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专题07 英语书面表达考前必备篇【写作指导+满分范文】 【写作指导 典例剖析】 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My school life”. (请以“我的校园生活”为主题，写一篇不少于60字的文章,  标点符号不占格。)： Suggested questions: 1. How is your school life? 2. Do you like your school life? Why or why not? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【名校好题，满分范文】 1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是学生李枫，你校即将举办一个主题为“校园记忆”的展览活动。学校邀请每位学生提供一张运动会精彩瞬间的照片，并为该照片撰写一段介绍文字供参观者阅读。 介绍文字内容须包括： √照片的题目 √运动会精彩瞬间的简要描述 √照片对你个人的意义 (注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．Write at least 60 words about “My Favourite Sport” according to the given information. (请根据所给的信息，写一篇不少于60词的关于“我最喜欢的运动”的短文，标点符号不占格。) 每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”。运动对我们的生活、学习以及身体健康有着重要的意义。请你以“我最喜欢的运动”为题，写一篇短文。 短文须包括以下提示内容，可适当发挥： 1. What is your favourite sport? 2. Why do you like it? 3. Who do you often do this sport with? 4. What can it bring to you? (注意：文中不能出现真实姓名、人名和学校名称。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．Describe a family picnic，描述一次家庭野餐的活动。想象你正在和家人在公园野餐。请描述你们的活动。请参照以下写作框架。不少于50词。 Outline: 1. When and where is it? 2. Who are having a picnic with me? 3. What is everyone doing? 4. How does everyone feel? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．Write at least 50 words about the topic “An enjoyable sport moment”. (以“令人愉快的运动时刻”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: 1. What sport did you participate in (参加)? 2. What was the enjoyable moment? 3. Why did you think it was enjoyable? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ An enjoyable sport moment 5．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My School club” according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇关于“My School club”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。） 初中生活已拉开帷幕，学校有各种丰富多彩的社团活动，你有参与其中吗？ 假设此时此刻，你正在参加社团课。请你写一写：你参加的是什么社团？你在什么时候、在哪里上社团课？在这节社团课上，你或者你的同学们正在做什么？你有什么感受？ 以下问题供参考： 1. What club do you join? 2. When and where do you attend the club? 3. What are you/ your club members doing? 4. How do you feel? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My School club 6．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My school day”(以 “我学校生活中的一天” 为题目，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格)。 建议问题： 1. When does your school day start and end? 2. What is your favourite subject? Why? 3. What activity do you take part in? 4. How is your school day? 写作区域： My school day ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________      My school day 7．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Sharing chores in my family”. In our daily lives, every family member plays a role in keeping the home running smoothly. In Unit 2 we learn how to take family duties. Now please write about how your family share chores. Use vivid details to make your story interesting! 日常生活中，每个家庭成员都为家庭的运转贡献一份力。在第二单元中我们学习如何分担家庭责任。请写一写你家是如何分配家务的。用生动的细节让你的故事更有趣吧！ Suggested questions (提示问题): What chore(s) does each family member do? (Write about at least 3 members.) Do you share chores in your family? How do you feel about sharing chores in your family? What can you learn from sharing chores? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My family celebration” according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇关于“我的家庭庆祝活动”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)(共10分) 同学，你经常有家庭庆祝活动吗？例如，庆祝生日、欢度春节(the Spring Festival)、中秋节(the Mid-Autumn Festival)等。假设此时此刻，你和家人正在进行一次家庭庆祝活动。你和谁在一起聚会？在哪聚会？正在庆祝什么？有哪些庆祝活动?你有什么样的感受？ 以下问题供参考： What are you celebrating? Who are you celebrating it with? Where are you? What are you doing? How do you feel? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假设你是六年级学生李华，写一封邮件给你的笔友David，介绍你在新学校的学校生活。邮件开头和结尾已给，但还必须包含以下内容： 1. 介绍学校的课程 (每天几节课、开始结束时间等)； 2. 你最喜欢的科目并说明原因； 3. 你对学校生活的感受。 (注意：照抄本卷语篇不得分) 要求： 1. 词数：不少于60词，标点符号不占格。可适当发挥，书写工整。 2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校班级的名称。 Dear David, How are you doing? I am glad to tell you something about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua Yours, Li Hua 10．Write at least 50 words according to the given situation and pictures. (根据所给情境和图片，写一篇不少于50个词的回帖，标点符号不占格) 假如你是王一鸣，请根据所给照片，补充适当信息，完成回帖。(开头已给) 注意：1. 短文中不得出现学生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．假设你是Lisa，请从以下两张照片中挑选一张，分享至“Our Moments”共享博客，并详细介绍这张照片。介绍内容需涵盖：照片的主题、照片中所有人物的具体活动以及当时的心情。 My first day singing with the music club A special breakfast for my first day of school 根据所给情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文 (标点符号不占格) (注意：短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Today is my first day... _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A special breakfast for my first day of school Today is my first day of school. The photo shows a special breakfast scene with my family. My dad is busy cooking delicious food in the kitchen. My little sister is sitting at the table, looking at the food with anticipation. My grandpa is smiling and saying “You can do it!” My mum is standing beside me, giving me a warm hug. I am standing there, feeling the love from the whole family. We all feel happy and warm, as this breakfast is full of their care and best wishes for my new school life.范文2 My first day singing with the music club 12．假设你是来自上海Sunshine Middle School的学生，网名为Panda053，你在TEEN-LAND论坛上看见有人发布关于校园生活的帖子，请你根据帖子的要求写一份回帖，字数不少于60字。（注意：短文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分） Topic: What is your school day like?Where do you live? What time does your school day start and end? What subjects do you have this term? Do you have club activities? What do you like most about your school? 5 answers                                   Panda021      28 October _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题07 英语书面表达考前必备篇【写作指导+满分范文】 【写作指导 典例剖析】 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My school life”. (请以“我的校园生活”为主题，写一篇不少于60字的文章,  标点符号不占格。)： Suggested questions: 1. How is your school life? 2. Do you like your school life? Why or why not? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My school life is vibrant and fulfilling. Located in a lively area, our school provides a great environment for learning. The courses here are both challenging and interesting, which always keep me engaged. I particularly enjoy the various activities organized by the school, such as sports meets and art festivals, because they enrich my life and allow me to make many friends. The teachers are kind and patient, always ready to help us when we encounter difficulties. I get along well with my classmates, and we often study and play together. I really like my school life because it not only helps me acquire knowledge but also teaches me how to cooperate and communicate with others. I look forward to every day at school! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，主题为“我的校园生活”； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示问题，描述自己的校园生活情况，包括校园生活的特点、是否喜欢以及原因，可以适当添加细节，并突出个人感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。简要介绍自己的校园生活总体感受，引出下文的具体描述； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从课程、活动、师生互动等方面描述校园生活的具体情况，并解释自己是否喜欢校园生活及原因； 第三步，书写结语。总结自己对校园生活的态度，表达期望或感受。 [亮点词汇] ①enrich my life丰富我的生活 ②various activities各种各样的活动 ③get along well with与……相处融洽 ④look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①The courses here are both challenging and interesting, which always keep me engaged.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②I particularly enjoy the various activities organized by the school, such as sports meets and art festivals, because they enrich my life and allow me to make many friends.（because引导的原因状语从句） 【名校好题，满分范文】 1．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是学生李枫，你校即将举办一个主题为“校园记忆”的展览活动。学校邀请每位学生提供一张运动会精彩瞬间的照片，并为该照片撰写一段介绍文字供参观者阅读。 介绍文字内容须包括： √照片的题目 √运动会精彩瞬间的简要描述 √照片对你个人的意义 (注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： This photo captures the exciting moment of our school relay race. In the picture, I am passing the baton to my teammate while other students are cheering loudly near the track. Everyone looks focused and energetic. The photo is meaningful to me because it shows the power of teamwork. Not only did we win the race that day, but it also taught me that success comes from trust and cooperation. This memory will always encourage me to work with others bravely. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为照片介绍文字; ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”; ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“介绍文字内容”中的要点，包括照片题目、运动会精彩瞬间的简要描述、照片对个人的意义，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接引出要介绍的照片内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“照片中接力赛的精彩瞬间”和“照片对个人的意义”两个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。总结照片带来的影响。 [亮点词汇] ①captures 捕捉 ②pass the baton to 把接力棒传递给 ③cheer loudly 大声欢呼 ④focused 专注的 ⑤energetic 精力充沛的 [高分句型] ①This photo captures the exciting moment of our school relay race.（简单句，直接点明照片内容） ②Not only did we win the race that day, but it also taught me that success comes from trust and cooperation.（“not only...but also...”连接两个句子，且“not only”位于句首，句子用部分倒装结构） 2．Write at least 60 words about “My Favourite Sport” according to the given information. (请根据所给的信息，写一篇不少于60词的关于“我最喜欢的运动”的短文，标点符号不占格。) 每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”。运动对我们的生活、学习以及身体健康有着重要的意义。请你以“我最喜欢的运动”为题，写一篇短文。 短文须包括以下提示内容，可适当发挥： 1. What is your favourite sport? 2. Why do you like it? 3. Who do you often do this sport with? 4. What can it bring to you? (注意：文中不能出现真实姓名、人名和学校名称。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： My favourite sport is basketball. I like it because it is exciting and keeps me healthy. I often play basketball with my friends after school or on weekends. This sport brings me joy and helps me relax after studying. Also, it teaches me teamwork and makes me stronger. I think everyone should try a sport to have fun and stay fit. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示内容”中的要点，适当发挥，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明自己最喜欢的运动是篮球； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“喜欢的原因、和谁一起运动、运动带来的好处”几个方面重点介绍篮球的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“认为每个人都应该尝试一项运动来获得乐趣和保持健康”的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①keep me healthy保持我健康 ②after school放学后 ③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事 ④try a sport尝试一项运动 [高分句型] ①This sport brings me joy and helps me relax after studying.（并列句型） ②I think everyone should try a sport to have fun and stay fit.（宾语从句） 3．Describe a family picnic，描述一次家庭野餐的活动。想象你正在和家人在公园野餐。请描述你们的活动。请参照以下写作框架。不少于50词。 Outline: 1. When and where is it? 2. Who are having a picnic with me? 3. What is everyone doing? 4. How does everyone feel? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】       Now, my family are having a picnic in Sunshine Park. My parents, my little sister and I are sitting on a big blanket under a tree. My mother is preparing delicious sandwiches while I am playing games with my sister. Dad is taking photos of the beautiful flowers nearby. We all are feeling happy and relaxed in the warm sunshine. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：材料作文。 ②时态：现在进行时（描述正在发生的野餐活动）。 ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括野餐的时间、地点、参与人员、每个人的活动以及感受，需确保不遗漏任何要点，并适当发挥。 [写作步骤] 第一步：明确写作主题和背景。直接点明野餐的时间和地点。 第二步：详细描述参与人员。具体阐述每个人的活动。 第三步：表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①play games with…和……一起玩游戏 ②take photos拍照 ③in the warm sunshine在温暖的阳光下 [高分句型] My mother is preparing delicious sandwiches while I am playing games with my sister. (while引导的时间状语从句) 4．Write at least 50 words about the topic “An enjoyable sport moment”. (以“令人愉快的运动时刻”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格) Suggested questions: 1. What sport did you participate in (参加)? 2. What was the enjoyable moment? 3. Why did you think it was enjoyable? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 An enjoyable sport moment Last month, I took part in a rope skipping competition at school. When the final round started, my legs felt tired, but my classmates cheered loudly for me. I tried my best to jump faster, and finally, I won the third prize. That moment was so enjoyable because I not only achieved a small goal but also felt the warmth of my classmates’ support. It made me realize that sports are not just about winning, but also about perseverance and friendship. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：是“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、介绍参与的运动； 第二步、详细描述愉快的时刻； 第三步、解释原因并表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①took part in参加 ②tried my best to尽我所能 ③not only…but also不仅……而且 [高分句型] That moment was so enjoyable because I not only achieved a small goal but also felt the warmth of my classmates’ support.(because引导的原因状语从句) 5．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My School club” according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇关于“My School club”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。） 初中生活已拉开帷幕，学校有各种丰富多彩的社团活动，你有参与其中吗？ 假设此时此刻，你正在参加社团课。请你写一写：你参加的是什么社团？你在什么时候、在哪里上社团课？在这节社团课上，你或者你的同学们正在做什么？你有什么感受？ 以下问题供参考： 1. What club do you join? 2. When and where do you attend the club? 3. What are you/ your club members doing? 4. How do you feel? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My School club I am in the Art Club. We have the club class every Friday afternoon in the art room. Right now, our teacher is teaching us how to draw flowers. My classmates and I are drawing beautiful pictures with colorful pencils. I feel very happy because I love drawing. It helps me relax after a busy week. I really enjoy my time in the Art Club. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“现在进行时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、确定社团类型； 第二步、介绍参加社团的时间、地点以及活动内容； 第三步、介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①Right now此刻；现在 ②draw pictures画画 ③love doing sth.喜欢做某事 [高分句型] I feel very happy because I love drawing.（because引导的原因状语从句） 6．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My school day”(以 “我学校生活中的一天” 为题目，写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格)。 建议问题： 1. When does your school day start and end? 2. What is your favourite subject? Why? 3. What activity do you take part in? 4. How is your school day? 写作区域： My school day ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      My school day Hi, everyone. I’ll tell you about my school day.           My school day starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 4 p.m. My favourite subject is English because it helps me talk with people from different countries. I often take part in basketball practice after class. It can help me make many friends.      Though busy, my school day is always full of energy and happiness. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：根据提示围绕四个问题展开描述，行文连贯，注意词数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开门见山，引出文章主题。 第二步：用连接词衔接，依次说明上学和放学时间，最喜欢的科目及原因，参与的活动。 第三步：总结全文，表达感受。 [亮点词汇] ①always full of energy总是充满能量 ②different不同的 ③after class课后 [高分句型] ①My favourite subject is English because it helps me...(运用了because引导的原因状语从句) ②Though busy, my school day is always full of energy and happiness.(运用了though引导的让步状语从句) 7．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Sharing chores in my family”. In our daily lives, every family member plays a role in keeping the home running smoothly. In Unit 2 we learn how to take family duties. Now please write about how your family share chores. Use vivid details to make your story interesting! 日常生活中，每个家庭成员都为家庭的运转贡献一份力。在第二单元中我们学习如何分担家庭责任。请写一写你家是如何分配家务的。用生动的细节让你的故事更有趣吧！ Suggested questions (提示问题): What chore(s) does each family member do? (Write about at least 3 members.) Do you share chores in your family? How do you feel about sharing chores in your family? What can you learn from sharing chores? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In my family, we all share chores to keep our home tidy. My father is responsible for mowing the lawn and fixing things around the house. My mother takes care of cooking and cleaning the kitchen. As for me, I do the dishes and take out the trash. Sharing chores makes me feel like I’m contributing to our family and learning important life skills. It also brings us closer together as we work as a team. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：需回答家庭成员的分工（至少3人）、是否分担家务、感受及学到的道理。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题。说明家庭分担家务的核心目的（保持家的整洁）； 第二步，具体分工。依次介绍父亲、母亲及自己的家务内容； 第三步，总结收获。阐述分担家务带来的个人感受与家庭影响。 [亮点词汇] ①share chores分担家务 ②be responsible for对……负责 ③take care of照顾；照料 ④as for至于 ⑤contribute to为……做贡献 [高分句型] ①In my family, we all share chores to keep our home tidy.（动词不定式作目的状语） ②Sharing chores makes me feel like I’m contributing to our family and learning important life skills. （动名词短语作主语） ③It also brings us closer together as we work as a team.（as 引导时间状语从句） 8．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My family celebration” according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇关于“我的家庭庆祝活动”的短文，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)(共10分) 同学，你经常有家庭庆祝活动吗？例如，庆祝生日、欢度春节(the Spring Festival)、中秋节(the Mid-Autumn Festival)等。假设此时此刻，你和家人正在进行一次家庭庆祝活动。你和谁在一起聚会？在哪聚会？正在庆祝什么？有哪些庆祝活动?你有什么样的感受？ 以下问题供参考： What are you celebrating? Who are you celebrating it with? Where are you? What are you doing? How do you feel? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文                                                                  My Family Celebration      Right now, my family and I are celebrating the Spring Festival at home. We are having a big dinner together. My grandparents, parents and I are sitting around the table. We are eating dumplings and fish. They are delicious! After dinner, we will watch TV and set off fireworks. I feel very happy because we are together. I love my family. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，记录家人共度春节的场景，内容温馨具体，语气真挚，传递亲情温暖； ② 时态：以现在进行时为主，描述当下庆祝场景；用一般将来时提及后续活动，时态区分清晰，符合逻辑； ③ 提示：文章涵盖庆祝场景、家庭成员、饮食、后续计划、个人感受，信息完整，逻辑连贯，无真实信息。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明核心场景——全家在家庆祝春节，快速切入主题，营造温馨氛围； 第二步，分述当下庆祝细节：家庭成员围坐、享用的美食，再说明饭后计划，内容充实且有画面感； 第三步，表达团聚的幸福感与对家人的爱意，收束自然，升华情感。 [亮点词汇] ①eat dumplings吃饺子 ②watch TV看电视 ③set off fireworks放烟花 ④feel very happy感到很开心 [高分句型] ①Right now, my family and I are celebrating the Spring Festival at home.（使用现在进行时态） ②I feel very happy because we are together.（“because”引导原因状语从句） 9．假设你是六年级学生李华，写一封邮件给你的笔友David，介绍你在新学校的学校生活。邮件开头和结尾已给，但还必须包含以下内容： 1. 介绍学校的课程 (每天几节课、开始结束时间等)； 2. 你最喜欢的科目并说明原因； 3. 你对学校生活的感受。 (注意：照抄本卷语篇不得分) 要求： 1. 词数：不少于60词，标点符号不占格。可适当发挥，书写工整。 2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校班级的名称。 Dear David, How are you doing? I am glad to tell you something about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear David, How are you doing? I am glad to tell you something about my school life. We have 7 classes each school day. Classes start at 8:00 in the morning and finish at 4:30 in the afternoon. My favorite subject is science. We do fun experiments in class—last week we grew bean sprouts, which made me curious about how plants grow. My new school life is busy but wonderful. I’ve made friendly classmates, and the interesting lessons make every day full of joy. I really enjoy being here! I am looking forward to your reply! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：主要使用“一般现在时”（介绍日常学校生活），辅以“一般过去时”（描述上周的实验）； ③提示：向笔友介绍新学校的课程安排、喜爱的科目及对校园生活的感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头问候笔友并点明写信目的（介绍学校生活）； 第二步，中间分三部分展开：介绍每日课程的节数与时间、说明最喜欢的科目及原因、分享对新学校生活的感受； 第三步，结尾表达期待对方回复的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①each school day每个上学日 ②experiment实验 ③curious好奇的 ④full of joy充满乐趣 [高分句型] ①We do fun experiments in class—last week we grew bean sprouts, which made me curious about how plants grow.（运用破折号补充具体事例，“which”引导的非限定性定语从句，丰富了句子层次，说明实验带来的影响）； ②My new school life is busy but wonderful.（用“but”体现转折关系，简洁点明校园生活的特点，使表达更生动） 10．Write at least 50 words according to the given situation and pictures. (根据所给情境和图片，写一篇不少于50个词的回帖，标点符号不占格) 假如你是王一鸣，请根据所给照片，补充适当信息，完成回帖。(开头已给) 注意：1. 短文中不得出现学生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m Wang Yiming. I’m from Shanghai, China. Our English class is very interesting. We learn new words by making word cards, like the one with “family”, “house”, and “home” on it. We also practice speaking English by talking with classmates in class. Sometimes we watch English cartoons and sing English songs. Hope these ways help me learn English well. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一篇回帖，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏学习英语的方法等要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。 [写作步骤] 第一步：介绍自己来自哪里； 第二步：具体介绍英语课的情况，包括学习新单词的方法、练习口语的方法以及观看英语动画片和唱英文歌等活动； 第三步：总结全文，希望这些方法能帮助自己学好英语。 [亮点词汇] ①learn new words学新单词 ②by making word cards通过制作单词卡片 ③practice speaking English练习说英语 ④talk with classmates与同学交谈 ⑤watch English cartoons看英语动画片 [高分句型] ①We learn new words by making word cards, like the one with “family”, “house”, and “home” on it. (by+动名词短语，表示学习新单词的方式，like...on it作举例说明，明确制作单词卡片的具体内容) ②Sometimes we watch English cartoons and sing English songs to practice our English. (and连接同一主语的两个动作，to practice our English作目的状语) 11．假设你是Lisa，请从以下两张照片中挑选一张，分享至“Our Moments”共享博客，并详细介绍这张照片。介绍内容需涵盖：照片的主题、照片中所有人物的具体活动以及当时的心情。 My first day singing with the music club A special breakfast for my first day of school 根据所给情境写一篇不少于50个词的短文 (标点符号不占格) (注意：短文中不得出现个人任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Today is my first day... _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文1 A special breakfast for my first day of school Today is my first day of school. The photo shows a special breakfast scene with my family. My dad is busy cooking delicious food in the kitchen. My little sister is sitting at the table, looking at the food with anticipation. My grandpa is smiling and saying “You can do it!” My mum is standing beside me, giving me a warm hug. I am standing there, feeling the love from the whole family. We all feel happy and warm, as this breakfast is full of their care and best wishes for my new school life.范文2 My first day singing with the music club Today is my first day joining the music club. The photo shows our first practice. In the picture, Ross is playing the piano. Kate and Peter are playing the guitars. I am singing with a smile. Our teacher, Mr. Hu, is standing there, listening to us carefully. We are all enjoying the music moment. I feel excited and a bit nervous, but also very happy and welcomed. Being part of this club makes me feel joyful, and it’s a fantastic beginning. 【详解】 [总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，可适当发挥，应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 [写作步骤]   第一步：开篇点题，点明时间与事件，引出照片内容； 第二步：描写细节，丰富画面，描述静态事物陈列和人物动作神态； 第三步：总结经历，表达当时的心情。 [亮点词汇]   ①a special breakfast scene一个特别的早餐场景 ②cooking delicious food做美味的食物 ③is full of充满…… [高分句型] ①The photo shows a special breakfast scene with my family. (with作伴随状语) ②We all feel happy and warm, as this breakfast is full of their care and best wishes for my new school life. (as 引导的原因状语从句) 12．假设你是来自上海Sunshine Middle School的学生，网名为Panda053，你在TEEN-LAND论坛上看见有人发布关于校园生活的帖子，请你根据帖子的要求写一份回帖，字数不少于60字。（注意：短文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分） Topic: What is your school day like?Where do you live? What time does your school day start and end? What subjects do you have this term? Do you have club activities? What do you like most about your school? 5 answers                                   Panda021      28 October _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hi, I’m Panda053. I live near my school, so I can walk there easily. My school day starts at 8:00 am and ends at 4:30 pm. This term, I have subjects like Chinese, Math, English, and Art. We have various club activities, such as the music club and the science club. What I like most about my school is friendly teachers and classmates who make every day enjoyable. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己的学校生活； 第二步，介绍自己住在哪里，学校的上课时间和下课时间，学习科目以及社团活动； 第三步，介绍自己最喜欢学校的老师和同学。 [亮点词汇] ①various 各种各样的 ②such as 例如 ③friendly 友好的 [高分句型] What I like most about my school is friendly teachers and classmates who make every day enjoyable. (what引导的主语从句和who引导的定语从句) 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $