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UNIT 2 Writing Workshop
A True Story
知识素养:学生通过阅读文章,积累新单词、新词组,掌握写作流程。
能力素养:学生通过本课学习,学会构思文章,写常见句型、经典句型。
思维素养:学生能够根据例文中的结构,结合所学内容构思自己的文章。
文化素养:学生根据例文中的人物事件感受体育精神,同时也引申到学生平时的生活当中来,要做一个诚实的人。
核心素养培养:
扫清阅读障碍:
1. sprint v./ n. 冲刺
2. Santa Barbra 圣塔巴巴拉市
3. cyclo-cross race 公路越野赛
4.competitor 竞争对手,参赛者
5. ahead of 在……前面
6. with……in sight 在……的视线内
7.speed up 加速
8. puncture 小孔,小洞,刺伤
9. fourth-placed 第四名的
10.overtake 赶上,超过;突然发生
11. audience 观众
12. sportsmanship 运动员风范,体育精神
13. bronze medal 铜牌
14. response 回答,答复
The Final Sprint
Setting the final sprint of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain
Characters
Development
Climax
Ending
Ismael Esteban, Agustin Navarro
a. Esteban’s bike got a punture. b. Esteban threw his bike over his shoulders and raced towards the finishing line.
a. Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him. b. The two cyclists reached the finishing line with Esteban ahead on foot, Navarro just behind him.
Navarro let Esteban finish in third place, while he came fourth.
背景:The final sprint of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain
人物:Ismael Esteban, Agustin Navarro
发展:a. Esteban’s bike got a punture. b. Esteban threw his bike over his shoulders and raced towards the finishing line.
高潮:a. Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him. b. The two cyclists reached the finishing line with Esteban ahead on foot, Navarro just behind him.
结尾:Navarro let Esteban finish in third place, while he came fourth.
“ 三维“构想
人
事
情
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1.审题:内容,形式, 时态,对象
2.构思:结构,过渡(词),有用词
3.成文:语言 (连贯性)
4.审核:改错(动词,主谓一致…)
审题---构思---成文---审核
写作四步走:
记叙文八项“注意”:
1、介绍背景、人物
2、描述故事细节
3、故事有评论
4、时间/ 事情顺序
5、注意时态
6、人称一致
7、结构合理
8、量力而行
参考“背景”:
1、考后焦虑与老师的安慰
2、新学期与家长的沟通
3、新学期与某同学的心灵交集
4、一次有关“父爱”的演讲比赛引发的情感触动
5、一次志愿活动中,与某同学完成任务后的自我满足
6、一次作文竞赛引发的思考
7、某位老师课堂不经意的表扬与批评,带来的后续发展
……
常用句型:
主语从句: It was a big moment in my life that……
What I want to say was that ……
宾语从句:I thought that he would ……
I believed that ……
状语从句:I was watching TV when he came in.
I felt so sad because ……
As she put her hand on my head, my heart ……
If there is another chance, I would choose to ……
其它句型:It is + adj + for sb to do sth.
The most important thing is that ……
as …… as
To……,
Doing …… is……
练习:
1、写出背景和结尾
2、写出正文的提纲
Show me your work!
Thanks for your listening!
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