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主题5自我提升与职业规划
®主题探究
①介绍自己的基本信息(外貌特征、性格特点)
自我认识
②介绍自己的兴趣爱好与特长[2020安徽】
①成长与变化(克服性格弱点,变得自信等)
自我提升与
职业规划
自我提升
②如何成为更好的自己
①选择的职业梦想以及原因(自身因素、身边人
的因素、名人的影响)
职业规划
②实现职业梦想的方法
©主题短语积累
角度1自我认识
角度2自我提升
20.learn some life skills学习一些
(1)介绍自己的基本信息
(1)成长与变化
生活技能
1.at the age of..在…岁的时候
1.used to do过去常常
21.take on new challenges迎接新
2.take after(外表、举止、性格)像
2.in the past(three years)在过去
挑战
3.be of medium height/build中等
(的三年里)
22.be brave to face challenges勇于
身高/身材
3.be poor at sth.=be weak in sth.
面对挑战
4.be patient with对…有耐心
不擅长某事
23.make detailed plans制定详细的
5.be friendly/kind/nice to对…
4.be afraid of doing sth.害怕做某事
计划
友好
5.with the help of with one's help
24.put one's heart into sth.全神贯
6.try/do one's best to do sth.尽某
在…的帮助下
注于某事
人最大努力做某事
角度3职业规划
6.make progress取得进步
7.be responsible for对…负责
(1)选择的职业梦想以及原因
(2)如何成为更好的自己
8.get on/along well with others
1.dream of being a doctor想要成为
7.be strict with sb.对某人严格
别人相处融洽
一名医生
8.keep a promise/keep promises
9.be optimistic/positive about
2.achieve/realize one's dream
守承诺
…乐观
make one's dream come true
9.have courage to face sb./sth.
现某人的梦想
(2)介绍自己的兴趣爱好与特长
勇气面对某人/某事
3.succeed in doing sth.=manage to
10.like...a lot =be crazy about =a big
10.overcome the trouble/one's fear
do sth.成功做/设法做某事
fan of=be fond of=be passionate
克服困难/恐惧
4.have an effect on/make a differ-
about非常喜欢/热爱…
11.face...with courage face ..
ence to对…有影响
11.be interested in=have a strong
bravely勇敢面对…
(2)实现职业梦想的方法
interest in对…感兴趣
12.keep away from远离
5.take acting lessons上表演课
l2.take up a hobby开始一个爱好
l3.get well prepared for为…做
6.keep on doing sth.=stick to doing
13.be good at/do well in...=be skilled
好准备
sth.坚持做某事
in/at=have a good command of
l4.listen carefully to认真听…
7.have to do with与…有关
通…对…掌握熟练
15.make up one's mind to do sth.
8.work hard努力学习
14.play the piano弹钢琴
be determined to do sth.下定决
9.stick to one's dream=hold on to
l5.collect stamps收集邮票
心做某事
one's dream坚持梦想
16.have rich experience in/be expe-
rienced in在…方面有丰富
16.improve oneself提升自己
10.give up放弃
11.fight for为…而奋斗
的经验
17.enrich one's knowledge充实某
12.go all out全力以赴
l7.be talented in在…方面有
人的学识
l3.try one's best to do sth.尽某人
天赋
18.open one's eyes/broaden one's
最大努力做某事
l8.have the ability to do sth.有能
horizon拓宽某人的眼界
14.spare no effort to do sth.不遗余
力做某事
19.take part in voluntary activities
力做某事
19.apply for申请
参加志愿服务活动
l5.be admitted into/to被…录取
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安徽英语(RJ)
主题写作进阶
。主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
@角度1自我认识
1.I'm kind and I'm always ready to help others.[WY t M2]
1)我朋友的话让我意识到,我也
2.I'm quieter and more serious than most kids in my class.That's why I
可以是某人的榜样。[用that
like reading books and study harder in class.[RJAE U3]
引导宾语从句仿写]
3.I have already learnt that I am what I am.[WY新教材八上Ul]
4.Everyone has something special and different-that is what's interesting.
[WY新教材八上U1]
2)我的沟通能力非常强,因此能够
5.I'm such an outgoing boy that it's easy for me to communicate with
轻松地结交新朋友。[用such.
others..(such..that..引导结果状语从句)
that.引导结果状语从句仿写]
6.I'm not the top student,but helping classmates makes me feel like a
superhero..(动名词短语作主语,强调“帮助同学”对“我”的影响)
@角度2自我提升
(1)成长与变化
3)我过去在课堂上很害羞,但现在
1.She isn't shy anymore and dares to sing in front of crowds.[RJ U4
我已经鼓起勇气分享我的想法。
2.I didn't use to be popular in school,but now I get tons of attention
[用结构used to do sth.仿写]
everywhere I go.[RJ九全U4]
3.Many times I thought about giving up,but I fought on.[RJU4]
4.I've learned that every challenge is a hidden gift,and the more I face
difficulties,the stronger I grow inside.
4)我们越勇敢面对挑战,我们就
(2)如何成为更好的自己
会变得越自信。[用the+比较
5.The earlier kids learn to be independent,the better it is for their
级,he+比较级仿写]
future.[RJ八下U3]
6.The spirit of these climbers shows us that we should never give up trying
to achieve our dreams.[RU八下U7]
7.Never let your age hold you back.Have a try and try harder.WY
材八上U11
5)为了提高我的英语口语技能,
8.To improve myself,I plan to spend one hour a day in reading the books
我每天都和同学练习对话。
I'm interested in..(动词不定式前置作目的状语)
[用动词不定式作目的状语仿写]
9.When facing challenges in life,I always choose to deal with them bravely
instead of staying behind.
10.In fact,it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the
time.(Itis+被强调部分+that强调句型)
@角度3职业规划
(1)选择的职业梦想以及原因
6)钱学森的故事让我下定决心
1.It's of great importance for us to make up our minds to achieve our
成为一名科学家。[用短语
dreams.
make up one's mind仿写]
2.I like talking to people and asking questions,so I want to be a journalist
when I grow up.(so引导结果状语从句)
3.I dream of being a good teacher who teaches kids not only knowledge
but also the truth in life.
7)当我长大后,我想成为一个能
4.More and more young people wish to return to their hometowns and con-
拯救很多人的好医生。[用
tribute to their hometowns'development after graduation.(contribute to
who引导的定语从句仿写]
贡献,促成,有助于)
5.Huang Xuhua's spirit encourages me to pursue my dreams and contribute
to our country's future.(高级词汇:pursue v.追求,致力于)
安徽英语(RJ)主题写作进阶
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(2)实现职业梦想的方法
8)我竭尽全力学好科学,以便能
6.Every time I fall down,I'll get up and try again.[WY M3]
成为一名优秀的科学家。[用
7.I also learn from Su Bingtian that great men never give up,no matter
make every effort to do sth.仿写]
what difficulties they face.[WY九上M3]
8.I will make every effort to discover the value of traditional Chinese
9)如果你想实现自己的梦想,你
medicine and make it more popular in the world.(make every effort to do
就得一直努力奋斗。[用f引
sth.竭尽全力做某事)
导的条件状语从句仿写]
9.I strongly believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into
t.(f引导条件状语从句,描写实现梦想的途径)
@俗语谚语
1.Hard work pays off..天道酬勤o
2.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
3.It's never too old to learn.活到老,学到老。
4.Actions speak louder than words.事实胜于雄辩。
5.Rome was not built in a day..罗马不是一日建成的。
6.Where there is a wil,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。
⊙真题剖析
[2020安徽]假定你是李华。某英语报“My Hometown'”专栏面向中学生
【审题】
招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。
主题:自荐成为“My Home-
要点如下:
towm”专栏小记者
1.熟悉家乡;
文体:
文
2.乐于交流;
人称:第
人称
3.擅长英语。
时态:用
时
注意:
要点:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
已明确给出三个要点,注意
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
衔接词的合理使用
4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:journalist(n.记者);column(n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作框架】
开头句示例:I am excited to learn that your newspaper is
开头:向报社自
seeking journalists for the column My Hometown.I hope to
荐(点明主题)
be a member of the team.
Word bank:hear,seek,be a member of,recommend
中间:自荐理由
自荐成为小记者
(熟悉家乡;乐于
Word bank:have a deep understanding of,work as,be
交流;擅长英语)
willing to,communicate with,be skillful at
结尾句示例:I would appreciate it if I were lucky enough to
结尾:表达期望
get this chance.
Word bank:get this chance,be granted this opportunity
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安徽英语(RJ)
主题写作进阶
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Dear Sir/Madam,
①用短语“such as'”合并两个句子:
I am excited to learn that your newspaper is seeking journalists
for the column My Hometown.I hope to be a member of the team.
First,DI have a deep understanding of my hometown.It is a
②用结构“be willing to do sth.”升格
city with a long history and rich culture.In addition,I used to work
句子:
as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job.
I am always an easy-going person who likes to communicate with
③用短语“have a good knowledge of''和
others.This quality enables me to build good relationships with the
“be skillful at”升格句子:
people I interview and gather valuable information.Moreover,3I'm
good at English and I do well in expressing myself clearly in Eng
1ish.(要,点1、2和3:自荐理由〈熟悉家乡;乐于交流;擅长英语〉)
④用定语从句将两句话合并为一句,升
4You're looking for someone.I'm sure to be the right person.I
格句子:
would appreciate it if I were lucky enough to get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累:
l.be/feel excited to do sth.对做某事感到很兴奋2.have a deep understanding of对…有深刻的认识/理解
3.in addition此外
4.enable sb.to do sth.使某人能够做某事
5.moreover ad.此外,而且
6.do well in doing sth.擅长做某事
7.appreciate.感激,感谢
实战演练
作为一名中学生,你平时遇到问题时是如何解决的?你认为自己有解决问题的能力吗?学校英语俱乐部
正在开展以“Face Your Problems”为题的征文活动,请你根据提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
action(s)you
advice to
one problem
cause(s)of
took to
younger
you had
the problem
solve it
students
注意:
1.短文须包含流程图中的内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(短文的标题已为你写好,不计人总词数)。
Face Your Problems
安徽英语(RJ)主题写作进阶
27真题剖析
【审题】
说明;一;一般过去;一般现在;现在完成;一般将来
【润色与升格】
DThe purpose of the activity was to draw our attention to fire
safety and improve our ability to deal with emergencies.
2As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire,we are
expected to press down on the handle until we put out the
fire.
3I will keep these valuable lessons in mind and share them
with my family and friends.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Mike,
How are you?I'm glad to hear that you're interested in
the anti-bullying talk at my school last week.Let me share
more details with you.
The talk aimed to help students understand what bullying
is and how to deal with it.It took place on Friday afternoon in
the school hall,and all the students and teachers attended.
The speaker explained the harmful effects of bullying,such
as making people feel sad,scared,or even hopeless.She
also shared practical ways to stop bullying,like asking for
help from teachers or friends.Her stories about helping
bullied students were very touching and inspiring.
After listening to the talk,I realized how important it is
to stand up against bullying and support others.I also learned
that being kind and respectful can make our school a happier
and safer place for everyone.
I hope this gives you a clear picture of the talk.I'd love
to know about your thoughts on this topic.Write back soon!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hui
主题4学习方法与策略
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)This story is so moving that it has attracted thousands of
readers.
2)Books are one of the greatest/best friends that can stay
with us forever.
3)The more books you read,the richer knowledge you will
have.
4)You'll gain much as long as you read books with a thinking
mind.
5)It is a helpful habit to record math mistakes in a notebook.
6)The most effective way to learn English well is to use
English as often as possible.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明:一、三:一般现在
【润色与升格】
DHowever,I think if we truly want to read,we can always
find time.
2Also,always carrying a book makes it convenient to read.
3It creates our own reading plans,records our reading time
and reminds us about our reading tasks.
Let's swim together in the ocean of reading.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Learning for practice
It's important for us teenagers to put what we've learnt
into practice in daily life.In our everyday life,our parents
prepare everything for us.Sometimes we don't know how to
look after ourselves or solve problems around us.I'm facing
安徽英语(RJ
the same problem.
This term,we have a new subject-labor course.I
learn how to grow vegetables and do some chores through this
course.On my mother's birthday,I cooked a bowl of noodles
for my mother to show my love.Though it tasted a little
terrible,my mother felt very happy.Now,I can help my
parents do some housework,such as washing the dishes and
sweeping the floor.
I am happy that I can put what I've learnt into practice
in daily life.
主题5自我提升与职业规划
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)My friend's words made me realize that I can also be
someone's role model.
2)I have such strong communication skills that I can make
new friends easily.
3)I used to be shy in class,but now I have developed the
courage to share my ideas.
4)The braver we face challenges,the more confident
we become.
5)To improve my spoken English skills,I practice making
dialogues with my classmates every day.
6)The story of Qian Xuesen made me make up my mind to
become a scientist.
7)When I grow up,I want to be a good doctor who can save
many people.
8)I make every effort to study science well so that I can
become an excellent scientist.
9)If you want to realize your dream/make your dream come
true,you must keep working hard.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用;一;一般现在
主
【润色与升格】
DI have a deep understanding of my hometown,such as its
题
long history and rich culture.
写
2I am an easy-going person who is always willing to commu-
作
nicate with others.
3I have a good knowledge of English,and I'm skillful at
进
expressing myself clearly in English.
阶
4I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Face Your Problems
Everyone has problems in life.I once had a problem
with my math.I found it very difficult to understand the
teacher in class and my grades were poor.
The cause of the problem was that I didn't pay enough
attention in class and didn't do enough practice after class.
To solve it,I decided to change my study habits.I started to
listen carefully in class,take notes,and ask questions when
I didn't understand.After class,I did a lot of exercises and
reviewed the knowledge regularly.I also asked my teacher
and classmates for help when I needed it.
Remember,every problem is an opportunity to learn
and grow.With the right attitude and actions,we can over-
come any difficulty.
主题6劳动实践与劳动品质
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)Labor education plays an important role in teenagers'
development.
2)A day trip to the farm is of great value as it helps us
understand where food comes from
参考答案
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