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3)After volunteering,I realized that true feeling of satisfac-
tion comes from helping others.
4)I manage to do extra housework so that my mom wouldn't
be too tired.
5)Sharing housework not only teaches us responsibility and
independence,but also helps us understand how hard our
parents work.
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙:一:一般过去
【润色与升格】
We also interviewed some elder people who were familiar
with the past of our hometown.
2To our joy,they all thought highly of the better life now.
3We posted it online so that more people could get to know
the changes in our hometown.
4More importantly,a strong sense of pride for my hometown
filled my heart.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Labor Clubs Make Our Life Colorful
Last week,our school made a survey of the students in
different labor clubs.
Labor-related clubs account for 90%of the school
clubs.Among them,45%of the students choose to join the
paper-cutting club,25%choose the cooking club,and 20%
choose the planting club.I joined the school's planting club
because I think planting is very interesting.Watching flowers
grow and bloom not only gives me a great sense of achieve-
ment but also helps cultivate my sense of responsibility and
improve my physical fitness.Moreover,I can learn relevant
knowledge about plants in this club.
In my opinion,students should join the clubs they like.
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When considering their own preferences,they should also
think about what kind of exercise and improvement the clubs
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can bring.Finally,they should make a comprehensive
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choice according to their own needs.I look forward to seeing
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everyone find their favorite club.
主题7经历与感受
进
主题佳句积累
阶
【句子仿写】
1)I used to depend on my parents,but now I decide to do all
the things by myself do everything on my own.
2)Nobody likes failure,but we can always learn something
valuable from it.
3)This experience not only helped others but also made me
more confident/gave me more confidence.
4)After losing the race,I came to realize that winning was
never the only path to take.
5)How wonderful and meaningful this experience is!
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般现在;一般过去;一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI knew my parents preferred educational trips such as
museums or historical sites,but I dreamed of something
relaxing after a tiring term of study
2Filled with warmth,I realized how much they loved me.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I made a right decision
In our lives,each of us has to make thousands of
decisions,and some of them will be hard to forget.I still
remember once I made a right decision.
Last year,I had a chance to join the school basketball
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team,but it was hard to decide whether to join or spend more
time on my studies.After thinking carefully,I chose to join.
At first,I spent a lot of time practicing basketball and little
time on homework,but later I learned to manage my time
better.
Now,I have not only improved my basketball skills but
also made new friends.I feel more confident and believe I
made the right decision.This experience taught me that
trying new things can bring great rewards.I'm glad I took the
chance!
主题8人际交往与团队合作
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)You should make friends with a person who has something
in common with you.
2)Thanks to my friend's help,I could overcome difficulties
and become positive.
3)My problem is that I am afraid to communicate with others.
4)Good communication can not only help you get along well
with old friends,but also help you make many new friends.
5)We are always ready to help each other by lending a
helping)hand.
6)No matter how different our opinions are,we should
respect each other in a team.
7)After arguing with my parents,my teacher patiently told
me how to communicate with them better.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DBy discussing with team members,we can come up with
better ideas.
2There is no doubt that communication can help us know
more about our teammates.
3 Doubting others will only weaken the group./Doubting
others only weakens the group.
实战演练
【高分范文】
As long as everyone shows a little love,this world will
be a better place.I still remember that summer afternoon,
when I was going to my teacher's place to take my guitar
lesson,a sudden flash of lightning crashed in the sky.In no
time,the rain started to pour down.The wind was blowing
around while the rain was dropping hard against the ground.
I had to wait in a coffee shop,feeling helpless.
I kept looking at my watch for fear of being late for my
class."I can tell you are in a hurry,"a sweet voice
appeared."Take my umbrella,"the voice continued.I was
more than surprised to see a girl of my age passing her
umbrella to me.Before I could even say "Thank you",she
put the umbrella in my hand and disappeared in the rain.I
didn't realize the true meaning of kindness until that moment.
Kindness can build bridges across distances,and love
has no limits.I've always been ready to help others ever
since.Let's take action and show our love.
主题9志愿服务与公共服务
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I believe everyone can play a part in volunteer activities.
2)We often do some voluntary activities on weekends so that
we can help people in need.
3)By doing volunteer activities,I not only enrich my spare
time,but also learn a lot of life skills.
4)I think volunteers are the most beautiful people who are
worth our respect
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参考答案主题7经历与感受
®主题探究
①阶段性成长回顾及感受
②生活中所珍惜的事物的经历与感受
③成功/失败的经历与感受
①日常生活中美好或充满爱的
经历与感受
④应对变化的经历与感受
②校园生活中的经历与感受
⑤难忘的运动经历与感受
成长与
经历
生活与
⑥突破自我的经历与感受
自我认知
与感受
情感体验
③自然与出行探索的经历与感受
⑦克服困难、解决问题的经历与感受
④体育运动的经历与感受
⑧实现自我成长与目标的经历与感受
⑨在生活中应对挑战的经历与感受
⊙主题短语积累
角度1成长与自我认知
10.achieve success获得成功
6.practice hard努力练习
1.be afraid of害怕
1l.be worth valuing值得珍惜
7.be deeply touched被深深地感动
2.be in trouble处于困境中
12.an unforgettable experience难忘
8.feeling of satisfaction满足感
3.never give up永不放弃
的经历
g.leave sb.a deep impression留给
4.little by little一,点,点地
角度2生活与情感体验
5.make great efforts努力
某人深刻的印象
1.experience life体验生活
6.try one's best尽某人最大努力
2.go on a trip旅行
l0.be beneficial to.对…有益
7.the key to success成功的关键
3.the beauty of nature自然之美
11.a source of endless happiness
8.overcome countless challenges
4.make a reasonable choice做出合
尽幸福的源泉
服无数的挑战
理的选择
12.simple but precious moments
9.receive high praise获得高度赞扬
5.have fun doing sth.做某事很有趣
单而珍贵的时刻
主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
角度1
成长与自我认知
1.Paula used to be really quiet.[RJ九全U4]
1)我过去常常依赖父母,但现在我
2.When it comes to the topic of "My First Try",I'll never forget the mean-
决定要自己做所有的事情。[用
ingful experience I had in Grade7.(When it comes to..一说到…,可
固定搭配used to do sth.仿写]
用于开头引出话题)
3.Every experience is a learning chance,and we can always learn some-
thing valuable from it.
4.I regarded the competition as a challenge,which was also a good oppor-
tunity to improve my English.
2)没有人喜欢失败,但是我们总
5.Looking back at these past three years,I had a lot of sweet memories.
能从中学到有价值的东西。
6.Last year,I had a really hard time learning English.(have a hard time
[用固定搭配something valuable
doing sth.做某事很困难)
仿写]
7.Last summer holiday,Li Hua had a special experience as a little guide at
Tianjin Science and Technology Museum.
8.The most unforgettable experience in my life happened when I was a
child,but it has stayed with me ever since.
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@角度2生活与情感体验
1.As soon as I got home from school the first day,I happily threw my
3)这段经历不仅帮助了别人,也
schoolbag on the sofa and ate lots of snacks.WYM4]
让我更有信心。[用连词词组
2.This was the day we would get our exam results back,but I didn't
not only..but also..仿写]
answer the exam questions very well last week.[RJ U11]
3.I come to realize that we will never know what we can achieve unless
we try it.[come to realize为动词短语,表示“(突然)意识到”;句中含
有what引导的宾语从句]
4.Playing basketball teaches me the spirit of not giving up and brings me
4)输掉比赛后,我意识到胜利从
happiness.
来不是唯一的路。[用短语
5.This class not only made science interesting but also taught me to appre-
come to realize仿写]
ciate nature's wonders.
6.Like flowers in a garden,happiness comes in all forms-it doesn't look
the same for everyone.
7.The wind was blowing around while the rain was dropping hard against
the ground.
5)这是一次多么美妙且有意义
8.How surprised and excited I was when I was told to get first prize!(
的经历啊![用感叉句仿写]
感叹句描述强烈的情感)
9.It was such an interesting experience that I would never forget it.(such...
that..引导结果状语从句)
@俗语谚语
I.Happiness is everywhere around us.幸福就在我们身边。
2.Labor is the source of all happiness.劳动是幸福的源泉。
3.Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
4.Experience is the best teacher.经验是最好的老师。
5.A fall into a pit,a gain in your wit..吃一堑,长一智。
6.Small actions,big changes.小行动,大改变。
⊙真题剖析
[2025山西]生活中总有很多爱包围着我们,父母的付出,老师的鼓励,
【审题】
朋友的支持,陌生人的帮助…我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语主题:感受爱,学会爱
社团将举行主题为“Feel love,learn to love”的演讲比赛,请用英语写一篇参文体:
文
赛演讲稿。
人称:第
人称
内容包括:
时态:说明你眼中的爱是什
show what love is in your eyes
么用
时,讲
tell one of your stories of being loved
述一个你被爱的故事
share the influence that this story has on you
用
时,分享这
要求:
个故事对你的影响用
1.词数不少于80词;
时或
时
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
要点:
①说明你眼中的爱是什么;
②讲述一个你被爱的故事;
③分享这个故事对你的影响。
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【写作框架】
开头:说明你眼中
开头句示例:Love means different things to different people.
的爱是什么样的
Word bank:support,encouragement,trust,understanding,respect,
in one's view
可参考的经历有:
1.家人:①突发状况(生病时无微不至地照顾、危险中以子女
为先等)
②情绪价值(遇到困难时陪伴和鼓励、面临决策时支
Feellove,
中间:讲述一个你
持和尊重子女意见等)
learn to love
被爱的故事
③教育影响(引导学习新技能、引导塑造正确人生观
或价值观等)
2.老师:成绩不理想时耐心帮助、犯错时严厉指正等
3.朋友:困难时给予帮助、情绪不佳时倾听并给予建议等
4.陌生人:身体不适时帮助呼救或救治、窘迫时无偿帮助等
结尾句示例:This experience taught me that real love means caring
结尾:分享这个故
about others'feelings with your heart.
事对你的影响
Word bank:the importance of love,just as,be grateful for,do the same
for sb.
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Love means different things to different people.For me,love is
①用单词“prefer'”替换“ike”,并用短语
understanding and respect..(要,点l:说明你眼中的爱是什么样的)
“dream of替换“want”升格句子:
I'll never forget last summer's family meeting about our vacation
plans.DI knew my parents liked educational trips such as museums
or historical sites,but I wanted something relaxing after a tiring term
of study.Thinking twice,I said I hoped to go to the beach.To my
surprise,they smiled and agreed with me at once.2I realized how
②用过去分词短语“Filled with warmth”
much they loved me.(要,点2:讲述一个你被爱的故事)
位于句首作状语升格句子,强调感受:
This experience taught me that real love means caring about
others'feelings with your heart.Just as my parents understand me
and respect my choice,I promise I'll do the same for them.
3:分享这个故事对你的影响)
写作积累:
l.think twice思虑再三
2.to one's surprise令某人惊讶的是3.do the same for sb.为某人做同样的事
马实战演练
[2025合肥市蜀山区一模]你校英文报正在举行以“I made a right decision”为主题的征文比赛活动。请
用英语写一篇短文参赛。内容包括:
1.事情经过;2.你的感受。
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
I made a right decision
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