内容正文:
冀教英语七年级上册Unit 3:My Hobby
写作目标
结合本单元“描述外貌、介绍爱好”的核心目标,用一般现在时介绍自己的爱好,内容包括:喜欢的爱好、做爱好的具体场景、爱好带来的好处,贴合单元“谈论个人爱好”的写作要求。
1. 能正确使用一般现在时描述爱好及相关行为,符合本单元语法要求;
2. 能用本单元核心词汇(hobby, chess, creative, skill等)描述爱好和体验;
3. 能引用本单元谚语表达对爱好的理解,贴合本单元“体会爱好意义”的学习要求。
题目解析
1. 体裁:记叙文,要求介绍自己的爱好及相关感受、收获,符合本单元书面表达的体裁规范;
2. 人称:以第一人称(I)为主,用自身视角讲述爱好,贴合初中记叙文表达习惯;
3. 时态:核心用一般现在时,描述爱好的内容、做爱好的频率和感受,贴合本单元时态重点;
4. 段落数:分四段,依次点明爱好、描述做爱好的场景、说明爱好带来的好处、总结爱好的意义,字数控制在80 - 120词,句子以简单句和基础复合句为主;
5. 核心要求:内容需包含爱好名称、做爱好的具体方式、爱好带来的积极影响,突出“爱好”的主题,体现本单元探索个人兴趣的目标。
写作模板(四段式)
第一段:开头引入,点明自己的爱好(约20词)
· 写作目的:直接引出自己的爱好,开启话题,呼应本单元“谈论爱好”的目标;
· 必写要素:爱好名称。
· 基础句式:My hobby is [爱好]. It is my favourite thing to do in my free time.
· 示例:My hobby is playing basketball. It is my favourite thing to do in my free time.
第二段:中间详述,描述做爱好的场景(约40词)
· 写作目的:用简单的句式描述做爱好的时间、地点和具体方式,运用本单元“描述爱好行为”的表达;
· 必写要素:做爱好的时间、地点、具体动作。
· 基础句式:I often [做爱好的动作] with [人物] at [地点] on [时间]. Sometimes I also [相关动作] to learn more skills.
· 示例:I often play basketball with my classmates on the school playground after school. Sometimes I also watch basketball matches on TV to learn new skills from famous players.
第三段:深化内容,说明爱好带来的好处(约30词)
· 写作目的:写出爱好给自己带来的身体、心理或社交上的好处,贴合本单元“体会爱好价值”的目标;
· 必写要素:爱好带来的具体益处。
· 基础句式:This hobby makes me [身体/心理感受], and it also helps me [收获,如make friends]. I learn a lot of [技能/道理] from it.
· 示例:This hobby makes me strong and healthy, and it also helps me make many new friends. I learn the spirit of teamwork from playing basketball.
第四段:结尾总结,表达对爱好的理解(约10 - 20词)
· 写作目的:总结爱好的意义,可引用本单元谚语,让内容更完整;
· 必写要素:对爱好的评价、引用谚语(可选)。
· 基础句式:[谚语]. My hobby is very important to me. I will keep doing it!
· 示例:All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. My hobby is very important to me. I will keep playing basketball!
中英对照范文
英文
My Hobby
My hobby is playing Chinese chess. It is my favourite thing to do in my free time.
I often play Chinese chess with my grandfather at home on weekends. Sometimes I go to the chess club in our community and play with other chess lovers. We often discuss chess skills and learn from each other.
This hobby makes me creative and smart. It also helps me stay calm when I face problems. I have learned a lot of useful thinking skills from playing chess.
As the saying goes, "A life without a hobby is just like food without salt." My hobby brings me a lot of happiness, and I will keep playing chess in the future.
中文翻译
我的爱好
我的爱好是下中国象棋。它是我空闲时间里最喜欢做的事。
我经常在周末和爷爷在家下象棋。有时我会去社区的象棋俱乐部,和其他象棋爱好者对弈。我们经常讨论棋艺,互相学习。
这个爱好让我变得有创造力又聪明,也让我在面对问题时能保持冷静。我从下象棋中学到了很多有用的思维技巧。
正如谚语所说:“没有爱好的生活就像没有盐的食物。”我的爱好给我带来了很多快乐,未来我也会一直坚持下象棋。
好词佳句
1. My hobby is playing Chinese chess, and I do it every weekend with my grandfather.(我的爱好是下中国象棋,我每周都和爷爷一起下。)
2. Playing chess makes me creative and helps me learn new thinking skills.(下象棋让我变得有创造力,还帮我学到新的思维技巧。)
3. I make many friends in the chess club and we discuss skills together.(我在象棋俱乐部交了很多朋友,我们一起探讨棋艺。)
4. A hobby is not only fun but also useful for our growth.(爱好不仅有趣,还对我们的成长有帮助。)
5. I love my hobby because it brings me happiness and makes me a better person.(我热爱我的爱好,因为它给我带来快乐,还让我变得更优秀。)
谚语
1. A happy child has a hobby.(快乐的孩子都有自己的爱好。)
2. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.(只工作不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。)
3. A life without a hobby is just like food without salt.(没有爱好的生活就像没有盐的食物。)
学生写作填空练习
My Hobby
My hobby is ______ (爱好,如playing chess). It is my favourite thing to do in my ______ (时间,如free time).
I often ______ (做爱好的动作,如play chess) with my ______ (人物,如grandfather) at ______ (地点,如home) on ______ (时间,如weekends). Sometimes I also ______ (相关动作,如go to the chess club) to learn new ______ (词汇,如skills).
This hobby makes me ______ (感受,如creative) and ______ (感受,如smart). It also helps me ______ (收获,如make friends). I learn a lot from it.
As the saying goes, "______ (本单元谚语)". My hobby brings me a lot of ______ (情感,如happiness). I will keep ______ (做爱好的动作) in the future!
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