Unit 1 Period 4 Writing-【新课程能力培养】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第四册学习手册（人教版）

Period 4 写作点拨 如何写“想象性”作文 本单元的写作项目属于记叙文中的“想 象性”作文。这类题目要求学生在头脑中创 造出从未接触过的甚至根本不存在的新的形 象。想象性写作允许自由想象、自主发挥的 空间较大，因此需要灵活的思维能力和丰富 的想象能力。要写好此类文章，应注意以下 几点： 1.首先要确定写作主题 确定主题，明确写作中心，是写好文章 的前提，想象性写作也不例外。因为想象虽 然可以海阔天空，但总要围绕一个中心进 行，这个中心就是主题。 2.想象美好，立意深刻 想象性作文必须要有一个“美好”的中 心思想。如果只是瞎编一个热闹离奇的故 事，就失去了想象的意义。 3.构思要巧妙，想象要合理 构思和想象是写好此类文章的关键，既 要合乎逻辑，又要匠心独运，或启迪思维， 或引人入胜。 4.列出写作提纲，合理安排顺序 通过合理想象列出写作素材，然后筛选 确定：最后再根据写作对象的特点合理安排 顺序。 5.前后一致，自圆其说 不管允许想象的空间有多大，都要做到 符合逻辑，顺理成章，这一点对于写好此类 Unit 1 SCIENCE FICTION Writing 文章尤其重要。 6.此类文章大多采用三段式结构 首先可以简要、巧妙地引出文章的话 题，引起读者的阅读兴趣。其次为文章主 体，要按照一定顺序展开想象，说明想象的 主体内容。在最后一部分中，可以再进行总 结或对前景进行期待。 【亮点句式】 开篇常用： 1.Sometimes I dream about life in the fu- ture 2.I imagine life in the future from time to time 3.It is fascinating to imagine life in the future. 4.I am curious about our future life. 文章结尾常用： 1.I believe the dream will come true one day. 2.As far as I am concerned,we will real- ize the dream sooner or later. 3.In my opinion,the dream will be turned into reality one day. 典例赏析 根据以下内容，通过合理的想象，以 “Our Future Life”为题写一篇lO0词左右的 英语短文，展望一下未来的科技生活。 1.有些人可以到月球上度假： 2.有些科学家能在海底生活； 学 17 高中英语选择性必修第四册（人教版） 3.每家都有可视电话(videophone),通 过可视电话人们可以进行体检和购物； 4.孩子们可以在家通过电视和广播接受 教育； 5.机器人为你做家务。 【审题谋篇】 体裁 说明文 时态以将来时为主 主题 描述未来生活 人称以第一人称为主 第一段：简要引出话题“未来生活” 第二段：对理想中的未来生活进行具体 结构 刻画 第三段：文章总结 【参考范文】 Our Future Life Sometimes I dream about what life in the future will be like. Perhaps,some people will go to the moon for a holiday,and some scientists will live un- der the sea.Maybe every home will have videophones,through which we can have an instant medical examination or buy varieties of goods without leaving home.What's more, there is no need for children to go to school every day and they will take up learning at home,because there will be more educational programmes on the radio or TV.Besides,in the future,each family will have robots,so every day what we only need to do is tell them what to do-shopping,sweeping up the house and so on. In a word,I'm optimistic about such a fu- ture life and I believe the dream will come 18)学 true some day. 【词句品鉴】 dream of/about,instant, varieties of 高级词汇 goods,be optimistic about 精彩短语 perhaps,what's more,besides,in a 和关联词word there is no need to do;what we need to 增分句型 do 【名师点评】 这篇文章运用了灵活的思维能力和丰富 的想象力，主题明确、构思巧妙。在写作过 程中能有效地使用一些高级词汇、语句间的 连接成分及丰富的句式结构，使全文结构紧 凑，衔接自然，为文章增添了亮点。 读后续写 Last Sunday afternoon,Sandra and I were eager to meet up with a man on Detroit's east side to help him get ready for a job interview this week.But on the way,we spotted a dog lying near the road next to his owner.We thought he'd been hit by a car.My friend, Sandra Abrahamian,and I had assisted animal rescue groups before and we thought there might be something we could do,so we quickly pulled over to help. His owner,a woman told us the dog's name is Bosco,and she was walking him over a mile in the heat to her new home.She said Bosco was an outside dog and no one would give him a ride to her new place.That's when she and a friend decided to walk the entire way.He was going from a life on a chain in one backyard to another.She said Bosco was having trouble breathing along the way,but they thought he could make it.But just a block away from their destination,Bosco fell down.We could tell he was suffering from heatstroke(中暑).She told us he had thrown up and could no longer stand.Bosco was out of breath quickly;:his drool(口水)was also thick.Bosco's owner said she wanted to give him away because she didn't have time for him.She said he would never be allowed into her new“home”because her children have allergies(过敏症)and she worried he would dirty the carpet. I made a call to Kristina Rinaldi of De- troit Dog Rescue to ask if they could help Bosco because it was clear that he was going to die without emergency care.To our happi- ness,Rinaldi said they could help.At once she told the people at Oakland Veterinary Referral Services that a dog which needed critical care was being rushed in and they must be ready to Unit 1 SCIENCE FICTION try their best to save him. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已 为你写好。 Paragraph 1: Sandra drove while I stayed in the back seat trying to comfort Bosco. Paragraph 2: So Bosco is now being called Roscoe, whose critical care and recovery were estimated to be several thousand dollars. 学(19高中英语选择性必修第四册（人教版） (3)dates (4)were sold (5)is running 【即时跟踪2】 (1)to be told (2)to be done (3)to be updated (4)to be made (5)to be held 【即时跟踪3】 (1)to sit (2)to buy (3)to repair (4)to blame (5)to be typed 【题组训练1】 (1)will be rewarded (2)will be built (3)has been reached (4)is called (5)were told (6)promoted (7)opens (8)to be completed 【题组训练2】 (I)using改为used(2)去掉been(3)drank 改为drunk(4)use改为used Period 4 Writing 读后续写 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1: Sandra drove while I stayed in the back seat trying to Unit 2 ICONIC Culture Background Analysis 1-4 FTFF Period 1 Reading and Thinking I.重点知识讲解 1.(1)locate;break down (2)exact location (3)the local school (4)were mostly located in 2.(1)English majors (2)to major in English in college (3)The majority of (4)in the majority 3.(1)His joints (2)the joint owners (3)a joint effort (4)joint 4.(1)hold his/her breath (2)out of breath (3)breathes in polluted air 5.(1)make contact with (2)out of contact with (3)he was breathless 70 comfort Bosco.I thought we lost him a couple of times when he was seemingly out of breath and his eyes seemed to close.By the time we arrived,Bosco was wheeled into the animal care center to receive emergency care.Bosco was put on oxygen and was taken good care of by staff there and we waited anxiously for the dog to get out of danger.Rinaldi said another dog in Detroit Dog Rescue had already been named Bosco,and she wanted this new member to have a new name for his new life. Paragraph 2: So Bosco is now being called Roscoe,whose critical care and recovery were estimated to be several thousand dollars.It would be difficult for Roscoe's new home to cover the costs as a non-profit organization.Thankfully, many people who knew Roscoe's story on Detroit Dog Rescue's Facebook page donated money to his care.With the help of supporters,Detroit Dog Rescue managed to make it.Once Roscoe was in a stable state,Sandra and I returned to our original mission,knowing we had already been given the chance to help one desperate soul. ATTRACTIONS 6.(1)made up (2)to make up for (3)make up some excuse 7.(1)On the one hand;on the other hand (2)For another Ⅲ.小牛试刀 1.Located 2.Personally 3.foundation 4.freedom 5.is believed 6.in 7.majority 8.joint 9.Faced 10.breathing 11.to try 12.take/took 13.in 14.frequency 15.focused VW.语篇填空 1.learning 2.of 3.guided 4.to learn 5.to 6.called 7.was convinced 8.impression 9.cultures 10.the Period 2 Using Language I.重点知识讲解 1.(1)distribution of this species (2)is distributed