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Unit 1 Section Ⅳ Writing
写一篇有关善意谎言的议论文
本单元写作要求为写一篇有关善意谎言的议论文,属于正反观点类或观点对比类作文。通过讨论某种现象或剖析某种事物来论述道理、发表意见或提出主张。在时态方面,陈述正反两方面观点时常用一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主。此类议论文常用三段式:
第一段:开门见山,引入话题;
第二段:列举正方和反方的观点及理由;
第三段:表明自己的观点。
一、写作常用词汇
1.lie vi.& n. 撒谎,谎言
2.honest adj. 诚实的
3.truth n. 事实,真相
4.forgive vt. 原谅
5.hurt vt. 伤害
6.protect vt. 保护
7.feeling n. 感觉,情感
二、写作常用句式
2.People often use white lies to prevent hurting the feelings of others or to save themselves trouble.
人们经常使用善意的谎言来避免伤害别人的感情,或是给自己省去麻烦。
3.Telling the right lie at the right time is just as important as telling the truth.
在恰当的时间说善意的谎言和说实话同样重要。
4.Sometimes it is perfectly all right to tell a white lie.
有时候说一个善意的谎言是完全无伤大雅的。
5.Telling white lies is very common and almost all of us have done it.
说善意的谎言是很常见的,几乎我们所有人都说过。
假定你是李华,今天你班同学就“是否应该对得了不治之症的病人说善意的谎言”的话题展开讨论,同学们意见不一致。请你根据以下要点写一篇文章。
1.支持说善意的谎言的同学的观点及理由;
2.反对说善意的谎言的同学的观点及理由;
3.我的观点。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Ⅰ.审题谋篇很关键
审
题
审人称:第三人称为主,第一人称为辅
审时态:一般现在时为主
谋篇
Step 1:确定写作主题:是否应该对得了不治之症的病人说善意的谎言;
Step 2:确定写作要点:支持者的观点及理由、反对者的观点及理由、我的观点;
Step 3:确定常用的表达方式:定语从句、同位语从句;
Step 4:确定前后逻辑的衔接;
Step 5:注意细节,如拼写、标点符号或句式结构等
语言
一般要注意条理清晰。
1.inform sb of sth 通知/告知某人某事
2.truth 事实,真相
3.make a decision/decisions 做出决定
4.acceptable 可以接受的
5.lose hope 失去希望
6.make the situation worse 使情况更糟糕
7.depend on 取决于
8.positive attitude 积极的态度
Ⅲ.由词扩句雏形现
1.如果一个患者得了不治之症,他/她是否应该被告知真相?
If a patient is suffering an incurable illness,should he or she be informed of the truth?
2.有些学生反对。
Some students are against it.
3.他们坚持认为,患者应该被告知他们病情的真相,以便他们能够根据自己的健康状况做出合适的决定。
They insist that the patients should be informed of the truth of their illness,so that they can make proper decision according to their health.
4.与上述观点相反,一些学生认为善意的谎言是不可接受的。
Contrary to the above belief,some students hold the view that a white lie isn't acceptable.
5.他们担心一旦被告知病情,患者可能会失去希望,这将使情况变得更糟。
They worry that once told about their condition,patients may lose their hope, and this will make the situation worse.
6.在我看来,人们是否应该说善意的谎言取决于患者是什么样的人。
In my view,whether people should tell a white lie or not depends on what kind of person the patient is.
7.如果患者有强烈的生存意志和积极的态度,告诉他们真相将有助于治疗。
If the patient has a strong will to live and a positive attitude,telling them the truth will be helpful to the treatment.
Ⅳ.句式升级造亮点
A.用定语从句合并句2和句3。
Some students who are against it insist that the patients should be informed of the truth of their illness,so that they can make proper decision according to their health.
B.用非限制性定语从句改写句5。
They worry that once told about their condition,patients may lose their hope, which will make the situation worse.
Ⅴ.过渡衔接连成篇
If a patient is suffering an incurable illness,should he or she be informed of the truth?Today our class have a discussion about it.
Some students who are against it insist that the patients should be informed of the truth of their illness,so that they can make proper decision according to their health.Contrary to the above belief, some students hold the view that a white lie isn't acceptable.They worry that once told about their condition,patients may lose their hope,which will make the situation worse.
In my view,whether people should tell a white lie or not depends on what kind of person the patient is.If the patient has a strong will to live and a positive attitude,telling them the truth will be helpful to the treatment.But if the patient is the opposite,we had better not do so.
无现金支付已经全面走进我们的生活,但人们对此褒贬不一。一家英语报社现以“无现金支付”为话题向中学生征文,请结合它的优点和缺点,以及你的个人观点写一篇文章投稿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:无现金支付noncash payments
[参考范文]
Nowadays,noncash payments are becoming more and more popular across the world,especially in China.However, people have different opinions on it.
Noncash payments have obvious benefits.They are very convenient and fast,which free people from carrying a wallet.However,the problems that accompany noncash payments should not be ignored.Your personal information is easy to be stolen.Meanwhile,noncash payments may encourage overconsumption.
In my opinion,noncash payments' advantages far outweigh its disadvantages.
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