内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(外研版选择性必修3)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题3:描写一位战争英雄
适用年级:
选择性必修3
对应版本:
外研版
常考题日:
Describe a War Hero My Respect for a War Hero
一、话题解读
本话题是外研版高中英语选择性必修3的重点写作内容。常考题目有“Describe a War Hero”“My
Respect for a War Hero”等,核心考察学生对人物事迹的描写能力与情感表达能力。该话题
在高中英语写作中多以记叙文形式出现,是学期及高考模拟的常见话题。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心词汇(18个):
1.heroic /he're5 Ik/adj..英雄的;英勇的
2.sacrifice/'saekrifaIs/n.牺牲;祭品
3.courageous/ka'reId3 es/adj.勇敢的;无畏的
4.valor'vele(r)n.英勇;勇猛
5.battlefield/baetlfi:ld/n.战场
6.defend /dI'fend/.保卫;防御
7.liberation/rba'reIn/n..解放;释放
8.patriotic/pertri'ptIk/adj..爱国的
9.glorious/glo:ries/adj.光荣的;辉煌的
10.comrade /'kpmreId/.n.同志;伙伴
11.veteran/'veteren/n.老兵;老手
12.invade/n'verd/v.入侵;侵略
13.resistance/rr'zIstens/n.抵抗;反抗
14.memorial/me'm:riel/n.纪念碑;纪念馆
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15.dedicate/dedrkert/v.致力于;奉献
16.martyr/'ma:tie(r)/n.烈士;殉道者
7.triumph/'traIAmf/n.胜利;成功
18.bravery/'breiveri/n.勇敢;勇气
2.核心短语(15个):
1.national hero民族英雄
2.sacrifice one's life牺牲生命
3.defend the country保卫国家
4.on the battlefield在战场上
5.fight for freedom为自由而战
6.patriotic spirit爱国精神
7.veteran soldier老兵
8.anti-Japanese War抗日战争
9.liberation war解放战争
10.heroic deeds英雄事迹
11.pay tribute to向…致敬
12.martyrs'memorial烈士纪念碑
13.resist aggression抵抗侵略
14.glorious history光荣历史
15.comrades in arms战友们
三、高级句型模板
1.“only+状语”倒装结构结构:Only by doing sth.can we do sth.
Only by recalling his heroic deeds can we truly understand the meaning
of sacrifice.
2.非限制性定语从句结构:,which enables us to do sth.结构:He led his comrades in arms
to resist aggression for eight years,which enabled the nation to achieve final triumph.
He led his comrades in arms to resist aggression for eight years,which
enabled the nation to achieve final triumph.
3.形式主语it句型结构:It is crucial/essential that sb.(should)do sth.
It is crucial that we should inherit his patriotic spirit and defend the country
4.让步状语从句结构:Although/While.,sb.stil..
Although he was seriously injured on the battlefield,he still continued to
fight for freedom.
5.现在分词作状语结构:Doing sth,sb.can do sth.
Standing in front of the martyrs'memorial,we feel deep respect for this
national hero.
6.动名词作主语句型结构:Doing sth.is an effective way to do sth.
Learning about his heroic deeds is an effective way to cultivate our patri-
otic spirit.
7.not only..but also.…并列结构结构:Not only can we do sth,but also we can do sth
Not only did he sacrifice his life for the country,but also he inspired
thousands of young people to join the army.
8.“the+比较级.,the+比较级.”句型结构:The more we do sth.,the better we will do
sth.
The more we understand the history of the liberation war,the more we
cherish the peaceful life today.
四、满分范文示范
A Glorious Tribute to a National Hero
Among the many heroic figures in China's history,Liu Hulan stands out as a shining example
of courage and patriotism.Born in a small village,she dedicated her life to the liberation war
at a young age,becoming a symbol of the patriotic spirit that has shaped our nation's glorious
history.
Liu Hulan's bravery was truly remarkable.At the age of 15,she was captured by enemy
forces while working as a spy for the resistance.Although she faced cruel torture,she
refused to betray her comrades in arms,showing unparalleled courage even in the
face of death.Her final words,"I will never surrender!",echoed the spirit of millions fighting
for freedom on the battlefield.In the end,she sacrificed her life for the country,becoming a
respected martyr whose story continues to inspire generations.
Standing in front of the martyrs'memorial dedicated to her,we cannot help but reflect
on her heroic deeds.It is crucial that we should remember not just her name,but the
values she represented-loyalty,bravery,and selflessness.Learning about her life
is an effective way to cultivate our own patriotic spirit,reminding us of the sacrifices
made to defend our country.
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Not only did Liu Hulan give her life for the liberation of the nation,but also she set
an eternal example of what it means to be a true patriot.The more we study her
story,the deeper our appreciation for the peaceful life we enjoy today becomes.Only
by honoring such heroes can we ensure that their legacy lives on,inspiring future
generations to uphold the principles of justice and freedom.
Today,as we pay tribute to Liu Hulan and other revolutionary martyrs,let us vow to carry
forward their patriotic spirit.Their courage on the battlefield and dedication to the nation
will forever be etched in our hearts,reminding us of the price paid for our freedom and the
responsibility we bear to protect it.