2026届高考英语读后续写专项复习---飞机遭遇乱流故事 导学案

阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

I was taking a trip from Texas to the Bahamas for a vacation, having prepared for this trip for a long time. After packing all my belongings and heading to the airport, I could only think about all the pleasant times I would have at the tropical（热带）island. I already had everything planned out, first I would go diving, then visit the queen’s stairs, and eventually go swimming with the dolphins. The thoughts made my heart race; I could even smell the fresh ocean breeze right now.

Finally, I made it into the airport, just in time to make my flight. As I boarded the plane, I had a smile stretched along my face. I slid right into my seat, sitting mid row right in the middle of two other passengers. One of them was a fairly attractive young female and the other was an elderly lady who looked to be in her 70s. Her hair was as gray as a thunderstorm cloud and the wrinkles on her skin matched the ones on my shirt.

“We should depart in about five minutes,” The pilot responded. At that time, I had no idea what was soon incoming after this announcement. I used to fly with my mom a whole bunch of times as a kid, the people beside me seeming to be taking it well as well.

I went to sleep and woke up to various screaming and yelling on the plane; everything was so chaotic that it looked straight out of a movie scene. The lights in the airplane started flickering（闪烁）, and I could feel the bumps the plane was making. Was I still dreaming? I looked to my left and the seat was empty! Sweat started to run down my face. The young female was gone!

“Mommy!” A little girl screamed. I couldn’t control it anymore and tears started rolling down my face. The plane shook more, seeming the end was nearing.

“Ladies and gentlemen, we are experiencing an extreme clear air turbulence（乱流）,” the pilot explained. “The plane is being adjusted. Please remain seated.”

注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右。

2. 按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

The pilot tried to take control of the situation at hand, but in vain（徒劳）.

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Eventually, all the passengers calmed down.

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一、文本分析

1．角色

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2．视角 第______人称视角（以______的口吻叙述）

3．时空线

“我”准备已久的得克萨斯州前往巴哈马群岛的度假之旅开启→ 打包行李前往机场，满心期待热带岛屿的潜水、参观女王楼梯、与海豚共游等活动→ 准时抵达机场并登机，坐在中间座位，两侧分别是年轻女性和70多岁老年女士→ 飞行员告知约5分钟后起飞，“我”回忆儿时与母亲坐飞机的经历，未察觉异常→ “我”入睡后被飞机上的尖叫惊醒，现场混乱，灯光闪烁，飞机颠簸→ 发现左侧年轻女性乘客消失，“我”满身大汗，听到小女孩哭喊“妈妈”，自己也忍不住落泪→ 飞机颠簸加剧，飞行员广播告知遭遇极端晴空乱流，正在调整，要求乘客留在座位→ （续写）飞行员尝试控制局势却徒劳→ （续写）_________________________________________________

4．文章线索

（1）核心矛盾是什么？这一矛盾对情节发展有何作用？如何推动主要人物的行动与形象塑造？

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（2）主要人物的心理/状态变化有哪些？这些变化如何形成呼应，推动情节发展并深化

主题？

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（3）文本中的关键细节有哪些？它们有何意义？为后续情节发展做了怎样的铺垫？

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（4）故事的情节推进逻辑是什么？情节发展背后凸显了怎样的主题脉络？

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5．情节线

“我”期待已久的巴哈马度假之旅开启，提前规划好行程→ 准时登机，坐在中间座位，两侧是年轻女性和老年女士→ 飞行员告知即将起飞，“我”回忆儿时飞行经历→ “我”入睡后被尖叫惊醒，飞机陷入混乱，灯光闪烁、剧烈颠簸→ “我”发现左侧年轻女性消失，内心恐惧，听到小女孩哭喊，自己也落泪→ 飞机颠簸加剧，飞行员广播告知遭遇极端晴空乱流并尝试调整→ （续写）飞行员努力控制局势却徒劳，危机进一步升级→ （续写）_______________________________________________________

6.情感线

“我”：期待（憧憬度假）→ 喜悦（顺利登机）→ 平静（安心入睡）→ 慌乱（被尖叫惊醒）→ 恐惧（邻座消失、飞机颠簸）→ 崩溃（落泪）→ 不安（担忧局势）→ 焦灼（飞行员控制徒劳）→ 最终心情/态度→ _________________________

年轻女性/小女孩/飞行员：年轻女性（平静（登机）→ 未知（消失））；小女孩（懵懂（登机）→ 恐惧（哭喊）→ 平静（局势稳定））；飞行员（平稳（起飞前）→ 紧张（遭遇乱流）→ 焦急（控制徒劳）→ 沉稳（持续应对）→ ___________________________

老年女士：平静（登机后）→ 恐慌（乱流中）→ 平静（局势稳定）。

7．文章大意概括

中文：

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英文：

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