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读后续写情感描写素材及场景描写句式
一、情感描写素材
1.“紧张”和“焦虑”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
nervous, uneasy, tense, anxious, nervously
名词/动词
tension, anxiety, tremble, shake
固定短语
①感觉手心出汗喉咙发紧 feel one’s palm sweating and throat tight
②感觉坐立不安 feel like sitting on pins and needles
③心里发慌 with/have butterflies in one's stomach
④因焦虑而颤抖 tremble with anxiety
2.“喜悦”和“快乐”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
joyful, joyfully, pleased, pleasant, glad, gladly, enjoy, enjoyable, happy, happily, delighted, cheerful, cheerfully, overjoyed, merrily
名词
joy,pleasure, happiness, delight,merry
动词/介词短语:
to one's delight/joy/happiness/pleasure, be seized by joy, be overcome with happiness, be wild with joy
3.“惊吓”和“恐惧”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
afraid, alarmed, scared, scary, frightened, frightening, fearful, panicky, terrified, terrifying
名词/动词
fear, scare, fright, frighten, terror
固定短语
①吓得发抖 shake/tremble with fear/terror
②把……吓死 scare/frighten...to death
③吓得魂不附体 be scared out of one's wits
④吓呆/吓傻 freeze/be frozen with fear
⑤吓得呆若木鸡 stand rooted to the spot with fear
⑥惊慌失措 be seized with panic
⑦吓得要死 be dead with fright
4.“吃惊”和“震惊”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
astonished, surprised, shocked, astonishing, surprising, shocking, surprisingly, amazingly
名词/动词
shock, astonishment, surprise, amazement, amaze, astonish
固定短语
①令某人震惊的是 to one's shock/astonishment/surprise/amazement
②震惊地/惊异地 in astonishment/surprise/shock/amazement
③难以置信地 in disbelief
④让某人很震惊 come as a shock to sb……
⑤吃惊地倒吸一口冷气gasp in astonishment
5.“激动”和“兴奋”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
excited, thrilled, exciting, thrilling, excitedly
名词/动词
excitement, thrill
固定短语
①令某人激动的是to one's excitement/thrill
②激动得满脸通红flush with excitement
③抑制内心的激动contain one's excitement
④激动地with/in excitement
6.“感激”和“感动”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
gratitude, appreciation, thank, move, touch, appreciate
名词/动词
thankful, grateful, moved, touched, thankfully, gratefully
固定短语
①流下感激的泪水 shed tears of gratitude
②感动得落泪 be moved to tears
③对……深怀感激 have a deep gratitude towards
④心怀感激地 with gratitude/appreciation
⑤非常感激某人 owe sb a lot/a great deal
⑥被……深深感动 be deeply moved/touched by...
7.“焦虑”和“担忧”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
anxious, worried, worrying, helpless, hopeless, concerned, anxiously
名词/动词
anxiety, worry, helplessness, hopelessness, concern
固定短语
①with anxiety 焦虑地
②be concerned about 担忧
③be worried about 担心
④full of anxiety 焦虑不安
⑤feelings of anxiety and concern 焦虑和担忧的感觉
8.“生气”和“愤怒”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
angry, annoyed, annoying, angrily
名词/动词
anger, annoyance, rage
固定短语
①气得发抖 tremble with anger
②感到一股怒火 a burst of anger
③气红了脸 flush with anger
④生某人的气 get mad/cross at sb
⑤令某人生气的是to one's annoyance
⑥内心愤怒地 in anger
9.“悲伤”和“难过”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
sorrowful, sad, depressed, frustrated, lonely, upset, depressing, sadly
名词/动词
sorrow, loneliness, sadness, depression
固定短语
①一阵孤独/悲伤 a sense/wave of loneliness/sadness
②难过得麻木 be numb with sorrow/sadness
③心情沉重 with a sinking heart
④悲伤不已 be overcome with sorrow
⑤流泪 be reduced to tears
⑥悲伤如潮涌 sadness comes in waves ⑤令某人生气的是to one's annoyance
⑥内心愤怒地 in anger
10.“悲伤”和“难过”
类别
核心词汇
形容词/副词
embarrassed感到尴尬的awkward令人尴尬的ashamed感到羞愧的shame害羞的
名词/动词
shame使感到羞耻embarrass使尴尬;使难堪regret易混后悔;embarrassment使人难堪的事awkwardness尴尬笨拙shame羞愧羞耻心guilt内疚regret后悔
固定短语
①掩饰某人的尴尬 hide one’s embarrassment
②因尴尬而满脸通红 one’s face flushed with shame
③感到脸阵阵发烫 feel blood rushing to one’s face
④感觉如坐针毡 feel like sitting on pins and needles
⑤如热锅上的蚂蚁 act as a rat on the hot brick
⑥后悔做某事 be ashamed of...
⑦满心愧疚 be consumed with guilt
⑧令某人深感遗憾的是much to one’s regret
二、情感场景描写句式
1.表示“感到……情绪与情感”场景
[句式1]a flush of+表情绪的名词=a wave/feeling/sense of...一阵……
[句式2]表情绪的名词+flooded over sb/swept over sb/seized sb ……涌上心头
例1.当他看着自己孩子的时候,一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头。
A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children.
=He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children.
2.表示“某人想到/明白……;有了主意”场景
[句式1]It suddenly occurred to sb that...=It hit/struck sb that...
[句式2](idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded into one's mind
[句式3]one's mind began to race 头脑开始快速转动
例1.突然他想到一个好主意。
Suddenly a brilliant idea flashed into his mind.
例2.他的头脑开始快速转动,试图想出办法。
His mind began to race, trying to think of a way out.
3.表示“直到……才意识到……”场景
[句式1]Not until+时间状语+did sb realize/notice that...
[句式2]It was only+时间状语+that sb realized that...
例1.直到那时他才意识到有什么不对劲。Not until then did he realize that something was wrong.
=It was only then that he realized that something was wrong.
例2. 就在那时,我才意识到跑道对小孩子来说太长了,更不用说一个患有心脏病的孩子了。
It was only then that I realized that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a heart disease.
4.表示“(因为紧张、害怕)心跳”场景
[句式1]sb could feel one's heart pounding wildly in one's chest 感到心在胸中怦怦直跳
[句式2]one's heart thumped/raced/beat wildly/loudly/hard某人心怦怦直跳
例1.(2023·新高考卷Ⅰ读后续写)上台领奖时我感到心怦怦直跳。
I could feel my heart pounding wildly as I went on stage to collect the prize.
例2.他打开信,心在咚咚跳着。
He unfolded the letter, his heart racing.
5.表示“一……,就……”场景
[句式1]upon/on+n./doing...“一……就……”,相当于as soon as引导的时间状语从句。
[句式2]immediately/directly/instantly+从句
[句式3]the moment/minute/instant+从句
[句式4]no sooner...than.../hardly...when...
[句式5]at the sight/thought of…一见/想到sth.某人xxx
例1. 我一看见他,就知道他就是那个曾经帮我搬过箱子的警察。
The instant I saw him, I knew he was the policeman who had helped me carry the box.
例2. “不管其他队的队员怎么说,我相信你能做到!”听到我的话,大卫笑了笑,站起来朝起跑线走去。
“Ignore what the players from other teams would say and I believe you could make it!” Upon hearing my words,David beamed a big smile,stood up and moved towards the starting line.
6. 表示“好像……”场景
[句式1]. It was like doing sth. 好像……
[句式2]. It seemed (to sb) as if/ that... 好像……
例1.我似乎觉得所有的希望都破灭了。
It seemed to me that all hope faded/died.
例2. 我丢了工作,感觉我的世界崩溃了。
I lost my job and it was like my world collapsed. /
I lost my job and it seemed as if the world was at an end.
7.表示“迫不及待做……;毫不犹豫”场景
[句式1]sb could hardly wait to do sth 等不及做某事
[句式2]without a second thought...不假思索;毫不犹豫地
[句式3]without even thinking...连考虑都不考虑
[句式4]without delay...立即;毫不迟延地
[句式5]without hesitation...毫不犹豫
例1.水冰冷冰冷,可那个年轻人想也没想就跳了进去。
The water was freezing cold, but without a second thought the young man jumped in.
例2.圣诞节早晨,我迫不及待地打开包裹。令我兴奋的是,这是一双我一直想要的崭新的溜冰鞋。
On Christmas morning, I could hardly wait to open the package. To my excitement, it was a brandnew pair of ice skates which I was eager for.
8.表示“发出…声音”场景
[句式1]There were loud shouts and cheers (from...) when...从……传来喊叫与欢呼声
[句式2]There was a storm of applause (from...) when...……响起了雷鸣般的掌声
[句式3]let out a cry/scream (of horror/fear/terror/shock/surprise/pain...)发出了……叫声
9.表示“时间”场景
[句式1] 不久, …
not long after that, … = shortly afterwards, … =before long, …
=It didn’t take long before +从句= It took some time before +从句
[句式2]. for an instant/moment 一瞬间
例1. 不久以后,我们到达一条流动的小溪边。
Not long after this, we reached a running stream.
例2. 一时间,他站在那里一动不动,几乎不相信发生的事。
For an instant, he stood still, hardly believing what had happened.
10.表示“流泪”场景
[句式1]be close to tears 几乎要哭了
[句式2]tears roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face 泪水从眼睛/脸颊/面部落下
例1.当得知我被重点大学录取时,我母亲差点儿就哭了。
My mother was close to tears when she heard I was admitted to a key university.
例2.感激的泪水顺着他的脸颊流下,彼得紧紧地拥抱着格林,说: “今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”
With tears of gratitude rolling/streaming down his cheeks, Peter hugged Green tightly, saying “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.”
11.表示“心里想”场景
[句式1]An inner voice told sb that... 内心的声音告诉某人……
[句式2]sb thought/said to oneself...心里想……
例1.心里的声音告诉他,他所做的是错的。
An inner voice told him that what he had done was wrong.
例2.那天晚上,客人离开后,苏珊独自坐在房间里。她的床上放着作为生日礼物送给她的紫色连衣裙。她心想:“这件衣服看起来没那么糟糕。事实上,我喜欢妈妈给我买的所有衣服。”
That night after the guests left, Susan sat alone in her room. On her bed was the purple dress given to her as a birthday gift. She thought to herself, “It seems that the dress doesn't look that bad. Actually, I like all the clothes Mom bought for me.”
12.表示“不知道做……”场景
[句式1]sb did sth, wondering what to do next
[句式2]sb did sth, not knowing what to do next
[句式3]sb did sth, unsure of what to do next
[句式4]sb was at a loss what to do
例1. 大卫静静地坐着,深呼吸,不知道下一步该做什么。我轻轻地说:“除了你自己,没有人能改变你的想法。如果你想挑战自己,那与别人的想法无关。”
David sat still with a deep breath, wondering what to do next. I said gently and quietly,“No one can change your mind, except yourself. If you desire to challenge yourself, there is nothing to do with others' thoughts.”
13.表示“因……颤抖”场景
[句式]tremble/shake with fear, panic, excitement, rage...
例1.她气得嘴唇发抖,泪珠顺着面颊滚落下来。
Her lips trembled with rage and big tears rolled down her cheeks.
例2.他躺在那里很长时间,害怕得发抖。
He lay there for a long time, shaking with fear.
14.表示“转折”场景
[句式1]But bad luck for sb...
但是某人真不走运
[句式2]To one's surprise (delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that...
让人惊讶(高兴)/奇怪的是,原来……
[句式3]..., but in vain ……, 但徒劳
[句式4]..., but without success……,但没有成功
[句式5]But on second thoughts,...但是转而一想,……
例1.Jack真不走运,他绊了一脚,摔在地上。
But bad luck for Jack, he tripped and fell to the ground.
例2.她朋友想劝她和他一起回家,可只是白费唇舌。
Her friend tried to persuade her to go back home with him, but in vain.
15.表示“感到欣慰,放下心来”场景
[句式1]...breathed a sigh of relief/...sighed with relief 松了一口气
[句式2](A wave of) relief flooded over sb 深感……
[句式3]to one's relief... 使人欣慰的/放心的是……
例1.飞机安全着陆,我顿时放下心来。
I breathed a sigh of relief as the plane landed safely.
=A wave of relief flooded over me as the plane landed safely.
=To my relief, the plane landed safely.
16.表示“还记得某人的话;还在某人的脑海中”场景
[句式1]sb's words rang out in one's ears 某人的话在耳边回响
[句式2]One's head was still full of.../...crowded into one's mind脑子里充满……
例1.往事一齐涌上她的心头。
Memories came crowding into her mind.
例2.我的老师经常鼓励我努力学习,以便考上一所重点大学,她鼓励的话仍在我耳边回响。
My teacher often encouraged me to study hard in order to be admitted into a key university, and her encouraging words still rang out in my ears.
17.表示“经历与教训”场景
[句式1]What a/an...lesson sb taught me!
[句式2]What a/an...experience sb had!
[句式3]Down deep in one's heart...在某人的内心深处……
[句式4]...be rooted in one's memory ……植根于某人的记忆中
例1.在他的内心深处,他知道他会永远记住格林先生给他上的多么宝贵的一课。
Down deep in his heart, he knew he would remember what a valuable lesson Mr.Green taught him.
=The valuable lesson Mr. Green taught him will be rooted in his memory forever.
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