内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(教科社+外研社六年级上册)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题U5:写感受最深的人或事
适用年级:
六年级上册
对应版本:
教科社+外研社
常考题目:
一个让我感动的人/一件难忘的事
一、
话题解读
本话题是教科社+外研社六年级上册U5写作的重点。常以“一个让我感动的人”“一件难忘
的事”等为题,考察学生通过具体事例描写感受最深的人或事并表达真情实感的能力,在单
元测试和期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心难点词汇:
1.memorable/'memerebl/adj.难忘的
2.influential/,Influ'enfl/adj..有影响的
3.courageous/ka'reId3s/adj.勇敢的
4.grateful/grertfl/adj.感激的
5.determined/dr't3:mInd/adj.坚定的
6.overcome/ava'kmW.克服
7.cherish'terw.珍借
8.inspire /In'spaIe(r)M.激励
9.support/s3'ptW.支持
10.experience/ik'spIerians/.n.经历
11.moment./meument/n.时刻
12.significant/sIg'nIfrkent/adj.重要的
2.常用短语:
2
1.look back on回顾
2.make a difference有影响
3.in times of difficulty在困难时期
4.learn from从…学习
5.be proud of为…骄傲
6.stick to坚持
7.with one's help在某人帮助下
8.face challenges面对挑战
9.a turning point转折点
10.share happiness and sorrow分享喜怒哀乐
11.never give up永不放弃
12.leave a deep impression留下深刻印象
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:Vhat leaves the deepest impression on me is..给我留下最深印象的是…
例旬:What leaves the deepest impression on me is the moment my teacher
encouraged me during the competition.
2.结构:Not only did.but also..不仅…而且…(倒装句)
Not only did my father help me repair my bike,but also he taught me how
to solve problems by myself.
3.结构:twas.that.正是…(强调句)
It was her courageous spirit that inspired me to face challenges bravely.
4.结构:The experience taught me that..这段经历教会我…
The experience taught me that perseverance can help us overcome any
difficulty.
5.结构:Vhenever I look back on.,I feel..每当我回顾…,我感到…
Whenever I look back on that memorable trip,Ifeel grateful for my friends'
support.
6.结构:Vitho ut.,I would not have.没有…,我就不会…
例句:Without my mother's encouragement,,I would not have won the speech
contest.
7.结构:Although.,it has become a significant turning point in my life..尽管,但它色
成为我生命中重要的转折点
Although the process was tough,it has become a significant turning point
in my life.
四、满分范文示范
My Most Memorable Experience
What leaves the deepest impression on me is the moment I won the school English speech
contest last year.It was a challenging journey,but it has become a significant turning point
in my life
At first,I was afraid of speaking in public.Whenever I looked back on my previous failed
attempts,I felt discouraged.However,my English teacher,Ms.Li,noticed my hesitation.
Not only did she help me polish my speech draft,but also she spent hours practicing pro-
nunciation with me."Never give up,"she always said."Your determined spirit will make a
difference."
Itwas her courageous encouragement that inspired me to face challenges bravely.The night
before the contest,I was so nervous that I wanted to quit.Without Ms.Li's patience and
support,I would not have mustered the courage to stand on that stage.When I finally won
the first prize,I realized how grateful I was for her guidance.
The experience taught me that with the right support and perseverance,we can overcome
any difficulty.Although the process was tough,I cherish every moment of it.Now,whenever
I look back on that memorable day,I feel proud of myself for sticking to it.Ms.Li's influence
will always stay with me,reminding me to believe in myself.