Unit 6 Section Ⅳ Writing-(配套教参)【精讲精练】2025-2026学年高中英语选择性必修第四册(外研版)

本高中英语讲义聚焦太空生活日志的记叙文写作核心知识点，系统梳理首段总体感受、中段具体事件、尾段个人感想的写作框架。通过提供首中尾段例句积累、审题构思（明确体裁、人称、时态）、句式升级（如非限制性定语从句、省略句运用）及范文参考等学习支架，帮助学生从基础表达过渡到连贯成篇。 该资料以情境化写作任务为特色，结合太空生活24小时真实情境，通过例句积累和句式升级提升语言能力。审题构思环节明确写作要素，培养思维逻辑性，范文提供模板助力构建写作框架，提升学习能力。课中辅助教师引导学生掌握写作结构，课后学生可借助例句和范文自主练习，查漏补缺。

Unit 6　Section Ⅳ　Writing [对应学生用书P154] 太空生活日志 太空生活日志属于记叙文范畴，形式等同于日记。写作时以叙述事件为主，记叙在太空里生活的事情，通常包括三部分：太空日常生活、做事的感受和印象最深的事情(最喜欢或最不喜欢等)。 首段：简要介绍太空的生活情况 ①I'm told people are concerned about our life here in space. ②They are curious about how we sleep and have meal in the space lab. ③Living in space is not the same as living on Earth. 中段：具体描述在太空生活的情况 ①Because astronauts have a lot of tasks in space，time is very precious. ②I do a lot of statistics，observations and notes every few hours. ③Life in space is wonderful and challenging! ④Every day in space I experience amazing and unexpected things. 尾段：总结或发表个人看法 ①My favorite thing to do is taking pictures of the Earth. ②I would like to share my experiments with people on Earth. ③Hope you can have a knowledge of the life in space. ④As far as I am concerned，life in space is inconvenient but interesting. 想象一下你在太空飞船上待了24个小时会发生什么事情，并写一篇你的太空生活日志。 注意：词数80左右。 [审题构思] 体裁 记叙文 人称 以第一人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主 内容 首段：对太空生活的总体感受； 中段：介绍在太空中所做的事情； 尾段：发表自己的感受、感想 1．我曾经有机会在太空生活，虽然困难但很有趣。 I once had a chance to live in space，and it was difficult but fun. 2．因为没有重力，在太空中你会到处漂浮着。 In space you would float around because there is no gravity． 3．晚上，我进入一个小柜子里然后钻进睡袋里睡觉。 At night I went into a small cupboard and then got into a sleeping bag to sleep． 4．在太空，宇航员的骨骼和肌肉会变得疏松。 Astronauts' bones and muscles can become weak in space. In order to stay fit，I have to exercise on a regular basis． 6．虽然在太空生活很不舒服，但是我很感激有这样的机会。 Although I was living an uncomfortable life in space，I appreciated having the chance． [句式升级] 7．用非限制性定语从句升级句1 I once had a chance to live in space，which was difficult but fun. 8．用省略句升级句6 Although living an uncomfortable life in space，I appreciated having the chance. [连句成篇] One possible version： I once had a chance to live in space，which was difficult but fun.Here are some everyday things I experienced. In space you would float around because there is no gravity.At night I went into a small cupboard and then got into a sleeping bag to sleep.What's more，astronauts' bones and muscles can become weak in space.In order to stay fit，I have to exercise on a regular basis. Although living an uncomfortable life in space，I appreciated having the chance.I wish I would have more chances to experience life in space. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $