Unit 6 Fantastic friends写作专项导学案 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册

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Unit 6 Fantastic friends

主题写作:Dodos

一、写作目标

  1. 内容目标:能围绕“渡渡鸟的生存地点、生活状态、人类的行为、最终结局、故事启示”五个核心要点完成短文,体现“保护动物、与自然和谐共处”的单元主旨。
  1. 语言目标:能运用本单元核心词汇(如die out、hunt、cut down、museum、island等)和一般过去时,写出语法准确、表意连贯的简单句子。
  1. 结构目标:能按照“介绍渡渡鸟基本信息→ 描述其生活状态→ 说明人类的影响→ 讲述最终结局→ 表达启示”的逻辑完成短文,符合段落写作的完整性和条理性要求。

二、题目解析

这是单元“Reading for writing”板块的段落写作任务,核心是介绍渡渡鸟的相关故事,需紧扣阅读素材中“渡渡鸟从繁盛到灭绝的过程”,突出“人类活动对动物生存的影响,以及保护动物的重要性”的单元主题。

•     需覆盖的要点:

  1.         渡渡鸟曾经的生存地点;
  1.         渡渡鸟过去的生活状态;
  1.         人类来到后做出的破坏行为;
  1.         渡渡鸟最终的结局;
  1.         从渡渡鸟的故事中得到的启示。

三、思路点拨

采用“总-分-总”的基础结构,分3步展开:page number 0

 

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  1. 第一步:总述渡渡鸟的现状→ 用一句话点明渡渡鸟如今仅存于博物馆的事实,比如“Dodos are now extinct, and we can only see them in museums.”;
  1. 第二步:分述渡渡鸟的故事→ 依次介绍其生存地点、生活状态、人类的破坏行为和最终结局;
  1. 第三步:表达启示→ 写出从渡渡鸟灭绝的故事中得到的关于保护动物的感悟。

四、写作模板

Dodos were special birds that lived a long time ago, but now they are extinct and we can only see them in museums.

Dodos lived on an island in the Indian Ocean. In the old days, they had a happy life: there was plenty of food to eat, and all other animals were friendly to them. However, in 1598, humans arrived on the island. They cut down the trees, hunted the dodos because they were slow and couldn’t fly, and their pigs, cats and dogs ate the dodos’ eggs. As a result, dodos soon died out.

The story of dodos makes us sad. We must learn from it and try our best to protect animals. We should not cut down too many trees or hunt wild animals, because every animal is important to our earth.

五、优秀范文

英文范文

Dodos are one of the most famous extinct animals in the world, and their story teaches us a big lesson about protecting nature.

Dodos lived on an island in the Indian Ocean hundreds of years ago. They had a peaceful and safe life there: the island had plenty of food for them to eat, and there were no dangerous animals around. All the other animals on the island were friendly, so dodos lived happily every day. But everything changed when humans came to the island in 1598. Humans cut down a lot of trees, so the dodos lost their homes. They also hunted dodos because the birds were slow and couldn’t fly away. What’s worse, the pigs, cats and dogs that humans brought with them ate the dodos’ eggs. Soon, there were fewer and fewer dodos, and at last, they died out completely.page number 1

 

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