Unit 6—Unit 8 写作指导 2025-2026学年人教版英语八年级上册

八年级英语上册写作指导

Unit 6 Plan for Yourself

一、写作题目：

假如你是李华，为了在新的一年中有新的气象，你制定了新年计划。请补充完整表格信息，根据这些信息谈谈你的新年计划以及准备如何实施。

My resolution？

Improving my physical health/How?

Improving my relationships with Family and friends/How?

Doing better at school/How?

注意：

1.文章需包含表格内所有的信息。

2.可以适当发挥，不得出现真实的个人信息，如人名、地名、校名等。

3.词数 80 个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

开头如下：

New year is coming, so I'm going to make some New Year's resolutions.

二、写作分析

1、作文体裁

这是一篇英语应用文，具体为计划类短文，用于清晰表达个人新年的目标与行动规划，语言简洁、逻辑清晰，侧重实用性和条理性。

2、要素解析

（1）时态

核心时态为一般将来时，主要通过两种结构体现，契合“新年计划”的未来指向性。

- be going to do：侧重计划好、有意愿去做的事

例1：I'm going to take up a new hobby like playing the guitar.

例2：She is going to drink more water every day to keep healthy.

例3：We are going to have a family trip every season.

- will do：侧重意愿、承诺或临时决定的事

例1：I will never stay up late on school nights.

例2：I will help my grandparents with housework every weekend.

例3：I will ask my teacher for help if I don't understand the lessons.

（2）文章框架

采用“总—分—总”的经典结构，逻辑层次分明，符合计划类短文的写作规范。

开头（总起）：直接点题，引出新年计划的主题

例:The new year is around the corner, and I have made some resolutions for myself.

例:As the new year is coming, I'm ready to set some goals to make myself better.

例:To have a meaningful new year, I'm going to make a few plans.

主体（分述）：分点阐述具体目标，每个目标搭配对应的行动方法

例(健康)：First of all, I want to keep fit.I'm going to swim twice a week and avoid eating too much sugar.

例(关系)Besides, I plan to get on better with my siblings(兄弟姐妹).I will share my toys with them and never quarrel with(与..争吵) them for small things.

例(学业)：Last but not least, I hope to improve my math.I will do extra (额外的)math exercises every day and join a math study group.

结尾（总结）：表达决心或美好期望，收束全文

例:I believe if I stick to these plans, I will have a wonderful new year.

例:I will try my best to carry out(执行) these resolutions and become a better person.

例:Although it may be hard to keep all the plans, I won't give up easily.

3.常用句子

健康类

① I plan to take a walk after dinner every day.

② I will do more outdoor activities instead of staying at home playing games.

③ I'm going to have a balanced diet with meat and vegetables.

关系类

① I will write a letter to my grandparents to show my love to them.

② I'm going to join my friends' birthday parties and prepare small gifts for them.

③ I will listen to my parents' advice patiently and communicate with them more often.

学业类

① I will preview the new lessons before class to understand them better.

② I'm going to ask my deskmate for help when I have trouble with my homework.

③ I plan to take part in the English speech contest to practice my oral English.

三、参考范文

New year is coming, so I'm going to make some New Year's resolutions.

First, to improve my physical health, I will run every morning and eat healthy food.Second, I plan to chat with my family often and play with friends to improve our relationships.Finally, I will listen carefully in class and do more exercises to do better at school.

 I hope all my resolutions can come true.

翻译：

新年将至，我打算制定一些新年计划。

首先，为了增强身体健康，我要每天早上跑步，还要吃健康的食物。其次，我计划多和家人聊聊天、多和朋友们一起玩耍，来增进彼此的感情。最后，我会在课堂上认真听讲，多做练习题，争取在学业上更上一层楼。

我希望所有的计划都能实现。

Unit 7 When Tomorrow Comes

假设你是Susan，本周你们学校要举行一场主题为"畅想未来"的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图，以"My Dream Life in 20 Years"为题，写一篇英语演讲稿。

要求：

1.思维导图中的四部分内容为必写内容，每部分内容可根据行文需求进行增减；

2.文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息；

3.词数80个左右(开头已经给出，不计入总词数).

Hello everyone:

My speech topic is "My Dream Life in20 Years".______

分析：

各位同学，这篇作文围绕未来20年的生活展开，首先我们要先分析一下导图中要求包含的要素：

一、Job（职业）

1.问句：What will you be?

I will be a/an + 职业名词.例：I will be an engineer.

I am going to be a/an + 职业名词.例：I am going to be a teacher.

2.问句：How will you do that?

I will + 具体行动（如study hard/learn skills） + to make it come true.

例：I will study hard at math and science to make it come true.

I am going to + 具体行动（如take courses/practice a lot） every day.

例：I am going to take computer courses every weekend.

二、Home（住所）

1.问句：Where will you live?

I will live + 地点介词短语.

例：I will live in the countryside.

I am going to live + 地点介词短语 because + 原因.

例：I am going to live in a big city because it is very convenient.

2.问句：Who will you live with?

I will live with my + 家人/朋友类名词.

例：I will live with my parents and my sister.

I am going to live with + 具体对象 and we will share the housework.

例：I am going to live with my best friend and we will share the housework.

三、Things to do（日常活动）

1.问句：What will you do?

I will + 具体动作（如work at home/do sports） in my daily life.

例：I will work at home and read books in my free time.

I am going to + 具体动作（如travel around/learn a new hobby） every year.

例：I am going to learn to play the piano and grow flowers.

2.问句：Why?

Because I want to + 目的（如live a comfortable life/keep healthy）.

例：Because I want to live a quiet and happy life.

Because it can make me + 感受（如feel relaxed/become better）.

例：Because it can make me feel relaxed and energetic.

四、Places to go（出行地点）

1.问句：Where will you go?

I will go to + 地点名词（如other planets/beautiful mountains）.

例：I will go to other planets in the future.

I am going to travel to + 地点名词 with my family.

例：I am going to travel to the seaside with my family.

2.问句：What will you do there?

I will + 具体活动（如look for renewable resources/enjoy the scenery） there.

例：I will look for renewable resources and take photos there.

I am going to + 具体活动（如try local food/make new friends） and have a good time.

例：I am going to try delicious local food and make new friends.

【范文】

Hello everyone:

My speech topic is "My Dream Life in 20 Years".

My life in 20 years will be easy.I think I will be an engineer and work at home.I will live in the countryside, because the environment there is clean and beautiful.In my free time, I will have a trip to other planets with my family or friends.And I will