UNIT 2 Section Ⅳ Writing（Word教参）-【精讲精练】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第三册（译林版）

本高中英语讲义聚焦故事类写作核心知识点，以“外星人故事”为主题构建学习支架。从写作要求（时间顺序、合理情节）切入，提供常用词汇（如come across、have an encounter with）和句式（如He/She was doing...when...），再通过审题谋篇明确人称（第一、三人称）、时态（一般过去时）及写作要点，进而引导句式升级（合并为定语从句等），最终以范文示例完成从基础积累到篇章应用的递进。 该资料特色在于融合语言能力与思维品质培养，通过“句式升级”环节（如将简单句合并为非限制性定语从句）提升语言表达复杂性，借助审题谋篇中的逻辑衔接指导培养思维逻辑性。实例丰富，如提供“梦见外星人”和“偶遇外星人”两篇范文，课中辅助教师系统教学，课后学生可通过词汇句式梳理及范文模仿查漏补缺，有效提升故事写作能力与自主学习效率。

Section Ⅳ　Writing 写一篇有关外星人的故事 本单元写作要求为写一篇有关外星人的故事，属于故事类文章。在写作时，需要注意按照时间顺序进行写作，且设置合理的情节。 一、写作常用词汇 1．come across　偶遇 2．have an encounter with　与……邂逅 3．in the early morning　在清早 4．at first　起初 5．shortly afterwards　不久以后 6．all of a sudden　突然 二、写作常用句式 1．When he/she heard.../On hearing.../As soon as he/she heard.../When the news reached... 2．When he/she saw this.../At the sight of.../Seeing this... 3．He/She was doing...when.../He/She was about to do...when.../He/She had done...when... 4．He/She was surprised to find... 5．Long long ago, there lived a man who was called... 假定你是李华，昨天晚上你做梦梦见了外星人，请你给你的朋友Tom写一封信，讲述这个有趣的梦。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom， Yours， Li Hua [审题谋篇] 审题 审人称：第一人称为主、第三人称为辅 审时态：一般过去时为主 谋篇 1.确定写作主题：梦见外星人的故事； 2.确定写作要点：梦见外星人的地点、过程和外星人的长相等； 3.确定常用的表达方式：定语从句，倒装句，so...that...句型等； 4.确定前后逻辑的衔接； 5.注意细节，如单词拼写、标点符号或句式结构等。 语言 注意语言要平实、准确。 [核心词汇] 1．alien n．外星人 2．land vi. 着陆 3．come across 偶遇 4．fall asleep 睡着 5．wake sb up 叫醒某人 [主要句式] 1．我写信是想告诉你我的有趣的梦。 I'm writing to tell you my interesting dream. 2．在梦中我偶遇了一位外星人。 I came across an alien in the dream. 3．做完作业后，我太累了，马上就睡着了。 After finishing my homework，I was very tired so I fell asleep immediately. 4．突然，我看到一个不明飞行物降落在院子里。 Suddenly，I saw a UFO land in the yard. 5．一个外星人出来了，他看起来又高又壮，有两个头和三只眼睛。 Out came an alien，he looked tall and strong with two heads and three eyes. 6．看到这个外星人朝我走来，我惊呆了，动弹不得。 When I saw the alien walking towards me, I was too astonished to move. 7．外星人好像在说什么来跟我打招呼，但我听不懂。 The alien seemed to be saying something to greet me but I couldn't understand it. 8．就在那时，一声巨响把我叫醒了。 Just at that time，a loud noise woke me up. [句式升级] 9．句1和句2合并为含有非限制性定语从句的句子。 I'm writing to tell you my interesting dream, in which I came across an alien. 10．句3改为so...that...句型。 After finishing my homework，I was so tired that I fell asleep immediately. 11．句5改为含有非限制性定语从句的句子。 Out came an alien, who looked tall and strong with two heads and three eyes. [组句成篇] Dear Tom， I'm writing to tell you my interesting dream, in which I came across an alien. After finishing my homework, I was so tired that I fell asleep immediately. Suddenly, I saw a UFO land in the yard. Out came an alien, who looked tall and strong with two heads and three eyes. When I saw the alien walking towards me, I was too astonished to move. The alien seemed to be saying something to greet me but I couldn't understand it. Just at that time, a loud noise woke me up.It was my alarm clock. Do you think my dream is interesting? Write to me about your dream. Yours， Li Hua 假定你是李华，上周五的一个夜晚，你在回家的路上偶遇了外星人，你的好朋友Tom对此事很感兴趣，请你给Tom写一封信介绍一下这件事。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Tom， Yours， Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Tom， I'm writing to tell you something about my encounter with an alien. Last Friday, I was walking home at about 11 p．m. when I found a huge round object flying in the sky. After a few seconds, it landed on the ground in front of me. To my great astonishment, an alien walked out of it. The alien has one big eye, four arms and four legs. Just at that moment, the alien noticed me and disappeared with its UFO. Even today, I couldn't believe what happened on that day. Yours， Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $