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高考英语【读后续写】高考真题汇编(题目+参考答案解析 )
目录
2025年
1.2025年全国Ⅰ卷(人与社会、人与自我)
2.2025年全国II卷(人与社会、人与自我)
3. 2025年1月八省联考卷(人与社会、人与自我)
4. 2025年1月浙江卷(人与社会、人与自我)
2024年
5. 2024年新课标I&II卷(人与社会)
6. 2024年1月九省联考卷(人与自然)
7. 2024年1月浙江卷(人与自我)
2023年
8. 2023年新课标I&II卷(人与自我)
9. 2023年2月四省联考(人与自然)
10. 2023年1月浙江卷(人与自然)
2022年
11. 2022年新高考I&II卷(人与社会)
12. 2022年6月浙江卷(人与自然)
13. 2022年1月浙江卷(人与社会)
2025年全国Ⅰ卷---1.2025年全国Ⅰ卷(人与社会、人与自我)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn't counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50 - pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six - month - old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn't heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: "Not a chance." Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he'll get over it, I reasoned.
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience(良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty - five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I realized it was me who was at fault._______________________________________________________________________________
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2025年全国Ⅱ卷---2.2025年全国II卷(人与社会、人与自我)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“What is your name? ” is a question most frequently asked when people meet for the first time. But for me, it was the first challenge I encountered as an international student in Ireland.
The pronunciation system of the Chinese language is quite different from that of English. For native speakers of English, some Chinese words are rather difficult to pronounce. My given name Qiuyu(秋雨), for instance, happened to be a great challenge for many of them. Every time I gave a self-introduction, I had to explain how to pronounce my name at least five times, yet they still could not say it the way I did.
Once in a lecture, the professor tried repeating my name after me over and over in front of thirty classmates. I really did not know whether I should continue correcting him or simply drop the matter. I feared that my classmates might grow tired of my efforts or even lose patience with me. After all, I did care about how others would think of me. I realized that if I didn't stop, the entire lecture would be ruined. “It's okay, professor,” I shrugged (耸肩). The awkward moment ended with the class erupting into laughter. I forced a smile, unsure how to respond further.
After that incident, I stopped acting as a “Chinese teacher. ” Instead of correcting others when they were struggling to pronounce my name, I just smiled and nodded approvingly. This approach spared me the discomfort of having to over-explain. However, I soon found that by doing so, I might be losing something more important: the opportunity to share a small part of my cultural identity.
注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. ________________________________________
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2025年1月八省联考-- 3. 2025年1月八省联考卷(人与社会、人与自我)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the area around the hotel didn't seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on, but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers-very big, tough-looking bikers.
I've known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men-all wearing insignia(徽章) that indicated they were in some sort of club- standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event?
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. ________________________________
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(2025年1月浙江卷)--4. 2025年1月浙江卷(人与社会、人与自我)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there! You must leave right now!” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth?” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.___________________________________________
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(2024年新课标I&II卷)--5. 2024年新课标I&II卷(人与社会)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going , but he said he hadn't heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long queue still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. "'We made it, "he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message:"Out of order. Sorry."
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. _____________________________________________________________
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(2024年1月九省联考卷)--6. 2024年1月九省联考卷(人与自然)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear(水下呼吸器)and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn't surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.
During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter (过滤) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there? Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya's path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb(梳子) in her mouth waiting for her treat.
“Maya! Where did you get that?” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What's all this?” Katherine asked, obviously confused.
“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.__________________________________________________________
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(2024年1月浙江卷)--7. 2024年1月浙江卷(人与自我)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eva spent the first week of high school trying to keep her head above water. One of the major headaches for her was finding her way in the huge school building. It was a six-story building. On each floor, hallways stretched in four directions, leading to classrooms, laboratories, and teachers’ offices. Somewhere in the building, there was also a library, a cafeteria, and a gym.
Having a poor sense of direction, Eva found it impossible to get around in such a huge building. All the different hallways and rooms were too much to think about, let alone commit to memory. She decided that she would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn’t exist.
In her fast P.E. class, Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside. She searched the faces of her classmates for signs of panic. There was nothing she feared more than having to run a whole mile. To Eva, “a mile” was used to describe long distances. It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather’s, and that always seemed like a long way, even in a car!
When Coach Pitt blew his whistle (哨子), Eva figured she would be left in the dust. However, while some of her classmates edged ahead, others actually fell behind. “It’s just the beginning,” she thought. “I’ll come in last for sure.”
Soon Eva began to breathe hard, with her heart pounding and legs shaking. Feeling desperate, Eva started using a mind wick on herself. She stopped thinking about the word “mile.” Instead, she focused on reaching the shadow east on the track by an oak tree up ahead. Then she concentrated on jogging to the spot where the track curved (拐弯). After that, she tried to see if she could complete her first lap. One lap turned into two, then three, then four.
When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!” to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised.________________________
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(2023年新课标I&II卷) --8. 2023年新课标I&II卷(人与自我)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest, I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If you’re willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
I chose Paul Revere’s horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith(银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse’s mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny, and unlikely to be anyone else’s choice.
What did the horse think as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere’s horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.
When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud and said, “Great. Now, write it again.”
I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn’t win, I wouldn’t care.
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.______________________________
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I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.______________________________________________
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(2023年2月四省联考)--9. 2023年2月四省联考(人与自然)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait—and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother—we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order. More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels._________________________________________
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(2023年1月浙江卷) --10. 2023年1月浙江卷(人与自然)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
During the cookout, I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said, “She must have come to say goodbye.”
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. __________________________________________________________________
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(2022年新高考I&II卷) --11. 2022年新高考I&II卷(人与社会)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route (路线) through thick evergreen forest.
I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn’t with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run.
What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!
I quickly searched the crowd for the school’s coach and asked him what had happened. “I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him,” he explained uncomfortably. “I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide.”
I bit back my frustration (懊恼). I knew the coach meant well—he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.
David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why some of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer—that’s all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. __________________________________________
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(2022年6月浙江卷)--12. 2022年6月浙江卷(人与自然)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I needed to do something in my community in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do.
I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn't until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner.
As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I'd come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous. I didn't have too much time to worry about it. I was assigned to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she'd be right there, which I found quite comforting.
I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had tally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn't have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.
As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.___________________________________
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I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way._____________________________________________
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(2022年1月浙江卷)--13. 2022年1月浙江卷(人与社会)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Dr. Henderson was assigning (指定) project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped that he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldn’t assign me to work with the fiercely competitive and extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate (命运) would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.
I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself. He looked at me as though I weren’t there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasn’t mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression that he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.
Needless to say, I didn’t look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didn’t say anything for fear that I would make things worse.
The project required each team to develop a hypothesis (假说), set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.
When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades — the exact opposite of me. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didn’t want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what.
After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasn’t sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.
We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.__________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
1.2025年全国Ⅰ卷(人与社会、人与自我)
题目解析:
核心矛盾: 故事的核心冲突是“我”为了照顾小孩和室内环境,要求哥哥把狗托比留在屋外,导致哥哥带着狗提前离开,进而引发哥哥的强烈不满(“Not a chance”),甚至长达两个月的冷战。
情感转折点: 续写开头句 I realized it was me who was at fault. 是解题的关键。这标志着“我”的心理从之前的“他会想通的”(He'll get over it)转变为深刻的自责和内疚。
关键信息: 续写必须回应文中提供的关键背景信息:
1) 哥哥面临健康问题。
2) 哥哥结婚35岁的妻子几个月前刚去世。
3) 托比是哥哥唯一的、时刻陪伴的伙伴(constant companion),是他活下去的精神支柱(kept him going)。
续写任务:
1) 开门瞬间的互动: 哥哥的反应(表情、动作、语言)。
2) 托比的出现: 狗的反应非常重要,它是矛盾的导火索,也可以是破冰的桥梁。
3) 情感交流: 如何表达歉意,哥哥如何接受(或刚开始不接受但最终软化)。核心是化解矛盾,达成和解。
4) 结局: 需要有一个温暖、积极的收尾,体现亲情修复。
情节构思:
第一段:
紧接 I realized it was me who was at fault. 详细描写“我”意识到错误后的内心活动、感受以及决定采取行动的原因。重点是基于哥哥的悲惨处境(丧妻、健康不佳、依赖托比)来深化自责和内疚,并最终决定主动和解。
第二段: 以 With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. 开始,描写“我”带着妻子做的饼干上门和解的场景。需要包括:
语言风格:
保持原文朴实、略带叙述性的风格,避免过于华丽的辞藻,但要能准确表达情感(自责、愧疚、歉意、释然、温暖)。
参考范文 (Approximately 150 words):
Paragraph 1 :
I realized it was me who was at fault. Shame washed over me as I truly considered his lonely world. Toby wasn't just a pet; he was my brother's lifeline, his sole comfort after losing his beloved wife and facing his own health battles. My rigid(严格的) rule about the dog, born out of concern for the little ones, had completely ignored his profound grief and dependence. The memory of him silently leaving in the rain haunted(闹鬼的) me. My stubborn pride, waiting for him to call, felt petty and cruel. Deep regret replaced my earlier reasoning. He needed understanding, not exclusion, especially from his own brother. The two months of silence were a painful testament to my insensitivity. I knew I had to make the first move, to apologize sincerely and try to mend the rift(裂缝) I had caused. (约 85 words)
Paragraph 2 :
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. My heart pounded as I knocked. After a moment, the door opened, revealing my brother's tired, slightly guarded face. Before I could speak, Toby squeezed past his legs, tail wagging furiously, nudging my hand – no trace of resentment(不满). Seeing Toby’s unconditional welcome broke the ice. “I’m so sorry, truly,” I stammered, holding out the biscuits. “I was thoughtless. I didn’t understand…” His stern expression softened, replaced by a deep sadness and then a flicker of relief. He stepped aside, a silent invitation. “Come in,” he said, his voice thick with emotion. As I entered, the warmth inside felt like a long-lost sun finally breaking through the clouds of our misunderstanding. (约 85 words)
范文解析 :
Paragraph 1:
1) 情感深化: 立即用 Shame washed over me 强化自责感。
2) 回应关键信息: 明确点出哥哥的处境 (lonely world, lifeline, sole comfort, losing his beloved wife, health battles, profound grief and dependence) 是“我”意识到错误的核心原因。
3) 反思行为: 将之前的规则定性为 rigid rule 和 ignored his profound grief。
4) 意象运用: 用 haunted me 形容冒雨离开的场景,用 stubborn pride, petty and cruel 形容自己等待对方道歉的想法,用 painful testament to my insensitivity 形容两个月的冷战。
5) 行动决心: 结尾明确表达必须主动道歉 (make the first move, apologize sincerely, mend the rift)。
Paragraph 2:
1) 场景描写: heart pounded 体现紧张,tired, slightly guarded face 描绘哥哥的状态。
2) 关键角色托比: 让托比 (squeezed past, tail wagging furiously, nudging my hand) 成为第一个打破僵局、传递善意的角色 (unconditional welcome broke the ice),非常合理且温馨。
3) 语言表达歉意: I’m so sorry, truly 直接道歉,I was thoughtless. I didn’t understand… 承认错误点。
4) 哥哥的反应: 表情变化 (stern expression softened, deep sadness, flicker of relief),动作 (stepped aside),语言 (Come in - 虽短但意义重大,voice thick with emotion) 都体现了情感的松动和接受。
5) 象征性结尾: 用 warmth inside 和 long-lost sun finally breaking through the clouds of our misunderstanding 比喻和解带来的温暖和释然,呼应前文的雨天冲突,积极收尾。
注意要点:
1) 紧扣提示句: 反复强调两个开头句是续写的绝对起点,内容必须紧密围绕它们展开。
2) 深挖文本信息: 引导学生仔细阅读原文,尤其是关于哥哥处境的那段话(健康、丧妻、托比的重要性),这是“我”意识到错误和后续行动的根本驱动力。忽略这点会导致续写偏离。
3) 情感逻辑合理: “我”从固执到自责再到行动的心理转变要自然;哥哥从生气(“Not a chance”)到开门、让“我”进屋的转变也需要铺垫(托比的反应、真诚的道歉、带来的饼干象征善意)。
4) 细节服务于主题: 选择的细节(托比的热情、哥哥的表情声音变化、屋内的温暖)都要服务于“和解”这个主题。
5) 语言准确性与多样性: 在保证语法准确的基础上,鼓励学生使用不同的词汇表达情感(如 shame, regret, grief, relief, thoughtless, insensitivity)和动作(softened, stepped aside, stammered, squeezed past, wagging)。
6) 象征与呼应: 可以点拨学生注意范文中使用“雨/云”和“阳光/温暖”的对比呼应,增强文学性。
7) 控制篇幅: 注意词数要求(150左右),两段分配要大致均衡。
2.2025年全国II卷(人与社会、人与自我)
一、续写核心任务
要求
解析
主题延续
文化认同困境(名字发音)→ 文化自信建立
伏笔呼应
必须回应两个开头句:
1. 课堂解释名字含义
2. 课后同学主动交流
情感弧线
从"自我否定"(forced smile)→"主动分享"(cultural identity)
字数控制
两段共150词(每段70-80词)
二、情节设计框架
段落1:课堂场景(回应开头句1)
教授态度转变(对比前文尴尬)
前文:教授念错名 → 全班哄笑
续写:教授主动邀请解释(体现尊重)
揭示名字内涵
秋雨 = Autumn Rain(直译)
文化象征:丰收/诗意(Harvest season & poetic imagery)
同学反应埋线
教室氛围:安静聆听(vs 前文哄笑)
关键句:"Thirty pairs of eyes focused on me, but this time with genuine curiosity."
段落2:课后场景(回应开头句2)
跨文化破冰
同学动作:hesitantly approached(体现文化谨慎)
经典对话:"May I try pronouncing it?"(呼应发音困境)
双向文化交换
主角教发音 → 同学分享爱尔兰名字故事(如Siobhán的发音)
成长升华
主角顿悟:名字是文化桥梁(非障碍)
关键句:"My name was no longer a barrier, but a key unlocking cultural exchange."
三、语言策略与亮点
1. 文化意象深化
原文线索
续写延伸
英文表达
秋雨(季节)
联系爱尔兰多雨气候
"Just like Ireland's nourishing rains"
发音困境
用注音符号可视化教学
"Qiu like 'chew', Yu like 'yoo'"
2. 情感动词升级
前文情绪
续写转变
动词选用
尴尬
→ 从容
demonstrated (取代explained)
自我怀疑
→ 自信
beamed with pride
3. 首尾呼应设计
开头伏笔回收:
前文:"class erupting into laughter"
续写:"laughter now warmed the classroom"(情感反转)
结尾主题升华:
"That day, Qiuyu wasn't just a name—it was an invitation to connect."
四、满分范文及解析
In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. Taking a deep breath, I demonstrated the characters: "秋" for autumn and "雨" for rain. "In China," I continued, "it symbolizes harvest grace and poetic beauty—much like Ireland's nourishing rains." To my surprise, Professor Byrne repeated "Qiuyu" perfectly, smiling encouragingly. Thirty pairs of eyes focused on me, but this time with genuine curiosity, not amusement.
Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. "That's beautiful!" murmured Fiona, hesitantly approaching. "May I try?" As she carefully pronounced "Qiu-like chew, Yu-like yoo", I beamed, "Perfect!" Soon, a small crowd gathered, sharing stories of their Irish names—like Siobhán's Viking roots. Laughter now warmed the classroom, melting my old fears. In that moment, I realized my name wasn't a barrier, but a bridge weaving our cultures together.
范文解析
要素
实现方式
情节完整度
课堂解释→课后实践→文化交换→情感升华(完整闭环)
伏笔回收
教授态度转变(前文尴尬→续写鼓励)
同学反应(哄笑→主动学习)
文化深度
中:秋雨=丰收诗意 vs 爱:Siobhán=维京根源(双向平等交流)
语言亮点
1. 隐喻升级(barrier→bridge)
2. 感官描写("laughter warmed"触觉通感)
情感弧光
动作链:hesitantly approached→beamed→melting fears(自卑→自信)
主题升华
末句点题:名字作为文化纽带(cultural bridge)
五、避坑指南
1. 偏离开头句
错误:课后写独自离开教室(未回应"came up to me")
修正:必须有多人互动场景
2.文化刻板印象
错误:同学说"All Chinese names are hard"
修正:体现个体尊重("May I try yours specifically?")
3.情感断裂
错误:主角突然自信(缺乏过渡)
修正:通过他人反馈建立自信(如同学精准发音)
3. 2025年1月八省联考卷(人与社会、人与自我)
I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside. My heart sank and I felt a bit panicked. But I noticed that they were all very orderly. Some were chatting quietly about the dogs they had rescued. I took a deep breath and found an empty seat as far away from them as possible. I was still a bit nervous but tried to calm myself down, waiting for the film to start.
When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group. They were here for the same reason as me - to support the local animal shelters. I felt so ashamed of my initial fear. As the film played, I saw their efforts in saving the abandoned dogs. They were so passionate and kind. After the film, I went up to them and apologized for my misjudgment. They just laughed and said it was okay. We even exchanged contact information to keep in touch about future animal - saving activities.
4. 2025年1月浙江卷(人与社会、人与自我)
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained everything that had happened while they were away. Mrs. Green listened with wide eyes, clearly shocked by the ordeal(磨难). “Thank you so much, Kevin. You were very brave,” she said, her voice trembling. Mr. Green nodded in agreement. “We’re just glad you were there to call the police. It could have been much worse.” Kevin felt a bit relieved hearing their gratitude but still couldn’t shake off the doubt in his mind. He decided to ask Mr. Green about the man’s claim. “Do you know if the man’s parents used to live here?” Mr. Green shook his head. “No, we bought this house years ago. There’s no way that’s true.”
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.The watch was old and dusty, but it seemed important to the man who had broken in. At the station, they handed it over to the officer who had arrested the intruder(入侵者). The officer examined the watch carefully and then turned to Kevin and Mr. Green. “This watch is actually stolen property. We’ve been looking for it for months. It’s worth a lot of money.” Kevin’s eyes widened in surprise. “So he was lying about it being his father’s watch?” The officer nodded. “Yes, he was trying to steal it and sell it. Thanks to you, Kevin, we’ve solved a big case.” Kevin felt a wave of relief and pride wash over him. He realized that he had done the right thing after all.
5. 2024年新课标I&II卷(人与社会)
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in disbelief, asking me what to do. Flashing him another apologetic smile, I begged him for a delayed payment. “If I miss this last bus to Prague, I’ll be late for the conference which is so important that I can’t afford to miss it!” I explained. “May I have your phone number? I will call you and return the money I owe you. I promise I will keep my word or you keep my watch!” I added, handing him my watch as well as my business card. Gunter accepted my business card but rejected my watch. He wrote down his phone number and gave it to me. “Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me as I heard his words. Giving him a firm handshake, I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the bus, and jumped onto it just before its departure.
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He picked me up at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days before. Beaming a warm smile at him, I gave him a big hug the moment I saw him. We chatted happily on the way to the airport. I told him that thanks to his generosity and timely help, everything had gone smoothly. When he stopped his taxi outside the airport, I paid him for the “double car ride”, back and forth from the airport to the bus station, together with a generous tip that he turned down. I also gave him an attractive souvenir I had bought at Prague, which he accepted with delight. We became good friends and kept in touch with each other regularly. I felt blessed to have such a warm-hearted friend like Gunter.
6. 2024年1月九省联考卷(人与自然)
参考范文1
“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. In her hand, she displayed the items she had retrieved behind the filter box. “Maya has been trading these for treats during training. She's not just retrieving them; she's been cleverly exchanging them with you for rewards.” Hilda's voice was warm with admiration as she showed Katherine the little treasures Maya had hidden away. It was a clever game of give-and-take that Maya had mastered, turning her training sessions into a personal treasure hunt.
Now Katherine realized what had been going on. She looked at Maya, then at Hilda, and her stern expression softened into a smile. “I owe you an apology, Hilda. You've shown great initiative and care,” she said, her tone filled with newfound respect. Together, they watched Maya perform her tricks, understanding now that the dolphin's behavior was not a training issue but a sign of her intelligence and curiosity. The day ended not with blame, but with laughter and a sense of teamwork, as they all enjoyed Maya's clever antics.
参考范文2
“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile. She then gestured for Katherine to follow her to the back of the tank. Together, they peered behind the filter box, where Hilda carefully reached in. Her hand emerged holding a small, glittering object. It was a charm bracelet, shimmering with tiny beads. “Maya has been hiding things like this here,” Hilda explained, her voice filled with wonder. Katherine's eyes followed every movement, her initial disbelief slowly turning into fascination as she realized the depth of Maya's playful antics.
Now Katherine realized what had been going on. A look of understanding crossed her face as she watched Maya swim gracefully around the tank. “I misunderstood the situation,” Katherine admitted, turning to Hilda with an apologetic smile. “You've done a great job uncovering Maya's little hobby.” The atmosphere lightened, and the bond between trainer, volunteer, and dolphin grew stronger. As they watched Maya playfully interact with her hidden treasures, a sense of unity and joy filled the air, replacing any earlier tension.
7. 2024年1月浙江卷(人与自我)
When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!” to her at the finish line, Eva was surprised. In the vast expanse of her school, a girl with poor directional skills struggled to navigate and often got lost. One day, during gym class, she observed a unique way to find her way - following the shadows of trees. As the sun cast its rays, the girl noticed how the shadows created patterns on the ground, guiding her path. She took a leap of faith and followed the shadows, surprising herself with each turn and stretch. Her efforts were noticed by the teacher, who praised her innovative thinking.
Eva decided to use the same trick to deal with the school building. She used the shadows to navigate the school hallways, find her classes, and even locate the school's various facilities. This newfound skill not only helped the girl navigate her school but also instilled in her a sense of confidence and adventure. She learned excitedly that with a little creativity and observation, any challenge could be overcome. And with each step she took, she left behind a legacy of inspiration for those who followed in her footsteps, knowing that even without a clear sense of direction, there's always a way to find one's way.
8. 2023年新课标I&II卷(人与自我)
A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I was informed that I won the first prize in the writing contest and that there would be an award presentation in two days. I was so happy to hear the news that I immediately shared it with my teacher. “I knew you’d win! I am proud of you. You made it!” he said excitedly. Then came the big day. When I was invited to the stage to receive the award, I expressed my thanks to my teacher. I said, “It’s you who make me fall in love with writing, my social studies teacher. Without your recognition and guidance, I couldn’t have written this article. Again thank you very much!”
I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation. My teacher was waiting for me. Holding my hands, he said “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.” “You know I didn’t like writing before, but now I am crazy about it! I will try my best to create good works.” I said seriously. Since then, I have written many good works and now I am a famous writer. I owe my success to my social teacher who is a beacon in my life on the road to writing.
9. 2023年2月四省联考(人与自然)
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. But the family was none too happy about his visit. They scolded and swatted at him. At first Squirt was so unhappy that he avoided them. And then he quickly learned some social skills. He would take some snacks to meet them. For several days he played all day in the trees surrounding our house but came down at bedtime.
One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard. Our girls fretted. They wanted to seek Squirt. We prevented them because it was too dangerous. But when the sun rose the next day, there was Squirt, begging for food. And that remained the pattern for weeks. The experience was entertaining and heartwarming for our family. In the wild and somewhat silly moments of raising an orphaned baby squirrel, our children learned to value and appreciate life.
10. 2023年1月浙江卷(人与自然)
【参考范文1】
A few weeks later, I visited the farm again. The same dilapidated house, the same gigantic spider web, the same green blackberry path. "Will the hummingbird be the same? Will this lovely and humanistic creature be trapped in the web again? Not likely, since the hole in the window had been fixed." These questions and thoughts popped into my head like strands of spider thread. With smell of roasted food wafting in the air, my friends and I chatted and laughed merrily around the picnic table. It seemed the hummingbird was temporarily thrown to the back of my mind. Soon, the sun began to set and it was time for home.
I was about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. It perched on a small twig just an inch before me and studied me with the same sparkling and pleasant eyes. In an ecstasy of delight, I held out my fingers for it to rest and we communicated with our half-human, half-bird language. My teary friends were all deeply struck by the profound bond between a little bird and her saver. Were there magic power existing in this world, it must be the universal love that surpassed beyond any species, as was the case with my sacred hummingbird and me.
【参考范文2】
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it ,my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to survive?
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyes locked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into my car and drove away.
11. 2022年新高考I&II卷(人与社会)
【参考范文1】
We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn’t look at me. I said gently and quietly, “No one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others’ thoughts.” He sat still with a deep breath. “You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here”, I added with a sincere tone. Hearing my words, David turned to me tremblingly with tears spilling out of his eyes and expressed he had made a firm determination to finish the cross-country run. His coach heard what David said and gave me a look—the kind that was more determined than anyone else’s.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a heart disease. David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he was tripped over within the a few kilometers. It didn’t take long before he picked himself up again and continued his mission. Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him. “Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically. To everyone’s joy, he reached the final line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.
【参考范文2】
We sat down next to each other,but David wouldn’t look at me.Tapping him gently on the shoulder,I asked David what had caused him to decide to give up the opportunity.Having hesitated for a moment,he replied in a low voice,“You know,I run very slowly and my running posture is ugly,which will result in others laughing at me.” I smiled,shook my head and said,“That is just your supposition.As a matter of fact,all the people respect and admire those who overcome their own difficulties and bravely achieve their goals.” “Really?” He seemed to be in doubt about my words.Seeing me nod firmly,he wore his big toothy smile again,his eyes sparkling with excitement and curiosity.
I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners.As soon as the starting gun rang,the children began to run.After a while,David became the last in the team,as we had expected.However,David seemed calm,firm and persistent.During the whole cross-country race,nobody teased him.On the contrary,when he finally reached the finish line,all the people present cheered for him.It was David’s strong determination and perseverance that helped him become a popular person.
12.2022年6月浙江卷(人与自然)
【参考范文 1】
As they came in my direction I put on my brightest and happiest smile. I wanted to make them know that I was really anxious to help them. To my relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile, and I could see their exhaustion in their eyes. I wanted to know what they were going through and I was desperate to know what I could do for them. They nodded gratefully as I pushed my spoon into the pot and took a large spoonful and poured it into their bowls.
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. This experience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help. It also made me realize that our small act of kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference to them. I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food. I am anxious to urge the world to do everything possible to help those in need.
【参考范文 2】
As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile. Nervous as I felt, I did my utmost to keep myself calm and hand out the delicately-wrapped meal to those in need, with my hands trembling. Upon seeing it, every one of them beamed with smile, gently murmured “Thank you” and bowed to me sincerely, which brought warmth straight into my heart. The passing time witnessed the smooth process of this event. It was not until the night wiped out the last ray of sun that we finished our community service hours.
I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. Not only did I clear my previous prejudice against those who seemed to be dangerous and unamiable, but also I extended a helping hand to those who wanted food. I suddenly came to realize that not everyone was blessed with fortune and born to be wealthy, therefore, we should always keep grateful for what life blessed us with. However, we did have the power to share our happiness with others, that is, spreading love. Love is everything, like the clear moon hanging high in the sky, spreading its mild moonlight selflessly to everyone.
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We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. Though I wanted to share my ideas with him fully, I failed to do so for fear that I would hold him back. I just kept nodding when he asked me whether it is ok to do this way or that way. I thought it was impossible to persuade him into accepting my views, so I didn't want to waste our time to discuss. I started to wait to leave immediately we arrived at the place, and so did he. I just hoped that the presentation day could come earlier.
One dayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson’s was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
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