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主题5自我提升与职业规划
。主题探究
①介绍自己的基本信息(外貌特征、性格特点)
自我认识
②介绍自己的兴趣爱好与特长[2020安徽1
①成长与变化(克服性格弱点,变得自信等)
自我提升与
职业规划
自我提升
②如何成为更好的自己
①选择的职业梦想以及原因(自身因素、身边人
的因素、名人的影响)
职业规划
②实现职业梦想的方法
⊙主题短语积累
角度1自我认识
角度2自我提升
20.learn some life skills学习一些
(1)介绍自己的基本信息
(1)成长与变化
生活技能
1.at the age of..在…岁的时候
1.used to do过去常常
21.take on new challenges迎接新
2.take after(外表、举止、性格)像
2.in the past(three years)在过去
挑战
3.be of medium height/build中等
(的三年里)
22.be brave to face challenges勇于
身高/身材
3.be poor at sth.=be weak in sth.
面对挑战
4.be patient with对.…有耐心
不擅长某事
23.make detailed plans制定详细的
5.be friendly/kind/nice to对…
4.be afraid of doing sth.害怕做某事
计划
友好
5.with the help of with one's help
24.put one's heart into sth.全神贯
6.try/do one's best to do sth.尽某
在…的帮助下
注于某事
人最大努力做某事
角度3职业规划
7.be responsible for对…负责
6.make progress取得进步
(1)选择的职业梦想以及原因
8.get on/along well with others
(2)如何成为更好的自己
1.dream of being a doctor想要成为
别人相处融洽
7.be strict with sb.对某人严格
一名医生
9.be optimistic/positive about
8.keep a promise/keep promises
2.achieve/realize one's dream
…乐观
守承诺
make one's dream come true
(2)介绍自己的兴趣爱好与特长
9.have courage to face sb./sth.
现某人的梦想
10.like...a lot =be crazy about =a big
勇气面对某人/某事
3.succeed in doing sth.manage
fan of=be fond of=be passionate
10.overcome the trouble/one's fear
to do sth..成功做/设法做某事
about非常喜欢/热爱…
克服困难/恐惧
4.have an effect on/make a differ-
11.be interested in have a strong
11.face...with courage =face...
ence to对…有影响
interest in对…感兴趣
bravely勇敢面对…
(2)实现职业梦想的方法
l2.take up a hobby开始一个爱好
12.keep away from远离
5.take acting lessons上表演课
13.be good at/do well in...be
13.get well prepared for为…做
6.keep on doing sth.stick to do-
skilled in/at have a good com-
好准备
ing sth.坚持做某事
mand of精通../对…掌握
14.listen carefully to认真听
7.have to do with与…有关
熟练
15.make up one's mind to do sth.
8.work hard努力学习
14.play the piano弹钢琴
be determined to do sth.下定决
9.stick to one's dream hold on to
l5.collect stamps收集邮票
心做某事
one's dream坚持梦想
16.have rich experience in/be expe-
10.give up放弃
rienced in在…方面有丰富
16.improve oneself提升自己
11.fight for为…而奋斗
的经验
17.enrich one's knowledge充实某
12.go all out全力以赴
l7.be talented in在…方面有
人的学识
13.try one's best to do sth.尽某人
天赋
18.open one's eyes/broaden one's
最大努力做某事
l8.have the ability to do sth.有能
horizon拓宽某人的眼界
14.spare no effort to do sth..不遗余
力做某事
19.take part in voluntary activities
力做某事
19.apply for中请
参加志愿服务活动
l5.be admitted into/to被…录取
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安徽英语(WY)
主题写作进阶
⊙主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
@角度1自我认识
1.I'm kind and I'm always ready to help others.[WYt M2]
1)我朋友的话让我意识到,我也
2.I'm quieter and more serious than most kids in my class.That's why I
可以是某人的榜样。[用that
like reading books and study harder in class.RJAU3]
引导宾语从句仿写]
3.I have already learnt that I am what I am.[WY新教材八上U1]
4.Everyone has something special and different-that is what's interesting.
[Y新教材八上U1]
2)我的沟通能力非常强,因此能够
5.I'm such an outgoing boy that it's easy for me to communicate with
轻松地结交新朋友。[用such.
others.(such.that..引导结果状语从句)
that.引导结果状语从句仿写]
6.I'm not the top student,but helping classmates makes me feel like a
superhero.(动名词短语作主语,强调“帮助同学”对“我”的影响)
©角度2自我提升
(1)成长与变化
3)我过去在课堂上很害羞,但现在
1.She isn't shy anymore and dares to sing in front of crowds.[RJU4
我已经鼓起勇气分享我的想法。
2.I didn't use to be popular in school,but now I get tons of attention
[用结构used to do sth.仿写]
everywhere I go.[RJ九全U4]
3.Many times I thought about giving up,but I fought on.[RJ U4]
4.I've learned that every challenge is a hidden gift,and the more I face
difficulties,the stronger I grow inside.
4)我们越勇敢面对挑战,我们就
(2)如何成为更好的自己
会变得越自信。[用the+比较
5.The earlier kids learn to be independent,the better it is for their
级,the+比较级仿写]
future.[RJ八下U3]
6.The spirit of these climbers shows us that we should never give up trying
to achieve our dreams.[RJ八下U7]
7.Never let your age hold you back.Have a try and try harder.WY
材八上U1]
5)为了提高我的英语口语技能,
8.To improve myself,I plan to spend one hour a day in reading the books
我每天都和同学练习对话。
I'm interested in.(动词不定式前置作目的状语)
[用动词不定式作目的状语仿写]
9.When facing challenges in life,I always choose to deal with them bravely
instead of staying behind.
10.In fact,it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the
time.(Itis+被强调部分+that强调句型)
©角度3职业规划
(1)选择的职业梦想以及原因
6)钱学森的故事让我下定决心
1.It's of great importance for us to make up our minds to achieve our
成为一名科学家。[用短语
dreams.
make up one's mind仿写]
2.I like talking to people and asking questions,so I want to be a journalist
when I grow up.(so引导结果状语从句)
3.I dream of being a good teacher who teaches kids not only knowledge
but also the truth in life.
7)当我长大后,我想成为一个能
4.More and more young people wish to return to their hometowns and con-
拯救很多人的好医生。[用
tribute to their hometowns'development after graduation.(contribute to
who引导的定语从句仿写]
贡献,促成,有助于)
5.Huang Xuhua's spirit encourages me to pursue my dreams and contribute
to our country's future..(高级词汇:pursue v.追求,致力于)
安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
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(2)实现职业梦想的方法
8)我竭尽全力学好科学,以便能
6.Every time I fall down,I'll get up and try again.WY M3]
成为一名优秀的科学家。[用
7.I also learn from Su Bingtian that great men never give up,no matter
make every effort to do sth.仿写]
what difficulties they face.[WY九上M3]
8.I will make every effort to discover the value of traditional Chinese
9)如果你想实现自己的梦想,你
medicine and make it more popular in the world.(make every effort to do
就得一直努力奋斗。[用f引
sh.竭尽全力做某事)
导的条件状语从句仿写]
9.I strongly believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into
t.(f引导条件状语从句,描写实现梦想的途径)
@俗语谚语
1,Hard work pays off.天道酬勤。
2.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
3.It's never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。
4.Actions speak louder than words..事实胜于雄辩。
5.Rome was not built in a day.罗马不是一日建成的。
6.Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。
⊙真题剖析
[2020安徽]假定你是李华。某英语报“My Hometown'”专栏面向中学生
【审题】
招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。
主题:自荐成为“My Home-
要点如下:
towm”专栏小记者
1.熟悉家乡;
文体:
文
2.乐于交流;
人称:第
人称
3.擅长英语。
时态:用
时
注意:
要点:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
已明确给出三个要点,注意
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
衔接词的合理使用
4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:journalist(n.记者);column(n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作框架】
开头句示例:I am excited to learn that your newspaper is
开头:向报社自
seeking journalists for the column My Hometown.I hope to
荐(点明主题
be a member of the team.
Word bank:hear,seek.be a member of.recommend
中间:自荐理由
自荐成为小记者
(熟悉家乡;乐于
Word bank:have a deep understanding of,work as,be
交流;擅长英语)
willing to,communicate with,be skillful at
结尾句示例:I would appreciate it if I were lucky enough to
结尾:表达期望
get this chance.
Word bank:get this chance,be granted this opportunity
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安徽英语(WY)
主题写作进阶
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Dear Sir/Madam,
①用短语“such as'”合并两个句子:
I am excited to learn that your newspaper is seeking journalists
for the column My Hometown.I hope to be a member of the team.
First,DI have a deep understanding of my hometown.It is a
②用结构“be willing to do sth.”升格
city with a long history and rich culture.In addition,I used to work
句子:
as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job.
I am always an easy-going person who likes to communicate with
others.This quality enables me to build good relationships with the
③用短语“have a good knowledge of'"和
“be skillful at'”升格句子:
people I interview and gather valuable information.Moreover,3I'm
good at English and I do well in expressing myself clearly in Eng
lish.(要点1、2和3:自荐理由〈熟悉家乡;乐于交流;擅长英语〉)
④用定语从句将两句话合并为一句,升
4You're looking for someone.I'm sure to be the right person.I
格句子:
would appreciate it if I were lucky enough to get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
多样表达
1.对做某事感到兴奋be excited to do sth.=be/feel excited about doing sth.
2.in addition besides furthermore moreover
3.喜欢like=love=enjoy=prefer=be fond of
4.感谢,感激appreciate=thank=feel/be grateful(tosb.)(for sth.)
马实战演练
作为一名中学生,你平时遇到问题时是如何解决的?你认为自己有解决问题的能力吗?学校英语俱乐部
正在开展以“Face Your Problems'”为题的征文活动,请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
action(s)you
advice to
one problem
cause(s)of
took to
younger
you had
the problem
solve it
students
注意:
1.短文须包含流程图中的内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(短文的标题已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Face Your Problems
安徽英语(WY)主题写作进阶
27This term,we have a new subject-labor course.I
learn how to grow vegetables and do some chores through this
course.On my mother's birthday,I cooked a bowl of noodles
for my mother to show my love.Though it tasted a little
terrible,my mother felt very happy.Now,I can help my
parents do some housework,such as washing the dishes and
sweeping the floor.
I am happy that I can put what I've learnt into practice
in daily life.
主题5自我提升与职业规划
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)My friend's words made me realize that I can also be
someone's role model.
2)I have such strong communication skills that I can make
new friends easily】
3)I used to be shy in class,but now I have developed the
courage to share my ideas.
4)The braver we face challenges,the more confident we
become.
5)To improve my spoken English skills,I practice making
dialogues with my classmates every day
6)The story of Qian Xuesen made me make up my mind to
become a scientist.
7)When I grow up,I want to be a good doctor who can save
many people.
8)I make every effort to study science well so that I can
become an excellent scientist.
9)If you want to realize your dream/make your dream come
true,you must keep working hard.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用;
般现在
【润色与升格
DI have a deep understanding of my hometown,such as its
long history and rich culture.
2I am an easy-going person who is always willing to commu-
nicate with others.
3I have a good knowledge of English,and I'm skillful at
主
expressing myself clearly in English.
4I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for.
题
实战演练
【高分范文】
写
Face Your Problems
Everyone has problems in life.I once had a problem
作
with my math.I found it very difficult to understand the
进
teacher in class and my grades were poor.
The cause of the problem was that I didn't pay enough
阶
attention in class and didn't do enough practice after class.
To solve it,I decided to change my study habits.I started to
listen carefully in class,take notes,and ask questions when
I didn't understand.After class,I did a lot of exercises and
reviewed the knowledge regularly.I also asked my teacher
and classmates for help when I needed it.
Remember,every problem is an opportunity to learn
and grow.With the right attitude and actions,we can over-
come any difficulty.
主题6
劳动实践与劳动品质
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)Labor education plays an important role in teenagers'
development.
2)A day trip to the farm is of great value as it helps us
understand where food comes from.
3)After volunteering,I realized that true feeling of satisfac-
tion comes from helping others
4)I manage to do extra housework so that my mom wouldn't
be too tired.
5)Sharing housework not only teaches us responsibility and
independence,but also helps us understand how hard our
parents work
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;
般过去
【润色与升格】
DWe also interviewed some elder people who were familiar
with the past of our hometown.
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(2To our joy,they all thought highly of the better life now.
3We posted it online so that more people could get to know
the changes in our hometown.
4More importantly,a strong sense of pride for my hometown
filled my heart.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Labor Clubs Make Our Life Colorful
Last week,our school made a survey of the students in
different labor clubs.
Labor-related clubs account for 90%of the school
clubs.Among them,45%of the students choose to join the
paper-cutting club,25%choose the cooking club,and 20%
choose the planting club.I joined the school's planting club
because I think planting is very interesting.Watching flowers
grow and bloom not only gives me a great sense of achieve-
ment but also helps cultivate my sense of responsibility and
improve my physical fitness.Moreover,I can learn relevant
knowledge about plants in this club.
In my opinion,students should join the clubs they like.
When considering their own preferences,they should also
think about what kind of exercise and improvement the clubs
can bring.Finally,they should make a comprehensive
choice according to their own needs.I look forward to seeing
everyone find their favorite club.
主题7经历与感受
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I used to depend on my parents,but now I decide to do all
the things by myself do everything on my own.
2)Nobody likes failure,but we can always learn something
valuable from it.
3)This experience not only helped others but also made me
more confident/gave me more confidence.
4)After losing the race,I came to realize that winning was
never the only path to take.
5)How wonderful and meaningful this experience is!
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般现在;一般过去;一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI knew my parents preferred educational trips such as
museums or historical sites,but I dreamed of something
relaxing after a tiring term of study.
2Filled with warmth,I realized how much they loved me.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I made a right decision
In our lives,each of us has to make thousands of
decisions,and some of them will be hard to forget.I still
remember once I made a right decision
Last year,I had a chance to join the school basketball
team,but it was hard to decide whether to join or spend more
time on my studies.After thinking carefully,I chose to join.
At first,I spent a lot of time practicing basketball and little
time on homework,but later I learned to manage my time
better.
Now,I have not only improved my basketball skills but
also made new friends.I feel more confident and believe I
made the right decision.This experience taught me that
trying new things can bring great rewards.I'm glad I took the
chance!
主题8人际交往与团队合作
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写
1)You should make friends with a person who has something
in common with you.
2)Thanks to my friend's help,I could overcome difficulties
and become positive.
3)My problem is that I am afraid to communicate with others.
4)Good communication can not only help you get along well
with old friends,but also help you make many new friends.
5)We are always ready to help each other by lending a
(helping)hand.
参考答案