摘要:
本讲义聚焦高中英语写作核心能力,系统覆盖书评与书信两大实用体裁。从必备词汇(如book review、recommend)、句型(如“This is a novel by...”“It is highly recommended that...”)等基础输入,到审题谋篇、遣词造句、词句升级的分步指导,再到《了不起的盖茨比》书评、邀请信等真实任务实践,构建从语言积累到产出的完整学习支架。
资料以结构化写作支架为特色,通过“词汇-句型-步骤-范文”四阶设计,有效提升学生语言能力。书评任务引导学生分析《了不起的盖茨比》中Gatsby的悲剧与梦想,培养思维品质;书信写作结合“逆境和勇气”演讲比赛邀请情境,增强实际应用。课中教师可依托分步指导高效授课,课后学生能借助范文与步骤自主复盘,弥补写作短板。
内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing
介绍和评价作品中的人物角色
书评一般是对一本书的内容、思想、艺术表现等的分析和讨论。简单的书评在分享书中故事以及观点的同时, 适当地加入自己的理解、感受和看法就可以了。
[文章架构]
[必备词汇]
(1)book review书评
(2)author作者
(3)title题目
(4)chapter章节;回
(5)entitled标题为
(6)based on在……基础上
(7)learn from...从……中学到
(8)describe描述;描写
(9)recommend推荐;介绍
(10)share分享
(11)comment评论;意见
(12)opinion意见;主张
(13)awardwinning books获奖书籍
(14)bestseller畅销书
(15)publish出版
(16)fiction小说
[必备句型]
①This is a novel by the English author...
这是英国作家……写的一部小说。
②I have read the book entitled...
我读了一本名为……的书。
③The story is based on...
这个故事是基于……而写的。
④My favorite book is...
我最喜欢的书是……
⑤I learned from this story that...
我从这个故事中学到……
⑥The author described that...
作者这样描述……
⑦The story ends with...
故事以……结尾。
⑧I'm moved by the story.
我被这个故事感动了。
⑨I think I probably enjoy it more than...
我想我可能喜欢它超过……
⑩It is highly recommended that...
强烈建议……
假设你是李华,本学期你阅读了小说《了不起的盖茨比》(The Great Gatsby)。请根据提示用英语写一篇书评,80词左右。
基本
信息
作者:美国作家 F.Scott Fitzgerald
背景:20世纪20年代,美国
故事
情节
主人公Gatsby靠非法经营实现了他的美国梦,并爱上了Daisy。 在Gatsby看来,Daisy是美好生活的象征,而实际上,Daisy自私、肤浅,并最终导致Gatsby走向了悲剧的结局
评价
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[写作步骤]
第一步 审题谋篇
第二步 遣词造句
1.小说《了不起的盖茨比》是美国作家弗朗西斯·斯科特·菲茨杰拉德的代表作。
The novel The Great Gatsby is the representative work of American writer F.Scott Fitzgerald.
2.它真实地反映了20世纪20年代的美国,被公认为是一本文学经典。
It is a true reflection of the US in the 1920s and universally acknowledged as a literary classic.
3.《了不起的盖茨比》展现了盖茨比追求梦想的悲剧故事。
The Great Gatsby shows the tragic story of Gatsby's pursuing his dream.
4.他爱上了代表美好生活的黛西。
He falls in love with Daisy, who represents a beautiful life.
5.虽然盖茨比的努力没有得到回报,但他为实现梦想、改变命运而奋斗的精神却深深地打动了我。(一句多译)
①Gatsby's efforts do not pay off, but his spirit of struggling to realize his dream and change his fate touches me deeply.(并列句)
②Although Gatsby's efforts do not pay off, his spirit of struggling to realize his dream and change his fate touches me deeply.(让步状语从句)
第三步 词句升级
6.用非限制性定语从句连接句1和句2
The novel The Great Gatsby is the representative work of American writer F.Scott Fitzgerald, which is a true reflection of the US in the 1920s and universally acknowledged as a literary classic.
第四步 妙笔成篇
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[参考范文]
The novel The Great Gatsby is the representative work of American writer F.Scott Fitzgerald,which is a true reflection of the US in the 1920s and universally acknowledged as a literary classic.
The Great Gatsby shows the tragic story of Gatsby's pursuing his dream.He realizes his dream by illegal business.He falls in love with Daisy, who represents a beautiful life.However, in real life, she is far from what Gatsby imagines.She is a selfish and shallow girl and finally leads Gatsby to a sad ending.
In my opinion,although Gatsby's efforts do not pay off, his spirit of struggling to realize his dream and change his fate touches me deeply.
假定你是英才中学的学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次主题为“逆境和勇气”的英语演讲比赛,请你给外籍教师Alice写一封信,邀请她担任演讲比赛的评委,内容包括:
1.写信目的;
2.演讲比赛举办的时间、地点和主题;
3.希望她能给予指导。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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[参考范文]
Dear Ms Alice,
I am Li Hua, the leader of the Students Union of Yingcai Middle School.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.
The contest, the theme of which is “Adversity and Courage”, will be held in the lecture hall from 3:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of July 15.What's more, there will be ten candidates taking part in it.I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious guidance.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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