内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(外研版选择性必修2)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题6:写一则生存故事
适用年级:
选择性必修2
对应版本:
外研版
常考题日:
描述一次难忘的生存经历/讲述你从生存故事中获得的启示
一、话题解读
本话题是外研版高中英语选择性必修2的写作内容,在其他版本高中英语教材的相应学段也
可能有类似生存主题的写作训练。常考题目有“描述一次难忘的生存经历”“讲述你从生存故
事中获得的启示”等,核心考察学生叙述事件经过的逻辑与情感表达能力。该话题在高中英
语写作中多以记叙文形式出现,是培养学生叙事能力和应对相关情境写作的重要内容。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心词汇(18个):
1.survive/s'vaIv/.生存;存活
2.desolate'deselet/adj..荒凉的;无人烟的
3.scavenge/'skaevInd.3W.搜寻;觅食
4.shelter /'felte(r)n.庇护所;避难处
5.sustain/sa'steIn/v.维持;支撑
6.navigation/,naeVI'geIn/n.导航;航行
7.hypothermia/,haIp3'3:mien.体温过低
8.dehydration/,di:har'drerfn/n.脱水
9.forage/'fprId:3w.觅食;搜寻
10.endurance/in'djuerens/n.耐力;持久力
11.resilience/rr'zIliens/n.适应力;恢复力
12.compass'kAmpes/n.指南针;罗盘
13.blizzard/'blrzed/n.暴风雪
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14.terrain /te'reIn/n.地形;地势
15.provision/pre'VI3n/n.供应品;储备物资
16.signal/'sIgnel/v.发信号;示意
17.thrive/eraIv/.茁壮成长;兴旺
18.starvation/sta:'verfn/n.饥饿;挨饿
2.核心短语(13个):
1.build a shelter搭建庇护所
2.start a fire生火
3.search for food寻找食物
4.drink clean water饮用干净水
5.read the stars辨认星星(导航)
6.follow the river沿着河流走
7.avoid wild animals躲避野生动物
8.treat injuries处理伤▣
9.keep warm保暖
10.save energy节省能量
11.look for signs of civilization寻找文明迹象
12.use a compass使用指南针
13.wait for rescue等待救援
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:“only+状语”倒装结构
Only by building a shelter and starting a fire in time can we survive the
freezing night in the desolate forest.
2.结构:非限制性定语从句
We followed the river downstream,which enabled us to find clean water
and search for food more easily.
3.结构:形式主语t句型
例句:It is crucial that we should save energy and avoid dehydration when
trapped in the wild.
4.结构:让步状语从句
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Although the blizzard made navigation impossible,we still tried to read
the stars for directions at night.
5.结构:现在分词作状语
Scavenging for dry branches and leaves,we managed to start a fire to
keep warm and signal for rescue.
6.结构:动名词作主语句型
Using a compass to identify the right direction is an effective way to look
for signs of civilization.
7.结构:not only.but also..并列结构
Not only can foraging for wild berries sustain our strength,but also it can
help us avoid starvation.
8.结构:“the+比较级,the+比较级.”句型
The more we practice treating injuries and avoiding wild animals,the
stronger our resilience will become in survival situations.
四、满分范文示范
A Desperate Survival in the Wilderness
It was a sunny afternoon when our hiking team got lost in the _mountain area.With no
provisions left and the sky turning dark,we realized we had to fight for survival.
Scavenging for dry branches and leaves,we managed to start a fire to keep warm and
signal for rescue.Only by building a shelter with pine branches and leaves could we
protect ourselves from the freezing wind at night.Following the river downstream,
which enabled us to find clean water and search for food more easily,we started our
difficult journey the next morning.
It is crucial that we should save energy and avoid dehydration in such harsh condi-
tions.Not only could foraging for wild berries sustain our strength,but also it could
help us avoid starvation.Using a compass to identify the right direction is an effective
way to look for signs of civilization,but the sudden blizzard made navigation impossible.
Although the blizzard made navigation impossible,we still tried to read the stars for
directions at night.
The more we practiced treating minor injuries and avoiding wild animals,the stronger
our resilience became.On the fifth day,we finally saw smoke rising in the distance.Run-
ning towards it with the last of our strength,we survived this unforgettable experience
This survival journey taught us that as long as we stay calm and take correct measures,we
can overcome any difficulty.It also showed us the importance of teamwork and resilience in
challenging situations.