内容正文:
主题6劳动实践与劳动品质
口主题探究
①介绍一项劳动技能
①介绍家务的内容及对做家务的看法
②介绍如何提高生活技能
劳动技
劳动
(参加家庭大扫除、为全家人做饭、
③谈谈如何养成劳动习惯
能介绍
清理菜园/花园等)
①分享参加劳动实践活动的经历
践
家务
②描述一次做家务的经历并谈谈体会
和感受[2023安徽]
劳
劳动
③介绍做家务的好处和意义,倡导中
②说说自己想参加的一项劳动实
学生做家务
践活动及理由,并且对自己选
劳动实践
择的活动提出建议(申请志愿者
与收获
质
项目、社区服务活动等)
⊙主题短语积累
角度1劳动技能介绍
4.get a strong feeling of satisfaction
角度3家务劳动
1.develop labor habits养成劳动习惯
获得强烈的满足感
1.do the dishes洗餐具
2.learn some basic life skills学习
5.be more independent and respon-
2.cook meals/dishes做饭
一些基本的生活技能
sible变得更独立且负责
3.take out the rubbish倒垃圾
3.water flowers浇花
6.be confident about oneself对自己
4.sweep the floor扫地
4.pick the strawberries摘草莓
感到自信
5.wash/fold clothes洗/叠衣服
5.feed animals喂动物
7.realize the importance of labor意6.tidy(up)a room整理房间
6.plant trees植树
识到劳动的重要性
7.make the bed整理床铺
7.grow vegetables种菜
&.tired but happy累并快乐着
8.do housework/chores做家务
角度2劳动实践与收获
9.go to the old people's home去敬9.depend on依靠;信赖
1.reduce study pressure减轻学习
老院
10.a sense of responsibility责任感
压力
10.give out food分发食物
l1.do one's part in doing sth.尽某
2.be good for our health有益于我
11.give away捐赠
人的职责做某事
们的健康
l2.enrich one's experiences丰富某l2.develop independence培养独立性
3.contribute one's efforts to do sth.
人的经历
13.have a better relationship with
贡献某人的力量做某事
l3.impact significantly极大影响
parents和父母有更好的关系
Q主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
@角度1劳动技能介绍
1.Labor education plays an important role in teenagers'development.
1)劳动教育在青少年的发展中
(play an important role in.…在…中发挥重要作用)
起着重要作用。[用短语play
2.We can take part in activities such as planting trees and growing vegeta-
an important role in..仿写]
bles to enrich our real work experience.
3.Flower arranging is another skill that I want to learn because it can keep
me calm and relaxed..(that引导定语从句)
4.It is necessary for us to learn some basic life skills through labor education.
©角度2劳动实践与收获
1.As teenagers,we are supposed to form good labor habits which are good
2)农场一日游很有价值,因为它能
for our growth.(which引导定语从句)
帮助我们了解食物从何而来。
2.What interests me most is that I can cook by myself.
[用短语be of great value仿写]
3.Taking part in social practice activities can connect what I've learned
with real life in an interesting way
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安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
4.All the life skills I will get through the process will be of great value to
3)志愿活动后,我意识到真正的满
my later life.
足感源于帮助他人。[用realize后
5.Most importantly,I realize that each life is important and the tiny
跟that引导的宾语从句仿写]
things I do can make a difference.(高级词汇:tiny“微小的”)
6.Nothing is more valuable to me than helping others,and I will continue to
do so.
©角度3家务劳动
1.I finally understand that we need to share the housework to have a clean
4)我设法多做家务,这样妈妈就
and comfortable home.[J八下U3]
不会太累。[用so that引导结果
2.Maybe you could do more jobs at home so that your parents have more
状语从句仿写]
time for proper communication.[RJ八下U4]
3.Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches
them how to look after themselves..[RJ八下U3]
4.It is important for us to learn how to do chores and help our parents5)分担家务不仅能教会我们责
with housework.
任并让我们独立,还能帮我们
5.Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits,but also develops
了解我们的父母工作有多辛
my life skills.
苦。[用短语not only.but also
6.The more chores we do,the earlier we will learn to be independent.
…仿写]
(句型“th+比较级,the+比较级”描述做家务的好处)
7.I still remember the first time I cooked dinner for my family.
⊙真题剖析
[2023安徽]假定你是李辉,你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网
【审题】
站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息,用英语写一篇短文,向该网站浏
主题:简述自己制作关于家
览者简述你的制作经历
乡变化的海报的经历
When
文体:
文
Who)
(Where
人称:以第
人称
My Experience of
Making a Poster
为主
Why
How
时态:主要为
时
purpose of doing it
What
feelings after doing it
要点:
不能遗漏导图
things you did
导图中共涉及6个要点,其
注意:
中的任何信息
中Why、What、How三个要
1.短文须包含上图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
点是重点,需要详细阐述,
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名;
导图中已给出写作方向
3.词数80~100(短文题目与首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:poster(n.海报);design(u.&n.设计)
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week,I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
【写作框架】
开头:制作了关
开头句示例:Last week,I made a poster of the great changes in
于家乡变化的海
my hometown.
报(引出主题)
Word bank:the purpose of,aim to do,great changes
My Experience
中间:具体讲述
Word bank:collect information,interview some people,
of Making a Poster
制作海报的过程
familiar with,design the poster,post it online
结尾句示例:I do hope my hometown will have a brighter future.
结尾:表达期望
Word bank:a sense of,hopefully,be better and better
安徽英语(WY)
主题写作进阶
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Last week,I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.
①用who引导的定语从句合并两个句子:
It aims to show great changes my hometown has made in recent
years.(要点1:时间)
My classmates and I surfed the Internet in the library to collect
information for it.1We also interviewed some elder people.These
②用短语“to our joy”将两句话变成
people were familiar with the past of our hometown.2They all like
句,并用“think highly of'”替换“Iike”
the better life now.That made us very happy.Then we came together
升格句子:
to design the poster.Some of us focused on writing the text while
others devoted themselves to drawing pictures about the changes.
Through our efforts and hard work,the poster was finally com-
③用连词“so that'”合并两个句子:
pleted.We posted it online In this way more people could get to
know the changes in our hometown,(要点2、3、4、5:人物、地,点、所
做的事情、做这件事的原因及目的)
④用短语“a strong sense of pride”和
After doing that,I was tired but delighted.More important-
“fill one's heart'”升格句子:
ly,I felt proud of my hometown.I do hope my hometown will have a
brighter future.(要,点6:做这件事后的感受)
多样表达:
1.be familiar with =know...well be acquainted with
2.专注于focus on=concentrate on
3.致力于devote oneself to=apply oneself to=commit oneself to
马实战演练
[2025合肥四十五中三模]学校英文报正在开展以“Labor Clubs Make Our Life
Colorful”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.调查结果简介;2.你参加的社团;3.你的建议。
Planting club
注意:
Paper-cutting
20%
1.短文须包含右图所有信息,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
club 45%
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和班级;
Cooking club
25%
3.词数80~100(短文题目与首句已为你写好,不计人总词数)。
Labor Clubs Make Our Life Colorful
Last week,our school made a survey of the students in different labor clubs.
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安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶This term,we have a new subject-labor course.I
learn how to grow vegetables and do some chores through this
course.On my mother's birthday,I cooked a bowl of noodles
for my mother to show my love.Though it tasted a little
terrible,my mother felt very happy.Now,I can help my
parents do some housework,such as washing the dishes and
sweeping the floor.
I am happy that I can put what I've learnt into practice
in daily life.
主题5自我提升与职业规划
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)My friend's words made me realize that I can also be
someone's role model.
2)I have such strong communication skills that I can make
new friends easily】
3)I used to be shy in class,but now I have developed the
courage to share my ideas.
4)The braver we face challenges,the more confident we
become.
5)To improve my spoken English skills,I practice making
dialogues with my classmates every day
6)The story of Qian Xuesen made me make up my mind to
become a scientist.
7)When I grow up,I want to be a good doctor who can save
many people.
8)I make every effort to study science well so that I can
become an excellent scientist.
9)If you want to realize your dream/make your dream come
true,you must keep working hard.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用;
般现在
【润色与升格
DI have a deep understanding of my hometown,such as its
long history and rich culture.
2I am an easy-going person who is always willing to commu-
nicate with others.
3I have a good knowledge of English,and I'm skillful at
主
expressing myself clearly in English.
4I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for.
题
实战演练
【高分范文】
写
Face Your Problems
Everyone has problems in life.I once had a problem
作
with my math.I found it very difficult to understand the
进
teacher in class and my grades were poor.
The cause of the problem was that I didn't pay enough
阶
attention in class and didn't do enough practice after class.
To solve it,I decided to change my study habits.I started to
listen carefully in class,take notes,and ask questions when
I didn't understand.After class,I did a lot of exercises and
reviewed the knowledge regularly.I also asked my teacher
and classmates for help when I needed it.
Remember,every problem is an opportunity to learn
and grow.With the right attitude and actions,we can over-
come any difficulty.
主题6
劳动实践与劳动品质
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)Labor education plays an important role in teenagers'
development.
2)A day trip to the farm is of great value as it helps us
understand where food comes from.
3)After volunteering,I realized that true feeling of satisfac-
tion comes from helping others
4)I manage to do extra housework so that my mom wouldn't
be too tired.
5)Sharing housework not only teaches us responsibility and
independence,but also helps us understand how hard our
parents work
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;
般过去
【润色与升格】
DWe also interviewed some elder people who were familiar
with the past of our hometown.
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安徽英语(啊
(2To our joy,they all thought highly of the better life now.
3We posted it online so that more people could get to know
the changes in our hometown.
4More importantly,a strong sense of pride for my hometown
filled my heart.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Labor Clubs Make Our Life Colorful
Last week,our school made a survey of the students in
different labor clubs.
Labor-related clubs account for 90%of the school
clubs.Among them,45%of the students choose to join the
paper-cutting club,25%choose the cooking club,and 20%
choose the planting club.I joined the school's planting club
because I think planting is very interesting.Watching flowers
grow and bloom not only gives me a great sense of achieve-
ment but also helps cultivate my sense of responsibility and
improve my physical fitness.Moreover,I can learn relevant
knowledge about plants in this club.
In my opinion,students should join the clubs they like.
When considering their own preferences,they should also
think about what kind of exercise and improvement the clubs
can bring.Finally,they should make a comprehensive
choice according to their own needs.I look forward to seeing
everyone find their favorite club.
主题7经历与感受
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I used to depend on my parents,but now I decide to do all
the things by myself do everything on my own.
2)Nobody likes failure,but we can always learn something
valuable from it.
3)This experience not only helped others but also made me
more confident/gave me more confidence.
4)After losing the race,I came to realize that winning was
never the only path to take.
5)How wonderful and meaningful this experience is!
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般现在;一般过去;一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI knew my parents preferred educational trips such as
museums or historical sites,but I dreamed of something
relaxing after a tiring term of study.
2Filled with warmth,I realized how much they loved me.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I made a right decision
In our lives,each of us has to make thousands of
decisions,and some of them will be hard to forget.I still
remember once I made a right decision
Last year,I had a chance to join the school basketball
team,but it was hard to decide whether to join or spend more
time on my studies.After thinking carefully,I chose to join.
At first,I spent a lot of time practicing basketball and little
time on homework,but later I learned to manage my time
better.
Now,I have not only improved my basketball skills but
also made new friends.I feel more confident and believe I
made the right decision.This experience taught me that
trying new things can bring great rewards.I'm glad I took the
chance!
主题8人际交往与团队合作
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写
1)You should make friends with a person who has something
in common with you.
2)Thanks to my friend's help,I could overcome difficulties
and become positive.
3)My problem is that I am afraid to communicate with others.
4)Good communication can not only help you get along well
with old friends,but also help you make many new friends.
5)We are always ready to help each other by lending a
(helping)hand.
参考答案