内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(外研版选择性必修3)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题6:创作一首关于自然的诗
适用年级:
选择性必修3
对应版本:
外研版
常考题目:
Write a poem about your favorite natural scene Create a poem describing the beau
一、
话题解读
本话题是外研版高中英语选择性必修3的写作内容,在其他版本高中英语教材的相应学段也
可能有类似自然主题的诗歌创作训练。常考题目有“rite a poem about your favorite natural
scene”“Create a poem describing the beauty of seasons”等,核心考察学生运用英语进行
诗歌创作的想象力与语言表达能力。该话题在高中英语写作中注重培养文学素养,多以诗歌
形式出现,是提升语言综合运用能力的重要训练内容。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心词汇(18个)
1.blossom/blpsem/v.开花:绽放
2.ripple/rpl/v.泛起涟漪n.波纹
3.lush /IAf/adj.茂盛的;葱郁的
4.cascade /kae'skeid/n.小瀑布V.倾泻
5.twilight/twarlart/n.黄昏;暮色
6.serene/sa'ri:n/adj..宁静的;安详的
7.whisper /'wIspe/V.低语:沙沙作响n.低语声
8.vibrant/'vaIbrent/adj.充满生机的;鲜艳的
9.meander/mi'ende/v.蜿蜒流淌n.曲径
10.radiant /'rerdient/adj..光芒四射的;喜悦的
11.rustle/'rsl/v.沙沙作响n.沙沙声
12.tranquil/'traenkwIl/adj.平静的;安宁的
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13.flutter/flt/V.飘动;振翅n.飘动
14.verdant/'v3 dnt/ad.翠绿的;长满青草的
15.glisten/'gsn/v.闪耀;反光
16.hue /hju/n.色调;色彩
17.murmur /'m3:ma/v.低声说:发出轻柔的声音n.低语声
18.scent/sent/n.气味;香气v.闻到;察觉
2.核心短语(12个)
1.bloom in spring春季绽放
2.gentle breeze微风
3.sunset glow晚霞
4.mountain range山脉
5.clear stream清澈的溪流
6.autumn foliage秋叶
7.morning dew晨露
8.starry sky星空
9.wild flowers野花
10.fresh air新鲜空气
11.natural landscape自然景观
12.seasonal changes季节变化
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:“only+状语”倒装结构
Only by immersing ourselves in the vibrant natural landscape can we truly
appreciate the magic of seasonal changes.
2.结构:非限制性定语从句
The clear stream ripples gently through the verdant valley,which enables
us to feel the serene rhythm of nature.
3.结构:形式主语t句型
It is essential that we should protect wild flowers so that they can bloom
in spring year after year.
4.结构:让步状语从句
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Although autumn foliage fades away in winter,we still can sense the scent
of renewal in the fresh air.
5.结构:现在分词作状语
Watching the sunset glow paint the mountain range,we can experience
the tranquil beauty of twilight.
6.结构:动名词作主语句型
Listening to the murmur of the cascade is an effective way to calm our
restless minds.
7.结构:not only.but also..并列结构
Not only can the starry sky inspire our imagination,but also it can remind
us of the vastness of the universe.
8.结构:“the+比较级,the+比较级.”句型
The more we observe the flutter of butterflies and the rustle of leaves,the
deeper we will understand the harmony of natural life.
四、满分范文示范
Ode to Nature's Rhythm
When spring breathes life,wild flowers_in spring,Their vibrant_painting meadows where
breezes softly sing.Gentle breeze carries the scent of_,so light,Whispering secrets
through leaves in the lush,verdant night.
A clear stream meanders,its ripples glisten bright,Through mountain ranges where the
cascade takes flight.Morning dew clings to petals,a diamond-like glow,Which enables us
to taste the earth's purest flow.
Autumn foliage blazes with hues of red and gold,Though twilight comes early,the sunset
glow unfolds.Although the rustle of leaves speaks of winter near,The starry sky above
still holds nature's cheer.
Only by walking these paths can we truly see,The serene dance of seasonal changes,
wild and free.It is essential that we cherish each fleeting hour,For in natural landscape
lies life's most sacred power.
Watching the flutter of butterflies,light and fleet,The more we listen,the deeper our souls
meet.Not only does nature delight the eye and ear,But also it teaches us how to love,
simple and clear.
Listening to the murmur of the brook as day declines,We find tranquility in nature's own
designs-A symphony of life,where every creature plays,A timeless ode to earth,through
all our yesterdays.