内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(外研版必修1)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题4:为《二十年后》的故事续写结尾
适用年级:
必修1
对应版本:
外研版
常考题日:
为《二十年后》续写故事结尾
一、话题解读
本话题是外研版高中英语必修一的重点写作内容,在其他版本高中英语教材高一学段也可能
有相关拓展训练。常考题目有“为《二十年后》续写故事结尾”等,核心考察学生根据原文情
节进行合理想象与逻辑连贯的叙事能力。该话题在高中英语写作中多以记叙文形式出现,是
高一阶段期中、期末的常见考查话题。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心词汇:
1.reunite/,riju:'nart/V.重逢;再联合
2.betray/br'trer/v.背叛;出卖
3.identity /aI'denteti/n.身份;特性
4.destiny/desteni/n.命运;天命
5.hesitate /'hezrtert/v.犹豫;迟疑
6.confront/ken'frant/v.面对:对峙
7.memorial/ma'mo:riel/adj..纪念的;追悼的
8.reluctant./ri'IAktent/adj.不情愿的;勉强的
9.inevitable /In'evIte bl/adj.不可避免的;必然的
10.remnant/'remnent/n.残余;遗迹
11.sacrifice/'saekrIfaIs/n.牺牲;祭品
12.dilemma/dr'lema/n.困境:进退两难
13.evoke'vkWV.唤起;引起
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14.vanish /'vaenIf/v.消失;突然不见
15.testimony/test虹neni/n.证词;证明
16.fate /fert/n.命运;天数
17.bittersweet/,brte'swi:t/adj..苦乐参半的
18.lingering'IIngerIn/adj挥之不去的;拖延的
2.核心短语:
1.turn up出现;露面
2.live up to不辜负;符合
3.face to face面对面地
4.in disguise伪装;乔装
5.take on承担;呈现
6.hold back抑制;隐瞒
7.break one's promise违背承诺
8.come to an end结束;告终
9.by accident偶然;意外地
10.in memory of纪念
11.stay true to忠于;信守
12.fade away逐渐消失;褪色
三、高级句型模板
1.“only+状语”倒装结构结构:Only by doing sth.can we do sth..
Only by confronting his past courageously could Bob come to terms with
Jimmy's betrayal.
2.非限制性定语从句结构:,which enables us to do sth.
The letter in Jimmy's handwriting revealed the truth,which enabled Bob
to understand the inevitable conflict between friendship and justice.
3.形式主语it句型结构:It is crucia/essential that sb.(should)do sth.
It is crucial that Bob(should)accept the bittersweet reality of their reunited
destiny
4.让步状语从句结构:Although/While.,sb.stil..
Although twenty years had transformed their appearances,the lingering
memory of their boyhood friendship still touched Bob's heart.
5.现在分词作状语结构:Doing sth,sb.can do sth.
Holding the crumpled letter in his hand,Bob realized that true friendship
sometimes required painful sacrifice.
6.动名词作主语句型结构:Doing sth.is an effective way to do sth.
Facing one's mistakes bravely is an inevitable stepto achieve inner peace.
7.not only..but also..并列结构结构:Not only can we do sth,but also we can do sth.
Not only did the reunion evoke their shared memories,but also it forced
them to confront the harshness of fate.
8.“the+比较级,the+比较级.”句型结构:The more we do sth.,the better we will do
sth.
The more Bob tried to hold back his tears,the more sorrowful he felt about
their broken promise.
四、满分范文示范
The End of the Twenty-Year Wait
As the police car vanished into the night,Bob stood frozen on the street corner,clutching
Jimmy's letter in trembling hands.The crumpled paper,which bore the familiar slant of
his childhood friend's handwriting,revealed a truth more painful than betrayal:Jimmy had
recognized him the moment he turned up,yet chose duty over friendship."Only by con-
fronting this dilemma could I stay true to my badge,the letter read,which enabled Bob to
finally understand the inevitable conflict between loyalty and justice.
Although twenty years had transformed their lives beyond recognition,the lingering memory
of their boyhood oath still stung.Bob remembered how they'd promised to reunite here,
no matter what-now that promise lay shattered like the glass of the shop window.Holding
back tears,he realized that some bonds,however precious,were destined to fade away
when tested by fate.
It was crucial that he accept this bittersweet reality.Facing the empty street,Bob whispered,
"You didn't break your promise,Jimmy.You just fulfilled a different one.Not only had
their reunion evoked cherished memories,but it had also taught him that true friendship
sometimes required the greatest sacrifice.
As dawn broke,Bob walked away,leaving behind the remnant of their past.The more he
reflected on Jimmy's choice,the clearer it became:their story hadn't come to an end-
it had simply taken on a new meaning.In memory of the boy who once shared his dreams
Bob resolved to live up to the better version of himself they'd both imagined long ago
Somewhere in the distance,a church bell rang,a solemn testimony to the price of honor.
And as the first light touched the rooftops,Bob knew that even in separation,their friendship
would endure-not as a physical presence,but as a lingering lesson in courage and grace.