内容正文:
初中英语写作专项突破
(北师大版九年级全一册)
写作话题精讲·词汇句型·范文示范
写作话题U6:运用5W1H要素写一篇完整的小故事
适用年级:
九年级全一册
对应版本:
北师大版(旧)
常考题目:
An Unforgettable Experience A Special Day
一、
话题解读
本话题是北师大版(I旧)九年级全一册写作的重点。常以“An Unforgettable Experience”“A
Special Day'”等为题,考察学生运用5W1H要素(Who,What,When,Nhere,Why,How)
完整叙述小故事的能力,在单元测试、期中期末书面表达中出现频率较高。
二、核心词汇与短语
1.核心难点词汇:
1.mysterious/mI'streries/adj.神秘的
2.adventure /ed'ventfa(r)n.冒险
3.discover /dI'sknva(r)W.发现
4.ancient /'eInfent/adj.古代的
5.curious/kjueries/adj.好奇的
6.solve /splv/v.解决
7.journey/'d33:nin.旅程
8.mysteriously/mI'streriesli//adv.神秘地
9.unexpected/,Anrk'spektrd/adj.意外的
10.treasure/'tre3a(r)/n.宝藏
11.clue/klu:n.线索
12.explore/k'splb:(r).探索
2.常用短语:
2
1.set out出发
2.in search of寻找
3.by accident偶然
4.figure out弄明白
5.as a result结果
6.on the way在途中
7.due to由于
8.come across偶然遇见
9.make a decision做决定
10.in the end最后
11.lead to导致
12.with the help of在…的帮助下
三、高级句型模板
1.结构:It was not until.that.直到…才…
It was not until Lucy found the ancient map that she realized the mysterious
journey would begin.
2.结构:Not only did.but she also..不仅…而且…(倒装句)
Not only did Tom set out in search of the treasure,but he also prepared
a detailed exploration plan.
3.结构:The more.the more..越…就越…
The more clues they discovered,the more curious they became about the
ancient secret.
4.结构:What surprised them most was that.最让他们惊讶的是…
例句:What surprised them most was that the"treasure”turned out to be a
collection of ancient letters.
5.结构:Due to.,they decided to..由于…,他们决定…
例句:Due to the unexpected rain.,they had to camp in the cave and continue
the adventure the next day.
6.结构:It took them.to..他们花费…做…
It took them three days to figure out the meaning of the mysterious sym
bols on the stone.
7.结构:Althoug h.,they still...尽管…,他们仍然…
Although the journey was tiring,they still felt excited about every new
discovery.
四、满分范文示范
The Mysterious Cave Adventure
Last summer vacation,Lucy,a curious 15-year-old girl,discovered an ancient map in her
grandmother's attic by accident.It showed a mysterious cave hidden in Green Mountain,
which was said to hold a long-lost treasure.
Not only did Lucy feel excited,but she also invited her best friend Tom to join the adventure.
They set out early on a sunny morning,carrying water,snacks and a compass.On the way to
the mountain,they came across an old villager who warned them about unexpected storms
in the area.However,their curiosity about the treasure was too strong to give up.
It took them two hours to reach the entrance of the cave.Due to the dim light inside,they
had to use flashlights to explore.The walls were covered with ancient symbols,and the
deeper they went,the more mysterious the atmosphere became."The more clues we find,
the closer we get to the treasure,"Tom said excitedly.
Suddenly,Lucy noticed a stone door with a puzzle.It was not until they worked together that
they finally figured out the answer.The door slowly opened,revealing a small room.What
surprised them most was that there was no gold or jewels inside.Instead,they found a box
of old letters written by a soldier during World War Il.
Although they didn't find the treasure they expected,they still felt happy.The letters told
stories of courage and friendship,which were more valuable than any treasure.In the end,
they decided to donate the letters to the local museum.As they walked back home,Lucy
realized that the real adventure was not about finding treasure,but about the journey of
exploration itself.