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主题10
和谐社区与美丽家乡
®主题探究
①介绍社区基本情况
②宣传社区出圈景点
介绍美丽社区
③描绘梦想中的社区
①介绍家乡基本情况
和谐社区与
介绍家乡的发
②介绍、赞美家乡的变化
美丽家乡
展变化
③具体介绍家乡的某个景点
①介绍中国大好河山,表达对祖国的热爱
介绍中国的
发展变化
②简要阐述中国在多方面的发展与变化并谈谈感受
⊙主题短语积累
角度1介绍美丽社区
5.welcome to.…欢迎来到…
4.develop rapidly快速发展
1.clean and tidy千净整洁
6.be famous/known for因…而闻名
5.a long history and vast land历史
2.attract lots of tourists吸引大量
7.the home of...…的发源地
悠久,地域辽阔
游客
8.be rich in富含/盛产…
6.traditional food culture传统饮食
3.polite and friendly礼貌且友好
9.rich culture丰富的文化
文化
4.various activities各种各样的活动
10.be free to对…免费
7.home and abroad国内外
5.plant flowers栽花
11.natural beauty自然风光
8.change for the better变得更好
6.be full of laughter充满欢声笑语
12.one of the most suitable living
9.take useful measures采取有效
7.pick up litter in the park在公园
cities最宜居的城市之一
措施
捡垃圾
13.have great effects on对…有
8.make eco-friendly products做环
很大影响
10.make great achievements in many
保产品
l4.living condition/standard生活
fields在许多领域取得巨大成就
9.organize book-sharing meeting
条件/水平
l1.make.…a reality使…成为
织图书分享会
l5.convenient transportation便利的
现实
角度2介绍家乡的发展变化
交通
12.be the pride of成为…的骄傲
1.lie in/be located in the central
角度3介绍中国的发展变化
l3.achieve one's dream实现某人
part of...位于…中部
1.be proud of为…感到自豪
的梦想
2.by the side of...在…旁边
2.in the past few years在过去的
14.better and better越来越好
3.have a large population人口众多
几年
15.make contributions to society
4.places of interest名胜古迹
3.take place发生
社会做贡献
主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
0角度1
介绍美丽社区
1.There is a large shopping mall where you can satisfy all your daily needs
1)我们不仅要学习现代技术,也
2.Our neighborhood will build art from recycled waste,which not only
要关注传统文化。[用连词词
brings the arts but also the environmental protection education.
组not only..but also..仿写]
3.Volunteers often organize various activities to enrich our lives.
4.Even though I don't know any of my neighbors,they are always ready to
help me.
5.It's really comfortable for me to live in my neighborhood.
安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
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@角度2)介绍家乡的发展变化
1.My hometown is especially famous for its university.[WYA M2]
2)这个公园以它的湖、桥和山上
2.It is a city not only with a long history but also famous for its delicious food.
的古建筑而闻名。[用短语be
3.High buildings can be seen everywhere and children can also receive a
famous for仿写]
very good education.
4.The environment in my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful,
which adds to our happiness..(which引导非限定性定语从句,说明了
家乡变得更好对人们的影响)
5.Although my hometown is no longer a small village,it is still a place full
of memories and warmth.
@角度3介绍中国的发展变化
1.So together,our actions can make a difference and lead to a better
3)近年来,中国在清洁能源使用
future![RJ九全UI3]
方面取得了巨大进步。[用短
2.In recent years,great changes have taken place in China and many
语make great progress in仿写]
achievements have attracted the attention of the world.
3.Chinese culture spreads so quickly around the world that more and more
foreigners are interested in it.
4.China has made great progress in its space successfully,making
China's space dream a reality.(making.现在分词短语作伴随状语,
4)我为中国在科技方面所取得
说明了中国在航天方面取得的成就)
的成就感到骄傲。[用短语be
5.Even so,education will be more convenient,no matter where you are,
proud of仿写]
you can learn what you need from the Internet..(no matter+疑问词引导
让步状语从句,突出强调教育的便利性)
6.I'm proud of our country and I hope I'll be the pride of our country in
the future.
⊙真题剖析
[2025合肥蜀山区学校联考二模]假设你是李华,越来越多的外国
【审题】
友人来到你的社区工作和生活。为了帮助他们更好地融入当地生活,主题:介绍社区的特色
你的社区发起“CommunityIntroduction”活动,邀请大家用英语制作
文体:
文
份宣传手册,介绍社区的特色。请你围绕下图提示完成英文宣传稿。
人称:主要为第
人称
休闲场所&
时态:主要用
时
社区活动
要点(图中信息):
①介绍社区的地理位置和周边配
套(突出生活便利)
地理位置&
人文氛围&
周边配套
邻里关系
②介绍社区的休闲场所和社区活
注意:
动(说明活动丰富多彩)
1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
③介绍社区的人文氛围和邻里关
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、社区名称和学校名称;
系(人们和谐相处,氛围融洽)
3.词数80~100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:atmosphere n.氛围
A Great Community for You
Welcome to our community!
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安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
【写作框架】
开头:欢迎并介绍
开头句示例:Welcome to our community!
社区的地理位置和
Word bank:be located in,make...convenient,satisfy all your
周边配套
daily needs
可展开叙述的信息有:
A Great
中间:介绍社区的
L.休闲场所:a big park with a lake,.a playground for kids
具体情况(休闲场
2.社区活动:jog,do Tai Chi,Spring Festival Lantern Parties,
Community
所和社区活动、人
weekend markets.International Food Fairs
for You
文氛围和邻里关系)
3.人文氛围:friendly atmosphere,neighbors are more like friends
4.邻里关系:always ready to offer help,greet each other with smiles
结尾:总结社区
结尾句示例:You'll surely feel at home and enjoy a colorful life in
优势并邀请大家
our community
来游玩
Word bank:welcome with open arms,leave you with...memories
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
A Great Community for You
①动名词作状语合并两个句子:
Welcome to our community!Located in the heart of our city,Dit's just a
5-minute walk from the nearest subway station.This makes travelling
around the city very convenient.2Nearby,there's a large shopping mall.
You can satisfy all your daily needs there.(要,点l:介绍社区的地理位置
和周边配套)
②用where引导的定语从句合并
Inside the community,there's a big park with a lake,colorful flowers,
两个句子:
and a playground for kids.In the morning,neighbors jog or do Tai Chi
together.On holidays,we hold exciting events like International Food Fairs
and Spring Festival Lantern Parties,which bring people much closer.3The
most special part is our friendly atmosphere.Here,neighbors are more like
③用句型“What makes our com-
friends.They're always ready to offer a helping hand.(要,点2:介绍社
munity.is”升格句子:
区的休闲场所和社区活动;要,点3:介绍社区的人文氛围和邻里关系)
You'll surely feel at home and enjoy a colorful life in our community.
Thank you for listening!
飞实战演练
家乡的美是生命中最美好的记忆。作为青少年的我们,有责
Beauty of view
Environment
任和义务宣传我们家乡的美。请你以“Beauty of My Hometown'
景之美
Beauty of
Places to visit
为题围绕右图几个方面来介绍你家乡的美。
My Hometown
Beauty of people
Neighbors
注意:
人之美
Volunteers
1.词数80~100(开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数);
2.文中须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Beauty of My Hometown
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.It's the beauty in my eyes.
I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
436)No matter how different our opinions are,we should
respect each other in a team.
7)After arguing with my parents,my teacher patiently told
me how to communicate with them better.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with
better ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know
more about our teammates.
3Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting
others only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
As long as everyone shows a little love,this world will
be a better place.I still remember that summer afternoon,
when I was going to my teacher's place to take my guitar
lesson,a sudden flash of lightning crashed in the sky.In no
time,the rain started to pour down.The wind was blowing
around while the rain was dropping hard against the ground.
I had to wait in a coffee shop,feeling helpless.
I kept looking at my watch for fear of being late for my
class."I can tell you are in a hurry,
a sweet voice
appeared."Take my umbrella,"the voice continued.I was
more than surprised to see a girl of my age passing her
umbrella to me.Before I could even say "Thank you
she
put the umbrella in my hand and disappeared in the rain.I
didn't realize the true meaning of kindness until that moment.
Kindness can build bridges across distances,and love
has no limits.I've always been ready to help others ever
since.Let's take action and show our love.
主题9志愿服务与公共服务
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I believe everyone can play a part in volunteer activities
2)We often do some voluntary activities on weekends so that
we can help people in need.
3)By doing volunteer activities,I not only enrich my spare
time,but also learn a lot of life skills.
4)I think volunteers are the most beautiful people who are
worth our respect.
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;
一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DDOne day,I happened to know some students in a rural
school were thirsty for knowledge but they didn't have
enough books.
2With all the pocket money that I saved,I bought some
books online and gave them away to the school.
3I believe that even small actions can make a difference in
people's lives.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Volunteering Makes the World Better
Last weekend,I took part in a meaningful volunteer
activity with my classmates.We went to a nearby nursing
home and helped the elderly clean their rooms,talked with
them and performed songs for them.The smiles on their faces
made us feel warm and proud.
Through this activity,I learned the importance of helping
others.It not only brings joy to those in need but also gives
us a sense of achievement.I became more patient,responsi-
ble and willing to care for others.
I hope more students can join volunteer work.Together,
we can make the world a warmer and better place.
主题10和谐社区与美丽家乡
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)We should not only learn modern technology but also pay
attention to traditional culture.
2)This park is famous for its lake,bridges and the ancient
安徽英语(W
buildings on the hill.
3)In recent years,China has made great progress in the use
of clean energy.
4)I am proud of China's achievements in science and tech-
nology./I'm proud of the achievements China has made in
science and technology.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用:一:一般现在
【润色与升格】
Dit's just a 5-minute walk from the nearest subway station,
making travelling around the city very convenient.
2Nearby,there's a large shopping mall where you can satisfy
all your daily needs.
3What makes our community special is the friendly atmos-
phere
实战演练
【高分范文】
Beauty of My Hometoun
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown,Hefei,is a city full of charm.When it
comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite
pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air,especially in
the park,is fresh.There are many green spaces like Baohe
Park.The park has a beautiful lake,with willows by the
sides.It's a great place for relaxation.
Besides the nice scenery,what makes Hefei more
attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbors are friendly
and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to
offer a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Hefei
are also active.They work in communities,helping to keep
the city clean,and they also participate in charity activities,
spreading warmth.
I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more
people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
主题11文化自信
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1 The traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival
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falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year.
2)Mooncakes carry people's wishes to the family they love
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and miss.
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3)When it comes to table manners,we are supposed to let
the old start eating first.
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4)When we eat with other people,it's impolite to point at
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others with chopsticks.
5)Lanterns are considered as symbols of happiness and good
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wishes.
6)It is said that kites played a very important role in ancient
China.
7)The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as
we work hard.
8)You are bound to succeed if you keep working hard.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用:三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIt tells lots of exciting stories that happened to the four
main characters during their journey to the west.
2 the four characters always worked together to overcome
plenty of difficulties and fight against bad guys.
3What impresses me most is their spirit of cooperation.
4although the four characters experienced lots of troubles,
they never gave up.
5I have no doubt that you'll love it.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art:Paper-cutting
When it comes to traditional Chinese arts,I firmly
believe that paper-cutting is my favorite.
Paper-cutting is a unique art form with a long history.
Artists use scissors or knives to transform a piece of paper
into vivid patterns.It covers different themes like flowers,
animals and stories.I fell in love with it as soon as I first
watched an elderly artist creating a beautiful bird at a fair.It
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