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技巧三
写作时需先构思要点,接着将英语要点转化为
简单句,最后将简单句变成复合句,使表达更加完
整、具体。在将简单句转化为复合句时,可以用以下
几种方法扩写:
方法少扩写原因
用来表示原因的词有:because,since,as,for等
例:l.We are proud of our city..
-We are proud of our city because it's a beauti-
ful city with a long history.
2.I was praised.
>I was praised,for I did something meaningful
with my pocket money.
【学以致用】
1.I like the library very much..(扩写喜欢图书馆的原因)
2.Be careful with the electricity and fire.(扩写小心水
和电的原因)
方法2扩写事例
用来列举具体事例的词汇、短语或句型有:such
as,for example,Let's take...as an example.
3.Good learners know the best way they can study
->Good learners know the best way they can study
For example,they can take notes by writing
down key words or drawing mind maps.
4.We should do exercise at least one hour a day
-We should do exercise at least one hour a day,
such as running or walking.
【学以致用】
3.Family members should share happiness and worries.
(扩写家庭成员分享喜忧的事例)
4.He is very polite.(扩写很礼貌的事例)
方法3>扩写条件
用来表示条件的词汇或短语有:f,unless,as
long as等
5.Zongzi will give my parents a pleasant surprise.
>If I bring home the zongzi made by myself,it'll
give my parents a pleasant surprise.
6.Dreams won't come true.
->Dreams won't come true unless we work hard for
them.
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安徽英语(RJ)
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【学以致用】
5.Try my best to help animals.(扩写尽力帮助动物的
条件)
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6.We won't grow up.(扩写会长大的条件)
方法4扩写结果或目的
用来表示结果的词汇或短语有:so(that),to,
therefore,as a result
用来表示目的的短语有:so that,.in order that/to等
例:7.You should take part in sports..
-You should take part in sports in order to keep
healthy.
8.Modern medicine is developing fast.
-Modern medicine is developing fast.As a
result,many diseases can be prevented and cured.
【学以致用】
7.Learn to praise the people around us.(扩写夸奖周
围人的目的)
8.We can discuss in groups freely.(扩写小组自由讨
论的结果)
方法5扩写感受或想法
用来表示感受或想法的词汇、短语或句型有:in
my opinion,from my point of view,as for me,I think
.,I hope..等
例:9.A show about paper-cutting will be put on.
A show about paper-cutting will be put on.As
for me,it's a chance for us to learn more about
traditional Chinese culture.
10.This is my holiday plan.
This is my holiday plan.I hope I can spend
an enjoyable and safe holiday.
【学以致用】
9.I'm going to graduate soon.(扩写快要毕业的感受)
10.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.
(扩写对使用手机或电脑的坏处的看法)
主题写作进阶
技巧四
类别逻辑关系类
恰当地运用连接词把词与词、短语与短语、句与
句之间连接起来,可以使语言表达更加准确、流畅。
现将常用连接词总结如下:
▲表示并列或选择关系:and,both.…and.,not only
.but(also)..,either..or.,as well as等。
Reading is interesting.Reading can make me get
more knowledge.
->Reading is not only interesting but also can
make me get more knowledge.
【学以致用】
1.Tea is good for our health.Tea is a key part of
Chinese culture..(用not only.but also..合并句子)
▲表示转折关系:but,while,however等。
Love can be expressed through gifts,family dinners
and phone calls.None is better than going back
home and spending time with our families.
->Love can be expressed through gifts,family din-
ners and phone calls.However,none is better than
going back home and spending time with our fami-
lies.
【学以致用】
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs Liu still remembers me.I
want to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
(用but合并句子)
▲表示因果关系:so,therefore,as a result,thanks to,
because of,because等。
When I was in trouble,I asked my classmates or
friends for help.We were at the same age and we
could understand each other easily.
-When I was in trouble,I asked my classmates or
friends for help because we were at the same age
and we could understand each other easily.
【学以致用】
3.She made every effort to study.She got a high score
in the final exam.(用because合并句子)
▲表示条件或让步:if,unless,as long as,even if/even
though,though/although等。
We have too much stress.We can't sleep at night
and we may feel too tired.
安徽英语(RJ)
巧用衔接词
-If we have too much stress,we can't sleep at
night and we may feel too tired.
【学以致用】
4.My father is very busy.He always gives me a hand when
I am in trouble.(用though/although合并句子)
▲表示目的或结果:so that,.so.that..等。
I will keep practicing drawing.I can go to an art
college.
I will keep practicing drawing so that I can go to
an art college.
【学以致用】
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades.I can go to
college to get a good education.(用so that合并句子)
类别二框架搭建类
行文连贯是衡量书面表达水平的重要标准之
一。《2022英语课程标准》对三级写作的要求是“在
口头和书面表达中使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻
辑关系,连接信息,做到意义连贯”,如何做到行文连
贯呢?我们可以恰当使用连接词或短语,使全文条
理清楚、结构紧凑。
▲引出下文:first/firstly,to begin/'start with,at first,
first of all,above all等。
People can do much to protect the environment.To
start with,turn off the lights when leaving the room.
▲引出自己的观点:I think.,in my opinion,as far
as I am concerned,as for me,in my opinion等。
As far as I'm concerned,reading English aloud
every day is the best way to improve speaking skills.
▲承接上文:second/secondly,third/hirdly,then/
next,also,after this/after that,besides/what's
more/in addition等。
To fit in the new class,you can follow my tips.
Firstly,be active to communicate with others
sincerely.Secondly,find out someone who shares
the same interest with you.
▲结束话题:finally,lastly,last but not least等。
Finally,if you follow my suggestions above,you
will realize your dream in no time at all.
▲总结话题:in short,.in a word,generally speaking,
in conclusion,on the whole,all in all等。
In a word,communication is really important in
making friends.
主题写作进阶
7第7组
1.describe 2.sand 3.rapid 4.remains 5.result
第九周
第1组
1.balance 2.cancelled/canceled 3.safe 4.speech
5.waste
第2组
1.period 2.cool 3.post 4.goals 5.warm
第3组
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第一部分
技巧二巧用高分句式
【学以致用】
1.It is important for teenagers to develop/form good learning
habits.
2.It is necessary for us to help our parents with housework.
3.It is important for students to be polite in class.
4.I believe it meaningful to save water in daily life.
5.You'll find it helpful to ask teachers for advice.
6.There is no need to change your personality to please others.
7.There is no need to hide your true feelings from close
friends.
8.No matter who helps you,remember to say thanks./Who-
ever helps you,remember to say thanks.
9.No matter how small the thing is,you should take it seri-
ously./However small the thing is,you should take it seri-
ously.
10.No matter when I feel down,I can always find hope in
books./Whenever I feel down,I can always find hope in
books.
11.Everyone can play an important role in protecting the
environment.
12.Nowadays,technology plays an important role in our daily
life.
13.Our attitude plays an important role in working out/solving
the problems.
14.There's no doubt that learning a new language takes time
and effort.
15.There's no doubt that participating in sports can build
teamwork skills.
16.How important it is to make a plan for the coming new
year!
17.What an unforgettable experience I had during the trip to
Anhui!
18.How useful the English learning app is!/What a useful
English learning app it is!
19.The process of learning is as important for brain develop-
ment as breathing.
20.The earlier kids learn to be independent,the better it is
for their future.
21.I have become more and more confident because I have
made more friends.
22.With the development of the network technology,the
world seems to be becoming smaller and smaller.
23.School is a good/great/wonderful place for learning not
only knowledge but also life skills.
24.Volunteering is not only a chance to help others but also a
good/great way to develop ourselves.
25.She has such a strong will that she never gives up easily.
26.The technology has developed so rapidly that our lives
have changed a lot.
安徽英语(RJ
1.pain 2.awful 3.special 4.survive 5.store
第4组
1.improve 2.methods 3.fear 4.bridge 5.angry
第5组
1.wrote 2.ability 3.history 4.hide 5.key
第6组
1.promises 2.quite 3.aim 4.hold 5.nice
第7组
1.larger 2.reminds 3.move 4.lie 5.wise
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技巧篇
27.I'm so proud of our traditional culture that I can't forget
its value./I am too proud of our traditional culture to
forget its value.
28.Reading good books is one of the most useful/beneficial
habits that can broaden/open up our minds.
29.It is high time that we volunteered to clean up the com-
munity to make it more beautiful.
30.It is high time that I learned to be independent and do
some housework by myself.
31.It was my father who taught me the importance of honesty
in daily life.
32.It was teamwork that helped us win the basketball match.
33.Nothing is more important than to respect each other's
differences in friendship.
34.Nothing is more important than to understand and support
each other in the family.
35.The best way to reduce stress is to listen to music and
take proper rest.
36.The best way to learn a new skill is to practice it step by
step.
37.We should do what we can to develop/form good study
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habits.
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38.We need to do what we can to save water in our daily life.
39.Learning from mistakes helps us grow quickly.
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40.Trying again and again makes us stronger and stronger.
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41.Keeping a diary can improve our writing skills.
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42.Good books make children interested in reading.
43.Kind acts make the community a friendlier and warmer
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home.
44.This is the reason why we must follow the school rules.
45.The reason why we do housework at home is that it can
help our parents and make us more independent.
46.Only through practice can we improve our skills./Only by
practicing can we improve our skills.
47.Only by getting enough sleep can we keep our mind clear
during the day.
48.To improve my teamwork skills,I take an active part in
group projects at school.
49.To protect the environment,we should reduce the use of
plastic products.
50.To keep/stay healthy,we should eat more fruit and
vegetables and do more exercise.
技巧三扩写句子
【学以致用】
1.I like the library very much because there are different
kinds of books.
2.Be careful with the electricity and fire,for they may cause
terrible accidents.
3.Family members should share happiness and worries.For
example,when they feel sad,we should try to make them
happy.
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4.He is very polite.For example,he always greets others first.
5.If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer,I will try
my best to help animals.
6.We won't grow up unless we face difficulties bravely.
7.Leamn to praise the people around us in order to develop
good relationships with them.
8.We can discuss in groups freely.Therefore/As a result,
we can learn how to communicate and learn from each other.
9.I'm going to graduate soon.I can't believe how fast time
has gone!
10.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.I
think the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
第二部分
主题1人物介绍
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)Mr Wang promised that as long as the students tried/did
their best,he would help them.
2)Li Jun is a kind boy who is always willing to help those in
trouble.
3)To help children in need,Sarah volunteers at the children's
hospital every week.
4)There are many scientists who made great contributions to
our country.
5)We should be grateful to those who have helped us.
6)Teachers are regarded as one of the greatest jobs,because
they have a great influence on students.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用;一;三;一般现在
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【润色与升格】
I hope to find a girl partner because girls usually have soft
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voices,which can express the warm feeling of this song.
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2Also,to practice smoothly,it's better if she is familiar
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with the song.
3Staying positive will be helpful for us to overcome any
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difficulties in preparation.
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实战演练
【高分范文】
My Mother Raised Me Up
In the journey of my growth,it was my mother who truly
raised me up.Once,when I struggled with math and felt like
giving up,she sat beside me patiently,guiding me through
each problem.Her support and belief in my learning ability
lit up a tiny light within me.
This experience taught me the power of love and never
giving up.It made me realize that challenges are chances for
growth.With my mother's encouragement,I learned to face
difficulties bravely,turning difficulties into stepping stones.
Her love and trust became my power,encouraging me to
become a more confident and determined person.
Through this journey,I grew stronger and wiser,under-
standing that the love and support from family are the tiny
lights that light up our path in life.
主题2多彩、有意义的学校生活
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)The school library provides us with a variety of educational
books.
2)To make students'free time more colorful,the school
organizes many activities
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安徽英语(RJ
技巧四巧用衔接词
【学以致用】
1.Tea is not only good for our health,but also a key part of
Chinese culture.
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs Liu still remembers me,but I
want to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
3.She got a high score in the final exam because she made
every effort to study.
4.Though/Although my father is very busy,he always gives
me a hand when I am in trouble.
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go
to college to get a good education.
主题篇
3)There are various fun activities during breaks,like playing
basketball and running.
4)This reading competition aims to encourage students to
develop the good habit of reading every day.
5)Taking part in sports activities not only strengthens my
body but also relaxes my mind.
6)We should thank our teachers who always help us with our
studies.
7)I hope you can make the best use of chances to make
progress well
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
DThe story that happened last Friday left a deep impression
on me.
2It was a bright morning on the school sports ground filled
with cheers.
3I realized that it's truly meaningful to give up a small
personal honor to help someone in need.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm a huge fan of our school's English newspaper!I'd
like to suggest organizing a "Fun Zumba Break"during the
Sunshine Sports Break.
Zumba is a mix of dance and exercise,which is not only
fun but also great for fitness.Many students sit for long hours
in class,so this activity would help us relax,improve coordi-
nation,and stay healthy.Plus,lively music would make
everyone more energetic!
I hope our school can create a healthier and happier
campus life.With more enjoyable activities like this,we'll
all look forward to breaks even more!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hui
主题3身心健康,抗挫能力,珍爱生命的意识
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)It's very important for our health to have good sleeping
habits.
2)Don't eat fast food too often because it is harmful to our
health.
3)Facing difficult situations bravely can not only make us
stronger,but also help us grow into wiser people.
4)As students,we must always keep traffic rules in mind
and follow them strictly.
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