even hear birds sing-
ing.The tower in the centre of the park is the best place to
enjoy the beautiful views.Every morning,people play Tai
Chi there,which is a good way to exercise.They might invite
you to join them.In the afternoon,you can drink tea or play
chess under the old tall trees.It's a perfect place where you
can relax and get a taste of local life.
Hope you like it!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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参考答案主题12
网络安全与科技
⊙主题探究
①生活方面:网购、看剧
与朋友即时通讯等
①介绍平时用电脑做什么以
及对玩电脑游戏的看法
②学习方面:获取学习
资源、线上学习等
网络
②谈谈对你影响最大的发明
③出行方面:智能导航
的利
以及它是如何改变你的生
线上打车、购票等
活的
网络
网络安全
科技发明对人
安全
与科技
类生活的影响
③介绍移动支付并呼吁人们
个人信息泄露、沉迷网
理性消费
络影响学习等
网络
④人工智能(AI)对个人生
的弊
活的影响
⊙主题短语积累
角度1网络安全
17.be bad for/be harmful to/do harm
9.according to根据;按照;据…说
1.in public在公共场合
to对…有害
l0.draw public attention引起公众
2.get into trouble陷入困境
18.update software regularly定期更
的关注
3.protect ourselves保护我们自己
新软件
11.make a contribution/contributions
4.pay attention to注意
19.safe online shopping安全的网
0为…做贡献
5.personal information个人信息
络购物
12.be good at/do well in擅长
20.protect online privacy保护网络
l3.change our way of life改变我们
6.useless messages垃圾信息
7.keep calm保持冷静
隐私
的生活方式
14.improve living standards提高生
8.make friends online网上交友
角度2科技发明对人类生活的影响
1.change..for the better使…变
活水平
9.ask sb.for help寻求某人帮助
好;改善…
15.make life more convenient and
10.be careful当心
2.be amazed at对…感到惊讶
comfortable使生活更加方便、
l1.keep clear of..不和…接触;
3.make full use of take full advan-
舒适
远离…
tage of充分利用
16.one of the most important inven-
12.stay away from远离
tions最重要的发明之一
4.change people's lives改变人们的
l3.in danger处于危险中
17.work in dirty or dangerous places
生活
在肮脏或危险的地方工作
14.in time及时
5.mobile payment移动支付
l5.with one's help在某人的帮助下
18.search for information on the
6.deal with应对;处理
Internet在互联网上搜索信息
16.put oneself into a dangerous situ-
7.send a message发信息
19.impact of technological inven-
ation把自己置于危险的境地
8.in place of代替
tions科技发明的影响
⊙主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
②角度1网络安全
1.A much larger number/amount of information can be stored in more
1)众所周知,很多学生对上网感
varied forms on the Internet than in books.WY M9]
兴趣。[用短语as is known to all
2.As is known to all,the Internet is playing a more and more important
仿写]
role in our daily lives.(As is known to all众所周知)
3.And it will be bad for our eyes if we spend much time doing shopping
2)如果你常常访问不安全的网
on the Internet..(if引导条件状语从句,解释过度网购对我们的危害)
站,你的个人信息将会处于危
4.Many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their
险之中。[用f引导条件状语从
friends.
句仿写]
5.In my opinion,we should make good use of the Internet to study well and
get rid of the disadvantages of the Internet.
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@角度2科技发明对人类生活的影响
1.It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way.
3)令人难以置信的是,人工智能
「RJ八下U91
的学习能力比我们想象的要
2.Thanks to the space technology,our country has achieved a lot in exploring
强。[用句型It's unbelievable that
space.(Thanks to说明太空科技对国家的重大影响)
仿写]
3.If we allow robots to enter the classroom,we can communicate with
them,which will make the class more interesting.(which引导的非f限
制性定语从句,表明机器人对课堂的影响)
4.As technology continues to change,it's important to embrace lifelong
4)科学技术的进步为使我们的
learning to keep up with the pace.(①高级词汇embrace u.拥抱;
生活更方便做出了巨大的贡
②keep up with the pace跟上节奏)
献。[用结构make contributions
5.No doubt that great changes will take place in our life in 20 years.(No
to doing sth.仿写]
doubt that..肯定科技对生活的影响)
6.I hope I can make contributions to the development of science and tech-
nology in the future.
⊙真题剖析
[2024山东枣庄]为了培养学生的发明和创新精神,学校将举行中学生
【审题】
科技创新大赛。假定你是李华,你准备发明一件物品,参加本次大赛。请你
主题:中学生科技创新发明
以“I want to invent
”为题,写一篇英语短文,介绍你的发明物。
介绍
内容包括:
文体:
文
I want to invent
人称:主要为第
人
提示:a special bag/bike/car/pen//desk/robot/pair of shoes.
称和第
人称
时态:用
时和
Why
What
When or where
How
时
发明的原因
外观和用途
使用的场合
你的评价
首先要补全标题,补全的
内容可以参考下面提示给
注意:
文章包含以上四个要点
出的词,也可以选择自己
(1)请先补全标题;
要价绍的其他事物,注意
(2)短文须全面反映图文信息;
不要遗漏冠词。
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
(4)词数80~100。
I want to invent
【写作框架】
开头句示例:As a middle-school student,I notice that my class-
开头:引出发明
mates often face troubles in study...
此物品的原因
Word bank:not understand new words quickly,miss key parts
of lectures;make our study easier,do well in our lessons
外观和用途可写的点(以笔为例):built--in dictionary,translation
中间:从外观和
function,voice recording feature,smart note function,long battery
I want to invent
用途、
使用的场
life,easy to use buttons;look up words instantly,translate sentences
合等方面具体介
quickly,review key points anytime
绍所发明的物品
使用的场合可写的点(以笔为例):classrooms,.libraries,at home,
bookstores
结尾:表达自己
Word bank:enhance students'learning experiences,make
对所发明的物品
studying more enjoyable and effective,be very helpful for every
的评价
student
安徽英语(WY)
主题写作进阶
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
I want to invent a special pen
①用which引导的非限制性定语从句合
As a middle-school student,I notice that my classmates often
并两个句子:
face troubles in study,like not understanding new words quickly or
missing key parts of lectures.So,I want to invent a special pen that
can help students learn more efficiently.(要,点l:发明此物品的原因)
It looks like a normal pen.1This pen will have a built-in
②用s0that引导的目的状语从句连接
dictionary and translation function.It allows students to look up
两个句子:
words and translate sentences instantly.In addition,2it will have a
voice recording feature.Students can record lectures and listen to
them later.The pen will be lightweight and easy to carry,making it
perfect for use in classrooms,libraries,and at home.(要,点2:所发
③用连词词组“not only..but also.”升
明的物品的外观和用途;要点3:所发明的物品的适用场合)
格句子:
3I believe this pen will greatly enhance students'learning
experiences and make studying more enjoyable and effective.(要,点4:
对所发明的物品的评价)
多样表达:
l.立刻;马上instantly=quickly=immediately=at once=right away=in a moment
2.增强,提高,改善enhance=improve=strengthen
雪实战演练
在当今数字化时代,人工智能(A)已经渗透到我们生活的方方面面。为了使同学们学会客观、理性地对
待AI,你班同学以“Should students use AI in their studies?”为题展开了辩论。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一
篇文章,表达你自己的观点。
I think using AI does much harm to
I think students should use AI in
students'studies.It stops students
their studies.AI offers timely help
from thinking by themselves.And
and different problem-solving
they will also be poor at solving
methods.
problems on their own.
Should students use
Al in their studies?
Pros(正方)
Cons(反方)
写作要求:
1.结合上图提示,表明你的观点并说明理由,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(开头已给出,不计人总词数)。
Should students use AI in their studies?
Does AI help students learn,or does it bring new challenges?Different people hold different opinions.
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安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶