主题9 志愿服务与公共服务-【练客中考】2026年安徽新中考英语主题写作进阶（外研版）

6)No matter how different our opinions are,we should respect each other in a team. 7)After arguing with my parents,my teacher patiently told me how to communicate with them better. 真题剖析 【审题】 说明；一；一般现在 【润色与升格】 DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with better ideas. 2There is no doubt that communication can help us know more about our teammates. 3Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting others only weakens the group. 实战演练 【高分范文】 As long as everyone shows a little love,this world will be a better place.I still remember that summer afternoon, when I was going to my teacher's place to take my guitar lesson,a sudden flash of lightning crashed in the sky.In no time,the rain started to pour down.The wind was blowing around while the rain was dropping hard against the ground. I had to wait in a coffee shop,feeling helpless. I kept looking at my watch for fear of being late for my class."I can tell you are in a hurry, a sweet voice appeared."Take my umbrella,"the voice continued.I was more than surprised to see a girl of my age passing her umbrella to me.Before I could even say "Thank you she put the umbrella in my hand and disappeared in the rain.I didn't realize the true meaning of kindness until that moment. Kindness can build bridges across distances,and love has no limits.I've always been ready to help others ever since.Let's take action and show our love. 主题9志愿服务与公共服务 主题佳句积累 【句子仿写】 1)I believe everyone can play a part in volunteer activities 2)We often do some voluntary activities on weekends so that we can help people in need. 3)By doing volunteer activities,I not only enrich my spare time,but also learn a lot of life skills. 4)I think volunteers are the most beautiful people who are worth our respect. 真题剖析 【审题】 记叙； 一般过去；一般现在 【润色与升格】 DDOne day,I happened to know some students in a rural school were thirsty for knowledge but they didn't have enough books. 2With all the pocket money that I saved,I bought some books online and gave them away to the school. 3I believe that even small actions can make a difference in people's lives. 实战演练 【高分范文】 Volunteering Makes the World Better Last weekend,I took part in a meaningful volunteer activity with my classmates.We went to a nearby nursing home and helped the elderly clean their rooms,talked with them and performed songs for them.The smiles on their faces made us feel warm and proud. Through this activity,I learned the importance of helping others.It not only brings joy to those in need but also gives us a sense of achievement.I became more patient,responsi- ble and willing to care for others. I hope more students can join volunteer work.Together, we can make the world a warmer and better place. 主题10和谐社区与美丽家乡 主题佳句积累 【句子仿写】 1)We should not only learn modern technology but also pay attention to traditional culture. 2)This park is famous for its lake,bridges and the ancient 安徽英语(W buildings on the hill. 3)In recent years,China has made great progress in the use of clean energy. 4)I am proud of China's achievements in science and tech- nology./I'm proud of the achievements China has made in science and technology. 真题剖析 【审题】 应用：一：一般现在 【润色与升格】 Dit's just a 5-minute walk from the nearest subway station, making travelling around the city very convenient. 2Nearby,there's a large shopping mall where you can satisfy all your daily needs. 3What makes our community special is the friendly atmos- phere 实战演练 【高分范文】 Beauty of My Hometoun I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown. It's the beauty in my eyes. My hometown,Hefei,is a city full of charm.When it comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air,especially in the park,is fresh.There are many green spaces like Baohe Park.The park has a beautiful lake,with willows by the sides.It's a great place for relaxation. Besides the nice scenery,what makes Hefei more attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbors are friendly and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to offer a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Hefei are also active.They work in communities,helping to keep the city clean,and they also participate in charity activities, spreading warmth. I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it. 主题11文化自信 主题佳句积累 【句子仿写】 1 The traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival 主 falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year. 2)Mooncakes carry people's wishes to the family they love 题 and miss. 写 3)When it comes to table manners,we are supposed to let the old start eating first. 作 4)When we eat with other people,it's impolite to point at 进 others with chopsticks. 5)Lanterns are considered as symbols of happiness and good 阶 wishes. 6)It is said that kites played a very important role in ancient China. 7)The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as we work hard. 8)You are bound to succeed if you keep working hard. 真题剖析 【审题】 应用：三；一般现在 【润色与升格】 DIt tells lots of exciting stories that happened to the four main characters during their journey to the west. 2 the four characters always worked together to overcome plenty of difficulties and fight against bad guys. 3What impresses me most is their spirit of cooperation. 4although the four characters experienced lots of troubles, they never gave up. 5I have no doubt that you'll love it. 实战演练 【高分范文】 My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art:Paper-cutting When it comes to traditional Chinese arts,I firmly believe that paper-cutting is my favorite. Paper-cutting is a unique art form with a long history. Artists use scissors or knives to transform a piece of paper into vivid patterns.It covers different themes like flowers, animals and stories.I fell in love with it as soon as I first watched an elderly artist creating a beautiful bird at a fair.It 参考答案 31主题9志愿服务与公共服务 。主题探究 ①假期志愿实践活动 ②社区志愿者 ③养老院儿童医院福利院的志愿活动 介绍志愿服务活动的内容 ④爱心义卖 志愿服务与 公共服务 ⑤环保活动（清洁公园/海滩等） 志愿服务活动的经历与感受[2021安徽] ⊙主题短语积累 角度1介绍志愿服务活动的内容 13.give a hug to sb..给某人一个拥抱 6.be thankful for sth.对某事心存 1.volunteer to do sth.志愿做某事 14.organize charity events组织慈 感激 2.give out food分发食物 善活动 7.meaningful and important things 3.clean up the city parks清理城市 15.plant trees in the community 有意义且重要的事情 公园 社区植树 8.have a better understanding of 4.help the homeless帮助无家可归 l6.help with traffic safety协助维护 …有更好的理解 的人 交通安全 9.feel good about helping others 5.cheer up the sick kids鼓舞生病 17.help the elderly living alone 帮助别人感觉良好 的孩子 助独居老人 10.develop a sense of responsibility 6.raise money for the disabled为残 18.volunteer at an animal shelter 培养责任感 疾人筹钱 动物收容所做义工 11.learn to be responsible学会承 7.give away赠送 角度2志愿服务活动的经历与感受 担责任 8.old people's home养老院 1.play a role/part in在…中发挥 l2.get a sense of achievement获得 作用 9.put up notices张贴通知 成就感 2.take..seriously认真对待… l0.offer to help主动提供帮助 3.can't wait to do sth.迫不及待做 l3.feel warm inside感觉心里暖暖的 l1.help people in need帮助有需要 某事 14.bring hope to those in need给需 的人 4.make a difference有影响；起作用 要的人带来希望 l2.help kids learn to read帮助孩 5.come up with some ideas想出一 l5.turn kindness into a habit让善 子们学会阅读 些主意 良成为习惯 主题佳句积累 佳句赏析 句子仿写 @角度1介绍志愿服务活动的内容 1.I plan to work as a volunteer in the community so that I can help more 1)我相信每个人都能在志愿活 people who are in need.(①so that引导目的状语从句，强调制定这个 动中发挥作用。[用短语play a 计划的目的；②who引导定语从句，修饰people) part in仿写] 2.I can do something I love and help others at the same time 3.Being a volunteer helps to develop our independence and teach us how to love others. 2)我们常常在周末做一些志愿活 4.I am willing to do voluntary activities that can enrich my knowledge 动来帮助有需要的人。[用so and broaden my horizon. that引导的目的状语从句仿写] 5.Let's start from the small things around us and play a part in creating a better world! 38 安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶 @角度2志愿服务活动的经历与感受 1.I always worked as a volunteer in an old people's home,such as helping3)通过做志愿话动，我不仅丰富 them clean the rooms and reading newspapers to them.such as/like 了业余时间，还学到了很多生 列举志愿者做的事情) 活技能。[用连词词组not only 2.I sang for the sick children in hospital to cheer them up. .but also.仿写] 3.As a volunteer in an animal hospital,when I see animals get better and the look of joy on their keepers'faces,I get a strong feeling of satis- faction.(①the look of joy喜悦的表情；②get a strong feeling of satis- faction获得一种强烈的满足感) 4)我认为志愿者是最美的人，值 4.Not only do I feel good about helping others,but I also get to spend 得我们尊敬。[用who引导的定 time doing what I like to do. 语从句仿写1 5.Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky,but we should believe that life is beautiful and love will always be around us. 6.The most important is that we can make many friends who have the same interests with us.(who引导定语从句，修饰friends) ⊙真题剖析 [2021安徽]假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事 【审题】 并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英语报投稿。 主题：用零花钱做了一件有意 内容包括： 义的事并被家人表扬 1.事情经过； 文体： 文 2.个人感悟。 人称：用第 人称； 注意： 时态：讲述事情发展经过用 1.词数80~100； 时；说明个人 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 感悟用 时。 3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 要点： 4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。 即左侧两点内容；注意：所 参考词汇：pocket money(n.零花钱)；meaningful(ad.有意义的) 写事件必须有意义（提升自 Once I Was Praised 我、帮助他人、做公益、服务 社会等)。 写作框架】 开头：点出自己曾用 零花钱做了一件有意 开头句示例：Once I was praised because I made good use of my 义的事（开门见山） pocket money to do something meaningful. 可参考的经历有： 1.提升自我：买一本有意义的书、学习一项生活技能、参 Once I Was 加某一竞赛挑战自我等： 中间：具体讲述事情 2.帮助他人：给贫困地区的儿童买文具/书籍衣服、帮助孤 Praised 的经过 寡老人等； 3.做公益：为流浪动物买食物、救助流浪动物等； 4.服务社会：购买急救包分发给社区老人、绿化城市等。 结尾：表达自己的感 结尾句示例：I will continue to do what I can to help others Word bank:small act,every little bit,continue to do sth. 安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶 39 【润色与升格】 连句成篇 句子升格 Once I Was Praised ①用短语“be thirsty for'”升格句子： Once I was praised because I made good use of my pocket money to do something meaningful. DOne day,I happened to know some students in a rural school wanted knowledge but they didn't have enough books.I made ②用with作方式状语前置和that引导 up my mind to offer my help.2I bought some books online with all 的定语从句升格句子： my saved pocket money and gave them away to the school.Moreover, those books I gave away might inspire the students to follow their dreams and broaden their horizons.When my parents learned about what I had done,they were delighted and felt proud of me. ③用短语“make a difference'”升格句子： They said that I did a meaningful thing.(要点l:事情经过) 3I believe that even small actions can influence people's lives. I will continue to do what I can to help others..(要，点2：个人感悟) 多样表达： 1.碰巧做某事happen to do sth.=do sth.by chance/by coincidence 2.下定决心做某事make up one's mind to do sth.=decide to do sth.=be determined to do sth. 3.鼓励，鼓舞inspire=encourage 4.拓宽某人的眼界broaden one's horizon=open(up)one's eyes 马实战演练 [2025合肥市蜀山区三模]假如你是李辉，上周参加了学校组织的志愿者活动，请你以“Volunteering Makes the World Better'”为题，向校英文报投稿。 要点如下： 1.活动内容；2.个人收获；3.提出号召。 注意： 1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 Volunteering Makes the World Better Last weekend,I took part in a meaningful volunteer activity with my classmates. 40 安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶