摘要:
本讲义聚焦高中英语文化遗产介绍类文章写作,系统梳理写作核心要素,提供常用词汇(如date back to, cultural heritage)、句式(如Located in..., Dating back to...)等基础支架,通过审题谋篇明确主题、要点、人称及时态,结合句式升级(非限制性定语从句、分词作状语、倒装句),帮助学生构建从基础表达到高级写作的能力脉络。
该资料亮点在于融合语言能力与文化意识培养,以故宫等实例引导学生用英语介绍中国文化遗产,提升跨文化表达能力。通过审题谋篇和句式升级训练,培养思维品质,助力学生分析写作要点、优化表达。课中教师可依托支架引导分层教学,课后学生可参考范文和句式自主练习,有效查漏补缺。
内容正文:
Section Ⅳ Writing
写一篇介绍文化遗产的文章
本单元写作要求为写一篇介绍文化遗产的文章。写作时,要介绍文化遗产的大概情况,并指明文化遗产的地位及保护它的意义及相关措施。
一、写作常用词汇
1.date back to/from... 追溯到……
2.protect...from... 保护……免遭……
3.one of the wonders 奇迹之一
4.cultural heritage 文化遗产
5.in need of 需要
二、写作常用句式
1.Located in...,it has a history of more than...years.
2.Dating back to/from the...Dynasty, the...is considered as one of the most famous heritages in...
3.With the original purpose of...,it was built mainly to protect...from...
4.It was first used as...and later, the people living there decided to...
5.It has become the symbol of...
6.It was listed in the World Cultural Heritage in...,after...
7. In recent years, the local government has spent much money efficiently protecting...
假定你是李华,你的朋友Tom对故宫很感兴趣,请你用英语给他写一封邮件介绍故宫的情况。要点如下:
1.名称:故宫(紫禁城);
2.位置:北京市中心;
3.历史:至今600多年;
4.规模:占地72万平方米,是现在世界上最大的、保存最完整的宫殿之一;
5.收藏:收藏历代珍贵文物和艺术品约100万件;
6.申遗成功时间:1988年被列入《世界文化遗产名录》。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
[审题谋篇]
审题
审人称:第三人称为主
审时态:一般现在时为主
谋篇
1.确定写作主题:介绍故宫情况;
2.确定写作要点:点明介绍的对象、该文化遗产的情况等;
3.确定常用的表达方式:动词ed形式短语、动词ing形式短语作状语、倒装句等;
4.确定前后逻辑的衔接;
5.注意细节,如拼写、标点符号或句式结构等。
语言
注意用词准确,语言简洁精炼。
[核心词汇]
1.preserve vt. 保存,保护
2.palace n. 宫殿
3.collection n. 收藏
4.be located/situated in 位于
5.have a history of... 有……年的历史
6.cover an area of 占地面积
7.in person 亲自
[主要句式]
1.我写信是想告诉你一些关于故宫博物院的事情,故宫博物院也被称为紫禁城。
I'm writing to tell you something about the Palace Museum,and it is also called the Forbidden City.
2.故宫博物院位于北京市中心,已有六百多年的历史。
The Palace Museum is located in the center of Beijing, and it has a history of over six hundred years.
3.它占地72万平方米,这使它成为世界上最大、保存最完好的宫殿之一。
It covers an area of 720 thousand square meters,which makes it one of the largest and best preserved palaces in the world.
4.故宫博物院于1988年被列入《世界文化遗产名录》。
The Palace Museum was listed in the World Cultural Heritage in 1988.
5.只有当你亲自参观时,你才能充分欣赏它的宏伟。
You can fully enjoy its brilliance only when you visit it in person.
[句式升级]
6.句1改为含有非限制性定语从句的句子。
I'm writing to tell you something about the Palace Museum, which is also called the Forbidden City.
7.句2改为含有动词ed形式短语作状语的句子。Located in the center of Beijing,the Palace Museum has a history of over six hundred years.
8.句3改为含有动词ing形式短语作结果状语的句子。
It covers an area of 720 thousand square meters,making it one of the largest and best preserved palaces in the world.
9.句5改为部分倒装句。
Only when you visit it in person can you fully enjoy its brilliance.
[组句成篇]
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you something about the Palace Museum, which is also called the Forbidden City.
Located in the center of Beijing,the Palace Museum has a history of over six hundred years.It covers an area of 720 thousand square meters, making it one of the largest and best preserved palaces in the world.It has a large collection of precious cultural relics and artworks, the number of which is over one million. The Palace Museum was listed in the World Cultural Heritage in 1988.Only when you visit it in person can you fully enjoy its brilliance.
I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是中学生李华,参加了关于世界文化遗产的报告会,了解到一些世界遗产的状况。请根据列举的要点提示,写一篇英语短文。
1.了解到的世界遗产的现状;
2.分析导致这种现象的原因以及采取的措施;
3.你的观点。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Recently I attended a lecture about the world heritage. I have known at present some world heritage sites are in danger.
As far as I am concerned,it is pollution and tourism that contribute to the serious problem. As a result, we should remind people to raise their awareness of protecting these endangered heritage sites.Apart from these measures, our government also recommends that everyone should protect them because they are our precious treasures.
Actions speak louder than words.Apparently,it is of vital importance to take action and do something.
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