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3)After volunteering,I realized that true feeling of satisfac-
tion comes from helping others.
4)I manage to do extra housework so that my mom wouldn't
be too tired.
5)Sharing housework not only teaches us responsibility and
independence,but also helps us understand how hard our
parents work
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙:一:一般过去
【润色与升格】
We also interviewed some elder people who were familiar
with the past of our hometown.
2To our joy,they all thought highly of the better life now.
3We posted it online so that more people could get to know
the changes in our hometown.
4More importantly,a strong sense of pride for my hometown
filled my heart.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Labor Clubs Make Our Life Colorful
Last week,our school made a survey of the students in
different labor clubs.
Labor-related clubs account for 90%of the school
clubs.Among them,45%of the students choose to join the
paper-cutting club,25%choose the cooking club,and 20%
choose the planting club.I joined the school's planting club
because I think planting is very interesting.Watching flowers
grow and bloom not only gives me a great sense of achieve-
ment but also helps cultivate my sense of responsibility and
improve my physical fitness.Moreover,I can learn relevant
knowledge about plants in this club.
In my opinion,students should join the clubs they like.
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When considering their own preferences,they should also
think about what kind of exercise and improvement the clubs
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can bring.Finally,they should make a comprehensive
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choice according to their own needs.I look forward to seeing
everyone find their favorite club.
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主题7经历与感受
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主题佳句积累
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【句子仿写】
1)I used to depend on my parents,but now I decide to do all
the things by myself/do everything on my own.
2)Nobody likes failure,but we can always learn something
valuable from it.
3)This experience not only helped others but also made me
more confident/gave me more confidence.
4)After losing the race,I came to realize that winning was
never the only path to take.
5)How wonderful and meaningful this experience is!
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般现在;一般过去;一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI knew my parents preferred educational trips such as
museums or historical sites,but I dreamed of something
relaxing after a tiring term of study.
2Filled with warmth,I realized how much they loved me.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I made a right decision
In our lives,each of us has to make thousands of
decisions,and some of them will be hard to forget.I still
remember once I made a right decision.
Last year,I had a chance to join the school basketball
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team,but it was hard to decide whether to join or spend more
time on my studies.After thinking carefully,I chose to join.
At first,I spent a lot of time practicing basketball and little
time on homework,but later I learned to manage my time
better.
Now,I have not only improved my basketball skills but
also made new friends.I feel more confident and believe I
made the right decision.This experience taught me that
trying new things can bring great rewards.I'm glad I took the
chance!
主题8人际交往与团队合作
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)You should make friends with a person who has something
in common with you.
2)Thanks to my friend's help,I could overcome difficulties
and become positive.
3)My problem is that I am afraid to communicate with others.
4)Good communication can not only help you get along well
with old friends,but also help you make many new friends.
5)We are always ready to help each other by lending a
helping)hand.
6)No matter how different our opinions are,we should
respect each other in a team.
7)After arguing with my parents,my teacher patiently told
me how to communicate with them better.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with
better ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know
more about our teammates.
3 Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting
others only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
As long as everyone shows a little love,this world will
be a better place.I still remember that summer afternoon,
when I was going to my teacher's place to take my guitar
lesson,a sudden flash of lightning crashed in the sky.In no
time,the rain started to pour down.The wind was blowing
around while the rain was dropping hard against the ground.
I had to wait in a coffee shop,feeling helpless.
I kept looking at my watch for fear of being late for my
class."I can tell you are in a hurry,"a sweet voice
appeared."Take my umbrella,"the voice continued.I was
more than surprised to see a girl of my age passing her
umbrella to me.Before I could even say "Thank you",she
put the umbrella in my hand and disappeared in the rain.I
didn't realize the true meaning of kindness until that moment.
Kindness can build bridges across distances,and love
has no limits.I've always been ready to help others ever
since.Let's take action and show our love.
主题9志愿服务与公共服务
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I believe everyone can play a part in volunteer activities.
2)We often do some voluntary activities on weekends so that
we can help people in need.
3)By doing volunteer activities,I not only enrich my spare
time,but also learn a lot of life skills.
4)I think volunteers are the most beautiful people who are
worth our respect.
参考答案
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DOne day,I happened to know some students in a rural
school were thirsty for knowledge but they didn't have
enough books.
2With all the pocket money that I saved,I bought some
books online and gave them away to the school.
3I believe that even small actions can make a difference in
people's lives.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Volunteering Makes the World Better
Last weekend,I took part in a meaningful volunteer
activity with my classmates.We went to a nearby nursing
home and helped the elderly clean their rooms,talked with
them and performed songs for them.The smiles on their faces
made us feel warm and proud.
Through this activity,I learned the importance of helping
others.It not only brings joy to those in need but also gives
us a sense of achievement.I became more patient,responsi-
ble and willing to care for others.
I hope more students can join volunteer work.Together,
we can make the world a warmer and better place.
主题10和谐社区与美丽家乡
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)We should not only learn modern technology but also pay
attention to traditional culture.
2)This park is famous for its lake,bridges and the ancient
buildings on the hill.
3)In recent years,China has made great progress in the use
of clean energy.
4)I am proud of China's achievements in science and tech-
nology./I'm proud of the achievements China has made in
science and technology.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
Dit's just a 5-minute walk from the nearest subway station,
making travelling around the city very convenient.
2Nearby,there's a large shopping mall where you can satisfy
all your daily needs.
3What makes our community special is the friendly atmos-
phere.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I'm very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
It's the beauty in my eyes.
My hometown,Hefei,is a city full of charm.When it
comes to the beauty of view,the environment here is quite
pleasant.The sky is often clear,and the air,especially in
the park,is fresh.There are many green spaces like Baohe
Park.The park has a beautiful lake,with willows by the
sides.It's a great place for relaxation.
Besides the nice scenery,what makes Hefei more
attractive is the beauty of people.The neighbors are friendly
and helpful.They often greet each other and are ready to
offer a hand when someone is in need.Volunteers in Hefei
are also active.They work in communities,helping to keep
the city clean,and they also participate in charity activities,
spreading warmth.
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I'm really proud of my hometown.I hope more and more
people can come here to enjoy the beauty of it.
主题11文化自信
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)The traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival
falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year.
2)Mooncakes carry people's wishes to the family they love
and miss.
3)When it comes to table manners,we are supposed to let
the old start eating first.
4)When we eat with other people,it's impolite to point at
others with chopsticks.
5)Lanterns are considered as symbols of happiness and good
wishes.
6)It is said that kites played a very important role in ancient
China.
7)The story reminds us that nothing is impossible as long as
we work hard.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DIt tells lots of exciting stories that happened to the four
main characters during their journey to the west.
2 the four characters always worked together to overcome
plenty of difficulties and fight against bad guys.
3What impresses me most is their spirit of cooperation.
although the four characters experienced lots of troubles,
they never gave up.
5I have no doubt that you'll love it.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Favorite Traditional Chinese Art:Paper-cutting
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When it comes to traditional Chinese arts,I firmly
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believe that paper-cutting is my favorite.
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Paper-cutting is a unique art form with a long history.
Artists use scissors or knives to transform a piece of paper
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into vivid patterns.It covers different themes like flowers,
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animals and stories.I fell in love with it as soon as I first
watched an elderly artist creating a beautiful bird at a fair.It
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attracted me greatly,because it carried deep meanings and
the artist's feelings.
I hope more people around the world can get to know
paper-cutting and appreciate its beauty.Also,I expect that
this art can be passed down and developed in new forms in
the modern world.
主题12网络安全与科技
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)As is known to all,many students are interested in going
online.
2)If you often visit unsafe websites,your personal informa-
tion will be at risk/in danger.
3)It's unbelievable that Al's learning ability is stronger than
we imagined.
4)The progress of science and technology makes great contri-
butions to making our life more convenient.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明:一;三:一般现在:一般将来
【润色与升格】
DThis pen will have a built-in dictionary and translation
function,which allows students to look up words and
参考答案
31主题9志愿服务与公共服务
®主题探究
①假期志愿实践活动
②社区志愿者
③养老院/儿童医院/福利院的志愿活动
介绍志愿服务活动的内容
④爱心义卖
志愿服务与
公共服务
⑤环保活动(清洁公园/海滩等)
志愿服务活动的经历与感受[2021安徽]
⊙主题短语积累
角度1介绍志愿服务活动的内容
13.give a hug to sb..给某人一个拥抱
6.be thankful for sth.对某事心存
1.volunteer to do sth.志愿做某事
14.organize charity events组织慈
感激
2.give out food分发食物
善活动
7.meaningful and important things
3.clean up the city parks清理城市
15.plant trees in the community
有意义且重要的事情
公园
社区植树
8.have a better understanding of
4.help the homeless帮助无家可归
l6.help with traffic safety协助维护
…有更好的理解
的人
交通安全
9.feel good about helping others
5.cheer up the sick kids鼓舞生病
17.help the elderly living alone
帮助别人感觉良好
的孩子
助独居老人
10.develop a sense of responsibility
6.raise money for the disabled为残
18.volunteer at an animal shelter
培养责任感
疾人筹钱
动物收容所做义工
11.learn to be responsible学会承
7.give away赠送
角度2志愿服务活动的经历与感受
担责任
8.old people's home养老院
1.play a role/part in在…中发挥
12.get a sense of achievement
作用
9.put up notices张贴通知
成就感
2.take..seriously认真对待…
10.offer to help主动提供帮助
3.can't wait to do sth.迫不及待做
l3.feel warm inside感觉心里暖暖的
l1.help people in need帮助有需要
某事
l4.bring hope to those in need给需
的人
4.make a difference有影响;起作用
要的人带来希望
l2.help kids learn to read帮助孩
5.come up with some ideas想出一
15.turn kindness into a habit让善
子们学会阅读
些主意
良成为习惯
主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
©角度1介绍志愿服务活动的内容
1.I plan to work as a volunteer in the community so that I can help more
1)我相信每个人都能在志愿活
people who are in need.(①so that引导目的状语从句,强调制定这个
动中发挥作用。[用短语play a
计划的目的;②who引导定语从句,修饰people)
part in仿写]
2.I can do something I love and help others at the same time.
3.Being a volunteer helps to develop our independence and teach us how
to love others.
2)我们常常在周末做一些志愿活
4.I am willing to do voluntary activities that can enrich my knowledge
动来帮助有需要的人。[用so
and broaden my horizon.
that引导的目的状语从句仿写]
5.Let's start from the small things around us and play a part in creating a
better world!
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@角度2志愿服务活动的经历与感受
l.I always worked as a volunteer in an old people's home,such as helping3)通过做志愿活动,我不仅丰富
them clean the rooms and reading newspapers to them.such as/like
了业余时间,还学到了很多生
列举志愿者做的事情)
活技能。[用连词词组not only
2.I sang for the sick children in hospital to cheer them up.
.but also..仿写]
3.As a volunteer in an animal hospital,when I see animals get better and
the look of joy on their keepers'faces,I get a strong feeling of satis-
faction.(①the look of joy喜悦的表情;②get a strong feeling of satis-
faction获得一种强烈的满足感)
4)我认为志愿者是最美的人,值
4.Not only do I feel good about helping others,but I also get to spend
得我们尊敬。[用who引导的定
time doing what I like to do.
语从句仿写]
5.Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky,but we should believe that life is
beautiful and love will always be around us.
6.The most important is that we can make many friends who have the same
interests with us.(who引导定语从句,修饰friends)
回真题剖析
[2021安徽]假定你是李华,曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事
【审题】
并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英语报投稿。
主题:用零花钱做了一件有意
内容包括:
义的事并被家人表扬
1.事情经过
文体:
文
2.个人感悟。
人称:用第
人称;
注意:
时态:讲述事情发展经过用
1.词数80~100;
时;说明个人
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
感悟用
时。
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
要点:
4.短文题目已给出,不计人总词数。
即左侧两点内容;注意:所
参考词汇:pocket money(n.零花钱);meaningful(ad.有意义的)
写事件必须有意义(提升自
Once I Was Praised
我、帮助他人、做公益、服务
社会等)。
写作框架】
开头:点出自己曾用
零花钱做了一件有意
开头句示例:Once I was praised because I made good use of my
义的事(开门见山)
pocket money to do something meaningful.
可参考的经历有:
1.提升自我:买一本有意义的书、学习一项生活技能、参
Once I Was
加某一竞赛挑战自我等:
中间:具体讲述事情
2.帮助他人:给贫困地区的儿童买文具/书籍衣服、帮助孤
Praised
的经过
寡老人等;
3.做公益:为流浪动物买食物、救助流浪动物等;
4.服务社会:购买急救包分发给社区老人、绿化城市等。
结尾:表达自己的感
结尾句示例:I will continue to do what I can to help others
Word bank:small act,every little bit,continue to do sth.
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Once I Was Praised
①用短语“be thirsty for”升格句子:
Once I was praised because I made good use of my pocket
money to do something meaningful.
DOne day,I happened to know some students in a rural
school wanted knowledge but they didn't have enough books.I made
②用with作方式状语前置和hat引导
up my mind to offer my help.2I bought some books online with all
的定语从句升格句子:
my saved pocket money and gave them away to the school.Moreover,
those books I gave away might inspire the students to follow their
dreams and broaden their horizons.When my parents learned
about what I had done,they were delighted and felt proud of me.
③用短语“make a difference'”升格句子:
They said that I did a meaningful thing.(要,点l:事情经过)
3I believe that even small actions can influence people's lives.
I will continue to do what I can to help others..((要,点2:个人感悟)
写作积累:
1.make good/full use of充分利用…
2.happen to do sth.碰巧做某事
3.make up one's mind to do sth.下定决心做某事
4.inspire v.鼓舞,激励
5.broaden one''s horizon拓宽某人的眼界
实战演练
[2025合肥市蜀山区三模]假如你是李辉,上周参加了学校组织的志愿者活动,请你以“Volunteering
Makes the World Better'”为题,向校英文报投稿。
要点如下:
1.活动内容;2.个人收获;3.提出号召。
注意:
1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计人总词数)。
Volunteering Makes the World Better
Last weekend,I took part in a meaningful volunteer activity with my classmates.
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