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主题11文化自信
。主题探究
中国传春节、元宵节、端午节、中秋节、重阳节等
统节日
①基本社交礼仪:见面礼仪、待人接物、餐桌礼仪
中国文
化礼仪
②其他:外出礼仪
化
①代表中国文化的礼物:手工艺风筝、剪纸、
春联、中国结、京剧、瓷器等
具有代表性
的中国文化
②中国人的取名文化、茶文化、“家”文化
讲好中国故事
《愚公移山》《西游记》《嫦娥奔月》等
「2022安徽]
⊙主题短语积累
角度1中国传统节日
2.be expected to do sth.被期望做2.lion/dragon dance舞狮/龙
l.traditional festivals传统节日
某事
3.Beijing/Peking Opera京剧
2.celebration activity庆祝活动
3.shake hands握手
4.Chinese knot中国结
3.the Spring Festival春节
4.table manners餐桌礼仪
5.be made of/from由…制成
4.New Year'sEve除夕
5.try to be on time尽力准时
6.be used for..被用作…
5.make dumplings包饺子
6.point at others with chopsticks
7.be known/famous for因…而著名
6.put up couplets贴春联
筷子指着别人
8.a symbol of Chinese culture中国
7.have a thorough cleaning大扫除
7.a good virtue passed down from
文化的一个象征
8.set off fireworks放烟花
generation to generation代代相
9.cultural value文化价值
9.visit relatives走亲戚
传的美德
10.the form of art艺术形式
10.red packet红包
8.respect the old and care for the
11.have a long history历史悠久
l1.give lucky/gift money给压岁钱
young尊老爱幼
12.cultural confidence文化自信
l2.Spring Festival Gala春节联欢
9.bring a small gift带一份小礼物
13.traditional artworks传统艺术品
晚会
10.show thanks表达感谢
角度4讲好中国故事
l3.the Dragon Boat Festival端午节
11.drop by顺便访问
12.laugh at嘲笑
1.Chinese classic works中国经典
14.make z0ngzi包粽子
l5.dragon boat races龙舟比赛
I3.rather than而不是
作品
16.in memory of..为了纪念…
14.make sb.feel at home使某人感
2.the most touching folk story最感
l7.the Mid-Autumn Festival中秋节
到宾至如归
人的民间故事
l8.admire/enjoy the moon赏月
15.be hard on sb.严厉对待/批评
3.the four Chinese literature classics
19.the Double Ninth Festival
某人
中国四大名著
阳节
16.wait in line排队
4.Journey to the West《西游记》
20.focus on good health and long
17.carry on/pass down traditions
5.take her father's place to fight in
life注重健康和长寿
承传统
the army替父从军
角度2中国文化礼仪
角度3具有代表性的中国文化
6.Yu Gong Moves a Mountain《愚公
1.be supposed to do sth.应该做某事1.paper cutting剪纸
移山》
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安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
。主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
@角度1中国传统节日
1.New Year is a wonderful time when family and friends come together 1)每年农历五月初五是中国的
to say goodbye to the old year and welcome the new one.[RJU2]
传统节日一端午节。[用短
2.The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals
语fall on仿写]
in China and it usually falls on the first month of the Chinese lunar calen-
dar.(短语fall on来描述节日的具体时间)
3.The Spring Festival not only means the beginning of the new year,but
also carries people's best wishes.
2)月饼承载着人们对自己所爱
4.The Dragon Boat Festival is an important traditional Chinese festival
和思念的家人的祝福。[用短
which dates back more than two thousand years.(①which引导定语
语carry one's wishes仿写]
从句描述节日的历史;②高级短语date back追溯)
5.Most Chinese keep the tradition of admiring the full moon and sharing
mooncakes with family members.
②角度2中国文化礼仪
l.You are supposed to take off your gloves before shaking hands.[RJ九3)当说到餐桌礼仪,我们应该让
全U10]
老人先开始吃东西。[用短语
2.No matter how far away they live,young people show their love and
be supposed to仿写]
respect for their parents by coming home with gifts.(no matter+疑问词
引导让步状语从句,表达年轻人对家人的重视)
3.When you eat in a Chinese family,it is important not to stick chop-
sticks into the food.(Itis+ad.+to do sth.句型)
4)当我们与其他人吃饭时,用筷
4.If we are invited to have dinner,we are expected to be on time or arrive
子指别人是不礼貌的。[用句
a little earlier.(be expected to do sth.被期待做某事)
型tis+ad.+to do sth.仿写]
5.It's impolite to show up at someone's house for the first time with empty
hands.Therefore,you'd better bring a small gift,such as flowers or
fruits.(had better do sth.最好做某事,用来提出建议)
巴角度3具有代表性的中国文化
1.It is said that a Chinese ruler called Shen Nong was the first to discover
5)灯笼被视为幸福和美好祝愿
tea as a drink.[RJ九全U6]
的象征。[用短语be considered
2.Beijing Opera,which is considered as the treasure of traditional
as仿写]
Chinese culture,plays an important role in spreading Chinese culture.
(①be considered as被看作;②play an important role in在…中发挥
重要作用)
3.Paper cuttings are often used for expressing good wishes during special6)据说,风筝在中国古代起着很
festivals.
重要的作用。[用句型It is said
4.With the development of China,more and more people speak Chinese
that.和短语play an important
in the world.
role in仿写]
5.When it comes to activities,I could never forget when I learned how to
perform lion dances.
6.I sincerely hope that this kind of art can spread widely to other countries
and people all over the world can fall in love with it.
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@角度4讲好中国故事
1.This story reminds us that you can never know what's possible unless
7)这个故事提醒我们,只要努
you try to make it happen.[RJ八下U6]
力,没有什么是不可能的。
2.Since you want to read Chinese classic works,I'd like to recommend
[用as long as引导的条件状语从
Journey to the West to you.(高级词汇recommend u.推荐,同义词为
句仿写]
suggest/advise)
3.The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it.It tells me that as
long as I never give up,I can achieve everything.
4.Good China's stories can strengthen the relationship between China8)如果你坚持努力,必然会成
and other countries in the world.(高级词汇strengthen u.加强,增强)
功。[用短语be bound to仿写]
5.You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can
share with me your opinions whenever you like.(高级短语:be bound to
必然会)
⊙真题剖析
[2022安徽]假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。
【审题】
请你写封邮件,向他推荐《西游记》。
主题:推荐中国经典名著
要点如下:
《西游记》
1.风趣幽默,深受喜爱;
文体:
文
2.团队合作,历险克难;
人称:用第
人称;
3.追逐梦想,永不言弃。
时态:主要为
时
注意:
要点:
1.词数80~100;
即左侧三点内容,展现了
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
《西游记》中人物的性格与
3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。
优秀品质,写作时注意衔接
参考词汇:character(n.人物);overcome(u.克服)
词的合理使用
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works,I'd like to recommend Journey
to the West to you.
Yours,
Li Hui
【写作框架】
开头:给朋友推
开头句示例:Since you want to read Chinese classic works,.I'd
荐《西游记》
like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
(开门见山)
Word bank:Chinese traditional literature,introduce
中间:具体介绍
推荐《西游记》
《西游记》的相
Word bank:humorous writing style,the spirit of cooperation,
关内容
overcome difficulties,give up,realize one's dream
结尾:鼓励朋友
结尾句示例:I hope it will bring you not only entertainment but
阅读《西游记》
also valuable insights.
Word bank:wonderful experience,useful lessons
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安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Dear Mike,
①用hat引导的定语从句合并两个句子:
Since you want to read Chinese classic works,I'd like to recom-
mend Journey to the West to you.It was written by Wu Cheng'en
during the Ming Dynasty.
First of all,as one of the four great classic works from ancient
②用短语“plenty of""升格句子:
China,Journey to the West is famous for its humorous writing style.
DIt tells lots of exciting stories.These stories happened to the four
main characters during their journey to the west.I think you will love
词汇晋级:many→plenty of-→numerous
these stories,for you always like exciting things.Secondly,2the
③用what引导的主语从句升格句子:
four characters always worked together to overcome many difficulties
and fight against bad guys.3Their spirit of cooperation impresses
me most.Thirdly,4the four characters experienced lots of troubles.
④用although引导的让步状语从句升格
They never gave up,In the end,they realized their dream.(要,点
句子:
1:风趣幽默,深受喜爱;要点2:团队合作,历险克难;要点3:追逐
梦想,永不言弃)
This is a really interesting book and 5I'm sure you'll love it.I
⑤用句型“I have no doubt that..”升格
hope it will bring you not only entertainment but also valuable insights.
句子:
Yours,
Li Hui
马实战演练
如今,越来越多的外国友人开始喜爱中国传
Peking Opera
Chinese calligraphy
统艺术。假如你是黄英,你想向外国友人介绍你
最喜爱的中国传统艺术,请根据以下图示,撰写一
篇作文。
Chinese painting
Paper-cutting
要点包括:
What is it?
1.请在给出的四种传统艺术中选出其中一种
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art
并详细介绍;
How do I get to like it?
What do I expect about it?
2.须全面反映图文信息;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
…
4.词数80~100。
安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
476)No matter how different our opinions are,we should
respect each other in a team.
7)After arguing with my parents,my teacher patiently told
me how to communicate with them better.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with
better ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know
more about our teammates.
3Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting
others only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
As long as everyone shows a little love,this world will
be a better place.I still remember that summer afternoon,
when I was going to my teacher's place to take my guitar
lesson,a sudden flash of lightning crashed in the sky.In no
time,the rain started to pour down.The wind was blowing
around while the rain was dropping hard against the ground.
I had to wait in a coffee shop,feeling helpless.
I kept looking at my watch for fear of being late for my
class."I can tell you are in a hurry,
a sweet voice
appeared."Take my umbrella,"the voice continued.I was
more than surprised to see a girl of my age passing her
umbrella to me.Before I could even say "Thank you
she
put the umbrella in my hand and disappeared in the rain.I
didn't realize the true meaning of kindness until that moment.
Kindness can build bridges across distances,and love
has no limits.I've always been ready to help others ever
since.Let's take action and show our love.
主题9志愿服务与公共服务
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I believe everyone can play a part in volunteer activities
2)We often do some voluntary activities on weekends so that
we can help people in need.
3)By doing volunteer activities,I not only enrich my spare
time,but also learn a lot of life skills.
4)I think volunteers are the most beautiful people who are
worth our respect.
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;
一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DDOne day,I happened to know some students in a rural
school were thirsty for knowledge but they didn't have
enough books.
2With all the pocket money that I saved,I bought some
books online and gave them away to the school.
3I believe that even small actions can make a difference in
people's lives.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Volunteering Makes the World Better
Last weekend,I took part in a meaningful volunteer
activity with my classmates.We went to a nearby nursing
home and helped the elderly clean their rooms,talked with
them and performed songs for them.The smiles on their faces
made us feel warm and proud.
Through this activity,I learned the importance of helping
others.It not only brings joy to those in need but also gives
us a sense of achievement.I became more patient,responsi-
ble and willing to care for others.
I hope more students can join volunteer work.Together,
we can make the world a warmer and better place.
主题10和谐社区与美丽家乡
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)We should not only learn modern technology but also pay
attention to traditional culture.
2)This park is famous for its lake,bridges and the ancient
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buildings on the hill.
3)In recent years,China has made great progress in the use
of clean energy.
4)I am proud of China's achievements in science and tech-
nology./I'm proud of the achievements China has made in
science and technology.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用:一:一般现在
【润色与升格】
Dit's just a 5-minute walk from the nearest subway station,
making travelling around the city very convenient.
2Nearby,there's a large shopping mall where you can satisfy
all your daily needs.
3What makes our community special is the friendly atmos-
phere
实战演练
【高分范文】
Beauty of My Hometoun
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown,Hefei,is a city full of charm.When it
comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite
pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air,especially in
the park,is fresh.There are many green spaces like Baohe
Park.The park has a beautiful lake,with willows by the
sides.It's a great place for relaxation.
Besides the nice scenery,what makes Hefei more
attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbors are friendly
and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to
offer a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Hefei
are also active.They work in communities,helping to keep
the city clean,and they also participate in charity activities,
spreading warmth.
I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more
people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
主题11文化自信
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1 The traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival
主
falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year.
2)Mooncakes carry people's wishes to the family they love
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and miss.
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3)When it comes to table manners,we are supposed to let
the old start eating first.
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4)When we eat with other people,it's impolite to point at
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others with chopsticks.
5)Lanterns are considered as symbols of happiness and good
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wishes.
6)It is said that kites played a very important role in ancient
China.
7)The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as
we work hard.
8)You are bound to succeed if you keep working hard.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用:三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIt tells lots of exciting stories that happened to the four
main characters during their journey to the west.
2 the four characters always worked together to overcome
plenty of difficulties and fight against bad guys.
3What impresses me most is their spirit of cooperation.
4although the four characters experienced lots of troubles,
they never gave up.
5I have no doubt that you'll love it.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art:Paper-cutting
When it comes to traditional Chinese arts,I firmly
believe that paper-cutting is my favorite.
Paper-cutting is a unique art form with a long history.
Artists use scissors or knives to transform a piece of paper
into vivid patterns.It covers different themes like flowers,
animals and stories.I fell in love with it as soon as I first
watched an elderly artist creating a beautiful bird at a fair.It
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attracted me greatly,because it carried deep meanings and
the artist's feelings.
I hope more people around the world can get to know
paper-cutting and appreciate its beauty.Also,I expect that
this art can be passed down and developed in new forms in
the modern world.
主题12网络安全与科技
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)As is known to all,many students are interested in going
online.
2)If you often visit unsafe websites,your personal informa-
tion will be at risk/in danger.
3)It's unbelievable that Al's learning ability is stronger than
we imagined.
4)The progress of science and technology makes great contri-
butions to making our life more convenient.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明:一:三一殷现在:一般将来
【润色与升格】
1This pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation
function,which allows students to look up words and
translate sentences instantly.
2it will have a voice recording feature so that students can
record lectures and listen to them later.
3I believe this pen will not only greatly enhance students'
learning experiences but also make studying more enjoy-
able and effective.
实战演练
【高分范文一】
Should students use AI in their studies?
Does Al help students learn,or does it bring new chal-
lenges?Different people hold different opinions.In my opin-
ion,students should use Al in their studies.It is a useful
helper for students.
First of all,AI can be a good teacher when we are at
home.It offers help like a real teacher,which helps to solve
problems in time.Besides,AI helps to open our minds.
主
When we meet a hard math problem,Al can provide us with
more than one method to solve it.We can leam more ways of
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solving problems with the help of AI.What's more,AI helps
to find information more quickly.
写
In a word,I think students should use Al in their stud-
作
ies.It not only helps them open their minds but also makes
learning more efficient.
进
【高分范文二】
阶
Should students use AI in their studies?
Does AI help students learn,or does it bring new chal-
lenges?Different people hold different opinions.From my
point of view,students shouldn't use AI in their studies.It is
not good for students'growth.
First,Al will offer direct answers to students.It will
stop students from thinking by themselves.Gradually,they
will be poor at thinking.In addition,if they always turn to
AI for help,they may lose the ability to solve problems on
their own.It can do much harm to students'further develop-
ment.Last but not least,using AI means that they will spend
much time in front of screens.It is bad for their eyes
In conclusion,I believe that it is wiser for students to
avoid using AI in their studies.They should think independ-
ently and solve problems with their own efforts.
主题13自然生态与环境保护
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I'm sure it'll be relaxing to walk in the fresh air.
2)The countless stars in the night sky took our breath away.
3)They are trying their best to tell people the importance of
saving water
4)We must reduce plastic waste so that fewer animals will be
harmed.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用:一;一般过去:一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIt is my great pleasure to win a prize in the photography
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competition.
2This photo was taken in Shenzhen Bay Park on a sunny
morning.
3There were clean and soft clouds in the sky that/which
were like white sheep.
4In my opinion,this photography competition tells us that
the beauty of nature is close to us in our daily lives.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Experience in Green Week
Last week,I took part in the Green Week activities
organized by our school.The goal was to teach us how to
protect the environment and sort waste correctly.
First,we listened to a talk about recycling.The speaker
told us how plastic waste hurts animals in the sea.Then,we
practiced sorting trash into three bins:paper,food waste,
and harmful things.We worked in teams to finish quickly.
After that,there was a fun quiz about saving the Earth.I
won a reusable bottle as a prize!
This Green Week made me realize everyone can help.I
will use less plastic,sort waste every day,and tell my
friends to do the same.
Let's make our world cleaner together!
主题14假期与旅行
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)Nothing helps me enjoy exercising more than going hiking
with my friends.
2)We all look forward to having a big family dinner on
vacation.
3)Traveling is considered to be a good way to explore the
world and experience different cultures.
4)The view from the top of the mountain was so wonderful
that we all forgot to check the time.
真题剖析
【审题
议论;二
一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DLast week,our school carried out a survey to learn about
students'after-school activities.
Relaxing activities are important because they are beneficial
for our health and happiness.
3Let's balance study and play so that we can stay sharp and
happy!
实战演练
【高分范文一:推荐old street】
Dear Robert
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China
this summer holiday.
I am sure you will fall in love with the old street here!
It's lined with ancient buildings that have a long history.It's
a good place to try different kinds of tasty local food like rice
cakes and dumplings.You can also enjoy traditional arts like
paper cutting here.People sell colorful hand-made things
too.Though the street isn't wide,it's quite busy.Walking
along the street makes you have a better understanding of
Chinese culture.Don't forget to take photos to record them!
I'm sure you'll have a great time there.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【高分范文二:推荐city park】
Dear Robert,
I'm glad to know that you are planning a visit to China
this summer holiday.
If you're a fan of nature,the city park is a better
choice!It is so peaceful that you can even hear birds sing-
ing.The tower in the centre of the park is the best place to
enjoy the beautiful views.Every morning,people play Tai
Chi there,which is a good way to exercise.They might invite
you to join them.In the afternoon,you can drink tea or play
chess under the old tall trees.It's a perfect place where you
can relax and get a taste of local life.
Hope you like it!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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