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Unit 1 Happy Holiday
Section B 3a-3c
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Body
Ending
Tip 2: Write in time order and use the simple past tense.
Beginning
Tip 1: Give a brief introduction.
Tip 3: Express feelings in different ways.
Tip 4: Add your own thoughts or comments at the end.
Have a clear structure.
Let’s review.
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📢 English Club: My Holiday Story Sharing! 📢
Hey everyone! The English Club is hosting a super fun “My Holiday Story” sharing event next Friday!
Share your awesome holiday adventures—funny, exciting, or even a little scary.✨✨✨
Your story might even be on display for everyone to read!
How to join: Send your story to:
myholidaystorysharing@sohu.com
Don’t miss it—start writing and share your holiday magic!
🎉🎉🎉
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Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland
for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For
example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore.While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My
mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably look
-ing for food and hoping to get some from you.”
What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
Gina’s holiday story
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Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland
for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For
example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore.While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My
mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably look
-ing for food and hoping to get some from you.”
What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
How many parts can it
be divided into?
A brief introduction
A holiday story
Is there an ending?
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Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland
for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For
example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore.While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My
mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably look
-ing for food and hoping to get some from you.”
What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
A holiday story
An ending
A brief introduction
Tip 1: Create a clear structure to organize your writing.
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Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland
for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For
example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore.While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My
mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably look
-ing for food and hoping to get some from you.”
What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
took
stayed
went to
saw
ran home and
Write down the things that Gina did.
stayed in a comfortable house ...
took a train to Scotland
went to a forest to explore
saw a deer
ran home and told my parents
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Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland
for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed so different. For
example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
A brief introduction
when, who, how, where ...
How was the place?
different
city, countryside
compare
an example
Tip 2: Use comparison (作比较) and
examples to make the writing
impressive.
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On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore.While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My
mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably look
-ing for food and hoping to get some from you.”
What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
a holiday story
解决
发展
went to the
forest to explore...
heard a
noise
was surprised
to, a deer
ran home,
mom explained
a wonderful
experience
Tip 3: Apply the story mountain to write the story logically.
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I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I turned around and saw a deer.
My mum smiled and said, “The deer is
probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you.”
My mum told me the deer probably looked for food and hoped to get some from me.
Tip 4: Use adjectives and direct quotes to make the story vivid.
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My Holiday in Scotland
My Unforgettable Holiday in Scotland
A Surprising Holiday in Scotland
Deer Surprise in Scotland
My Scotland Deer Meeting
...
Tip 5: Craft a good title to catch people’s eyes.
Title
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Checklist
Structure Create a clear structure to organize your writing.
Skills
Craft a good title to catch people’s eyes.
Use adjectives and direct quotes to make the story vivid.
Use comparison and examples to make the writing impressive.
Apply the story mountain to write the story logically.
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My sister finished high school two weeks ago. As a special gift, our parents took us to India. Last weekend was interesting but scary.
We went camping in a small village in India. First, we took a long bus ride to a lake in the countryside. There we put up our tents and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just sat under the moon and told each other stories. But I was so tired that I went to sleep early.
The next morning, my sister and I got a terrible surprise. When we looked out of our tent, we saw a big snake sleeping near the fire. I was so scared that I couldn’t move. We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger. My dad started to jump up and down in their tent. This woke the snake up and it moved into the forest near the lake. My dad told me later that snakes don’t have ears but can feel things moving. He also told me it was important not to go near a snake. This was a very useful lesson for me.
Lisa’s holiday
A brief introduction
A holiday story
My sister finished high school two weeks ago. As a special gift, our parents took us to India. Last weekend was interesting but scary.
We went camping in a small village in India. First, we took a long bus ride to a lake in the countryside. There we put up our tents and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just sat under the moon and told each other stories. But I was so tired that I went to sleep early.
The next morning, my sister and I got a terrible surprise. When we looked out of our tent, we saw a big snake sleeping near the fire. I was so scared that I couldn’t move. We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger. My dad started to jump up and down in their tent. This woke the snake up and it moved into the forest near the lake. My dad told me later that snakes don’t have ears but can feel things moving. He also told me it was important not to go near a snake.
This was a very useful lesson for me.
An ending
Tip 1: Create a clear structure to organize your writing.
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My sister finished high school two weeks ago. As a special gift, our parents took us to India. Last weekend was interesting but scary.
We went camping in a small village in India. First, we took a long bus ride to a lake in the countryside. There we put up our tents and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just sat under the moon and told each other stories. But I was so tired that I went to sleep early.
The next morning, my sister and I got a terrible surprise. When we looked out of our tent, we saw a big snake sleeping near the fire. I was so scared that I couldn’t move. We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger. My dad started to jump up and down in their tent. This woke the snake up and it moved into the forest near the lake. My dad told me later that snakes don’t have ears but can feel things moving. He also told me it was important not to go near a snake. This was a very useful lesson for me.
Lisa’s holiday
Read and write down the things that Lisa did.
took a plane to India
went camping in ...
sat under the moon ...
saw a snake, too scared ...
shouted to ..., jumped ...
moved into the forest
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Two weeks ago, my sister finished high school. As a special gift, our parents took us to India by plane. Everything there was so different from my home—for example, the streets were full of colorful markets and the air smelled of spices(香料).
two countries
Tip 2: Use comparison (作比较) and examples to make the writing impressive.
A brief introduction
when, who, how, where ...
How was the place?
different
compare
an example
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We went camping in a small village in India. First, we took a long bus ride to a lake in the countryside. There we put up our tents and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just sat under the moon and told each other stories. But I was so tired that I went to sleep early.
The next morning, my sister and I got a terrible surprise. When we looked out of our tent, we saw a big snake sleeping near the fire. I was so scared that I couldn’t move. We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger. My dad started to jump up and down in their tent. This woke the snake up and it moved into the forest near the lake. My dad told me later that snakes don’t have ears but can feel things moving. He also told me it was important not to go near a snake. This was a very useful lesson for me.
went camping
...
looked out
of ...
saw a big
snake
shouted, jumped,
moved into...
dad explained
...
Tip 3: Apply the story mountain to write the story logically.
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We went camping in a small village in India. First, we took a long bus ride to a lake in the countryside. There we put up our tents and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just sat under the moon and told each other stories. But I was so tired that I went to sleep early.
The next morning, my sister and I got a terrible surprise. When we looked out of our tent, we saw a big snake sleeping near the fire. I was so scared that I couldn’t move. We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger. My dad started to jump up and down in their tent. This woke the snake up and it moved into the forest near the lake. My dad told me later that snakes don’t have ears but can feel things moving. He also told me it was important not to go near a snake. This was a very useful lesson for me.
There we quickly put up our tents and carefully made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just quietly sat under the moon and happily told each other stories.
There we put up our tents and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just sat under the moon and told each other stories.
Tip 4: Use adjectives and adverbs to make the story vivid.
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We went camping in a small village in India. First, we took a long bus ride to a lake in the countryside. There we put up our tents and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just sat under the moon and told each other stories. But I was so tired that I went to sleep early.
The next morning, my sister and I got a terrible surprise. When we looked out of our tent, we saw a big snake sleeping near the fire. I was so scared that I couldn’t move. We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger. My dad started to jump up and down in their tent. This woke the snake up and it moved into the forest near the lake. My dad told me later that snakes don’t have ears but can feel things moving. He also told me it was important not to go near a snake. This was a very useful lesson for me.
When we were packing our things at the campsite to go home, Dad said to us seriously, “Snakes don’t have ears, but they can feel things moving. And it’s important not to go near a snake.”
My dad told me later that snakes don’t have ears but can feel things moving. He also told me it was important not to go near a snake.
Tip 4: Use adjectives, adverbs, and direct quotes to make the story vivid.
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My sister finished high school two weeks ago. As a special gift, our parents took us to India. Last weekend was interesting but scary.
We went camping in a small village in India. First, we took a long bus ride to a lake in the countryside. There we put up our tents and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just sat under the moon and told each other stories. But I was so tired that I went to sleep early.
The next morning, my sister and I got a terrible surprise. When we looked out of our tent, we saw a big snake sleeping near the fire. I was so scared that I couldn’t move. We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger. My dad started to jump up and down in their tent. This woke the snake up and it moved into the forest near the lake. My dad told me later that snakes don’t have ears but can feel things moving. He also told me it was important not to go near a snake. This was a very useful lesson for me.
Lisa’s holiday
My sister finished high school two weeks ago. As a special gift, our parents took us to India. Last weekend was interesting but scary.
We went camping in a small village in India. First, we took a long bus ride to a lake in the countryside. There we put up our tents and made a fire to keep us warm and cook food on. On the first night, we just sat under the moon and told each other stories. But I was so tired that I went to sleep early.
The next morning, my sister and I got a terrible surprise. When we looked out of our tent, we saw a big snake sleeping near the fire. I was so scared that I couldn’t move. We shouted to our parents to let them know about the danger. My dad started to jump up and down in their tent. This woke the snake up and it moved into the forest near the lake. My dad told me later that snakes don’t have ears but can feel things moving. He also told me it was important not to go near a snake.
This was a very useful lesson for me.
A Holiday to Remember
Tip 5: Craft a good title to catch people’s eyes.
India Holiday: Snake Scare
Snake Lesson on India Trip
India Holiday Snake Surprise
Camping Snake Surprise
...
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Checklist
Structure Create a clear structure to organize your writing.
Skills
Craft a good title to catch people’s eyes.
Use adjectives, adverbs and direct quotes to make the story vivid.
Use comparison and examples to make the writing impressive.
Apply the story mountain to write the story logically.
Let’s practice.
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Must do:
Polish your holiday story.
Choose to do:
Search for more information about
how people in other countries spend
their holidays.
Homework
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