Unit 1 Past and present 写作篇（家乡巨变）（“导”与“练”）-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册导练测同步（译林版2024）

Unit 1 Past and present 写作篇（家乡巨变） 【话题解读】 “Write an article about the changes in my hometown”是8B Unit 1书面表达的主要话题，要求学生运用对比手法聚焦过去与现在的场景差异，具体描述家乡在环境、交通、生活条件等方面的发展变化；并在描述中展现对家乡变化的认知与情感，进而落实家国情怀的核心素养培育目标。写作时需紧扣三大核心要点：一是精准呈现差异，具体刻画家乡在物理环境(如道路、建筑)、生活条件(如住房、设施)、生态状况(如空气、绿化)等维度的变化，凸显“家乡巨变，今非昔比”的变迁感；二是深化主题内涵，通过鲜明的对比传递发展理念——如经济腾飞、社会进步给生活带来的深刻变革；三是融入真挚情感，将对家乡的自豪、眷恋与期盼等情感自然渗透于字里行间，最终凸显“在变化中自我成长、在发展中一路向好”的深层主旨。 在具体检测时，话题绝对不仅仅局限于“家乡巨变”。因此，我们要拓宽视野。比如：社区、学校、家庭(包括个人)乃至我们周围林林总总的变化。 【审题要领】 时态的精准性：描述过去用一般过去时或 “used to do”，描述现在用一般现在时，强调变化结果用现在完成时(如 “have taken place”)，避免时态混淆； 内容的丰富性：需覆盖2-3个具体维度(如环境+交通+生活<过去vs现在对比>)，避免泛泛而谈，每个方面需有“过去细节+现在细节”的对比； 表达的连贯性：需包含“总起(点明变化)——分述(具体变化)——总结(感受/展望)”，确保脉络清晰，衔接自然，表达连贯。 【写作框架】 三段式：总起(点明变化)——分述(具体变化)——总结(感受/展望) 1. 总起：开门见山，点明变化，引出下文 用一句话概括家乡巨变。 There have been great changes in my hometown in(over/during)the last(past)few years. It is quite different from what it used to be.过去几年，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。和以前大不一样了。 My hometown has changed greatly in(over/during)the last(past)few years. 过去几年，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 In recent years, my hometown has changed a lot in many ways. 近年来，我的家乡在很多方面都发生了很大变化。 2. 分述：今昔对比，具体阐述，细节支撑 可按“环境/交通/生活”等维度，用“过去+现在”的对比句式展开，需有细节支撑。 环境变化：In the past, the river was polluted and smelled terrible. But now, it has become clear, and many fish live in it.过去，这条河被污染了，气味很难闻。但现在，河水变清了，里面有很多鱼。Years ago, the ground was covered with rubbish. Nowadays, people have got used to throwing rubbish into dustbins, so the village is clean.几年前，地上到处都是垃圾。如今，人们已经习惯把垃圾扔进垃圾桶，所以村子很干净。 Once, the air in my hometown was not fresh because of small factories. Now, those factories are closed, and we can breathe fresh air.以前，因为一些小工厂，我家乡的空气并不新鲜。现在，那些工厂关闭了，我们能呼吸到新鲜空气了。 交通变化：Years ago, there were only narrow roads, and people traveled by bike. Nowadays, wide streets have been built, and most families have their own cars.几年前，只有狭窄的道路，人们骑自行车出行。如今，宽阔的街道建起来了，大多数家庭都有了自己的汽车。 A few years ago, the roads in my hometown were narrow and bumpy. Now, they are wide and smooth.几年前，我家乡的路又窄又颠簸。现在，路又宽又平坦。 In the past, people in the village mainly went out by bike or on foot. Nowadays, many families have their own electric bikes or cars.过去，村里的人主要骑自行车或步行出门。如今，很多家庭都拥有他们自己的电动车或汽车了。 Once, there were no buses between our village and the town. Now, buses run every hour, making travel easier.以前，我们村和镇上之间没有公交车。现在，每小时都有公交车，出行更容易了。 Years ago, crossing the river was hard for us. But now, a new bridge has been built across it, and we can walk across it easily.几年前，过河对我们来说很困难。但现在，河上建了一座新桥，我们可以轻松地走过去。 生活变化：People used to live in small old houses. Now they live in bright apartments with modern furniture.人们过去住在狭小的老房子里，现在住在配有现代家具的明亮公寓里。 In the past, people lived in small, old houses. Now, most families have moved into new and bright buildings.过去，人们住在狭小的老房子里。现在，大多数家庭都搬进了崭新明亮的楼房。 Once, people shopped in small local stores with few goods. Nowadays, a big supermarket has opened, and we can buy many things there.以前，人们在当地的小商店购物，商品很少。如今，一家大超市开业了，我们在那里能买到很多东西。 In the past, people watched TV or talked with neighbors in their free time. Now, they can use phones to chat or watch videos.过去，人们在空闲时间看电视或和邻居聊天。现在，他们可以用手机聊天或看视频。 Years ago, children studied in old classrooms. Now, we have new schools with computers and libraries.几年前，孩子们在破旧的教室里学习。现在，我们有了新学校，里面有电脑和图书馆。 3. 总结：抒发感受，展望未来，升华情感 表达对家乡巨变的态度，升华情感。 I’m proud of these changes. I hope my hometown will become even more beautiful in the future. 我为这些变化感到骄傲，希望我的家乡未来会变得更加美丽。 These changes make our life better. I hope my hometown will be more beautiful. 这些变化让我们的生活更美好了。我希望我的家乡会变得更加美丽。 I love my hometown’s new look. It will become a better place to live in the future. 我爱家乡的新面貌。未来它会成为一个更适合居住的地方。 Seeing these great changes, I feel proud of my hometown.看到这些巨大的变化，我为我的家乡感到骄傲。 【必备词句】 与“变化”主题相关的常用词汇 一、 表达变化类 take place发生 change a lot变化很大 improve a lot/rapidly改善很多/极大改善 develop faster发展更快 be replaced by被……取代 attract thousands of tourists吸引成千上万的游客 二、 时间对比类 over the last 40 years在过去的40年里 in the past在过去 many years ago许多年前 back then那时候 these years这些年 over the years这些年来 in recent years近年来 used to do过去常常 nowadays如今 三、 生活环境类 1. 建筑相关 old and broken houses破旧的房子 modern houses or flats现代化的房子或公寓 small and old houses又小又旧的房子 small and dark houses又小又暗的房子 big and bright houses又大又明亮的房子 spacious and bright houses宽敞明亮的房子 tall buildings高楼 skyscraper摩天大楼 new buildings新楼房 2. 道路相关 narrow paths狭窄的小路 narrow and dirty狭窄又肮脏的 wide roads宽阔的马路 wide and clean宽阔又干净的 clean and beautiful streets干净美丽的街道 clean and tidy streets干净整洁的街道 dirty and messy environment脏乱的环境 3. 自然环境相关 serious pollution严重的污染 rubbish everywhere /litter everywhere到处是垃圾 polluted environment受污染的环境 green areas/trees绿地/绿树 greener mountains更绿的山 clearer water/clearer river更清澈的水/河流 bluer sky更蓝的天空 fresh air新鲜空气 famous attractions著名景点 beautiful park美丽的公园 四、 交通方式类 on foot步行 by bicycle /by bike骑自行车 by bus乘公交车 by taxi乘出租车 by underground乘地铁 by train乘火车 by plane乘飞机 have got their own cars拥有他们自己的车 high-speed railway stations高铁站 various means of transportation各种各样的交通方式 五、 生活与发展类 living conditions生活条件 knowledge and skills知识和技能 support from the government政府的支持 hard work of the citizens市民的辛勤努力 leisure activities休闲活动 large supermarkets大型超市 small shops小商店 community center社区中心 activity room活动室 exercise equipment健身器材 teaching buildings教学楼 mobile apps手机应用程序 rich/poor life富裕/贫穷的生活 六、 情感与展望类 enjoy a happier life享受更幸福的生活 take an active part in protecting the environment积极参与保护环境 be proud of these changes为这些变化感到自豪 more and more beautiful越来越美丽 better and better越来越好 a better place to live in一个更宜居的地方 comfortable and full of warmth舒适且充满温暖 与“变化”主题相关的常用句型 1. 开篇引入变化 Many changes have taken place in... over the last... years.在过去的……年里，……发生了许多变化。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown these years.这些年，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.这些年来，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown.我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 With the help of the government, my hometown has changed a lot.在政府的帮助下，我的家乡变化很大。 With the rapid development of society, great changes have taken place around me. 随着社会的快速发展，我身边发生了巨大的变化。 With the rapid development of China’s economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. 随着中国经济的快速发展，过去几年我们的生活发生了巨大的变化。 In recent years, our community has changed a lot.近年来，我们的社区变化很大。 Thanks to the government, my hometown has changed a lot in the past few years. 多亏了政府，我的家乡在过去几年里变化很大。 2. 过去与现在对比 In the past, people lived in old broken houses. Today, most people live in modern houses or flats, and the streets are clean and beautiful.过去，人们住在破旧的房子里。如今，大多数人住在现代化的房子或公寓里，街道干净又美丽。 Many years ago, people had to get around the town by bicycle or on foot. Now it is common to take a bus, a taxi or the underground.许多年前，人们不得不骑自行车或步行在镇上出行。现在，乘公交车、出租车或地铁很普遍。 Back then, some people went to college and had to find jobs in other places. Today, however, many college students return and do all kinds of jobs.那时候，一些人上了大学后不得不在外地找工作。然而现在，许多大学生返乡从事各种各样的工作。 In the past, my hometown was very small. We used to live a hard life. But now we live in big and bright houses.过去，我的家乡很小。我们过去过着艰苦的生活。但现在我们住在又大又明亮的房子里。 In the past, people lived a poor life. The houses were small and old... Now, everything has changed. People live in large and bright houses.过去，人们过着贫穷的生活。房子又小又旧……现在，一切都变了。人们住在宽敞明亮的房子里。 In the past, there were few tall buildings, and people lived in small and old houses. Nowadays, things are quite different. The houses are big and bright.过去，几乎没有高楼，人们住在又小又旧的房子里。如今，情况大不相同了。房子又大又明亮。 At first, the buildings used to be so small... But now, the government has built many tall buildings. 起初，建筑物过去都很矮小……但现在，政府建起了许多高楼。 In the past, there were only narrow paths in my hometown. Now they have been replaced by wide roads. 过去，我的家乡只有狭窄的小路。现在它们都被宽阔的马路取代了。 The environment used to be dirty and messy, but now it’s clean and tidy.环境过去又脏又乱，但现在干净整洁。 3. 补充变化细节(递进/举例) Moreover, most families have got their own cars.此外，大多数家庭都有了私家车。 They bring knowledge and skills to help the local people.他们带来知识和技能，帮助当地百姓。 Moreover, there’s a community center with an activity room.此外，还有一个带有活动室的社区中心。 What’s more, there are also many famous attractions such as ...此外，还有许多著名的景点，例如…… For transportation, in the old days, people mainly rode bicycles. But now, there are various means of transportation like planes, trains and cars. 交通方面，过去人们主要骑自行车。但现在有各种各样的交通方式，比如飞机、火车和汽车。 When it comes to shopping, people used to go to small shops. Now, large supermarkets are everywhere. 购物方面，人们过去常去小商店。现在大型超市随处可见。 In terms of leisure activities, people used to listen to the radio or play chess. Now, people can surf the Internet, travel and do many other interesting things. 休闲活动方面，人们过去常听收音机或下棋。现在人们可以上网、旅游，还能做许多其他有趣的事。 There are more green areas and new exercise equipment for everyone to use. 有了更多的绿地和新的健身器材供大家使用。 4. 说明变化原因 Thanks to the support from the government and the hard work of the citizens, the living conditions ... have improved a lot.多亏了政府的支持和市民的辛勤努力，……的生活条件改善了很多。 Cleaners clean the streets every day to keep them tidy.清洁工每天打扫街道，保持街道整洁。 5. 表达情感与展望 People are enjoying a happier life.人们正过着更幸福的生活。 I think we should take an active part in protecting our environment.我认为我们应该积极参与保护环境。 I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. 我希望我的家乡未来会变得越来越美丽。 I believe my hometown will get better and better in the future.我相信我的家乡未来会越来越好。 I hope my hometown will develop faster in the future. I believe it will become a modern city. 我希望我的家乡未来发展得更快。我相信它会成为一座现代化的城市。 I am proud of these changes, and I believe the future of my hometown will be better and better. 我为这些变化感到自豪，我相信家乡的未来会越来越好。 I love my hometown!我爱我的家乡！ These changes make our community a better place to live in.这些变化让我们的社区变成了一个更宜居的地方。 I love my community because it’s not only comfortable but also full of warmth. 我爱我的社区，因为它不仅舒适，而且充满温暖。 I feel very happy and lucky to live in such a wonderful time.生活在这样美好的时代，我感到非常幸福和幸运。 I believe our life will become better and better in the future.我相信我们的生活会越来越好。 I believe our life will become even better in the future.我相信我们的生活未来会变得更好。 As we all know, green mountains and clear waters are as valuable as mountains of gold and silver. 众所周知，绿水青山和金山银山一样珍贵。 I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future.我会努力奋斗，让它在未来变得更美丽。 【写作通识】 一、认真审题，采集要点 审主题：书面表达体裁、题材不同，写法就有所不同。要通过仔细观察，认真审题，确定文章的主题，然后再围绕主题进行创作，以满足题目所规定的所有要求；审内容：审查题干，围绕主题，采集要点，务必做到要点全面。避免丢三落四要点不全的现象的发生，还要防止画蛇添足、节外生枝现象的发生。 二、理顺要点，挖掘要点 动笔写作前，先考虑文章的逻辑性，弄清先写什么，后写什么。若题干给出的提示层次清楚，可按提示的顺序进行表达；倘若提示层次凌乱，就要对题目所表达的要点顺序做适当的调整。书面表达不同于逐句翻译，如果只是对提示进行一一对应的翻译，而不考虑文章前后的连贯性，即使没有语法或拼写等错误，支离破碎的文章依然得不到高分。所以为了使表达得以连贯，有时(尤其是在做开放程度较大的书面表达题时)还需要挖掘要点去增加一些合理的细节。当然所加的内容一定要精略得当，否则会弄巧成拙； 三、合并要点，灵活表达 在“一刻千金”的考场上考生要想准确表达出所有内容，并非易事。首先考生要将关联的要点加上恰当的连词，放在一起进行表达，以体现上下文的逻辑性；其次，考生往往会遇到难以表述的内容，或一时想不起确切的习惯用语或句型来进行表达。面对这种情况有些考生不去认真考虑，进行变通表达，而是空着不写或是胡编乱造甚至用汉语拼音代替，其结果必然是答非所需、词不达意、甚至汉语式英语满天飞。正确的做法是要从另一个角度运用自己学过的熟悉的知识去灵活表达，达到异曲同工的效果。 四、逻辑清晰，过渡自然 一篇优秀的书面表达，逻辑是完整清晰的，并且句子与句子，段与段之间的衔接也是自然而然的。为达到这一效果，我们要注意连词和过渡句的运用。 我们将上述四个步骤简化为：采集要点、挖掘要点、表达要点和连贯表达(前两个步骤建议考生打腹稿，第三个步骤打草稿，第四个步骤规范书写到答题卡上)。 【以例佐证】 为了响应习近平总书记提出的“绿水青山就是金山银山(green mountains and clear water are like mountains of gold and silver)”，你校英文报特举办以家乡的变化为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面表格中的内容提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题用英语写一篇短文。 过去 生活贫困，房子又旧又小，街道很脏…… 现在 生活富裕，新楼房和公园，街道干净…… 将来 明天会更好…… 注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数为120左右。 The Changes in My Hometown _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【总体分析】 体裁与题材：本文是一篇以说明为主议论为辅的材料作文写作；主题为介绍家乡的变化，通过“过去——现在——将来”的时间线展现家乡的发展与环境改善。 主体时态：以一般过去时描述过去的情况，一般现在时描述现在的变化，一般将来时表达对未来的展望。 温馨提示：写作要点按时间顺序给出，需完整覆盖“过去贫困——现在富裕——未来更好”的内容，适当补充细节使行文连贯，结尾要呼应环保主题，升华情感。 【采集要点】 1. 过去：生活贫困，房子又旧又小，街道很脏。 2. 现在：生活富裕，新楼房和公园，街道干净。 3. 将来：展望家乡明天会更好。 4. 隐含要求：呼应“绿水青山就是金山银山”的环保理念。 【挖掘要点】 1. 补充过去的细节：可增加“交通不便，人们出行靠步行或自行车”“垃圾随处可见，环境脏乱”，丰富过去的贫困场景。 2. 补充现在的细节：可增加“绿树成荫，河水清澈”“公园成为人们休闲的好去处”，体现“绿水青山” 的变化；补充“人们生活水平提高，拥有私家车”，强化“富裕”的特点。 3. 补充结尾的升华点：加入“绿水青山就是金山银山”的理念表达，点明保护环境的重要性。 【表达要点】 1. 开篇点题(家乡发生巨变) ①Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few years. ②My hometown has changed a lot in the past few years. 2. 描述过去的情况(生活贫困，房子旧小，街道脏) ①In the past, people lived a poor life. They lived in old and small houses, and the streets were narrow and dirty. ②People used to live a poor life. Their houses were old and small, and there was rubbish everywhere on the streets. ③Years ago, people were poor. They had no big houses to live in, and the streets were very dirty. 3. 描述过去的交通补充细节 ①People usually went out on foot or by bike. ②There were no cars. People had to walk or ride bikes to go anywhere. 4. 描述现在的情况(生活富裕，新楼房和公园，街道干净) ①But now, everything has changed. People are rich. Many new buildings have been built, and there are beautiful parks in our town. The streets are wide and clean. ②Today, people live a better life. We can see tall new buildings and nice parks everywhere. The streets are clean and tidy. ③Now, our hometown is quite different. People have become rich. There are new houses, clean streets and lovely parks. 5. 描述现在的环境补充细节 ①Green trees and clear rivers are everywhere around us. ②We can see green trees along the streets and clear water in the rivers. 6. 表达环保理念(绿水青山就是金山银山) ①As we all know, green mountains and clear waters are as valuable as mountains of gold and silver. ②We all believe that green mountains and clear water are like mountains of gold and silver. 7. 展望未来(家乡明天会更好) ①I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. ②I believe our hometown will be better and better. ③I am sure my hometown will have a brighter future. 【连贯表达（兼答案）】 需要适当增加过渡词(如 but, besides)和细节，使上下文逻辑清晰、衔接自然。 The Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past few years. In the past, people lived a poor life. They lived in old and small houses. The streets were narrow and dirty with rubbish everywhere. People usually went out on foot or by bike. But now, everything has changed. People have become rich and many new buildings have been built. The streets are wide and clean. Besides, a beautiful park has been opened, where people can relax and enjoy the fresh air. Green trees and clear rivers are everywhere around us. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. As we all know, green mountains and clear waters are as valuable as mountains of gold and silver. We will try our best to protect our hometown and live a happier life. 【该题来源】湖北省黄冈市蕲春县2024-2025学年八年级下学期期末英语试卷 【原题答案】 The Changes in My Hometown Thanks to the government, my hometown has changed a lot in the past few years. In the past, people in my hometown lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. The streets were very dirty. Pollution was very serious. There was rubbish everywhere. But now, people are living a rich life. New buildings and parks are everywhere. The streets are clean and wide. The environment has become more and more beautiful. I feel happy with life in my hometown. I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future. 【原题详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，介绍家乡过去和现在的样子； 第二步，表达对现在家乡的喜爱并表示继续努力让家乡更美丽。 【亮点词汇】 ①live a poor life过着贫穷的生活 ②more and more beautiful越来越漂亮 【高分句型】 There was rubbish everywhere. (运用了there be句型) 第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $Unit 1 Past and present写作篇（家乡巨变） “练一本 【实践演练】1 假如你校要组织一次主题为”Changes in my hometown'”的英语口语演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点提示写 一篇短文参赛。 提示：1.可以从人们的住房、环境、交通等方面进行今昔对比； 2.注意运用used to结构。 要求：1.短文必须包含提示中所有内容，并适当发挥： 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4.至少100词，演讲稿的开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi,everybody, Here I will tell you about some things that have changed in my hometown. I believe my hometown will get better and better in the future. That's all.Thank you! 【实践演练】2 家乡是每个人成长的地方，随着时间推移，家乡的面貌也在不断变化。请以“The Changes in My 第1页共4页 Hometown”为题，写一篇短文。 提示：对比家乡过去与现在的不同，并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.词数：不得少于100。 The Changes in My Hometown 【实践演练】3 随着社会的快速发展，我们的生活发生着巨大的变化，尤其是在居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动等 方面。Jo是你的一位美国朋友，他是一名不折不扣的“中国迷”，尤其对近些年来中国的变化非常感兴 趣。请你以“The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me”为题，写一篇短文向他详细介绍这些变化。 小 2的 购物中 ，雪佛 > Feeling 注意事项：1.必须包含所有图中提示信息，可适当发挥，词数80左右： 第2页共4页 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around me 【实践演练】4 近些年我们生活的社区发生了很大变化。不仅居住环境得到改善，人们也更加友好。为此，本周英语 主题班会的主题为“我生活的社区”。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍你生活的社区。 写作提示：1.你所居住社区的位置和社区的人口； 2.社区近些年的变化。 写作要求：1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥： 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称： 3.词数100左右（文中己给出内容不计入总词数） Hello,everyone!I'm Li Hui. 第3页共4页 【实践演练】5 假定你是李辉，你们学英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动，请你根据下表提示的要点，以“Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇短文，简述社会、家庭、学校及个人生活中的变化 变化 家乡 小路→宽路 交通 步行、骑自行车→乘坐公交车/火车、开小汽车 学校 旧校舍→新教学楼 个人 仅通过书本学习→还通过电脑或手机APP学习 要求：1.包含全部要点，可适当发挥： 2.不能出现真实的校名及姓名； 3.词数100左右。 Changes in Our Life 第4页共4页 Unit 1 Past and present 写作篇（家乡巨变） 【话题解读】 “Write an article about the changes in my hometown”是8B Unit 1书面表达的主要话题，要求学生运用对比手法聚焦过去与现在的场景差异，具体描述家乡在环境、交通、生活条件等方面的发展变化；并在描述中展现对家乡变化的认知与情感，进而落实家国情怀的核心素养培育目标。写作时需紧扣三大核心要点：一是精准呈现差异，具体刻画家乡在物理环境(如道路、建筑)、生活条件(如住房、设施)、生态状况(如空气、绿化)等维度的变化，凸显“家乡巨变，今非昔比”的变迁感；二是深化主题内涵，通过鲜明的对比传递发展理念——如经济腾飞、社会进步给生活带来的深刻变革；三是融入真挚情感，将对家乡的自豪、眷恋与期盼等情感自然渗透于字里行间，最终凸显“在变化中自我成长、在发展中一路向好”的深层主旨。 在具体检测时，话题绝对不仅仅局限于“家乡巨变”。因此，我们要拓宽视野。比如：社区、学校、家庭(包括个人)乃至我们周围林林总总的变化。 【审题要领】 时态的精准性：描述过去用一般过去时或 “used to do”，描述现在用一般现在时，强调变化结果用现在完成时(如 “have taken place”)，避免时态混淆； 内容的丰富性：需覆盖2-3个具体维度(如环境+交通+生活<过去vs现在对比>)，避免泛泛而谈，每个方面需有“过去细节+现在细节”的对比； 表达的连贯性：需包含“总起(点明变化)——分述(具体变化)——总结(感受/展望)”，确保脉络清晰，衔接自然，表达连贯。 【写作框架】 三段式：总起(点明变化)——分述(具体变化)——总结(感受/展望) 1. 总起：开门见山，点明变化，引出下文 用一句话概括家乡巨变。 There have been great changes in my hometown in(over/during)the last(past)few years. It is quite different from what it used to be.过去几年，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。和以前大不一样了。 My hometown has changed greatly in(over/during)the last(past)few years. 过去几年，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 In recent years, my hometown has changed a lot in many ways. 近年来，我的家乡在很多方面都发生了很大变化。 2. 分述：今昔对比，具体阐述，细节支撑 可按“环境/交通/生活”等维度，用“过去+现在”的对比句式展开，需有细节支撑。 环境变化：In the past, the river was polluted and smelled terrible. But now, it has become clear, and many fish live in it.过去，这条河被污染了，气味很难闻。但现在，河水变清了，里面有很多鱼。Years ago, the ground was covered with rubbish. Nowadays, people have got used to throwing rubbish into dustbins, so the village is clean.几年前，地上到处都是垃圾。如今，人们已经习惯把垃圾扔进垃圾桶，所以村子很干净。 Once, the air in my hometown was not fresh because of small factories. Now, those factories are closed, and we can breathe fresh air.以前，因为一些小工厂，我家乡的空气并不新鲜。现在，那些工厂关闭了，我们能呼吸到新鲜空气了。 交通变化：Years ago, there were only narrow roads, and people traveled by bike. Nowadays, wide streets have been built, and most families have their own cars.几年前，只有狭窄的道路，人们骑自行车出行。如今，宽阔的街道建起来了，大多数家庭都有了自己的汽车。 A few years ago, the roads in my hometown were narrow and bumpy. Now, they are wide and smooth.几年前，我家乡的路又窄又颠簸。现在，路又宽又平坦。 In the past, people in the village mainly went out by bike or on foot. Nowadays, many families have their own electric bikes or cars.过去，村里的人主要骑自行车或步行出门。如今，很多家庭都拥有他们自己的电动车或汽车了。 Once, there were no buses between our village and the town. Now, buses run every hour, making travel easier.以前，我们村和镇上之间没有公交车。现在，每小时都有公交车，出行更容易了。 Years ago, crossing the river was hard for us. But now, a new bridge has been built across it, and we can walk across it easily.几年前，过河对我们来说很困难。但现在，河上建了一座新桥，我们可以轻松地走过去。 生活变化：People used to live in small old houses. Now they live in bright apartments with modern furniture.人们过去住在狭小的老房子里，现在住在配有现代家具的明亮公寓里。 In the past, people lived in small, old houses. Now, most families have moved into new and bright buildings.过去，人们住在狭小的老房子里。现在，大多数家庭都搬进了崭新明亮的楼房。 Once, people shopped in small local stores with few goods. Nowadays, a big supermarket has opened, and we can buy many things there.以前，人们在当地的小商店购物，商品很少。如今，一家大超市开业了，我们在那里能买到很多东西。 In the past, people watched TV or talked with neighbors in their free time. Now, they can use phones to chat or watch videos.过去，人们在空闲时间看电视或和邻居聊天。现在，他们可以用手机聊天或看视频。 Years ago, children studied in old classrooms. Now, we have new schools with computers and libraries.几年前，孩子们在破旧的教室里学习。现在，我们有了新学校，里面有电脑和图书馆。 3. 总结：抒发感受，展望未来，升华情感 表达对家乡巨变的态度，升华情感。 I’m proud of these changes. I hope my hometown will become even more beautiful in the future. 我为这些变化感到骄傲，希望我的家乡未来会变得更加美丽。 These changes make our life better. I hope my hometown will be more beautiful. 这些变化让我们的生活更美好了。我希望我的家乡会变得更加美丽。 I love my hometown’s new look. It will become a better place to live in the future. 我爱家乡的新面貌。未来它会成为一个更适合居住的地方。 Seeing these great changes, I feel proud of my hometown.看到这些巨大的变化，我为我的家乡感到骄傲。 【必备词句】 与“变化”主题相关的常用词汇 一、 表达变化类 take place发生 change a lot变化很大 improve a lot/rapidly改善很多/极大改善 develop faster发展更快 be replaced by被……取代 attract thousands of tourists吸引成千上万的游客 二、 时间对比类 over the last 40 years在过去的40年里 in the past在过去 many years ago许多年前 back then那时候 these years这些年 over the years这些年来 in recent years近年来 used to do过去常常 nowadays如今 三、 生活环境类 1. 建筑相关 old and broken houses破旧的房子 modern houses or flats现代化的房子或公寓 small and old houses又小又旧的房子 small and dark houses又小又暗的房子 big and bright houses又大又明亮的房子 spacious and bright houses宽敞明亮的房子 tall buildings高楼 skyscraper摩天大楼 new buildings新楼房 2. 道路相关 narrow paths狭窄的小路 narrow and dirty狭窄又肮脏的 wide roads宽阔的马路 wide and clean宽阔又干净的 clean and beautiful streets干净美丽的街道 clean and tidy streets干净整洁的街道 dirty and messy environment脏乱的环境 3. 自然环境相关 serious pollution严重的污染 rubbish everywhere /litter everywhere到处是垃圾 polluted environment受污染的环境 green areas/trees绿地/绿树 greener mountains更绿的山 clearer water/clearer river更清澈的水/河流 bluer sky更蓝的天空 fresh air新鲜空气 famous attractions著名景点 beautiful park美丽的公园 四、 交通方式类 on foot步行 by bicycle /by bike骑自行车 by bus乘公交车 by taxi乘出租车 by underground乘地铁 by train乘火车 by plane乘飞机 have got their own cars拥有他们自己的车 high-speed railway stations高铁站 various means of transportation各种各样的交通方式 五、 生活与发展类 living conditions生活条件 knowledge and skills知识和技能 support from the government政府的支持 hard work of the citizens市民的辛勤努力 leisure activities休闲活动 large supermarkets大型超市 small shops小商店 community center社区中心 activity room活动室 exercise equipment健身器材 teaching buildings教学楼 mobile apps手机应用程序 rich/poor life富裕/贫穷的生活 六、 情感与展望类 enjoy a happier life享受更幸福的生活 take an active part in protecting the environment积极参与保护环境 be proud of these changes为这些变化感到自豪 more and more beautiful越来越美丽 better and better越来越好 a better place to live in一个更宜居的地方 comfortable and full of warmth舒适且充满温暖 与“变化”主题相关的常用句型 1. 开篇引入变化 Many changes have taken place in... over the last... years.在过去的……年里，……发生了许多变化。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown these years.这些年，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years.这些年来，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 Great changes have taken place in my hometown.我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。 With the help of the government, my hometown has changed a lot.在政府的帮助下，我的家乡变化很大。 With the rapid development of society, great changes have taken place around me. 随着社会的快速发展，我身边发生了巨大的变化。 With the rapid development of China’s economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. 随着中国经济的快速发展，过去几年我们的生活发生了巨大的变化。 In recent years, our community has changed a lot.近年来，我们的社区变化很大。 Thanks to the government, my hometown has changed a lot in the past few years. 多亏了政府，我的家乡在过去几年里变化很大。 2. 过去与现在对比 In the past, people lived in old broken houses. Today, most people live in modern houses or flats, and the streets are clean and beautiful.过去，人们住在破旧的房子里。如今，大多数人住在现代化的房子或公寓里，街道干净又美丽。 Many years ago, people had to get around the town by bicycle or on foot. Now it is common to take a bus, a taxi or the underground.许多年前，人们不得不骑自行车或步行在镇上出行。现在，乘公交车、出租车或地铁很普遍。 Back then, some people went to college and had to find jobs in other places. Today, however, many college students return and do all kinds of jobs.那时候，一些人上了大学后不得不在外地找工作。然而现在，许多大学生返乡从事各种各样的工作。 In the past, my hometown was very small. We used to live a hard life. But now we live in big and bright houses.过去，我的家乡很小。我们过去过着艰苦的生活。但现在我们住在又大又明亮的房子里。 In the past, people lived a poor life. The houses were small and old... Now, everything has changed. People live in large and bright houses.过去，人们过着贫穷的生活。房子又小又旧……现在，一切都变了。人们住在宽敞明亮的房子里。 In the past, there were few tall buildings, and people lived in small and old houses. Nowadays, things are quite different. The houses are big and bright.过去，几乎没有高楼，人们住在又小又旧的房子里。如今，情况大不相同了。房子又大又明亮。 At first, the buildings used to be so small... But now, the government has built many tall buildings. 起初，建筑物过去都很矮小……但现在，政府建起了许多高楼。 In the past, there were only narrow paths in my hometown. Now they have been replaced by wide roads. 过去，我的家乡只有狭窄的小路。现在它们都被宽阔的马路取代了。 The environment used to be dirty and messy, but now it’s clean and tidy.环境过去又脏又乱，但现在干净整洁。 3. 补充变化细节(递进/举例) Moreover, most families have got their own cars.此外，大多数家庭都有了私家车。 They bring knowledge and skills to help the local people.他们带来知识和技能，帮助当地百姓。 Moreover, there’s a community center with an activity room.此外，还有一个带有活动室的社区中心。 What’s more, there are also many famous attractions such as ...此外，还有许多著名的景点，例如…… For transportation, in the old days, people mainly rode bicycles. But now, there are various means of transportation like planes, trains and cars. 交通方面，过去人们主要骑自行车。但现在有各种各样的交通方式，比如飞机、火车和汽车。 When it comes to shopping, people used to go to small shops. Now, large supermarkets are everywhere. 购物方面，人们过去常去小商店。现在大型超市随处可见。 In terms of leisure activities, people used to listen to the radio or play chess. Now, people can surf the Internet, travel and do many other interesting things. 休闲活动方面，人们过去常听收音机或下棋。现在人们可以上网、旅游，还能做许多其他有趣的事。 There are more green areas and new exercise equipment for everyone to use. 有了更多的绿地和新的健身器材供大家使用。 4. 说明变化原因 Thanks to the support from the government and the hard work of the citizens, the living conditions ... have improved a lot.多亏了政府的支持和市民的辛勤努力，……的生活条件改善了很多。 Cleaners clean the streets every day to keep them tidy.清洁工每天打扫街道，保持街道整洁。 5. 表达情感与展望 People are enjoying a happier life.人们正过着更幸福的生活。 I think we should take an active part in protecting our environment.我认为我们应该积极参与保护环境。 I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. 我希望我的家乡未来会变得越来越美丽。 I believe my hometown will get better and better in the future.我相信我的家乡未来会越来越好。 I hope my hometown will develop faster in the future. I believe it will become a modern city. 我希望我的家乡未来发展得更快。我相信它会成为一座现代化的城市。 I am proud of these changes, and I believe the future of my hometown will be better and better. 我为这些变化感到自豪，我相信家乡的未来会越来越好。 I love my hometown!我爱我的家乡！ These changes make our community a better place to live in.这些变化让我们的社区变成了一个更宜居的地方。 I love my community because it’s not only comfortable but also full of warmth. 我爱我的社区，因为它不仅舒适，而且充满温暖。 I feel very happy and lucky to live in such a wonderful time.生活在这样美好的时代，我感到非常幸福和幸运。 I believe our life will become better and better in the future.我相信我们的生活会越来越好。 I believe our life will become even better in the future.我相信我们的生活未来会变得更好。 As we all know, green mountains and clear waters are as valuable as mountains of gold and silver. 众所周知，绿水青山和金山银山一样珍贵。 I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future.我会努力奋斗，让它在未来变得更美丽。 【写作通识】 一、认真审题，采集要点 审主题：书面表达体裁、题材不同，写法就有所不同。要通过仔细观察，认真审题，确定文章的主题，然后再围绕主题进行创作，以满足题目所规定的所有要求；审内容：审查题干，围绕主题，采集要点，务必做到要点全面。避免丢三落四要点不全的现象的发生，还要防止画蛇添足、节外生枝现象的发生。 二、理顺要点，挖掘要点 动笔写作前，先考虑文章的逻辑性，弄清先写什么，后写什么。若题干给出的提示层次清楚，可按提示的顺序进行表达；倘若提示层次凌乱，就要对题目所表达的要点顺序做适当的调整。书面表达不同于逐句翻译，如果只是对提示进行一一对应的翻译，而不考虑文章前后的连贯性，即使没有语法或拼写等错误，支离破碎的文章依然得不到高分。所以为了使表达得以连贯，有时(尤其是在做开放程度较大的书面表达题时)还需要挖掘要点去增加一些合理的细节。当然所加的内容一定要精略得当，否则会弄巧成拙； 三、合并要点，灵活表达 在“一刻千金”的考场上考生要想准确表达出所有内容，并非易事。首先考生要将关联的要点加上恰当的连词，放在一起进行表达，以体现上下文的逻辑性；其次，考生往往会遇到难以表述的内容，或一时想不起确切的习惯用语或句型来进行表达。面对这种情况有些考生不去认真考虑，进行变通表达，而是空着不写或是胡编乱造甚至用汉语拼音代替，其结果必然是答非所需、词不达意、甚至汉语式英语满天飞。正确的做法是要从另一个角度运用自己学过的熟悉的知识去灵活表达，达到异曲同工的效果。 四、逻辑清晰，过渡自然 一篇优秀的书面表达，逻辑是完整清晰的，并且句子与句子，段与段之间的衔接也是自然而然的。为达到这一效果，我们要注意连词和过渡句的运用。 我们将上述四个步骤简化为：采集要点、挖掘要点、表达要点和连贯表达(前两个步骤建议考生打腹稿，第三个步骤打草稿，第四个步骤规范书写到答题卡上)。 【以例佐证】 为了响应习近平总书记提出的“绿水青山就是金山银山(green mountains and clear water are like mountains of gold and silver)”，你校英文报特举办以家乡的变化为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面表格中的内容提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题用英语写一篇短文。 过去 生活贫困，房子又旧又小，街道很脏…… 现在 生活富裕，新楼房和公园，街道干净…… 将来 明天会更好…… 注意：1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 词数为120左右。 The Changes in My Hometown _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【总体分析】 体裁与题材：本文是一篇以说明为主议论为辅的材料作文写作；主题为介绍家乡的变化，通过“过去——现在——将来”的时间线展现家乡的发展与环境改善。 主体时态：以一般过去时描述过去的情况，一般现在时描述现在的变化，一般将来时表达对未来的展望。 温馨提示：写作要点按时间顺序给出，需完整覆盖“过去贫困——现在富裕——未来更好”的内容，适当补充细节使行文连贯，结尾要呼应环保主题，升华情感。 【采集要点】 1. 过去： 2. 现在： 3. 将来： 4. 隐含要求： 【挖掘要点】 1. 补充过去的细节： 2. 补充现在的细节： 3. 补充结尾的升华点： 【表达要点】 1. 开篇点题(家乡发生巨变) ① ② 2. 描述过去的情况(生活贫困，房子旧小，街道脏) ① ② ③ 3. 描述过去的交通补充细节 ① ② 4. 描述现在的情况(生活富裕，新楼房和公园，街道干净) ① ② ③ 5. 描述现在的环境补充细节 ① ② 6. 表达环保理念(绿水青山就是金山银山) ① ② 7. 展望未来(家乡明天会更好) ① ② ③ 【连贯表达（兼答案）】 需要适当增加过渡词(如 but, besides)和细节，使上下文逻辑清晰、衔接自然。 第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 Past and present 写作篇（家乡巨变） 【实践演练】1 假如你校要组织一次主题为”Changes in my hometown”的英语口语演讲比赛, 请你根据以下要点提示写一篇短文参赛。 提示：1. 可以从人们的住房、环境、交通等方面进行今昔对比； 2. 注意运用used to结构。 要求：1. 短文必须包含提示中所有内容, 并适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 语法正确, 书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4. 至少100词, 演讲稿的开头及结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。 Hi, everybody, Here I will tell you about some things that have changed in my hometown. __________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe my hometown will get better and better in the future. That’s all. Thank you! 【答案】 Hi, everybody, Here I will tell you about some things that have changed in my hometown. Great changes have taken place in my hometown these years. In the past, my hometown was very small. We used to live a hard life. The houses were old and broken. The pollution in my province was serious and there was litter everywhere. It was not easy to travel around, so there were few travelers. But now we live in big and bright houses, many people have their own cars. The environment is better, the mountains become greener, water becomes clearer, and the sky becomes bluer. So our hometown attracts thousands of travelers every year. I think we should take an active part in protecting our environment. I hope my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. There will be more tourists coming to our hometown. I believe my hometown will get better and better in the future. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：这是一篇演讲稿。 ②时态：现在完成时和一般现在时 ③提示：文章通过对比过去和现在的家乡状况，展示了家乡在环境、住房、交通等方面的显著改善，并表达了对家乡未来的美好期望。 【写作步骤】 第一步，引入话题：作者首先引出要讨论的话题——家乡的变化； 第二步，详细描述变化：作者详细描述了家乡在过去和现在的对比，包括住房条件、环境质量、交通状况等方面的变化； 第三步，总结并表达期望：作者总结了对家乡变化的看法，并表达了对家乡未来更加美好的期望。 【亮点词汇】 ①take place：发生，此处用于描述家乡发生的变化。 ②used to：过去常常，对比过去和现在的家乡状况。 ③thousands of ：成千上万，用于描述家乡游客多。 【高分句型】 ①Great changes have taken place in my hometown these years.(现在完成时) ②The environment is better, the mountains become greener, water becomes clearer, and the sky becomes bluer.(并列句，通过多个形容词的变化，生动地描绘了家乡环境的改善) 【实践演练】2 家乡是每个人成长的地方，随着时间推移，家乡的面貌也在不断变化。请以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，写一篇短文。 提示：对比家乡过去与现在的不同，并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.词数：不得少于100。 The Changes in My Hometown _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】1 The Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years. In the past, people lived a poor life. The houses were small and old, and pollution was serious—rubbish was everywhere. It was also difficult to travel to other places, so few tourists came here. Now, everything has changed. People live in large and bright houses, and many even own cars. The environment is getting better, streets are cleaner, and trees and flowers can be seen everywhere. Thousands of tourists visit my hometown every year to enjoy its beauty. I hope my hometown will develop faster in the future. I believe it will become a modern city, attracting more visitors and bringing more happiness to the people here. 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 【写作步骤】 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍家乡过去与现在的不同，并谈谈自己的感受。 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的收获和感悟。 【亮点词汇】 ①live a poor life过着贫穷的生活 ②thousands of成千上万的 ③in the past在过去 ④enjoy beauty欣赏美 【高分句型】 ①It was also difficult to travel to other places, so few tourists came here. (并列句) ②I hope my hometown will develop faster in the future. (宾语从句) 【答案】2 The Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, there were few tall buildings, and people lived in small and old houses. There were also dirty water, bad air and rubbish everywhere. People could only go to work by bus or by bike. It used to be a quiet place. Nowadays, things are quite different. The houses are big and bright. Many people have their own cars. The government has also built three high-speed railway stations in Zhangqiu, so we can go anywhere by train easily. Besides, the environment has been more beautiful. The river is clearer and the sky is bluer. What’s more, there are also many famous attractions such as Qingzhao Spring Town and Jinan Wild World. They have attracted thousands of tourists every year. More and more people have known my hometown. I am proud of these changes, and I believe the future of my hometown will be better and better. I love my hometown! 【答案】3 Changes in My Hometown With the help of the government, my hometown has changed a lot. At first, the buildings used to be so small. There was always a lot of rubbish here and there. But now, the government has built many tall buildings. Cleaners clean the streets every day to keep them tidy.  People used to live in small and dark houses, but now they live in spacious and bright houses. Secondly, people almost had nothing to do in their free time several years ago. Nowadays, there are different kinds of ways for people to spend their free time, such as going shopping, watching movies and so on. What’s more, there are many green trees and flowers around my home now. I hope my hometown will become better and better. 【实践演练】3 随着社会的快速发展，我们的生活发生着巨大的变化，尤其是在居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动等方面。John是你的一位美国朋友，他是一名不折不扣的“中国迷”，尤其对近些年来中国的变化非常感兴趣。请你以“The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me”为题，写一篇短文向他详细介绍这些变化。 Feeling … 注意事项：1. 必须包含所有图中提示信息，可适当发挥，词数80左右； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around me _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me With the rapid development of society, great changes have taken place around me, especially in living environment, transportation, shopping and leisure activities.   In the past, people lived in small houses. Now, many tall buildings have been built. For transportation, in the old days, people mainly rode bicycles. But now, there are various means of transportation like planes, trains and cars. When it comes to shopping, people used to go to small shops. Now, large supermarkets are everywhere, making shopping more convenient. In terms of leisure activities, people used to listen to the radio or play chess. Now, people can surf the Internet, travel and do many other interesting things.   I feel very happy and lucky to live in such a wonderful time. I believe our life will become better and better in the future. 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：以现在完成时、一般过去时和一般现在时为主； ③提示：文章围绕“身边的巨大变化”展开，清晰涵盖居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动四个维度的对比，逻辑连贯，细节丰富，突出了“变化”这一核心要点。 【写作步骤】 第一步，开篇点题； 第二步，按“过去——现在”的对比结构，分别阐述四个维度的具体变化； 第三步，结尾抒发个人感受，表达对当下生活的喜悦与幸运，并展望未来生活越来越好。 【亮点词汇】 ①with the rapid development of随着……的快速发展 ②in the past在过去 ③in terms of就……而言 【高分句型】 ①Now, large supermarkets are everywhere, making shopping more convenient.(现在分词短语作结果状语) ②I believe our life will become better and better in the future.(省略that的宾语从句) 【实践演练】4 近些年我们生活的社区发生了很大变化。不仅居住环境得到改善，人们也更加友好。为此，本周英语主题班会的主题为“我生活的社区”。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍你生活的社区。 写作提示：1. 你所居住社区的位置和社区的人口； 2. 社区近些年的变化。 写作要求：1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. _______________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui. I live in a community called Sunshine Community. It is in the center of our city. It’s very convenient because there is a big park and a supermarket nearby. My community has a population of about 5,000 people. Most of us are friendly and always ready to help each other. In recent years, our community has changed a lot. The environment used to be dirty and messy, but now it’s clean and tidy. There are more green areas and new exercise equipment for everyone to use. Moreover, there’s a community center with an activity room. We often organize sports meetings and celebrate festivals together. These changes make our community a better place to live in. I love my community because it’s not only comfortable but also full of warmth. Thank you! 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：根据提示要点介绍自己生活的社区，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，并重点突出。 【写作步骤】 第一步，介绍居住的社区的位置； 第二步，介绍社区的人口； 第三步，介绍社区的变化； 第四步，书写结语，进行总结。 【亮点词汇】 ①help each other互相帮助 ②used to be过去是 ③full of充满 【高分句型】 ①The environment used to be dirty and messy, but now it’s clean and tidy. (but连接的并列句) ②I love my community because it’s not only comfortable but also full of warmth. (because引导原因状语从句) 【实践演练】5 假定你是李辉，你们学英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动，请你根据下表提示的要点，以“Changes in Our Life”为题写一篇短文，简述社会、家庭、学校及个人生活中的变化 变化 家乡 小路→宽路 交通 步行、骑自行车→乘坐公交车/火车、开小汽车 学校 旧校舍→新教学楼 个人 仅通过书本学习→还通过电脑或手机APP学习 要求：1. 包含全部要点，可适当发挥； 2. 不能出现真实的校名及姓名； 3. 词数100左右。 Changes in Our Life _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Changes in Our Life With the rapid development of China’s economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.   In the past, there were only narrow paths in my hometown. Now they have been replaced by wide roads. People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they usually take buses, trains or drive cars. Our school has changed a lot too. The old school buildings have disappeared and new teaching buildings stand there now. As for me, I only learned from books before, but now I can also study through computers or mobile apps.   I believe our life will become even better in the future. 【详解】 【总体分析】 ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据表格要点完成写作，注意今昔对比的准确性。 【写作步骤】 第一步，引出生活变化主题； 第二步，从家乡、交通、学校、个人四方面对比变化； 第三步，总结变化的意义并展望未来。 【亮点词汇】 ①rapid development快速发展 ②take place发生 ③be replaced by被……取代 ④teaching buildings教学楼 ⑤convenient and efficient便捷高效 【高分句型】 ①People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they usually take buses, trains or drive cars. (used to do过去常常做某事) ②I believe our life will become even better in the future. (宾语从句) 第 1 页 共 1 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $