U6描述一个感人的故事-2025-2026学年英语期末写作复习八年级上册（沪外教版）

初中英语写作专项突破 (沪外版八上) 写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范 写作话题U6:描述一个感人的故事 适用年级： 八上 对应版本： 沪外版 常考题目： A Touching Story An Unforgettable Experience 一、 话题解读 本话题是沪外版八年级上册写作的重点。常以“A Touching Story”“An Unforgettable Expe- rience”等为题，考察学生用英语叙述故事起因、经过、结果及表达情感的能力，在单元测试 和期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。 二、核心词汇与短语 1.核心难点词汇： 1.touching/'tnt址rn/adj.感人的 2.devotion/d'vafn/n.奉献 3.sacrifice/'saekrifaIs/n.牺牲 4.grateful/grertfl/adj.感激的 5.courage/'kArId3/n.勇气 6.generous /'d3 eneres/adj.慷慨的 7.forgive /fe'gIv/v.原谅 8.reunite/,riju'natv.重聚 9.determination/d虹，t3:mr'neIfn/n.决心 10.sympathy/sImpe6iln.同情 11.precious/'prefes/adj.珍贵的 12.memorable/'memerebl/adj.难忘的 2.常用短语： 1.in need在困难中 2.care for照顾 2 3.give up放弃 4.hold on坚持 5.come to help前来帮助 6.with tears in one's eyes热泪盈眶 7.make a difference产生影响 8.stay by one's side陪伴在身边 9.thanks to由于 10.share happiness and sorrow同甘共苦 11.a heart of gold金子般的心 12.overcome difficulties克服困难 三、高级句型模板 1.结构：tWas+时间点+when..当…时，时间是… 例旬：It was a rainy evening when an old man in need fell down on the street. 2.结构：Not only did sb.do sth.,but also sb.did sth.某人不仅做了某事，还做了某事 Not only did the young girl call an ambulance,but also she stayed by his side to keep him warm. 3.结构：The most touching part was that...最感人的部分是. 例句：The most touching part was that she refused to leave until the man's family arrived with tears in their eyes. 4.结构：tis+adj.+ofsb.+to do sth.某人做某事真是太…了 It is generous of her to spend three hours caring for a stranger without asking for thanks. 5.结构：Thanks to.,sb.was able to..由于…，某人得以… Thanks to her quick action and determination,the old man was able to receive timely treatment. 6.结构：What made the story memorable was..让这个故事难忘的是… 例句：What made the story memorable was her heart of gold that showed true kindness to others. 7.结构：Althoug h.,sb.still chose to..尽管…，某人仍然选择… Although she was in a hurry to meet her friend,she still chose to help the man rather than leave him alone. 四、满分范文示范 A Memorable Story of Kindness 3 It was a freezing winter morning when a little girl named Lily found a shivering puppy in a cardboard box near her school.The poor animal looked hungry and scared,with no collar or tags.Although Lily was late for class,she still chose to stay by its side instead of rushing to school. Not only did she wrap the puppy in her warm scarf,but also she ran to the nearby store to buy milk.The shop owner was moved by her kindness and gave her a small bowl for free. The most touching part was that Lily skipped her lunch break to care for the puppy,feeding it patiently and trying to find its owner. It is generous of her to spend so much time helping an animal in need without thinking about herself.Thanks to her determination,a local vet recognized the puppy from a missing poster and contacted its owner.When the little boy who lost the puppy arrived with tears in his eyes, he hugged Lily tightly and said,"You have a heart of gold!" What made the story memorable was Lily's devotion to a stranger's pet.She taught us that even small acts of kindness can make a big difference.This experience also showed me that with a little courage and sympathy,we can all help those in need and make the world a warmer place.