内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(外研版选择性必修1)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题3:描写某个运动时刻
适用年级:
选择性必修1
对应版本:
外研版
常考题目:
Describe an Exciting Sports Moment A Memorable Sports Experience
一、话题解读
本话题是外研版高中英语选择性必修1的重点写作内容,在其他版本高中英语教材的相应学
段也有对应训练。常考题目有“Describe an Exciting Sports Moment”“A Memorable Sports
Experience”等,核心考察学生对运动场景的细节描写与情感表达能力。该话题在高中英语
写作中较为常见,多以记叙文形式出现,是期中、期末及各类英语考试的常见话题。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心词汇(18个):
1.sprint/sprInt/v.冲刺;短跑
2.leap /li:p/v.跳跃;跃过
3.stamina/'staemIne/n.耐力;持久力
4.agility /e'd3ati/n.敏捷性;灵活度
5.precision/prI'sI3n/n.精准度;精确度
6.accelerate /ek'selereIt/v.加速;促进
7.coordinate/ka':dInert/.协调;配合
8.endurance/In'djuerens,/n.耐力;持久力
9.vibrant'vaIbrent/adj.充满活力的;热烈的
10.rhythmic/rròmIk/adj..有节奏的;规律的
11.propel /pre'pel/v.推动;驱动
12.swift/swft/adj.迅速的:敏捷的
13.tension /'tenfn/n.紧张感;张力
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14.momentum/ma'mentem/n.动量;势头
15.graceful/'greIsfl/adj..优雅的;优美的
16.intense /In'tens/adj.强烈的:激烈的
17.thrust/rAst/v.猛推;冲
18.perseverance/,p3:sa'vIerens/n.毅力;坚持不懈
2.核心短语(12个):
1.break the finish line冲过终点线
2.flex one's muscles绷紧肌肉
3.maintain balance保持平衡
4.gather momentum积聚势头
5.cross the threshold跨越门槛
6.with all one's strength用尽全力
7.seize the opportunity抓住机会
8.in full swing全力进行中
9.push to the limit推向极限
10.synchronize movements协调动作
11.sprint to victory冲刺胜利
12.rise to the challenge迎接挑战
三、高级句型模板
1.“only+状语”倒装结构结构:Only by doing sth.can we do sth..
Only by accelerating with all her strength could the sprinter break the
finish line in the 100-meter race.
2.非限制性定语从句结构:.,which enables us to do sth.
例句:The gymnast flexed her muscles and maintained balance on the beam,
which enabled her to rise to the challenge of the difficult routine.
3.形式主语it句型结构:It is crucia/essential that sb.(should)do sth.
It is crucial that athletes (should)coordinate their movements perfectly
to synchronize with their teammates in relay races.
4.让步状语从句结构:Although/While..,sb.still..
Although his stamina was fading,the long-distance runner still pushea
to the limit to sprint to victory in the final lap.
5.现在分词作状语结构:Doing sth.,sb.can do sth
Gathering momentum with each stride,the high jumper leaped over the
bar with a graceful arc.
6.动名词作主语句型结构:Doing sth.is an effective way to do sth.
Practicing perseverance in daily training is an effective way to gather
momentum for the upcoming championship.
7.not only..but also..并列结构结构:Not only can we do sth.,but also we can do sth
例句:Not only can synchronized swimmers showcase vibrant and rhythmic
movements,but also they can inspire audiences with their intense teamwork.
8.“the+比较级.,the+比较级..”句型结构:The more we do sth.,the better we will do
sth.
The more athletes flex their muscles and synchronize movements,the
more precisely they will execute complex routines in competitions.
四、满分范文示范
A Memorable Sprint to Victory
The 100-meter final at our school sports meet was in full swing,with the crowd holding their
breath as the sprinters took their positions.Among them was Li Ming,whose persever-
ance in daily training had prepared him for this moment.Flexing his muscles and gathering
momentum,he stared intently at the finish line,ready to rise to the challenge.
As the starting gun fired,Li Ming accelerated with all his strength,his swift legs propelling him
forward.The race was intense,with competitors neck and neck,but he maintained balance
and coordinated his movements perfectly.Although his stamina was fading in the last 30
meters,he pushed to the limit,driven by the desire to sprint to victory.
Gathering momentum with each stride,Li Ming thrust himself forward in the final meters.
Only by summoning every bit of his agility and speed could he break the finish line first,
winning the race by a hair's breadth.The crowd erupted in cheers,and his classmates
rushed to congratulate him.This moment,which showcased not only his physical strength
but also his mental toughness,will always be etched in my memory.
The more athletes like Li Ming dedicate themselves to training,the more memorable mo-
ments they create.His victory taught us that success comes from both talent and unwa-
vering effort,inspiring everyone present to seize the opportunity and pursue their goals with
determination.
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