Unit 5 The power of plants 写作专项 Tea and My Family 2025-2026学年外研版英语七年级上册

该初中英语单元复习讲义围绕“Tea and My Family”写作任务，通过“总-分-总”结构框架系统构建知识体系，以写作模板示范“总述关联-分述细节-表达意义”逻辑，用分类表格梳理人物、地点、故事等核心句型素材，结合评价标准表格明确内容、语言、结构三维度要求，清晰呈现写作重难点与内在联系。 该讲义亮点在于分层设计的写作支持：填空练习（如“Tea is an important part of my family ______ (life)”）帮助基础学生掌握核心词汇，优秀范文与分类句型素材（如“Tea is more than a drink”）供进阶学生拓展表达。通过茶作为家庭情感纽带的主题设计，融合语言能力（词汇及时态运用）与文化意识（茶文化载体）培养，教师可依据评价标准实施分层教学，学生能自主对照模板与素材提升写作能力。

Unit 5 The power of plants 主题写作：Tea and My Family 一、写作目标 1. 内容目标：能围绕“家人饮茶的人物、茶的种类、饮茶地点、饮茶伙伴、饮茶故事、饮茶感受”六个核心要点完成短文，体现“茶是家庭情感纽带与文化载体”的单元主旨。 2. 语言目标：能运用本单元核心词汇（如tea、teahouse、drink、culture、home等）和一般现在时、一般过去时，写出语法准确、表意连贯的简单句子。 3. 结构目标：能按照“总述茶与家庭的联系→ 分述饮茶细节→ 表达茶的意义”的逻辑完成短文，符合段落写作的完整性和条理性要求。 二、题目解析 这是单元“Reading for writing”板块的段落写作任务，核心是描述茶与自己家庭的关联，需紧扣阅读素材中“Feng Tao与Emma Jones的饮茶故事”，结合自身家庭的饮茶经历，突出“茶不仅是饮品，更是家庭情感连接的方式”的单元主题。 · 需覆盖的要点： a. 说明家里谁喜欢喝茶； b. 介绍家人喜欢的茶的种类； c. 描述家人饮茶的地点； d. 说明家人和谁一起饮茶； e. 讲述一个家庭饮茶的小故事； f. 表达茶给家人带来的感受。 三、思路点拨 采用“总-分-总”的基础结构，分3步展开： 1. 第一步：总述关联→ 用一句话点明茶在自己家庭中的地位，比如“Tea is an important part of my family life.”； 2. 第二步：分述细节→ 依次介绍家人饮茶的人物、茶的种类、地点、伙伴，并讲述一个简短的饮茶故事； 3. 第三步：表达意义→ 写出茶对家庭的特殊意义，比如“Tea makes our family closer and brings us happiness.”。 四、写作模板 Tea is a special drink in my family, and many of my family members like drinking it. My grandpa and my dad love tea the most. They like drinking green tea best. We usually drink tea at home, and sometimes we go to the teahouse near our home. My grandpa often drinks tea with his old friends, and my dad drinks tea with me when we talk about my study. Last Spring Festival, my whole family sat together and drank hot tea. We talked about interesting things from the past year and laughed a lot. For my family, tea is more than just a drink. It makes us feel warm and close, and it’s a way for us to share our love with each other. 五、优秀范文 英文范文 Tea is an important part of my family life, and it connects all of us together. My grandma is the tea lover in my family. She likes drinking black tea best, and my parents prefer green tea. We usually drink tea at home, in our small living room. Grandma often drinks tea with her sisters on weekends, and my parents and I drink tea together after dinner every day. Last summer, my grandma taught me how to make tea. She showed me how to put tea leaves in the cup and pour hot water. It was a little hard at first, but I learned it quickly. When we drank the tea I made together, grandma smiled and said it was the best tea she had ever had. Tea is more than a drink for my family. It makes us feel relaxed and happy, and every cup of tea is full of our family’s love. I think tea is the most special drink in the world because it brings my family closer. 中文译文 茶是我家庭生活中重要的一部分，它把我们所有人连接在一起。 奶奶是家里的饮茶爱好者。她最喜欢喝红茶，爸爸妈妈则更喜欢绿茶。我们通常在家中的小客厅里喝茶。奶奶经常在周末和她的姐妹们一起喝茶，我和爸爸妈妈每天晚饭后都会一起喝茶。去年夏天，奶奶教我泡茶。她教我怎么把茶叶放进杯子里，怎么倒热水。一开始有点难，但我很快就学会了。当我们一起喝着我泡的茶时，奶奶笑着说这是她喝过最好喝的茶。 对我的家人来说，茶不仅仅是一种饮品。它让我们感到放松和快乐，每一杯茶都充满了家人的爱。我觉得茶是世界上最特别的饮品，因为它让我的家人更亲密。 六、素材积累 （一）描述饮茶人物与种类的短语/句型 1. [Family member] likes drinking + 茶的种类 (green tea/black tea). 2. My [grandpa/grandma] is a tea lover. 3. prefer green tea to black tea 4. like...best （二）描述饮茶地点与伙伴的短语/句型 1. We usually drink tea + 地点 (at home/in a teahouse). 2. [Family member] drinks tea with + 人物 (his friends/my sister). 3. near our home 4. after dinner/on weekends （三）描述饮茶故事的短语/句型 1. Last [festival/time], we + 动作 (sat together and drank tea). 2. My [grandma/dad] taught me how to + 动作 (make tea). 3. It was a little hard at first, but I learned it quickly. （四）表达茶的意义的短语/句型 1. Tea is more than a drink for my family. 2. It makes us feel + 感受 (warm/relaxed/happy). 3. It brings my family closer. 4. It’s a way to share our love with each other. 七、写作填空练习 根据单元内容，完成关于茶与家庭的短文（每空填1个简单词）。 Tea is an important part of my family ______ (1). My grandpa likes drinking ______ (2) tea best, and my mom likes black tea. We usually drink tea at ______ (3). My grandpa drinks tea with his ______ (4) on Sundays, and I drink tea with my parents after ______ (5). Last month, my grandpa ______ (6) me how to make tea. I was happy when I made the first cup of tea for him. For my family, tea is more than a ______ (7). It makes us feel ______ (8) and close, and it’s a way to share our love. 参考答案 1. life 2. green 3. home 4. friends 5. dinner 6. taught 7. drink 8. warm 八、评价标准 评价维度 优秀（4-5分） 良好（3分） 待改进（1-2分） 内容完整性 覆盖“人物、种类、地点、伙伴、故事、感受”所有要点，体现“茶的情感意义”的主题 覆盖4-5个核心要点，主题体现较浅 缺少2个及以上要点，看不出主题 语言准确性 用对本单元基础词汇，句子简单通顺，时态使用正确，几乎无语法错误 能用部分基础词汇，有1-2个小语法错误但不影响理解 词汇用错多，时态混乱，语法错误多，读不懂句意 结构规范性 按“总述→ 分述→ 总结”的顺序写，语句衔接自然，故事描述具体 顺序基本清晰，故事描述较笼统，衔接词使用较少 顺序混乱，句子之间没有联系，无合理衔接 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $