Unit 9 Learning （单元应用文写作精练）英语北师大版必修第三册

Unit 9 Learning 学习 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题： 学习反思 学习反思是一种用于回顾、分析和总结个人学习过程与成果的文体。其核心目的是通过对比学习前后的认知变化，梳理关键收获，并规划未来应用，从而深化理解、提升元认知能力，实现自我改进。 写作框架： 第一段 引出主题,简单概括读书的收获 第二段 围绕所选主题的内容要点逐一论述 第三段 如何根据自己的实际情况学以致用 写作词汇短语： 1. 总述收获： benefit a lot from... 从……中受益匪浅 learn a lot after reading... 在阅读……后学到很多 helps me better know... 帮助我更好地了解…… 2. 对比认知： Before reading..., I knew little about... 在阅读……前，我对……知之甚少 used to think... 过去曾认为…… Now I understand... 现在我明白了…… 3. 阐述新知： One of the best ways to... is to... 做某事的最佳方法之一是…… ...can block us from... ……会阻碍我们…… The purpose of... is to... ……的目的是…… 4. 规划未来： apply what I have learnt to... 将我所学的应用到…… learn to avoid... 学会避免…… attempt to ask as many questions as I can 尝试尽可能多地提问 try our best to... 尽力去…… 写作句型： 【开头句】 I benefit a lot from "[学习主题]" by [作者], which helps me better know [核心认识]. 我从[作者]的《[学习主题]》中受益匪浅，它帮助我更好地了解了[核心认识]。 — 使用定语从句，高度浓缩开头段。 【中间句】 1. Before reading the text, I knew little about... Now I understand there are many things we can do to... 在阅读课文前，我对……知之甚少。现在我明白我们可以做很多事情来……。 — 经典的“过去vs现在”对比结构。 2. If we..., it can block us from... 如果我们……，它会阻碍我们……。 — 用条件状语从句分析问题。 3. One of the best ways to promote... is to ask questions. 促进……的最好方法之一就是提问。 — 提出具体策略。 【结尾句】 In the future, I will apply what I have learnt to..., and learn to avoid... On the other hand, I will also attempt to... 未来，我会将所学应用于……，并学会避免……。另一方面，我也会尝试……。 — 使用并列结构，列出具体、可衡量的行动计划。 写作模板： My Reflection on "[学习主题]" I benefit a lot from "[学习主题]" (by [作者]), which helps me better know [这篇文章/主题的核心是什么]. Before reading the text, I knew little about [学习主题]. Now I understand there are many things we can do to [成为更好的学习者/实现某个目标]. Specifically, I learnt that [要点一，例如: our inner voice can sometimes block learning]. Moreover, [要点二，例如: one of the best ways to promote active learning is to ask questions]. In the future, I will apply what I have learnt to my [study/work/life]. For example, I will learn to avoid [旧有的不良习惯]. On the other hand, I will also attempt to [实践学到的新策略]. I believe these actions will help me [达到的积极效果]. （2023·全国乙卷·高考真题）请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 注意：1.词数100左右；         2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 请以“My Reflection on ‘Roots & Shoots’”为题，用英语写一篇学习反思。 注意：1.观点明确，结构完整； 2．词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（24-25高二下·甘肃定西·期末）虽然培养孩子的兴趣爱好是非常必要的，但现在有很多家长一味地追求子女多才多艺，迫使孩子学习他们不感兴趣的东西。请你就此现象谈谈自己的看法，内容包括： 1.你是否赞同上述家长的做法； 2.以你或你朋友的经历说明你的观点； 3.呼吁家长们尊重孩子的意愿。 注意： 1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 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2．（2025高一·全国·专题练习）最近你在某英文报纸上读到一篇文章，文中说道，虽然现在的生活条件越来越好，青少年的快乐却少了。请你就此话题写一篇短文，表达你的想法，内容包括：1. 导致该现象的原因；2. 提出相应的建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（24-25高一上·新疆阿克苏·期末）最近你校英文论坛就互联网对人们生活的利弊进行讨论。请你根据所给提示用英文写一篇短文，分析网络发展的利与弊，并谈谈你的看法。 优点： 1.信息助力学习与研究；2.方便交流；3.便捷购物和娱乐。 缺点： 1.健康问题；2.虚假信息和犯罪行为；3.隐私泄露。 注意：1.词数80词左右； 2.题目已给出，不计入总数； 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（25-26高一上·天津滨海新·月考）随着科技的进步和社交媒体的发展，交友的方式已由传统的面对面发展为线上交友，请你就此现象谈一下你的观点。(字数：100字左右) 要点涵盖：1. 你对于网上交友的观点； 2. 网上交友的优缺点； 3. 总结你的看法。 提示词：social media (社交媒体)；online (在网络上) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（25-26高一上·云南昆明·月考）假定你是李华，在观看神舟十八号载人飞船(The Shenzhou-18 manned spacecraft)成功发射的视频后，你感到无比自豪和激动。请你写一篇观后感发表到你们学校的英文报上。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 9 Learning 学习 应用文写作精练 写作主题 识 主题： 学习反思 学习反思是一种用于回顾、分析和总结个人学习过程与成果的文体。其核心目的是通过对比学习前后的认知变化，梳理关键收获，并规划未来应用，从而深化理解、提升元认知能力，实现自我改进。 写作框架： 第一段 引出主题,简单概括读书的收获 第二段 围绕所选主题的内容要点逐一论述 第三段 如何根据自己的实际情况学以致用 写作词汇短语： 1. 总述收获： benefit a lot from... 从……中受益匪浅 learn a lot after reading... 在阅读……后学到很多 helps me better know... 帮助我更好地了解…… 2. 对比认知： Before reading..., I knew little about... 在阅读……前，我对……知之甚少 used to think... 过去曾认为…… Now I understand... 现在我明白了…… 3. 阐述新知： One of the best ways to... is to... 做某事的最佳方法之一是…… ...can block us from... ……会阻碍我们…… The purpose of... is to... ……的目的是…… 4. 规划未来： apply what I have learnt to... 将我所学的应用到…… learn to avoid... 学会避免…… attempt to ask as many questions as I can 尝试尽可能多地提问 try our best to... 尽力去…… 写作句型： 【开头句】 I benefit a lot from "[学习主题]" by [作者], which helps me better know [核心认识]. 我从[作者]的《[学习主题]》中受益匪浅，它帮助我更好地了解了[核心认识]。 — 使用定语从句，高度浓缩开头段。 【中间句】 1. Before reading the text, I knew little about... Now I understand there are many things we can do to... 在阅读课文前，我对……知之甚少。现在我明白我们可以做很多事情来……。 — 经典的“过去vs现在”对比结构。 2. If we..., it can block us from... 如果我们……，它会阻碍我们……。 — 用条件状语从句分析问题。 3. One of the best ways to promote... is to ask questions. 促进……的最好方法之一就是提问。 — 提出具体策略。 【结尾句】 In the future, I will apply what I have learnt to..., and learn to avoid... On the other hand, I will also attempt to... 未来，我会将所学应用于……，并学会避免……。另一方面，我也会尝试……。 — 使用并列结构，列出具体、可衡量的行动计划。 写作模板： My Reflection on "[学习主题]" I benefit a lot from "[学习主题]" (by [作者]), which helps me better know [这篇文章/主题的核心是什么]. Before reading the text, I knew little about [学习主题]. Now I understand there are many things we can do to [成为更好的学习者/实现某个目标]. Specifically, I learnt that [要点一，例如: our inner voice can sometimes block learning]. Moreover, [要点二，例如: one of the best ways to promote active learning is to ask questions]. In the future, I will apply what I have learnt to my [study/work/life]. For example, I will learn to avoid [旧有的不良习惯]. On the other hand, I will also attempt to [实践学到的新策略]. I believe these actions will help me [达到的积极效果]. （2023·全国乙卷·高考真题）请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 注意：1.词数100左右；         2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave. However, it did not demoralize me. I spent most of my leisure hours to practice piano. Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. Even though I will not pursue as my life career, I will still continue learning and playing piano as my hobby. It is simply because music is the best medication for my soul. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 机会：opportunity → chance 使沮丧：demoralize → discourage 满意的：satisfied → content 空闲的：leisure → spare 2. 句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：The fantastic players touched me deeply. I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 拓展句：The fantastic players touched me deeply, so I asked my parents allowing me to take up a piano lesson for beginner. 【点睛】 【高分句型1】When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】Although my fingers were painful after few hours practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely. (运用了although引导的让步状语从句和if引导的条件状语从句) 请以“My Reflection on ‘Roots & Shoots’”为题，用英语写一篇学习反思。 注意：1.观点明确，结构完整； 2．词数80左右。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ One possible version： My Reflection on “Roots & Shoots” I have learnt a lot after reading the text “Roots & Shoots”. It's the name of an international institute which contributes to the protection of the environment. Little did I know about “Roots & Shoots” before I read the text. Now I know that it was established in the early 1990s by Dr. Jane Goodall. It is called “Roots & Shoots” because roots move slowly under the ground to make a firm foundation. Additionally, although shoots seem small and weak, they can break open brick walls. The purpose of “Roots & Shoots” is to educate young people to protect the environment. It's the duty of everyone to take action to protect the environment from now on. Just as Dr. Jane Goodall says, every individual makes a difference. We should try our best to make the world a better place. 1．（24-25高二下·甘肃定西·期末）虽然培养孩子的兴趣爱好是非常必要的，但现在有很多家长一味地追求子女多才多艺，迫使孩子学习他们不感兴趣的东西。请你就此现象谈谈自己的看法，内容包括： 1.你是否赞同上述家长的做法； 2.以你或你朋友的经历说明你的观点； 3.呼吁家长们尊重孩子的意愿。 注意： 1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The topic of taking part in after-school activities is becoming more and more popular recently. In my opinion, parents should go further and know what their children really desire for. It is true that good hobbies make life more colorful and enjoyable. However, things are different if children have no interest in the “hobby” that their parents choose for them. Without interest as motivation, they will find it a burden rather than a hobby. My 6-year-old neighbour always cries while playing the piano. She is busier on weekends than on weekdays because she has to take part in many after-school activities. In conclusion, parents are supposed to help children learn some things that they are interested in. From my point of view, only in this way can they learn well and be happy! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生围绕“家长是否应强迫孩子学习不感兴趣的兴趣爱好”这一话题发表观点，并阐述理由。 【详解】1.  词汇积累 参加：take part in → participate in 鼓舞人心的：inspirational → encouraging 令人愉快的：enjoyable→ pleasant 总之：in conclusion → to sum up 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The topic of taking part in after-school activities is becoming more and more popular recently. 拓展句： The topic that we should take part in after-school activities is becoming more and more popular recently. 【点睛】【高分句型1】In my opinion, parents should go further and know what their children really desire for.（运用了what引导的宾语从句作know的宾语） 【高分句型2】It is true that good hobbies make life more colorful and enjoyable. （运用了“it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句作真正主语”结构） 2．（2025高一·全国·专题练习）最近你在某英文报纸上读到一篇文章，文中说道，虽然现在的生活条件越来越好，青少年的快乐却少了。请你就此话题写一篇短文，表达你的想法，内容包括：1. 导致该现象的原因；2. 提出相应的建议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Recently, I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers, which said that despite better living conditions, teenagers are becoming unhappier. Why are teenagers unhappier? For one thing, teenagers have more difficulty in getting along with others. For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, causing them easier to be depressed. Therefore, action must be taken to improve it. To begin with, teenagers should be encouraged to take activities to form interpersonal relationship. Besides, parents need to listen to their children more. I am convinced that with our efforts, the situation will be gradually improved. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于议论文。要求考生围绕“生活条件变好但青少年快乐减少”这一话题，分析现象产生的原因并提出相应建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 尽管：despite → in spite of 导致：cause → result in 压力：pressure → stress 提高：improve → enhance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, causing them easier to be depressed. 拓展句：For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, which causes them easier to be depressed. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, I have read an article about the mental state of teenagers, which said that despite better living conditions, teenagers are becoming unhappier.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】For another, they suffer from too much pressure of study, causing them easier to be depressed.(运用了现在分词causing作结果状语) 3．（24-25高一上·新疆阿克苏·期末）最近你校英文论坛就互联网对人们生活的利弊进行讨论。请你根据所给提示用英文写一篇短文，分析网络发展的利与弊，并谈谈你的看法。 优点： 1.信息助力学习与研究；2.方便交流；3.便捷购物和娱乐。 缺点： 1.健康问题；2.虚假信息和犯罪行为；3.隐私泄露。 注意：1.词数80词左右； 2.题目已给出，不计入总数； 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Interne The Internet has profoundly changed our lives with both merits and demerits. On the bright side, it provides abundant information for study and research, helping learners and researchers gain knowledge easily. It also facilitates communication — people can connect with others worldwide via apps. Besides, online shopping and entertainment save time, letting us buy goods or watch videos at home. However, it brings problems. Long use harms eyes and posture. False information spreads fast, and cyber crimes exist. What’s more, personal privacy is at risk of being leaked. In my view, we should make rational use of the Internet, leveraging its benefits while avoiding its pitfalls. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生根据表格提示的内容，以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet”为题分析网络发展的利弊，并给出自己的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 极大地：profoundly→dramatically/significantly 获得：gain→access to 促进：facilitate→boost/promote 泄露：leak→give away/reveal 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：On the bright side, it provides abundant information for study and research, helping learners and researchers gain knowledge easily. It also facilitates communication — people can connect with others worldwide via apps. 拓展句：On the bright side, not only does it provide abundant information for study and research, helping learners and researchers gain knowledge easily, but it also facilitates communication — people can connect with others worldwide via apps. 【点睛】【高分句型1】On the bright side, it provides abundant information for study and research, helping learners and researchers gain knowledge easily. （运用了现在分词helping作状语） 【高分句型2】Besides, online shopping and entertainment save time, letting us buy goods or watch videos at home.（运用了现在分词letting作状语） 4．（25-26高一上·天津滨海新·月考）随着科技的进步和社交媒体的发展，交友的方式已由传统的面对面发展为线上交友，请你就此现象谈一下你的观点。(字数：100字左右) 要点涵盖：1. 你对于网上交友的观点； 2. 网上交友的优缺点； 3. 总结你的看法。 提示词：social media (社交媒体)；online (在网络上) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Online Friendship in the Digital Age With the rapid development of technology and social media, online friendship has gradually taken the place of traditional face-to-face interaction. In my opinion, it is a double-edged sword. On one hand, online communication breaks geographical barriers, enabling us to connect with like-minded people from all over the world effortlessly. On the other hand, the lack of face-to-face interaction makes online communication less authentic, putting us at risk of being cheated by strangers with hidden agendas. To sum up, we can enjoy the convenience of online friendship, but we should always keep a cautious attitude and protect our personal information well. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就线上交友说明自己的看法以及网上交友的优缺点。 【详解】1.词汇积累 在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I’m concerned 取代：take the place of→replace 真实：authentic→genuine 总之：to sum up→in conclusion 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：On one hand, online communication breaks geographical barriers, enabling us to connect with like-minded people from all over the world effortlessly. 拓展句：On one hand, online communication breaks geographical barriers that prevent us from connecting with people easily. 【点睛】【高分句型1】On one hand, online communication breaks geographical barriers, enabling us to connect with like-minded people from all over the world effortlessly.（运用了现在分词enabling作状语） 【高分句型2】On the other hand, the lack of face-to-face interaction makes online communication less authentic, putting us at risk of being cheated by strangers with hidden agendas.（运用了现在分词作状语以及动名词作宾语） 5．（25-26高一上·云南昆明·月考）假定你是李华，在观看神舟十八号载人飞船(The Shenzhou-18 manned spacecraft)成功发射的视频后，你感到无比自豪和激动。请你写一篇观后感发表到你们学校的英文报上。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Successful Launch of the Shenzhou-18 Manned Spacecraft I watched a live video, which was about China launching the Shenzhou-18 manned spacecraft on April 25. As I watched the spacecraft sent into the sky, my heart swelled with national pride. Shenzhou-18’s success is not just a victory for the Chinese space program; it’s a triumph for our entire nation. It showcases our determination, innovation, and the boundless possibilities that lie ahead in space exploration. This feat inspires me to pursue my dreams with perseverance. I make up my mind to study harder to make my dream come true. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生写一篇观看神舟十八号载人飞船成功发射视频的观后感。 【详解】1.词汇积累 追求：pursue→go after 决心：make up one’s mind to→be determined to 展示：showcase→demonstrate 鼓舞：inspire→stimulate 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：This feat inspires me to pursue my dreams with perseverance. 拓展句：It is this feat that inspires me to pursue my dreams with perseverance. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I watched a live video, which was about China launching the Shenzhou-18 manned spacecraft on April 25.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】As I watched the spacecraft sent into the sky, my heart swelled with national pride.（运用了as引导时间状语从句） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $